Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22!

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mahru

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Posted: 17 years ago

#101

heay
rellllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyy sweeeeeeeeet part
do cont sooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!
luv ya n taak care
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shalini jain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#102

hi riddhima it ws sch a sweet prt plzzz cont.soon nd do pm whn u update.............luv uuuuu

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Riddhima gupta

@*riddhima*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#103

This is a very long part to keep u all happy..! 😉 and i'm sorry i couldn't pm everybody~!

RECAP___Muskaan and Rahul started liking each other and Armaan & Riddhima were disturbed in their romantic scene by Anjali & atul..!

When Armaan and Atul go downstairs....The dance was already over so..Everybody was busy chatting...
All the mummy-papas and dada-dadis were talking..
Our interns got bored so they all decided that they'll play a game in Sapna's room...

SCENE-22

Amit,Sapna,Rahul,Muskaan,Anjali,Atul,Armaan And Riddhima settled themselves on Sapna's bed...
They all were discussing what to play!!
Anjali "guys...kya khele?"
Atul "IDEA!!"
Armaan "kya idea ?champ"
Atul "ek game mere dimaag mein aaya hai but only for girls..!"
Sapna "aur vo kya hai?"
Atul "dekho main tum logo ko ye bata sakta hun ki tumhare future mein kitne chunnu-munnu honge"
Anjali "chunnu-munnu?"
Atul "matlab bacche"
Riddhima "accha...aur vo tum kaise batayoge?"
Atul "batata hun...pehle Sapna mujhe ek chain chahiye with a pendent"
Sapna "ok"(she brings it)...
Atul"dekho main is chain ko rotate karunga..agar pendent sidha(straight) ruka matlab LADKA aur agar it falls opposite it means LADKI and if it stops rotating matlab no more kids..!is that ok?"
Amit "sounds interesting "
Muskaan "so lets play"
Rahul "ya...chalo khele"
Riddhima "par....is this true?"
Atul "haan"
Muskaan "tujhe kaise pata?"
Atul "arre yaar...kuch logo pe try kiya hai"
Rahul "guys...try karne mein kya jaa raha hai...it will be fun"
Atul "to...pehle kaun?.."
Armaan "ab pehle shaadi Sapna ki ho rahi hai to first Sapna"
Sapna blushes and keeps her hand in front and Atul holds her hand and starts rotating the pendant...
Atul "LADKI"
Amit "wow!!!"
All smile and Sapna blushes...
Atul "LADKI"
Amit was extremely happy while everybody was smiling and Sapna was busy blushing..!
Atul "bas!!!"
Amit "Vaah!! main do-do betiyon ka future baap"(everybody laugh)
Rahul "arre yaar!..ye game to mazedaar hai"
Atul "i know !! to ab kaun?"
Anjali "As per Armaan's theory ab Ridz ki baari "
Riddhima "di...par main"
Sapna "par-var kuch nahi Ridz...ab tumhari baari and its fixed"
Riddhima "oh!! ok"
She advanced foward blushing and Armaan was smiling....
Atul started the game.....
Atul "LADKA"
Riddhima blushes And everybody including Armaan smile...
Atul "LADKI"
Riddhima blushes even more...
Atul "bas.!"
Muskaan "wow.! ridz...teri to perfect family ho gayi...Mummy-Papa ,ladka-ladki"
Everybody laughs/...Riddhima blushes..!
Riddhima slowly moves back to her place ...Armaan was at her right....He slowly slids his hand down and holds onto Riddhima's hand...
Now was Anjali's turn and Atul was extremely happy...!
The game started...
Atul happily "LADKA"
Everybody was smiling looking at Atul's face...
Atul sadly "bas!"
Everybody laughed at his face...
Atul to himself "sirf ek ladka....mujhe to kamse kam do bache chaiye the par agar Anjali is happy to main bhi khush hun"
Anjali "tumne kuch kaha?"
Atul "a...a...nahi"
Now was Muskaan's turn and Rahul was smiling an he didn't know that why was he smiling...
Atul "LADKI"
Muskaan shying a little bcoz Rahul was staring at her with a smiling face!
Atul "LADKA"
Atul "bas!"
Rahul smiled to himself and everybody noticed that...Muskaan was blushing...
Riddhima "Muskaan ab to tumhari bhi perfect family ho gayi"
Eveybody laughs!!!........................
Armaan "Rahuuuul...tu itna kyun has raha hai?"
Rahul stopped smiling "main....main kahan has raha hun"
Atul "jhoot mat bol....!"
Rahul "m...main jhoot nahi bol raha "
Armaan "Atul jaane de! bechaara sharma raha hai"

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Now the sangeet was over and everybody went to their house...

Riddhima & Armaan were obviously dreamt about each other...
Sapna & Amit dreamt about their married life....
Atul dreamt about Anjali...
Anjali dreamt that she will become a very popular and great doctor..
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AND the most unexpected thing happened that ,that night Rahul & Muskaan dreamt about each other..and that also romantic dreams..!!!!!

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NEXT DAY-----
(Sapna is on leave till her marriage)
Locker room----

Armaan was looking at the door waiting for Riddhima and Atul was taking out things from his locker...
Riddhima and Anjali entered....
Anjali "hi Atul ,hi Armaan"
Atul "hi"
Armaan didn't reply as he was busy staring at Riddhima who was wearing a Green pretty suit..!
Riddhima went to her locker and said "hi Atul,hi Armaan"
Armaan stopped staring at Riddhima"hi ...jaan(slowly)"
Riddhima blushed..
Anjali "ye kaun si baat hai Armaan...Riddhima ke ka jawab diya par meri nahi"
Armaan "wo..Sorry Anji...."
Anjali "hmmm..I understand..meri behen hai hi itni sundar "
Riddhima "di....."

Suddenly they all see Rahul & Muskaan entering into the locker room together and that to WITHOUT FIGHTING!!!

Atul "he bhagwan! main kahin Sapna to nahi dekh raha..ye dono sath-sath bina lade"
Armaan "nahi Atul..ye 100% sach hai"
All laugh while Muskaan & Rahul smile to themselves..!

ANNOCEMENT---all the interns report to Dr.Keerti..!

Now everybody with Dr.keerti...

Keerti "Interns...Dr.Atul in cancer ward ,Dr.Anjali & Dr.Rahul in OPD,Dr.Muskaan in children's ward and Dr.Armaan & Dr.Riddhima in general ward..now back to work"
She leaves......!
Armaan holds Riddhima's hand ...
Riddhima "Armaan chodo ye hospital hai koi dekh lega"
Armaan "main nahi chodta aur vaise bhi ye hospital vale bhi hame sath dekhna chahte hai"
Riddhima "matlab?"
Armaan "dekho naa...Dr.Keerti hamesha hamari duty sath mein lagati hai"
Riddhima "Armaan....u r tooo much"(struugles hard and at last gets her hand out of his grip)
Armaan "tell me something i don't know"
They both smile and leave together....

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OPD ..---

Muskaan was passing by and saw Rahul & Anjali working together...For the first time she felt jealous of Anjali...
Muskaan to herself "ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai?..main jalan kyun mehsoos kar rahi hun?..kahin mujhe us kankhajure se.....pyaar...(pause)..nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta main aur rahul ...! NO WAY!!"

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CHILDREN's ward----

Muskaan is treating a girl of 9yrs....She was talking to her....
Rahul passing by thinks that she looks so cute but then says "no..no..main aur iske baare mein aisa..nahi nahi...."
He leaves..

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Riddhima is walking through the corridor....and Armaan pulled her into our lovely STAIRCASE AREA>>!

Riddhima "Armaan ...ye kya kar rahe ho?"
Armaan doesn't responds and keeps playing with her hair...Her face is at the side so he turns her face such that she faces towards him...
Armaan "tum mujhe bahut pareshaan karti ho"
Riddhima "main??"
Armaan "aur nahi to kya?...mere sapno mein aakar...naa chain se sone deti ho naa jagne"
Riddhima "fine..to agar meri vajah se tum so nahi paate to main chali jaati hun"(and moves to leave but Armaan holds her hand)
Armaan "agar tum chali gayi tab to aur bhi neend nahi aayegi..tab to shayad main mar.."(Riddhima keeps her hand on his mouth)
Riddhima "aisa nahi kehte"(and hugs him)
Armaan kisses Riddhima at the back of her neck..!
Riddhima "A...Armaan ab chale"
Armaan "hmmmm...nahi "
Riddhima "Armaan...."
Armaan "ok..chalo"
They move out of the staircase area...!

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AT DR.SHASHANK'S HOUSE..-in the night after the duty is over..
Shashank has already returned home...Padma & Nani r waiting for Riddhima & Anjali to return....

Anjali & Riddhima enter..!
Anjali "hi Papa..Hi Nani..Hi Padma Anuty.."
Riddhima "arre Maa aap yahan?"(hugs Padma)
Padma "vo hame tum dono ko kuch batana tha "
Anjali "bataiye Aunty"
Nani "vo beta hume nahi pata ki tum log kaise react karoge par hum logo ne yahi faisla liya hai"
Riddhima "Nani bataiye to..."
Shashank "vo beta...hum dono..i mean main aur Padma ne__shaadi karne ka faisla kiya hai"
Riddhima & Anjali (shocked)"KYA?"
Padma "vo beta...hame laga ki..a..wo.."
Riddhima "Maa...aap ne itna bada faisla kar liya aur hame batay tak nahi"(pretending to be very angry)
Anjali "haan Papa...aur aap logo ko kya laga ki hum dono is baat se khush honge?"(also pretending to be angry)..

A very big pause ..Shashank & Padma r scared that what will Anji & Ridz say...
.AFter a While Anji & Ridz burst out laughing...

Riddhima "maa-papa....congrats!"
Anjali "congrats ..dad and aunty oops i mean mom"
Nani "beta ye sab kya tha?"(confused)
Anjali "nani...hame sab pata tha..jab aap log papa ke cabin mein baat kar rahe the to maine aap logo ko baat karte huye sun liya tha aur maine ridzzi ko bhi bata diya tha....hum dono ne mil ke ye plan banaya tha"
Shashank "tum dono ne to hame daara hi diya tha"

All laugh and then eat their dinner..Now all r sitting and talking..

Padma "beta...hum dono ne socha hai ki hum court marriage karenge"
Riddhima "par kyun maa?"
Shashank "beta hum is umar mein zyada hangame se shaadi nahi karna chahte ...plzz understand"
Anjali "no problems papa.."
Nani "to beta ..hum sab kal subah tum logo ki hospital ki duty se pehle court jayege aur shaadi karva denge"
Riddhima "ok...nani"
Padma "ab tum dono jaake so jaao"
Anjali "yes mom"
They both go to sleep..!

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Anjali & Riddhima's bedroom...!!...

Anjali "Ridz ..main aaj bahut khush hun...mujhe ek maa jo mil gayi"
Riddhima "di...main bhi bahut khush hun....accha main abhi aayi"(she turns)
Anjali "kahan jaa rahi ho?....arre haan loverboy ke sath bhi to apni khushi share karogi..kyun?"
Riddhima "di...(she goes)"
Riddhima goes to the balcony and calls Armaan but he did not picked the phone as he was sleeping! So Riddhima also went to sleep...

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In the morning---(today night will be Sapna's marriage + today is Shashank & Padma's court marriage + and today only Dr.Shubhanker will propose Dr.Kirti)

Now today is Shashank & Padma's marriage but nobody in the hospital knew...The gupta's had decided that they will tell everybody after the marriage...Shashank had already informed Dr.Kirti that he,Riddhima ,and Anjali will come late ..
But Armaan didn't knew anything so he was waiting for Riddhima but she didn't turned up...Even Atul was waiting for Anjali...!
At the court all the formalities were over and now Shashank & Padma were officially married..!Padma had decided that she will stop working in the hospital from now..!...
After the marriage when they all were in the car,Riddhima send a message to Armaan saying that she will meet him at the roof of Sanjivani at 3pm as she has to give him a good news...
Armaan was excited to know the good news as well....!Riddhima came Sanjivani till 1pm but bcoz of the duties she was inable to meet Armaan..!

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AT THE ROOF 3PM....

Armaan was waiting for Riddhima ....Riddhima came and kissed him on his cheek and then hugged him...
Riddhima "Armaan ..I am soo soo soo happy today"
Armaan "aisa kya ho gaya?"
Riddhima "vo Papa ne Maa se shaadi kar li..."
Armaan "kya????"
Then Riddhima explained him the whole thing...
Armaan "i am so happy for u and Anji....aur ab main tumhe hamesha khush rakhunga"
Riddhima "matlab?"
Armaan "Arre jab tum khush hoti ho to gift mujhe milte hai"(he said this while touching his cheek where Riddhima had kissed him)
Riddhima blushed....

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with dr.kirti---

Dr.Kirti "interns...aaj aap sab jaldi jaa sakte hai bcoz of dr.sapna's marriage"
Interns "Thank u..Dr.Kirti"(and then she leaves)

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All go home and dress for the marriage....!

Riddhima was ready while Anjali was getting ready...!
Riddhima's phone rings..!

Riddhima "bolo Armaan"
Armaan "Jaan...vo..aaj tum mere sath chalogi"
Riddhima "hm..par..."
Armaan "plzzz....meri khatir"
Riddhima "accha main di se puchti hun"
Riddhima "di...main Armaan ke sath party mein chali jaun?"
Anjali "hmmm....theek hai.."
Riddhima "thanx di..Armaan tum aa jao"
Armaan "ok..par Anjali se keh dena ki usse Atul ko pick karna padega"
Riddhima "hmm..ok"(She tells Anjali that she has to pick Anjali and Anjali agrees)

Armaan comes and calls Riddhima and tells her to come down...
Riddhima was going when Padma asked her "beta,tum akele kyun jaa rahi ho?"
Riddhima "maa vo actually....a..."
Just then Anjali came out of her room and "Mom..vo actually mujhe abhi taiyaar hone mein time lagega aur Ridzzi yahan wait karte-karte bore ho jayegi to maine usse kaha ki vo Armaan ke sath jaa sakti hai....To Armaan usse lene aaya hai tabhi vo jaa rahi hai"
Riddhima "haan..maa"
Padma "ok..jao(but she was still suspicious)"
Riddhima thanked Anjali through her eyes and went outside where Armaan was waiting for her...

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Riddhima went outside and saw Armaan waiting for her and standing with his back towards her..!
She went slowly and said in his ears "mera intezaar kar rahe ho"
Armaan turned ..for a minute he was shocked and then he was lost in her beauty..!
Armaan "tum bahut acchi lag rahi ho"
Riddhima "thanx...tum bhi"
Armaan stared at her...!
Riddhima "Armaan...chale"
Armaan "hmm....par wait a second kuch kami hai"
Riddhima "kya?"
Armaan kissed on her cheek and said "ye"
Riddhima blushed "ab chale..!"
Armaan "haan!"
They both sat in the car ...

They both did not knew that Padma had seen everything from the window..

Padma to herself "hmmm...mujhe pata tha ki ye dono ek dusre ke liye bane hai"

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Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago

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Jia

@jia..

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#104

hey ridzze
this part was aweeeeeeesome and choooooooooo cute
i specially loved its length.
all the AR scenes were cho sweet and cool padma-shanshank married and now padma knows everything bt AR tooooooo. and RM having romantic dreams 😳
fabulous dear
dying to read the next part
plssssssssss continue soon

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revna

@revna

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Posted: 17 years ago

#105

this part was relly sweat and loonggg...waitin for the next part....pls post asap...

luv revna

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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#106

hey
i just loved it could u plzzzzzzzzz tell me ur real name ?
swansea

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Riddhima gupta

@*riddhima*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: swansea
hey
i just loved it could u plzzzzzzzzz tell me ur real name ?
swansea

my real name is Riddhima Gupta only..and i am not joking..!!😉..i know its funny but i am the real Riddhima and the Riddhima of dmg is just a character..!😆

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shalini jain

@yachna

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#108

hey ridz thnku so mch fr vryyyyyyyyyyyy vryyyyyyyyyyyyy lng nd cute nd romantic prt i lvd it..........wow i lvd tht prt
specially tht scene of hvng how mny kids wow it ws sooooooo awesom wow 1grl nd 1boy perfct nd hppy family nd all of musk.nd rahul nd atul wow it ws sooooooooooooooooooogood
nd now thy wre married wow nd now thy wre goi 2 prty in shr d whole prt ws fabulous..............plz cont.soon can't wait 2 read more..........a big hug 🤗
yachna

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#109

Oooo, cute part!!! Hahaaa, now Padma found out about them... I thought she already knew... Oh no maybe that was another FF 😕 These FF's confuse me so much, LoL... Can't wait for more.