my first fanfic, plz see,updated 26.03.08 - Page 3

wowwwwwwwwww,tuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu gud ok and dat scene was really tooooooooo gud wher alek knows dat who is rajveer an dat corporate .ohhhhhhhhhhhh my god to funny .keep it up and just write in coloured letters yar .to write in coloured letters click [post in WYSIWYG Editor] ok tuuuuuuuuuuu gud and ALL THE BEST
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YES WHY DONT U COMENT IN MY FF SO BAD

The guard and aleekh were too funny today...

Over all cool update.. waitin for the next...

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Raj came back in the palace,serious expression on his face, aakar dekha Naina room ko clean karne main busy hai.Raj ko dekh kar Naina ne thora sa smile kiya & said
khana ready hai,tum fresh ho ke aao.
ok, main aata hu.
ab old palace main dining table to definately nahin hoga,isliye floor par beth kar hi khana hoga.Raj ekdum slient tha.Naina ko gussa aa raha tha.
how boring thora sa to baat kar sakta na,afterall main subah se bore ho rahi hu.par expression se to lagta hai pareshan hai,should i ask him the reason?
na baba na,not necessary.

khane ke baad Raj phir se files & laptop le ke beth gaya.Ab naina samaj gayi Raj & uske beech kuch nahin ho sakta,Raj sirf duty se pyaar karta hai.
Naina sochne lagi uske friends kehti thi shaadi ke baad unke husbands ne aaj yaha ghumane le gaya,kal movie dekne le gaya,porsu shopping karne le gaya,but
uske husband duty & duty & only duty.Are kaam se kaam baat to kare,but no aisa lag raha hai jaise aajkal Government ne baat karne ke upar bhi tax laga rakha hai.
forget it,ignore it.
yeh soch kar naina ek story book lekar beth gayi.bohut interesting book tha.Naina pura concentration ke sath parne main busy thi.Time kab nikal gaya usse pata hi nahin
chala.

Then in evening,Raj came out from the palace & relaxing in the garden.The weather was very hot on the day.Naina servant ko cooking ki instructions dene main busy thi.
coz the servants said that they would work there during the day but would not spend the night.The palace reputation was such that even thieves would not go there at night.
upar se woh murder hone ke baad uss palace main kuch supernatural hai yeh belief aur bhi majbut ho gaya hai woha ki local logo ke dil main.Ab raat to door ki baat hai koi sham
tak woha rehne ke liye taiyaar nahin tha.Naina ko jab yeh baat pata chali thi,tab woh thora pareshan ho gayi thi,but later she ignore it.

Raj kaafi pareshan hai.at first usko laga yeh case sirf thora complicated hai.But ab usse lagta hai yeh case ekdum zero se usse start karna hoga.coz case details likha hai uss
Inspector Sharma ne,jo ki absolutely hopeless hai.Raj ko lag raha tha woh sirf Forenchic report & post-motem report par hi bhorosa rakh sakta hai.Raj decide kiya kal woh crime
spot ko acchi tarah se dekh kar investigation shuru karega.But the main question is that yaha ki local people uske sath kitna co operate karega?kya kehta hai woh Inspector
corporate.arghhhh, i am sure zaroor bribe de kar police department join kiya hoga.then suddenly

shit,power-cut,oh god yeh bijli ki problem kab solve hogi?
idhar Naina,yipeeee,power-cut,karo ab kaam karo,no generator,no inverter.thank u god

Naina samaj gayi thi baat usse hi start karna parega.& woh bhi directly,sirf blush karne se kuch nahin hoga.Afterall yeh 21st century hai.arre kha to nahin jayega. prepared herself & asked,
Naina- tumne mujhse shaadi kyun ki?
Raj(shocked)- yeh kaisa sawal hai?
Naina- just because of your parents tumne mujhse shaadi ki,am i right?U loved somebody else hai na?
Raj- no naina.tum galat soch rahin ho.aur tum kisi aur ki baat kar rahe ho,yes mere life main koi aur thi.main tumse jhooth nahin bolunga.uska naam Kahsish thi.she was my friend in collg.
kab pyaar ho gaya pata hi nahin chala.
Naina- jhagda hua tha isliye relationship tut gaya
Raj- agar chorna hi tha to pyaar kyu karta?
Naina- no.main to aise bol rahi thi.maine dekhi thi collg main,ekbaar jhagra hua & dono alag alag raste main chal diye.
Raj- uski accident hui thi.She is dead now.uske jane ke baad maine C.B.I join karliya.uske kuch saal baad tumse shaadi hua.bas itna hi hai mera love life.
Naina- I am sorry.for this reason tum shaadi nahin karna chate the?
Raj- dekho jab Kashish ki death hui tab mujhe bohut dukh hua tha.mujhe lag raha tha why i am alive?then i realise kisi ki jane se zindegi nahin rukh jati.love is only a part of life.shayad
woh mere kismat main nahin thi.but i will never forget her.& tum hamare relation ki baat kar rahi ho,is risthe ko thora sa waqt do.coz mera manna hai har relationship me understanding
bohut important hai.& mera kaam, main aaj tak jitne bhi cases solve ki hai, har cases main ek assitant Investigating Officer tha.This is my first case jo main akela investigate karunga.
khud ko prove karne ka yeh ek good chance hai mere liye. U understand na?plz give me sometime.
Naina- Chak de,arre SRK meri favourite hai.best of luck,tum surely successful hoge.
Raj( smiled)- Thanks for understanding me.
Naina- hmm,good night
Raj- good night Naina.



Thats all for today guys,waiting for your comments & thanks to all for replying

that was so nice 😛 raj aur naina k scenes bahot acche the aur yeh kya tum kashish ko yaha bhi le aayi 😆 😆 aur raj jab kaheta hai k aalekh ne zarur police department ko bribe di hogi 😆 😆 😆 but yaar plz rn k romantic scenes rakhona. 😛 😛

it was awesome....

specially nainas dialouges wer awesome......
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brilliant....

👏 it was really nice..pls update 😆

really brilliant.....................................
nice creation of relationship....
congr8s
waiting 4 d next

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Next morning,Raj ready ho kar wait kar raha hai Inspector Alekh ki.& room main idhar udhar kar raha hai.Naina Raj ko dekh rahi hai
Raj- Disgusting,horrible,main aaj tak itna irresponsible Officer nahin dekha,totally hopeless, & i knew it from the first day
Naina- chill Raj,subah subah mood mat kharap karo.agar subah mood kharap ki to sara din mood kharap rahega
Raj- ok,suno,main outpost ja raha hu,baat to hui thi woh Inspector mujhe pick karega,lagta hai mujhe usse pick karna parega,isliye mujhe case datail par bhorosa nahin hai,first of all
mujhe lag raha tha yeh Inspector bribe dekar Department join kiya hai, now i am sure about it.
Naina- Raj main detective novel bohut zyada padti hoon,sare detectives apne dimak thanda rakhta hai
Raj( smiling )- ok baba,i am not angry,main ja raha hoon.bye
Naina- ok,bye, & take care.best of luck
Raj- Thanks.
& came out from the palace.

Raj outpost ke taraf jane hi wala tha uske samne ek police jeep aakar rukhi,& Alekh jumped out from the jeep.
Alekh- sorry sir woh bole to thora late ho gaya.
Raj- wow,agar koi aapko phone karke bole Inspector i need your help,somebody trying to kill me, to kya aap uske murder hone ke baad jayenge?routine inquiry karne?
Alekh- arre sir woh....
Raj- main koi bahana nahin sunna chata ,next time aisa nahin hona chahiye,lets go
jeep main Raj, alekh, guard & ek driver hai.Raj driver ko notice kar raha tha,then asked,
Raj- so aap yaha ki polece jeep drive karte ho.
Driver- jee, sahab
Alekh- arre sir yeh local ladka hai,bohut kameena hai, jeep ki maintaince ki jo amount department se aata hai half to yeh pocket main bhar leta hai
Driver- nahin sahab.
Raj- matlab aap police dapartment se nahin ho,aap ek outsider ho
Alekh- kya kare sir aise hi kaam chalana parta hai.

They reached the spot, remote & lonely place,no habitation nearby,sirf badi badi mango trees hai, but palace se kuch zyada door bhi nahin hai.Raj place ko observe karne laga.
Alekh- yeh jagah par murder hua tha,yaha lash para hua tha
Raj- maine report main padha ek local ladke ne sabse pehle yeh body dekha tha
Alekh- ha sir,bohut ghabra gaya tha bechara,woh kya kehte hai woh terrible sight dekh kar
Raj- main uss ladke se baat karna chata hoon
Alekh- ha, bula lenge police station,aapko jo puchna hai puch lena usse.
Raj- kya aapko aisa lagta hai kisine drag karke body yaha la kar chora hai.murder kahi aur kiya gaya hai.
Alekh- nahin, aisa nahin lagta, murder yehi par hua tha,coz aur kahi khoon nahin ta
Raj- koi weapon nahin mila right?
Alekh- nahin, koi weapon nahin mila
Raj- according to post-motem report, murder raat ke 11.30pm ke aas paas hua tha,raat ko raaste par light nahin hota yaha par,local people ghar se bahar nahin nikalte,lekin
ek bahar ka admi, jise yaha ki raaste bhi thik tarah se pata nahin woh bahar nikal aata hai
interesting,very interesting




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HAASH TUMNE UD TOH KIYA FINALLY,ITS AWESOME BUT CHOTA HAI.NEXT UD JALDI KARNA 😛