LRL by reet(rn fic) updt by GAZAL on pg2 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
hey Reet I have read your ff on lrl forum.Really Reet u are a star in potraiting anyone's feeling, love, affection.I was feeling cry when you have come to the end of your ff.And yours another ff i.e.,RP FF D MAGIC OF LOVE and LOVE TASTES SWEET WINE drives me crazy to read again and again.RP FF ,I have read thrice. You are such a excellent writer that not only me but those who will read your ff he /she would also become crazy just like me.Aur tumhare ff padhne se mera sapna pura ho raha hai Rajiv Priyanka ko real life mein saath dekne ka.So please keep updating your ff.I pattionately wait for your update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
THNK TO ALL ONCE AGAIN ON BEHALF OF REET... 😊 😊

HERE GOES D NEXT1

Tere bin mai yun kaise jeeya….
Kaise jeeya tere bin….
lekar yaadein teri…
rate meri kati…
tanha hai…tujhbin saase meri…
tanha badan…tanha…feeru…
jeena nehi tere bin…
tere bin…………….

She was so lost in her thoughts….doznt able to notice someguyz are following…her…as she hav come near to a locality…..thought has engrossed her so…she was completely unaware…whr she is going…...
OHH GOD!!!!!!!!!.....................
D security guards…….of d det…center….
She walks in a drowsy manner…as if she iz not able to understand wat is going on around herself……..
Suddenly one of dem…comes close to her as she bumped on a brick…it…brings her into d sense……ohh…my god…!!!!whr has she come…..she recognizes…d guards…and got d whole matter…..bhargav…is back in hiz senses…..
Ohh god…I hav to something…she says to herself…
As d guy ables to touch her shoulder…..she just turns around….and gives a tight slap to him….
Oyee…teri himmat kaise hui mujhe chuneki….gharme ma bahen nehi hai kya….she acts like dat to draw attention of some people…who r sitting in a nearby…tea..shop…
Derr is no choice left…..for her…except gathering…some people derr…by whome she can distract d guards…..intellegent cadet ahh singh….smart move…capt rajveers voice echoes from background….her favourite communication teacher…..
Oye sharam nehi andi tereko…akeli kudinu chendti hai….army bale hokar des ki auraton ka ijjat nehi kar sakta khote da puttar….one old woman comes out wid a bellon….!!
Some peoples….also…joined her…
Ajkal rakhshak hi vakshak hai….des ka kya haal ho goya hai…oyee…sun…par humlog avivi jinda hai…samajh lio….saitano….
Suniye aaplog galad samajh rahe hai….yeh ladki hamare det.center se vagii huyi hai….
Kya….kya kaha….naina acts like a innocent girl…mai….ki center…???detention….woh kya Honda hai….haye…kina saitan hai…..!!!avivi jhut bol raha hai,…..??bohot chalak samajh ta hai aapne apko…??hayee…himmat to dekho…!!!
Dat was enough….!!!!for dem….
Janta janardan lag jate hai dhulaime…..u see guyz…..nothing can stop dem…..
Naina takes d advantage n fies away frm derr…after walking normally sometime…she starts running…..she knows it…Bhargav will never give up so easily……….she know him very well…if u can not pretend ur enemy…he will beat u any time…dnt ever…take him casually….she was taught by Capt…rajveer……!!she iz his best cadet…who can….recover…in anytime wen situation needs…
And after a while of running through narrow alleys….she gets into d jungle….
But she doznt stop running…after moving inside she slow downs her speed…..
And suddenly….

THATS ALL FOR D DAY............
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
good yaar keep it up aur ha ud jaladi karana waise naina slap kaafi accha tha bechara guard hil gaya hoga 😆 😆 con soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sanabmw

good yaar keep it up aur ha ud jaladi karana waise naina slap kaafi accha tha bechara guard hil gaya hoga 😆 😆 con soon

i will update soon...

sacchi guard ko naani yaad aa gayi hongi......😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
ok folks here goes....

she hears a sound frm back….she finds a truck…was coming….frm d direction of det.centre……she apprehends…it might be d guards…from d det…centre.
And suddenly….d truck stops….she was hiding in a bush….she was making herself ready for a tough fight..wid dem…but to her utter surprise….she watchs d driver…to find a bush for nature call
Yack!!!! She mutters…and a plan…sparkles in her head…she steps outside…n…creaps toward d trucks back….she has planned to use d truck…..which can tak her away a very fare distance…she cant ask 4 help to demmmone reason…she is a gal…and secondly…her cloths has got very untidy…dey will get suspicious ….abt her……
.just after getting into d truck…she feels dat starts moving….right timings cadet singh….!!!!she says herself…..and sits comfortably…..streaches her feets….which were paining for walking n running a long distance…and again starts to think….whr is d destination of d truck…and tries to listen d conversation btn d driver and d helper…..
Ohh my god….dey r going to take meal at a dhava a lil b4 ambala….
I shouldn't go to ambala……if nair watchs me out….den…..everything will go in vain…I hav to get down at d dhava….but how…???derr will b a lots of people…at d dhava….she recognizes d dhava…..her friends once freaked out at d dhava….!![remember guyz…jaha chiku se bachaya tha cadets ko capt raajveer ne….!!!!!!!]
Its must be crowdy…derr……….i should do something…..she tries to look out to recognize d road…..but fails due to deep darkness of night…at jungle…d jungle has covered d both sides of d road…as if dey want to hide d road…..derr is sound of passing cars n trucks…..she realizes she has taken a big risk ….she hav get down b4 reaching ambala….caz dey r going to stay d night at ambala…..is fairly evident from derr discussion …..
Time passes by…..she thanks puja in subconscious mind dat….she has forcefully made her taking d dinner…it will very difficult to arrange food now onwards….she has simply no destination…she has no aim….except one…she has to get down of d truck…..within half an hour…ambala is not far away from here….hardly 100 km…she hav to get down…!!chal naina tayar ho ja…chalti gadise kudne ke lie….tere pas aur koi option nehi hai….she mutters herself…but d truck is running at a very high speed ….wad to do…???
………….
…..screeeeeeechhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……………..suddenly d driver pushes d break…
Ki hua ustaad!!!!........d helper asks….
Aho yaar……..!!!mujhe kuch awaj si sunai dia…pechese…rukh oyee…mai dekhta hu…..d driver replies to d helper….
s**t….!!!!!!!!!!!...it was d sound of d drum in which naina punched in utter disappointment…..!!!!!!!!!!!


DATS IT FOR TODAY....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
nice but very small, plz next time long ud ok 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
ohhhhhhhh gr888888888888 ud ,what a ud yar how could u write like dis toooooooo gud an keep it up and plzzzz just a big ud wid colour letters ,ok to write in colour clik under the post repli box [post in WYSIWYG EDITOR] OK .
ALL THE BEST 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: rlrl

ohhhhhhhh gr888888888888 ud ,what a ud yar how could u write like dis toooooooo gud an keep it up and plzzzz just a big ud wid colour letters ,ok to write in colour clik under the post repli box [post in WYSIWYG EDITOR] OK .
ALL THE BEST 👏

thnk u so much i will do it.....next time.......

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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

OK SO HERE IT GOES.............

D driver comes to d back….removes d terpall cover…..
But finds nobody….
Ahhojee…sayed aapke kaan baaje honge ustaad…!!!!!!!!!
D driver looks confused….he has heard something…..hummmm
Chal chalte hai…..
He was right….it was naina….but its too late…to find her out…she has taken d full advantage…..of d incident…..{oyee chakdey phatte…….!!!!!!!!!!aakhir naina hai yaar……!!!!inne jaldi thodehi hath aanewali…!!!}

She quickly runs into d jungle….it is complete dark everywhere…horrible sounds r coming from each side…….she ables to understand…..she has come into d very dense side of d jungle…but it makes her happy…rather dan worried…she is at least confident…dat Nair at least dis time of night wouldn't be able to find her out….
unexpectedly….a lightening….it makes every thing clear….ohh…wads dis……
It starts raining within no moments…..its raining heavily……she almost turned to a doll made by mud….she looks at her self…dis makes her think ofd moments…of d mentor ship program….
It makes her breath heavy….she tries to move fast….but caz of heavy raining…n cold bridge…makes her shivering….she was completely wet….!! Its seeming d rainstorm will finish up everything today…wads wrong wid nature today…chilling cold….and d storm…made d jungle a utter disaster…. unremitting lightening…is giving her some idea…of d way….. But tries to move fast…ohhhh…wad was dat…..a tree falls down….making a huge sound…it was terrible….its no more safe here…..where to go….maaaahhhhhhhhh…..ahhhhhhhhhhh………ahhh……d adversity…has crossed all d limits

She bumps on a tree….and fells down….darkness of d awful night had made her almost blind…..her leg and right hand has got injured……she sits derr as it is….4 a while…pain…was making her handicap…possibly ankles…has lost it…she gets up….after a short span of time…though unable to…stand on her own feet's…she makes it possible…d training days of kma….has taught her…dis….blood was oozing out from her hand…paining bitterly
Tries to move along…..and slowly starts walking…..she is lost now…she has lost d direction….not knowing whr…actually whr she is heading….she walks….to get a shelter….
D ankle is paining so badly…..pain has shrunken her face….she is trying hard to walk…after a long time….she finds a cave type something….a lightening helps her to visualize dat….she gets more enthu to head towards dat….at least d night will pass away…..i will think about d other things later in d morning……Imy ankles need rest badly…or tomorrow ..it will give up walking…she thanks god…4 showing her d shelter to pass d night…as she get closer to it…it seemed totally desolate place….woh…at least whr I can rest my feet's….she gets closer to it….hey its not a cave….it seems a ruined old home…probably deserted 4 hundred of years….. ohhh… ….atleast human being were here someday….she ables to take herself in it….and suddenly….a hand wrapes around her neck…….who r u…??wad r u doing here…..she feels…a cold metallic touch at her right ear….

OK DATS DONE..........

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

hi lipi
wish u a very happy birthday.

may you suceed in every walk of your life.

enjoy ur day with ur friends n family.

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