my first fanfic, plz see,updated 26.03.08 - Page 2

Next morning jab Naina ki need khuli tab already subah ki 8 baj chuke the.Naina ne dekha Raj kahin jane ke liye ready ho raha hai.
Naina- why didn't u wake me up?
Raj- kal utni long journey karke tum bohut tried ho gayi thi na,so u get as much rest as u need, hai na?& by the way yeh raha tumhare liye morning tea.
Naina-tumne banaya?
Raj- nahin, nahin, maine nahin banaya,servant hai,usne banayi hai
Naina- kal raat to koi nahin tha?
Raj- are baba, is palace ka ek care taker hai, thore door uske ghar hain,uske biwi sara din tumhare sath rahegi & khana bhi wohi banayegi
Naina- Thank god
Raj- Why?
Naina- woh actually mujhe cooking nahin aati.
Raj- What? par woh khana......
Naina- jab tum mujhe first time dekne ke liye aaye the tab woh khana maine nahin mummy ne banaye the,usne jhoth kaha tha.
Raj- ohh
Naina- can i ask u something?
Raj- yaa bolo
Naina- agar tumko us waqt pata chalta mujhe cooking nahin aati, to kya tum mujhse shaadi karte?
Raj- haa, karta,coz main apne liye ek life partner talash karne gaya tha,maid servant nahin.
Naina- thanks
Raj- ok,ab main chalta hoon,main yaha ki local police station main ja raha hoon, bye
Naina- bye.

Care taker se police station ka raasta puch kar Raj nikal gaya. mausam bohut suhana tha,vaise bhi Kolkata ki nok-jhok se door aise jagah par aakar dil khush ho
jata hai.Raj sochne laga kitni History chupi hai ish jagah par.Malda se thori door Murshidabad ko India main British ne first apna colony banaya tha.Oh ek baar uss jagah par
chakkar laga kar aana chahiye.
oh s**t,yeh main kya soch raha hu.Case ke bare main na soch kar yeh sab. At any cost yeh case to mujhe solve karna hi parega.Police ka to badnaam tha hi ab to C.B.I par bhi log
trust nahin karte. C.B.I investigate karega kya hoga?nothing. Rabindranath ki noble prize chori ho gaya, kya kuch hua? yeh thought hai aaj kal logo ki.

Aise sochte sochte Raj police station pauch gaya. Police station ka board tuta hua hai,ghar ka condition bhi bohut poor hai.Police staton kehna galat hai,this is actually a police
Outpost.Raj sochne laga God,kya hoga iss desh ka? oh God,aaj main itna kyu soch raha hu? mujhe yaha ki Inspector se milna hai. Kya naam tha report main?
yaa, Inspector Alekh Sharma

nice update par very small plzz next time long okkk

awesome but very sort plzzz ud soon 👏 👏 👏 n i love jab raj kaheta hai main apne liye ek life partner talash karne gaya tha,maid servant nahin. 👏

Too Good yaar!! jaldi update karo...

Waiting!!!

Its nice to see you adding some historic facts in this fiction..

Plz Continue...

mein Sania ke ff ko lrl forum pe padhti hun jisme ek episode aage ka update hai.Sania tumhare ff ke bhaut saare fans hai so please update fast in the both forum.

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ur ff is 222222222222222222222gud really.and mine and yors ,our icon is same.and iloved it ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmma
this 4 u 👏

read ur ud today,its different and liked it a lot,plzzzzzzzzzzz ud soon 😛


lots of love,
sam

Raj police outpost ke andar je kar dekha ek guard betha hua hai.
Raj-Excuse me,mujhe Inspector Sharma se milna hai
Guard- kisliye?
Raj- dekiye woh main unse kahunga,aap jara batainge woh kaha hai?
Guard- aye hero, tera problem kya hai?dekh main uska assitant hu,mere sawal ka jawab de pehle agar pass ho gaya to tera entry pakka.chal apna naam bata?baap ka naam bata?
Raj- what? Disgusting.

yeh kar Raj andar chala jata hai,Guard bhi uske peeche peeche bhagta hai,"yeh rukh kaha jaa raha hai tu?andar kar dunga"
but Raj already entered into the room.
Raj- Inspector Sharma?
Alekh- kaun hai re tu? apna sasural samaj rakha hai kya,jo hero ki tarah chala aa raha hai
guard- dekho na sir kitna rokha par nahin mana
Raj- dont worry,meri sasural ka condition itna poor nahin hai,but main agar complain kar du na tumhare uparwale ko,not god ofcourse,to tum apne sasural jane ke layak
nahin rohoge.
Alekh- Kaun hai tu re? hai kaun tu?mujhe dhamki deta hai
Raj- Investigating Officer Rajveer Chaterjee,from C.B.I

Alekh almost fell off from his chair.kisi tarah se uth kar Raj ko salute karta hai.then
saala, kameena sir ko nahin pechana? ab betho sir,kya lenge sir aap tea or coffee?
Guard- sir coffee mat offer karo khatam ho gayi hai
Alekh- chal chai(tea) la.
Guard- dudh (milk) khatam ho gayi hai
Alekh- Liquar tea la
Raj- excuse me,main yaha par tea ya coffee lene nahin aaya hu.lets come to the point.I hope aapko already inform kar diya gaya hai Mr.Joshi ki case ko investigate ab C.B.I
karegi.
Alekh- aur hum sab ko corporate karna parega.
Raj- what?
Guard- corporate nahin sir,co operate.
Alekh- ha,wohi,tension main kabhi kabhi garbar ho jata hai
Raj- according to post-motem report, Joshi ki death ki coz bataya ja raha hai multiple stabbing.Someone stabbed him repeatedly to death.& sabse interesting baat yeh hai
someone also slow poisoning him
Alekh- ha,post-motem report main dekha.main ek baat kahu,poison usse koi insaan de raha tha, but uska murder kisi insaan ka kaam nahin hai.
Raj- what rubbish?
Alekh- par wound bohut gehra(deep)hai
Raj- aapko spot se koi weapon nahin mila, right?
Alekh- haa,bohut talash ki par nahin mila kuch.
Raj- main spot par jana chata hu.
Alekh- ha, koi problem nahin hai,kal subah chalte hai.aap palace main rukhe hai na,main subah aa jaunga.
Raj- ok,ab main chalta hu.
Raj police station se bahar aata hai.& andar Alekh chain ki saans leta hai,thank god,aaj ke liye musibat gayi


Thats all for today guys,thanks a lot for replying.
Happy Republic Day to u all

too good aalekh was so funny ,Alekh- aur hum sab ko corporate karna parega.
Raj- what?
Guard- corporate nahin sir,co operate.
Alekh- ha,wohi,tension main kabhi kabhi garbar ho jata hai 😆 😆 😆
hahahahah that was awesome plzz conti soon.

it was brilliant.....bichare ki kya halat ho gayi 😆