LRL by reet(rn fic) updt by GAZAL on pg2 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx for ur replies.....here it goes...

So we will meet after d dinner…
Yudi its ur responsibility to disable all d cameras till den…okk…
Sure naina…
I m ready…
Humvi..ali answers…
Jath hamesha tayaar hai….huda replies…
Mai taiyaar hu…puja whispers….aalekh patts puja..
N den says…okk…den at sharp…23:00 hrs…usjagape…
Thik hai…koi shaque…??
D rest five replies together noo sir…!!!
Aalekh smiles..n mutters under hiz breath…"nautanki saala…!!!"

D day passed away very fast….to arrange d every thing…
Derr heartbeats grow faster….d time has came….to prove frenship…prove…demselves..
Sharp 20:00 hrs…
Dey meat at dining hall…
Cold expression less six faces…start acting wen dey see bhargav entering….dey acts like…dey hav totally lost derr confidence…broken fully by d torture…left every thing on bhargav….dey hav totally lost it…d look makes bharav satisfied…he chuckles rudely….n turns back..to get out….huda stiffens hiz face muscles…..sala…kameena…
Oyee…cameras are active….behave normally….puja warns him…a lil mistake of ours…can destroy everything…thand rakh….!!!
Dey silently finshes der meal…and faces each other…confidence was glowing from d six faces……
Hahah…!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!bhargav…misses…d scene in d camera…caz he was busy wid tom..n jerry…
Now its d time to joke on him…d super six has stars derr action…d time has finally came…to make derr plan a success…!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

thnk u so much

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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
are wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.kya likha hai yar tumhe to hum mangaye.ok if don't mind can iask whre are you from means which is your home town.but n e ways th fic is gr888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 👏 [=D>

ALL D BEST
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rlrl

are wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.kya likha hai yar tumhe to hum mangaye.ok if don't mind can iask whre are you from means which is your home town.but n e ways th fic is gr888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 👏 [=D>

ALL D BEST

thnk u so much........n i m frm mumbai......

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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys next update very soon.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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okkkkkk here it goes

EPISOD 3



Dey starts performing…derr individual….parts….of misson_escape
Naina is seating on her bed…calmly….puja was taking round of d room…naina looks at her n says…it will make u throw pujii….hearing her nick name again…she comes close to naina…oye….i will miss u…me too pujii…naina replies…n hugs …each other…..real frends….last warm hug……it was giving confidence each other….

Naina….hears d bell of 22:00 hrs…everyone as well..
Naina…hav u planned anything…whr will u go…????puja looks concerned..
First lemme get out of dis pujii….actually…I havnt thought…time will decide…wad to do….
{[ …Hey….!!!!.do u know guyz…GOD was actually listing to her…for d first time…hehehehe…wen she tells dat…god chuckled…naughtily…HE has decided…..wad to do…wid dis fateless girl….]}

22:50 hrs
Every body heads…at d defined position…yudi has disabled all d cameras…puja has…given…sleaping pills to all d guards…dat she has…theft from infirmatory…
Aalekh has brought some chlorophorm….huda n ali…has cut d all d wires of warning bell…aalekh has also managed…a pistol…from some guard….
Now every body except aalekh…is heading to d westgate…..of det. Center…naina…has reached derr…already…along wid yudi…huad n ali is on derr way… …puja…is snaching senses…of all d guards…by d chlorophorm who r coming…in derr way to major bhargav….yah!!!!aalekh n puja…has d responsibility to take a special care for him…dey finds a gurad…entering in d bhargavs room…wid a tray in hiz hand…and a black tea…was on it…yahhhh….dey looks at each other…n starts heading towards d door….d guard comes out….and seeing dem…about to start shouting…but in no time…huda...gives hiz neck a round….arre tu ihaa….ha…maine socha…tumlogon ko jarurat ho sakta hai…jath ka..!!
Accha kia…huda…puja grins….aalekh nodds hiz head,……iska kuch nehi ho sakta hai yaar….!!!! Where is aali , yudi n naina????aalekh is worried……dey all r waiting at behind d bush….near d waste gate..huda assures…
Ohh dats fine!!!!!!!!!!!…all done na…????aalekh asks huda…
Ha qaidi ab isko samhal…he indicates towards….bhargav's room…
Apun andar jata hai…agar…2 min me bahar nehi aaya…to tu aana huda…puja u will take care of d tresspassers…yes sir…!!puja winks at aalekh…aalekh is about to enter….oyee sun…best of luck….!!!...jath wishes….
Aalekh enters…wid a cotton peace…in his hand…
Dey both…keeps…patience…outside…ofter sometime…oyee panjaban….abtak aaya kiu nehi apna qaidi…thik to haina…tu rukh…iha…huda gets impatient…

THATS ALL FOR D DAY............
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was nice but ab plz naina ko jaladi yaha se bahar nikalo.aur raj ko bhi wapas lao.and i realy like k saare cadets naina ki itani help kar rahe hai they r realy good 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanabmw

that was nice but ab plz naina ko jaladi yaha se bahar nikalo.aur raj ko bhi wapas lao.and i realy like k saare cadets naina ki itani help kar rahe hai they r realy good 👏 👏

thnk u for likin it..........yes in next 1 or 2 uds she'll outta frm here........n raj will 've his mooh dikhai....😆

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