Kasturi-fairytale:Fun-FF Pg 1,2,3,5 - Page 2

JW you should charge us, i swear i'd pay to read your stuff its sooooo marvelous, and finally a fan fic from you, but of course it wouldnt be any normal fan fic now would it...its the most innovative idea i have seen to date... mixin it within a fairytale, brilliant like usual JW👏 and i second what everyone else said.... i throughly enjoyed reading it and the best thing i'm plannin to use it as a bedtime story tonite for the kids sooo thanks..i'll tell you what they think tomorrow..

loads of luv

robziiiii

nice fairy tale, i loved it! 👏 👏 you know you're an amazing writer 😆. i couldn't help noticing that you kind of copied Snow White and Cinderella. 😆 ah, only if kasturi really was like Snow White and Cinderella 😍 😆

JRrrrrrrrrrrrrrr🤗

Luved it Luved it Luved it totally!!!👍🏼 Its awesome yaar👏.... At first wen u described the witch, I thought u were referring to Kasturi🤣🤣🤣... But it was very sweet ki how u introduced Kas's character...

Man, the names are hilarious.... Queen Devi and Alka Bai and also Puchkooo are the top ones🤣

Finally, My wish of reading ur FF is coming true... Dont stop now. Continue soooooooooooooooon and I really want to see the fairy tale version of Kasturi😆😆😆

Do write sooooooooooooooooon😡😆😆

Krishi

Originally posted by: knumnum

At first wen u described the witch, I thought u were referring to Kasturi🤣🤣🤣

I know!!! I was thinking the same thing😆🤣

@jwmrk : where is the next part? 😡 ...do u want me to waite for ages? 😆 😆 😆 .naaaaaaaaaa baby..quick quick 😊

@krishi : i too thought same..kasthu was witch...arre what could we think..creatives never left an opportunity to show kasthu wicked .. 😆

Ladies
Thanks so much for responding...love you all 😳 I am back (like the Arnollldddd way 😆 )..... Am uploading the next parts tonite....Cheers 😃

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@All

I think you all are being extemely kind to like a frivolous story like this...Anyways that was the whole idea to cheer you guys😳...

@Sindeshwariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii🤗

Firstly🤗, thanks a ton for the flowers😳. I so so hoped you will read this😳....If you dont respond then I think something is missing 🤗Aisa mat kar...do not miss meals to read pachak posts😆. And yes even I am not very regular at reading fanfics, but am sure people write very creatively😳

@Shwetha

🤗Am so happy you read it and even gave your fun filled tipneees 😳...much appreciated. Please continue to do so. 😳🤗....... And nai yaar hum itne talented kahaan, the credit for "Jali ki Chipkali raat" goes to the great Gulzar who wrote the lyrics for Ye Raat from the movie Aks.😆...Quite funny isnt it.😆..though in the movie the song is quite scary. Colonel Puchkoo is sho shweet isnt it😳

@RKkkkkkkkk

🤗Glad you liked it. Thanks Poor baby Robster crying😭...Kya kare yaar bechara kab se ro hi raha hai...God knows when uske din sudhrenge

And of course...Sonu is the original funster👏👏...Quite frankly woh meri inspriration hai.😳 She is very much around (Sonuuuu, padh rahi hai na ye 🤗)

@Jazz Rocks

Thanks yaar😊. It would have been nice if the serial was entertaining...Now it has become one bhoot bangla story😆

@Fariiiiiiiiiii

🤗🤗🤗You read it ..Am so happy😊Hope the weekend going well. Next installment soon your way Mam😳

@Kay

Glad you liked it dear...😊😳...Am working on the next one....and yes I too am imagining Prince Robbie😍..Haiiiiiiii☺️

@Fatimaaaaaa

🤗Is your grilling over and hope the people are treating my dear friend well😳. As you are wont, you are being very kind ...thank a ton😳. And you are right, the story is liberally 😆 inspired by Snow White.😆....The lyrics in green font are not mine, these are actual songs from Hindi films. Yes, rest of the frivolities are mine😆....Ok. I dont know about this story, but will surely do one with Raunak as the Prince and You as the Princess. Now thats a promise😳

@Robzi, Robzi, Robzi

🤗Ok, tell me honestly what the little ones did after hearing it. If the slept within 2 minutes then its a great story😆, if they slept after 10 minutes then its an Ok story and if they didnt sleep then ohhh nooooo, I need to work on my writing skills😆😆...Loads of Love😳

@Miky

hey there 🤗...glad you liked it and you are right...the story is liberally taken off from Snow White, add to it the Kasturi masala...Of course if the story was anywhere close to Snow White it would have been so much fun😳

@Krishiiiiiii

Tune dekha yeahhhh 🤗🤗...the names are funny...well the reel characters are even more funny😆😆...some more names coming your way in the next parts.😉

@Krishi, Miky and Sindhu

Kastu as the witch😆...now that has always been the khwaish of mine coz i feel she is principally responsible for a large part of this mess...but then forgivance is a human trait so jaane do usey maaf kar dete hain😆

😳I am speechless yet again JW😳😳 Beautifully expressed novella 😳😳, Seriously have u ever thought of writing a novel, it will def b sold out in a week😳😳 Waiting eagerly for next parts😳😳
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Luv,

Shagun

@Shagun,
Oh my 🤗 🤗 ...so nice of you to read and respond 😳 ...thanks so much dear. 😳

PART 4

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The next day, as usual King Puru and Queen Devi stood in front of the mirror and asked "Mirror Mirror on the wall, who has Robbie at their beck and call" 😳and the Mirror answered "You my Kasturi, You my Kasturi". Shocked out of their wits, they asked again "Mirror Mirror on the wall, who has Robbie's wealth and all" and the Mirror answered "You my Kasturi, You my Kasturi". Queen Devi and King Puru were now filled with rage and asked the mirror 😡"Mirror Mirror, and where is she" and the mirror replied "She is right now in your farm house, safe in Prince Robbie's arms".

"She must die! She must die!" screamed Queen Devi. 😡King Puru was also angry 😡but tried to quieten her. He said "Devi, control yourself. What will our subjects think". Queen Devi is livid😡😡😡, "What will they think? ….King Puru, this is not the time to sit on the throne and drink away to glory. Hamara beta, hamara puppet, hamari dhan-daulat ki chabbi is no longer in our control. And you are chilling!!!!. Ajeeb to aapki soch hai, King Puru. I am shocked to think what you are thinking. Ab mujhe hi kuch karma hoga, this Colonel Puchkoo is useless. Kahaan gaya woh nithalla". They summon Colonel Puchkoo who is fearfully shaking like a leaf in the storm. 😭😭King Puru roars "Colonel Puchkoo, kya tumne Kasturi ko mar dalaa tha, sach batao". Colonel Puchkoo says "Your Majesty …gulp….Sarkar, main, main, main uske baaton se dar gaya". "What" roared Queen Devi, "Jo dar gaya samjho uska sar gaya. Dichkaonn. Dichkaoon Dichkaoon"🤢. Colonel Puchkoo, now really scared out of his wits😭"Maharani, Dayaloo Devi, reham karo….Sarkaar Puru, maine aapka namak, sugar aur oil khaya hai". Queen Devi replies "To ab talwaar ka vaar khao. Sipahiyon, ise maar dalo". And so the soldiers drag Colonel Puchkoo away. 😭Queen Devi stares into the horizon and say "King Puru, main ye ladai jeet kar rahungi. Chequers ke is khel mein, mein us do takke ki ladki Kasturi ko jeetne nahi doongi. Bahut hogaya snakes and ladders. Now I will show her how Chequers is played". King Puru is perplexed as to when they played all these games.😕😕 He thinks they must have played all this when he was obviously drunk....so he meekly tells Queen Devi "Yes, Devi, I am with you in all your games". …

Meanwhile, Prince Robbie has gone to meet Kasturi😉😉. She has spent the whole day imagining him next to her😳…….imagining him chopping karele, tinde and kachumbar in the kitchen along with her😍, imagining him churning buttermilk😍, imagining him boiling tea leaves😍, imagining him laying the table for dinner😍, setting out the forks and spoons😍, etc etc😍😍……At last he arrives😃. Prince Robbie, however, is in not so happy mood. "What happened my Praannath" asks Kasturi. Prince Robbie, "Kasturi, janti ho aaj Queen mother ne mujhse kya kaha? Kal se mujhe, Banguriland, joh yahaan se saikdon miles dur hai, wahaan jake gana padega. Warna we won't be able to generate wealth and then how do we defend our kingdom against potential enemies". Kasturi says "Toh kya hua, please do go. I will wait for you". "Will you, will you my Kasturi. Fantastic"😃, Prince Robbie is happy and says "Kasturi what if tomorrow I don't have any wealth, will you still be with me". Now Kasturi thinks hard 🤔🤔and ultimately says "Of course I will, my dearest. I love you and not your wealth. Only your love, vishwaas, saath, bharosa, saayaa, is enough for me". Prince Robbie is overwhelmed😳❤️. "Fantastic, he says".

Now its Kasturi's turns to tell him "Dearest, I have made a grave mistake…ermm….I went to the farm house barn to fetch firewood for cooking, ….my hand accidently hit the door and the lantern I was carrying fell …and …and ..boo hooo….the entire barn is burnt down". "Whattttttttttttt, oh no😭", Prince Robbie. Kasturi "boo hoo hoo"😭😭😭. Prince Robbie, "Hey come on my dearest…rona mat…Koi baat nahi, koi baat nahi, aise 20 barns aur bana denge…..now please give me a smile.😳"….Suddenly and unfathomably Kasturi falls and Robbie holds her in his arms 😉😉😉
"Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re
Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re
Tab se deewana hua aa haaa❤️, Sab se begaana hua aa haa 🤗
Rab bhi deewana lage re oye oye oye oye, Rab bhi deewana lage re ho oohoohooo
Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re 🤗

Hooo jab se mila hai tera ishaara, tab se jagi hai bechainiya
Jab se hui sargoshiyan, Tab se badhi hai madhossiyan
Jab se jude yaara, Tere mere maan ke dhaage re ❤️
Tab se deewana hua aah haaa❤️, Sab se begaana hua aah haaa ❤️
Rab bhi deewana lage re oye oye oye oye, Rab bhi deewana lage re
Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re 🤗"

After spending some lovely time together Prince Robbie says "Ok now I have to go, my dearest😳. Please do take care and dont' open the door to strangers and dont be talking to strangers, for strangers are dangers". Kasturi is unhappy😭. Prince Robbie "Now, now there, dont' cry, here take my nishaani, this kangan of mine😳. Yeh tumhe meri kami mehsoos nahi karne dega"🤗. Kasturi is overwhelmed and says "Prince Robbie, main aapke kangan...oops...aapse bahut pyaar karti hun."🤗🤗🤗. Prince Robbie is ...well❤️...and Kasturi well she is also😉...Lets leave them alone for a few minutes😉😉

Cont'd ......part 5😆