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sana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

nice ud i think ab raj ki entry hone wali hai right .😉 😉 plz conti soon. 😛

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: sanabmw

hi lipi
wish u a very happy birthday.

may you suceed in every walk of your life.

enjoy ur day with ur friends n family.

thnx a lot........appriciate it.........

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Rajeevs only16
heyy lipi thanks ya lot again....

u r really sweet

HEYY FRENS I'M REET here again....!!!! 😉

JUS TO INFORM U

ITS LIPIS b.day ...

plz wish her on dis eve...

happy birthday to u lipi....
take care...
n hav a blast

thnk u again........love u......

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: friend forever
yaar update soon

will update by monday.........

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varun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

ur fic is too good 👏
i read it third time 😃
update soon
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

okk here it goes.....

D VOICE…………………WHO........WHO SAID IT…………..? ……………..???who r u………….d voice is so FAMILIAR………!!!!!
..............NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO…………………IT …………….CANT BE………………………ITS IMPOSSIBLE……………….god!!!!!!!!nooooooooooooooooooo………..!!!!!!!

.everything was moving around her …..though it was total black inside d dwelling….though…d world was seeming stirring badly to her….her vision is getting blurred...........she was so shocked...forgot to respond....frozen...stood still..for some moments....her knees going weak....
She gathers her sense to speak.......…after a while staying in d same position she asks…after a strong attempt....she is thinking...its just her dream.......dis cant be true...as allwayz...d dream will break widin some moments...
Who r u….??her voice trembling badly......!!!!!!!!!!
D person gets shocked at dis………….NAINA………………TUM...…………..???WAD R U DOING HERE…………………………?
DAT WAS ENOUGH……..4 NAINA…….TO LOOSE HER CONSCIOUS……her heart stops beating........
She fells down ……..AT FLOOR…………..
D MAN REMAINS THUNDERSTRUCK……….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
as if some one has statued him dere.....not even tries to see d unconscious gal lying on his feet..........
Ohhhhh GOD………………..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Capt rajveer is so stunned to see her derr right in front of him….dat couldn't even realize to understand wat has actually happened in last few moments….he is just taken aback
Of d whole thing…..its naina….lying right in front of him…ohh god….she has got unconscious….suddenly rajveer comes back into hiz senses….seeing….hiz life…yes life's condition infront of himself…He quickly bents down…and puts hiz left arm around her waste to lift her up…he rests his right hand under her knee's…but fails to lift her up in dat way…..his right arm is bullet injured….he is carrying 3 bullets in his right shoulder for last 5 dayz…it has totally damaged hiz right hand…he has been shot frm backside so…he was not able to take d bullets out. .frm hiz body…but somehow he manages…to lift her up by d another hand…and gently puts her lie down in a bit soft bed made of grasses….and himself takes position just next to her side..he just keep gazing naina…in a parched look….he was so keen to see her again…after such a long time…rajveer smiles to himself…destiny…its him dat allwayz keeps dem together whatever be d matter…in mentorship…friendship…love… even in hatred…dey were allwayz together…
After all d dreadful odds…she is again in front of him….with him….but wad made her unconscious….??....he notices d dark circles…under her eyes…d paleness of her face.. which has lost its original charm…d injuries of her fist…d marks off injuries spread all around her hole body….her face is telling how much pain she is bearing ..a lump rises in rajveers throat…he cant see her in dis way….he understands…wat she had to bear…after hiz disappearance…tears r trying to explode all limits…but he iz capt rajveer singh shekhawat…he blinks his eyes to flow d tears down….her looks seems…she had not taken food…and rest.. properly…for dayz….

okkkkkkkkk dats it.....

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sana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

wow awesome 😳 😳 😳2 good,raj wapas aa gaya i m so happy plzzz ab next update jaladi karana.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

yaar plz plz update soon can't wait so long

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

okkk here it is.......wait is over....

Her existence has made him forget wad pain he himself is going through…he has forgot all d things..d whole world around him…he bents down towards her…and gently…caress her face in hiz palms….gently moves away d tendrills dat is kissing her wet forehead…ohhh….she iz completely wet…it can lead to fever or something more dangerous dan dat…he takes away her wet chunri…from her neck…its dropping water…
She is shivering terribly in cold….noticing dat rajveer gets up to make a bonfire…after making it just beside demselves….he situated again himself in d old position…she iz still unconscious…

d reflection of d fire….in her bare shoulder just made him statue for quite a long time… controlling himself…rajveer…manages one handkerchief[it's dat one she has gifted him….guyz remember..] to wipe d water of her bare part of d body….he wipes her face gently…like a babby doll…she looks so pretty…wen she is asleep….he wipes her bare neck…and den…takes her right hand in his ones ..to mop out d water from it..

den he just entwined her finger wth hiz….d temperature of hiz palm..makes her feel warm..she opens her eyelids slowly…suddenly she recollects wad has made her loose sense…she looks at him….it made her forget to breath for a long time..sir….aap jinda ho…her whole body starts shivering…..seeing d face…close to her….d sight is out from blue….her capt.rajveer is alive…she lifts her right hand up to touch hiz face…to be sure…its not d same dream…dat allwayz……….she is going through 4 d past few dayz…

Is it really u…tears starts rolling down…aap ho…sir…ya fir koi dhoka…fir…sir aap kuch kahete kiu nehi,,,,she yells out….not abling control herself…d deep pain….sir…she starts sobbing…….

Rajveer speaks out…."its me naina….its me….i mean…cadet. Singh…rajveer.."
Unables to win wid d fights in hiz mind he is going through….

It makes naina…breath faster…she clutches d hand in her palm…."sir…………aap kaha chale gayethe"…??.....her innocent eyes reflect deep love for raj.....expactant for love n warmth......

she touches his face….to be sure whether it is true or not….breaks down into sobbs….fails to control herself…she suddenly clutches him ….hugs him tightly…..and puts her face…in his chest wid a pressure…she I breaking….her all pains r coming out…..she unables to speak other dan sir…sir….

rajveer lifts hiz wounded hand to wrap her to give her d comfort…wen d other is busy…in her hand….he even fails to control himself…..tears…makes hiz chick wet….he had beared enough….after dey last mate….he gently rubbs her back….trying to stop her…and finally he himself breaks into sobbs……..,…..
Dey both had had enough…….let all derr pains come out…..letd tears wash away…all d
Complains…all d pains…they hav gone through……aap …kaha the sir….maine aapko……unables to complete…but wants to tell a lot…aap ne mujhe ekbaar vi khabar tak nehi dia…aap jante hai…????sir aap jinda ho…she repeats d same sentence to reassure…dat it is really him…her capt.raajveer……

And finally speaks up….ap mujhe chodke mat jana….mai…….mai…mai jee nehi payungi…and realizes…herself…she has crossed d limt…and stops……

d sentence….lifts rajveers heart……hiz heart misses a beat….wad….wad did she say….but frightened to ask her 4 repeat…..he still doznt believe…his fate….its may be she just got carried away…he tries to forget d words….though…it has made him…happy…..content….he awaited a long for dis to happen….atleast she needs him…hiz life keeps importance to her…d thought made hiz eyes blink to accept d everawaited truth…which makes d drops free….to flow..

Naina…n rajveer remains……same …for a long time…silent….she is finally inher arms….rajveer hides a deep breath….unable to express himselp…he just says….shhhhh……..chup chup…mat ro…shhhhhhhhh……like a babby he is treating her…

he cuddles her face…which has almost turned out red…by crying for such a long time……….!!!!.......she is not behaving like herself….r time has broken her totally….rajveer understand fully….he tries hiz best to cuddle her……give her d best comfort…..but……it is not enough for…..she has missed him….so badly….never really expected dat he may be alive….she had lost d aim of her life…d only resort in her weird life. her love….yes love…!!!

But rajveer still not sure whether she really loves him or not……

Neither naina…nor rajveer…said anything…for a long time…remains clutched to each other…in arms of each other feeling d warmth……

as if if dey break d silence….d dream…dey r experiencing…may break into pieces…..actually dey hardly need to express something in words….

dey both hav forgot totally….dat dey shouldn't suppose to do something like dat….being rajveer as her mentor….and naina as her protge…………………………….and …moreover………..he is d killer of her brother…….dey just getting carried away…in each others arms…..

[navin voice over echoed in da silence....…in back ground……GOD BLESS DEM…..!!!!!!!]

okkkkk dats done.......