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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
nice but was vey shot...uptate fast and plzz make a bigg one next time.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: friend forever

lage raho......

superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thnk u ...........

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: chocolate p

nice but was vey shot...uptate fast and plzz make a bigg one next time.

thnk u.............was lil busy..........will b big next time..............

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rajeevs only16

THANKS AAA LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT
LIPI...
I LOVE U.....SO MUCH...


THANKS GUYZ...U LIKED IT SO FAR....

SHE WILL UPDATE REGULARLY

PLZ BOOST WID LOTS OF REPLIES...


THANKS..

LOVE

-REET
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plzzzz dont say thnk u.......

its ur fic dats d best 1..............

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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
okkk so now its a big1.......


I m entering…huda just opens d door…n sees..aalekh has failed to make him sense less.
s**t!!!he mutters….and starts creaping towards…major bhargav….from bhargavs backside…
So answer me cadet aalekh…wad r u doing in my cabin…????no..no first tell me wad kinda punishment u want for urself…???hahaha……bhargav laughs…he is just pleased wid his luck…he has got d scope..to punish…d toughest male cadet…!!!!!!!!!!!!
So wads going on here??….answer me cadet sharma…..!!!!!as alekh sees huda …he calms down….actually sir…apunko …apse room arrangement ke bareme…baat karma tha…
Apun us nautanki ke sath nehi rahe sakta…sala bahut tang karta hai apunko who huda…aap plz apunko dusra kamra de dijiye…
Center tumhare baapki nehi hai cadet sharma…bhargav teases…knowing dat…d word baap makes aalekh furious…
But aalekh controls himself….and tries to cnfise n distract major from turning back….
Suddenly huda…hits bhargavs neck….to make him sense less..but..bhargav…moves…n huda fails…seeing derr no choice left….aalekh hits bhargav…form frontside…in hiz eye….(jor ka mukka dheerese laga…)
Den dey both ties him up…in his chair….
Do u know cadets wad d hell u r doing…I will…n suddenly….bhargav…doznt gets time to finsh…himself…huda has punched in his neck…aalekh puts d cotton in his noses….to make sure…dat he has realyy lost hiz senses…dis man is dangerous…!!!!!!!!!!!!!dey doznt want to leave any loop-hole…
Dey all…five hav to face isolation…and much more probably…dey hav already estimated…..dey knew it….
But everything for dosti…u see…..rajveer n navin has taught dem…wad is….frendship......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Here…yudi n naina…are getting impataient….!!!ali consoles dem…dheeraj rakhiye naina…yudibhai…wohlog sab samhal lenge…sabkuch thik hai….warna…who humein indicate karte….remember d cignal….
Ahhh!!!!yes dude….u r absolutely right…..yudi says…
Lijiye who aagaye….ali indicates towards one side…
Heyy….is derr everything fine…aarre huda tere hathse to khun nikaal rahi hai……blood was ooging from huda's left hand..…naina…looked concernd…huda gets emotional at dis….mai thik hu phulan…tu apna khayal rakhio….best of luck yaar…..khus rahio….
Aalekh notices….d shine in hudas eyes…he really loves hiz phulan….
Every body hugs her…..d time for bid a goodbye…

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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
EPISOD 5


Every body hugs her…..d time to bid derr fren goodbye…
Every one starts….heading towards…d gate…naina hugs everyone…before going out…
She gets out of d center….ultemately….her friends….has made derr words….she is now free….of everything….she doznt know whr d life will take her now…doznt wats waiting 4 her….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!baas chal die…….!!!!!!!!!
Phulan….huda calls her from back….ek baat yaad rakhio…phulan…koi teri intejaar karega….
Sari jindegi kar raha hai….aur karega…..aapna khayal rakhio…phulan…khus rahio….
Huda tries hiz best to control hiz tears….but fails…a drop tickles down…
Everybody is wid tears….deyy donn know….wen dey will meet again….aalekh whispers…ja naina…ja…apunko yaad karma…musibbat aayi to…
Haa….naina…also cries….tumlog apna dhyan rakhna….hamesha sath rahena…hum jaha vi rahe….yeh dosti hamesha hamare dilme hamare takaat banke chalni chahiye….naina…bids dem goodbye….and proceeds…..
Puja breaks down into sobs…ali…hugs….her tight…to comfort her…
Dey goes back to d den of d monster bhargav…..dey hav no choice….


Wen huda was saying….dose words…..dat somebody is waiting for u forever…..GOD was winking…….towards dem….
Lets see wad is HE planning…..
Naina slowly walks…through a lone dark alley….leaving d main road….caz…dere may somebody can recognize her…as d cadet who has fled away from bindhyachal det. Center…she knows dat her friends…hav to face a lot for wat dey have done for her….
She needed d boost badly to get out of d oblivion of depression…she has not been able to prepare herself d opreesion she was facing at d detension center….
Though she had lost d man whom she loved most in d world…4 years ago…but after coming to kma….from nainital…she…was recovering…from d shock….dat navins death has given her....by getting d support of dese friends….and…specially….rajveer sir…
Yes he is her rajveer sir….naina mutters under her breath…avimannyu sir…watevr u say…I dnt accept d charge against him….sir cant do dis….he cant kill anybody more….
She has been able to understand…under wat condition…rajveer has killed her brother…and hiz best friend Capt navin.
She recollects ….capt salve's…words ……"only one person was so important to him….d one….u …d hiz love…."she is completely lost in her thoughts…..d memories…d only companion left to her….tears made her eyesight hazzy…
Wad rajveer sir has not done for her…is dis love…??how can one love anyone so much….???why u hav finished urself for me….why…???dont u understand I love u too….she…pledges….she has got sentimental….
Yes avimannyu sir….he is my BELOVED……u r right dis time…..!!!!!!!!!!he is my beloved….i love him…I don't know…how and when…I fell in love wid him….but…he is d only one…whome I loved in my whole life…as…somebody special…..naina…looks upward….to d sky…..why….why…???damn it…??wad problem u do hav wid me…??y u allwayz snach away….my love everytime…..i just loved two persons in dis world and u hav taken dem away from me…..??Y??..........
Tears has chocked her throat….she is unable to control herself…..after a long time she has got a very long time to speak to herself…..
She blinks her eyes…to let d tear flow…and views d sight of last sight of rajveer sir….d emotion…d pain…d love…d way he has loved her nobody can love anyone… http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=evwJSk1DBPU [guyz plz listen to this wid d story now...dis will create d environment...]
Kya khub nivaya peyar sir aapne….hath thama tha….chodke kaha chale gaye sir.!!!!!!!!….ab mai kayse jeeu…ya fir kaise maru……kya karu sir….bol do…plz sir laut aao….aapni cadet singh ko aap chodke kaise ja sakte ho…u had promised me u will b allwayz wid me…will never let me be alone…..u hav kept ur other promises….but why did u forget dis….how can u forget dis….??plz come back…..mujhse aur nehi hota sir….plz…plz…. come back...kitne baat adhure rahe gaye hai sir….lemme finish…dose…give me a scope….plz sir…
U hav told me who goes to point 1857 never comes back alone…dey all get settled in dere life….den why dis is happening wid me sir…..???why???where r u sir…..??
OKKKK SO THATS ALL FOR D DAY...........
HOPE FOR SOM REPLIES....
Edited by fanatic 21 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
wow 😊
ur fic is too good 😛
update soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
awesome yaar plzzz con soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
nice...and thanxx for a long one.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
A BIG THNK U TO ALL...... 😊 😳

DIS ON BEHALF OF REET.........

WILL UPDATE SOON

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