LRL by reet(rn fic) updt by GAZAL on pg2 - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago
TODAY IS WEDNESDAY
WHERE IS UPDATE
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry guys really.......will updt later tonite........pakka.................
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Posted: 17 years ago

"Sir I hav something dat will help us.just a minute"naina interrupts

Naina enters d bedroom and widin 10 secs comes out wid a blue packet…

Wat's dat..? raj asks..confused.

"Here it is sir…"naina hands dem over something

"nows dats intellegent..thanks cadet singh Dis will surely help us a lot.."

Dat was two set of black masked dress from head to toe wid hood

"I must say u hav a brilliant cadet capt " shaliny remarks.very impressed wid nainas move…

"ya no confusion in dat "raj grins proudly..

"So get ready now onwards…our mission is about to begin……"shaliny anounces

Well shaliny ….dont tell anything to chauhan right now….time will say everything…

raj looks at dem and anounces...

"Cadet and doc…..if we succeed today….we will head for vdc tomm….and shaliny…u r getting just day after today to manage d surijee's mobile and d audio recordings of nair….wat will be in abhimanyus room…"

Emm….one more thing …shaliny…..I think u hav to take surijee along wid u …but don't let him know abt us….u manage it urself…..


Shaliny u r going right now….make d alibi….and d situation dat will help u to divert major nair and brigg chandook in derr dinner time….

Ahhh….shaliny…I forgot to ask u earlier…..will u endanger ur carrear for us

Every thing for d truth capt…everything for my friendz and everything for our six gems….shaliny says wid a great pride in her eyes for dem

Thanks a lot shaliny…but I think I shouldn't thank u….dis word is too small for dis…
Actually..i had allwayz taken u for granted …as my friend

its okay capt..lets nt be so formal

So operation begins

D three gives each other a high five….

Dey hav decided to walk on a very dangerous path….dey might hav to loose derr lives…but above all dey r soldiers..dey r fighters….dey never loose hope…

Dey don't hav any idea..wat is going to be next…dey hav faith upon demselves…and each other….so started it..knowing nothing about derr future…careless about derr lives…bas jang chedi hai to age badhte jana hai

Naina goes inside and comes back widin a few minutes….

wearing a black jacket….dark blue jeans…and black sleeveless t-shirt inside…as she puts on her helmet….deer hardly anybody can recognize her as a woman…she is completely looking like a man….

Shaliny wears a white salwar kameej…..intentionally…

Chalein mam…!!

Raj winks naina….and…he himself is also ready wid a black jeans…and a.black t-shirt….
D black will help dem to hide in d night.

D dangerous game is about to begin….

.dey looked at each other for last time and…starts d bike……d three…..moving in a high pace……literally..

soon dey r other ppl to join..and begin d race...

aj ki raat hona hai kya...khona hai kya pana hai kya......


After one hour…dey reached d margin of d jungle….dis time….raj got down from d bike…and show thumb to d other two…to wish dem luck….

Naina n shaliny both wished him….and everything happened silently….widout uttering a word….

naina…again pacing d bike towards amballa…..dey stoped at a flourist shop near it….shaliny baught some flowers ….and…said something to d keeper …and handed d flowers to him..d man nods saying….ok mam.samajh gaya…shaliny hands over a 100bucks note to him…d man grins wide seeing d note….

Mean While naina…busy in finding a pco….looking all around……and finally finds one …heads to it and makes some calls….heads back…

Dey again met at d parking lot…whr d bike was parked before….naina wearing d helmet d whole time….it seems…dat she is shalinys boyfriend….and dey r a sweet loveble couple…as dey interacted….den dey enters a chemist shop…..baught some medicines…shaliny keeps dem in her purse…and winks naina…..dey both heads to d parking lot…

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Meanwhile raj was busy wid something else….he had noted d number of d car contained red box…in his mind..so now…he reaches to some pco….dials a number…and conversation is like dis….

Hello angad its veer here….
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Well sorry…I was lil troubled dese dayz....i need ur help dost…
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Don't worry….i will manage…u just do dis for me dude…
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Well write down d number…..DL08-F ****…..i want d details angad…I will call u after half n hour…
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No no…don't call derr….i m not derr now a dayz…ur call will laid to a prob…
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Thank u so much yaar…!!...and listen…never ever tell anybody..i had called u..
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Don't worry…I will be fine..u take care …I m calling u after half n hour…ok..
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Bye..catch u later…

And den heads somewhere else…

Half n hour passed
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Raj is in another pco …calling angad…
Hi…veer here….
…………….
Is dat ready…..
……………….
Den fax it….in dis no.***
………….
Just a sec….
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Yahh….!! I hav got it…thankz yaar….
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I will surely contact u after I sort out here…
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I know u r alwayz derr…so now onwards..no veer has cald…no docs….nothing..
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Thanks yaar…
Bye..cya…
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U too..
hung it…

…how much ..??
Pays d bill…and goes out…

On d other side….naina…leaving shaliny outside..… enters a monginis cake shop….and after sometime comes outside.

So may we go…mam…ya…drop me at d busstand…

Naina does dat and leaves her derr…she now heads for raj..

Shaliny takes a taxi…and heads for kma...

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Raj waiting for naina…naina…comes back…

r : Kaisi rahi…

n : Everything fine sir…sabkuch ho goya…now lets wait here for mam's signal….

r : Hummm….

n : Wad about u sir….

r : Ok..here is d documentz….prasant mehta…named somebody owns d car…lives at chandni chawk delhi..…business man…export ka chota mota business hai….no way connected directly to army…

n : So….wads next…

r : We hav to find d more details about him….

n : Ok…par agar yudi hota to sayed humien help kar sakta tha….

r : Wohkaise..?I mean y him…??

n : using his skills…and internet…by d registration no of d business of prasant meheta….and also personally…his uncle lives in chandni chawk…

r : Yahhh!!...dats right…

naina…sits next to him….puts off her helmet….and shook her head to manage d hair.. strips off her jacket….as she was tired wearing d both n also feeling hot…as her body was too active for d last hours…

Raj stunned by her beauty….cant take his eyes off…although she dint notice dat…busy wid herself….
as naina sits next to him…he feels a current passing through his spine…and instantly …looks other side…realizing wat he is doing…

Naina..breaks d silence…..jante hai sir…aapke bina kma me janeko dil nehi karta hai…
Suna sunasa lagti hai charo aur...

Ya..
…..
Ok...
……..
thank u..any prob…??
……..
Good job doc….

Ya…she is d best…and pats naina's shoulder…
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Bye…best of luck..
……..
Thank u..


Naina…time for action…lets go….everything is going according to plan…and good job naina...!!

..aaphise shikhi hu...

do ab mai chalayunga...u need rest for some time..

nahh ur hands are not perfectly allright...to drive..i will drive..

look..first i m fine now...and 2nd agar tum saamne baithogi..i dont think i can control myself...
and lemme hav d experience raj winks at her mischievously...

naina smiles and hands him over d keys of d bike...

dey heads off to kma..

hiii.. doc shaliny hw r u...?well .apke lie ph aayi thi aapke ghar se…..abhimanyu heads towards shaliny…as she enters mess to hav a cup of tea…..

accha…kaun thi…kuch kahi…rukie mai abhi ph karke aati hu..

nahhh…ph galtise mere haath hi aya tha..aapki mom thi…unhone aapko kaheneke lie kahi ke apke chacha jee ki tabiyat ab thik hai….woh unhe hospital se ghar le aye hai…

aur puch rahi thi…aap pahuch gaye ya nehi….academy..emmm…to doc aap sayed islie…bina koi permission ke gayeb huyi thi…

ha….capt….i m sorry…ready to hav d punishment….par mere pass bilkul waqt nehi thi…mai chacha jee ko khona nehi chahti thi…….shaliny acts realy well…and convinces him..

its ok capt…aisi jarurat to kisi ko bhi aa sakti hai…mai samhal lunga…doc…u just take care of urself….it seems…ke aap par bohot hi stress ja chukka hai…
shaliny makes a tired and gloomy face..

but her expression changes as he leaves…she chuckles..

ahh…..shalinijee….. mainu aapse ek gal karna tha…..surijee comes close to her…

sit down surijee…aur kahiye…keya baat hai…aap itne excited kiu lag rahe hai…??
Take a deep breath surijee….and tell me wad happened..?

Who kya haina shaliny jee…aj iha..ek ph call aaya tha….major nair ki koi rishtedaar thi….kahe raha tha…major ka aj happy birthday hai jee…islie…usne ihake address par ful aur cakes veji hai….woh unhe mil jaana chahiye…..

Dats really a good news surijee…isme ghabranewali kaunsi baat hai…?major ka janam din hai aur hum yeh jante huye bhi celebrate na kare aisa to ho nehi sakta…to aj raat kuch surprise party sarty hojaye….!!!

Haa……emmm….agar aisi gaal hai to….thik hai…surijee looks confused….


Ooho..surijee mai janti hu aap keya soch rahe hai…

aaa.....major nair thode ….emmm….nehi thode jyada….i mean bohot jyada battameej kism kea ad mi hai…

mai jaantihu…par aj unka janam din hai….sochiye hum sab iha…apne apne ghar paribaar se dur…shaliny looks sad……..(at least tries to….)..aur aj unke rishtedaar ne sarre arrangements karke rakhe hai to…we should at least help her…to celebrate it…kya bolte hai…..asks for surijee's consent….

Oye tuci thik kahe teho……looks convinced…..mai saare party ke arrangements karke aapse milta hu.......

Ok surijee….par dhyan rakhna….lights out ke lie sirf dhai ghante hi bache hai….
Tuci fikr na karo shalinije….


surijee shooks his head and trails off inside....

shaliny looks at him ...and almost yells throwing her hand. in d air... yayyyyyyyyyyyyy...!!!

and in d very next moment stops....looking sideways....

cadets look at her strangely......

she stearches out and says...aaa i m really tired...
obviously to make up d situation......

cadets look convinced and smiled back to her....


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okkkkkk done n njoy dis updt by reet................

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Posted: 17 years ago
that was really wonderful UD
i like the scene of raj mesmerized by naina's beauty
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Posted: 17 years ago
intresting
shalni is a briliant actor
too good
update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 👏
superb..........................................

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 amazing.....please update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
superbbb UD shalini sach main bahot acche se juth bol leti hai 😆 😆 aur maj,nair ka birhthday 😆 😆 hey i like the scene jab raj naina ko dekhta hai aur kho jaata hai 😳 😳 😳 conti soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey....its been a while when are you going to update..plz do it soon... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey

where are you? we are waiting for the next update...please do not stop this fan fic in the middle. 😭

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