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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: litika
plz update the next part....jaldi karo kahan ho tum

monday ko ud pakka..................

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koolarch2001

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Posted: 17 years ago

#142

hey nice update.. next past update soon.. waitin and love this ff.. 😊

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#143

thnk u to all onreaders on behalf of reet...................

its her new year today....so reet wish u a very happy new year..................here it goes d updt.................njoy..................

Arreeeeeeeeey …………!!

.hummmmmmmmm……….so ultimately…!!!!shaliny amusedly slipped a smile...shook her head......seeing dem lying derr

...god plz bless dis couple…from all odds….shaliny….has woke up a lil early dis morning…as she hasn't slept well last night…..being new on d place…..!!so she was going out for a walk…..and saw dem…

Raj sleeping peacefully…holding nainas hand…on his chest….naina…..has made raj's arm..a pillow….and her leg r over raj's….holding raj like a teddy bear…

dey both r dreaming something happy…as dey both have a cute smile on derr lips…

looking as made heaven….so happy…in each others arms….

shaliny by her doctors eye has already noticed…dat dey havnt crossed d limit….how..??...its a doctors instinct….and she knew both of dem personally…shaliny cudnt stop grinning....koi inhe dekhke kahega..kal sham ko itna jhagara lie hai dono ne....huh....ya...obviously she has overheard d eveings cnvo......….

shaliny went out shooking her head….leaving dem in dat bliss…!!!..

Eee…uthona…utho….

uuuuhhhhuuuunn….thodi der aur….raj pressed her hand more tightly....

Thik hai to meri haat chodo…mam aajayengi….mujhe uthne do…

Aanedo…nehi chodunga…

Kya sochegi…

Sochegi so rahe hai….]

Uffff…..raj…!!!!now naina impatient...

Raj opens his eyes…listening hiz name…from her…and gazes nainas eyes….

kya kaha..??

Naina…blushes…and somehow makes herself free…n runs..

Raj gets up dreamily…smiling……moving his fingures…widin...his hair…

(guyz plz imagine d scene…..raj…wearing…white kurta..pajama…hair messed totally…kina sona…..!!!!...haye…..)

Naina…goes to kitchen…to make coffee….goes to freshen her up…leaving d water boiling….

Sir….sir….mam nehi hai……..

Wad…!!!.....raj surprised….tumne thik se dekhana..

Ha sir…she is not here…naina…tensed…

Shayed walk pe gayi hogi…don't worry aajayenge….raj assures her…

She doesn't look convinced…busy in thinking something….
Kya hua…kya soch rahi ho raj asks…seeing naina unmindful…

Agar mam iha nehi hai…to usse do baat to saaf hai….1-__she had seen us together…and…2._if she has gone for a walk….she will come to know d way I had brought her here….naina…says….thoughtfully…

And wad does d 2nd one means…..doesnt she knows d way wen she had came here….??raj confused.....

No…I had took her here..blindfolded……

Wat…??...but y ??mera matlab uski kya jarurat thi…?dont u blv her..?

Aapke bareme mai khudke alava…kisiko blv nehi karti sir….sab dhoka de sakte hai..pichle dinone yeh sikh de do hai mujhe.....

Par mai nehi dungi….dhoka….!!!!!!!!

Dey both looks back to d source of d voice....

Its shaliny…..

Relax cadet…..kuch logonpe tumhe ekin karnahi hoga….jaise ki mujhpe aur tumhare 5 friends ko….

She is right naina….jang aakeli nehi ladi jati….iske lie ek fauj chahiye hoti hai….jinpar tum ekin kar sako…u hav to choose d soldiers…to make d army…raj remarks..

Naina..nodds…

plz aaplog batein kijiye…mai avi coffee lati hu aplogonke lie…waise pata nehi mere paanika kya hal hai…

Matlab…??both asks together…

Nothing….i will be just right back…she had kept d mug of water on fire a long time ago.....

After having derr coffee….dey come outside..and sit on d barandah….raj on d rock…
enjoying d sun...and d nature...

Guyz…lets make a plan…how to proceed…now

Yes sir…

First off all…we hav to find out…..who is d mastermind….

But to reach him we hav to keep eyes on nair….

And 2nd ly….we hav to save d cadets from bhargav….and bring dem back in academy….

Yes sir….it means…we hav to proceed in two way simultaneously…caz….if cadets come back to kma…dey can certainly….help us on dis…and to do dat….we hav to involve capt abhimanyu….and to do dat….mam…..can help us…naina....swiftly...comes wid d plan...

Smart move cadet ahh singh….raj chuckles…

Uhhh….thank u sir......naina blushes...
aphi ki sikh hai….!!

And now…raj serious again…we hav to go to V.D.C (vindhyachal det. centre)….dey had kept navin derr……. derr must be some proofs….which can help us to proceed…

in reply naina n shaliny just nodded....

By d way cadet singh I need to have two things….1. d mobile set….dat surijee had given u …and ….d cross connection incident happened….

and……no-2. d car papers….d details of d ambassador car….in which…..i had found d contents of red-box…at d day of d incident (colonel shaktichandra's death)

We hav to go to d place again sir…my instinct telling me we can get some more clue derr….

But Capt.…..cars ke papers to vague vi ho sakte haina…..?shaliny commented...

haan sir...yeh bhi ho sakta hai...

May be she is true cadet singh…..but I don't think dey would try something like dat…caz…

dey knew it very well if I can prove one of d evidence false….i could drew d decission towards myself….dey would not take dat big risk….as dey were pretending to be dat d car was wid colonel…Chandra …dey would never let him prove false…or dey will loose derr own stand point......

Right capt…shaliny remarks….dey had done a big mistake…!!to prove d story right….!!over smart….!!huh..!!

I agree wid u sir…but derr u may add one point… capt salve….smriti salve….we hav to know about her….she herself was not pleading dat day….its not possible to get so many details…..in one day…..and about aalekh….she was so biased…and apprehensive…..she was not playing a fair game sir….my instincts say so…

Hummmmm…..may be…..wovi involved hai…..par yeh kaam hum tino milke nehi kar sakte hain….

Capt den we start our mission from VDC…we need to make our army first….!!
Yes doc…u r right….!!

Now naina lifts her both hands upward…and announces…

bakibatein lunch ke bad…ab lunch break….

avi tak lunch banhi tak nehi sir….pahele pet pujan kar lete hai..kya kahete….??

Shaliny and raj both surprised…and silent for a moment staring at her........and broke into laughs…bacchi hai ekdam…..!!

Mai bacchi hu….sir firse suru ho gaye aap......naina....makes a face....

Nehi nani amma ….apse badi koi nehi hai…iha….saying dis in a innocent voice…raj gives shaliny a high five and again starts laughing…

naina gets very angry at dis.....

her face became red in embarrasment.....

she hits d floor by her heel in mock anger and disappears frm derr...

huh.....har waqt mujhe satate rahete hai.....!!naina mutters under her breath,,...

May I help u….raj asks naina…who has made d kitchen a big mess…

Ya…….offcourse….ihaase jaakar…..naina.is still angry…!!

Arre…avitak naraj ho…I was joking …naina…

raj holds her in his arms from her back….

Arre kya kar rahe hai…mam aajayenge…chaliye chodiye….mujhe kaam karne dijiye…
Naina….says tensdly though happy inside……

I m hungry naina…..jaldi karo na….raj childishly says…

Arre..baba…bas ho goya…aaplog baitho…mai avi aayi….naina consoles him…like a kid…pulling his check…..

Right mam….raj jokes...and heads towards hall…
………….!!

Ahem…doc…mujhe apse kuch baat karma tha….emmmmm…voo....actually.....

kus bareme capt...shaliny smirks....

vo...uhhh......su sub....subhe kebareme….!!

Yes capt…shaliny chuckles…getting his intention…go ahead….!

Who…actually…emmmmm…I mean….uhhhh…actually…doc…emmm…nothing has happened like dat……raj tries to explain….u know na wat I m saying…..!!!!!!!

Hummmmm…absolutely…shaliny winks….and den seriously says…I know dat capt….i trust u completely...……and I m very happy for u……capt…dnt worry ur secret is safe wid me….

Ahhh…..!!!!!!raj looks relieved….thank u…..i knew it…..u r such a darling shaliny…..and at last she had confessed last night…….i m so so sooooo happy…

Hummmm…woh to dikh raha hai……!!!

shaliny really enjoys his happiness…she had never seen him so glad before…she was allwayz a good friend of raj….and she is now happy for him…seeing him like dis…..

After lunch dey sit comfortably at d hall…..to continue d discussion…..raj in his own bed……and naina , shaliny on naina's………

So guyz……derr is 4 missions----------------raj leads…..

1~ operation VDC

2~operation NAIR

3~operation KMA

4~operation d SPOT of colonel shaktichandra's murder…

Sorry for d interruption sir….colonel shaktichandra's death…!!!

Raj smiles….shooking his head…ok….fine..death..!!

Operation 1 mai samhalungi sir….naina announces…..

And operation 3 mai…dis time doctor shaliny.

Ok fir mai operation 2 and 4….but naina…I will accompany u in OP-1…..der r 2 part under op _1

No sir agar aapko kisine dekh lia to….aap vdc me nehi ja sakte…naina denies him…strongly…uhape bhargav hai....

Relax naina…nothing will happen like dat…raj tries to assure her ….and u cant tackle d both at d same time..caz we hav to manage everything widin a very short span of time…
I m going…u will go first…meet d cadets…till den….i will take care of d guards…u r taking huda and aalekh out…..and den operation bhargav….

Offcourse not sir…after taking dem I can manage d papers from bhargav….u r not coming…
naina…announces curting him in midway…she still adamant on her point…

Cadet try to understand…..u cant manage…we hav to succeed in dis….i m going wid u…its needed…

No sir….i will not…u r not going wid me…!!!never….!!!!!!!and dats final……naina yells ….impatiently…..

Cadet dis is an order…raj shouts irritated by her conduct….do u get dat cadet singh….??

Behave urself….and listen to me…raj sound furious….

done......................do reply....................

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friend forever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#144

amazing...................splendid!!!!!!!!!!!!!

to shalini has seen them..he !!!!!!he!!!!!!!

the kitchen scene 2 superb

and the way of irritating 2 naina marvellous.......

raj again sharmaing....pata nehi kab thik se bolega!!!!!!!!!

and the steps of operation r rocking....reet explained it like a soldier..

ok bye 4 now

update soon

Mou

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varun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#145

intresting
ab naina fir raj se naraz ho jai gi

so now they r plaining to solve thier problems
time for an action

update soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee

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hinal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#146

wow finally we get to see some actions
thaks plz UD next part soon

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sana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#147

awesome 😊 😊 par yeh raj aur naina kabhi nahin sudhrege,hamesha bas bahes hi karate rahete hai 😆 both r so sweet 😳 😳 😳 raj bechaara shalini k aage bahot sarama raha tha 😉 vvv nice reet 👏

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koolarch2001

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Posted: 17 years ago

#148

too good.. update soon... so when ll your next update be??

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: friend forever
update soon

it will b on monday....pakka.......😊

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#150

thnk u al on behalf of reet...............njoy d updt......................

Naina shocked at his behaviour….!!

a lump rises in her throat…she gets sentimental at rajs behaviour…..

raj is d only one person alive in dis world who can hurt her so bitterly….she got hurt at his rude behaviour…though it is a trifling matter…

but its her love makes her to over-react….….
she keeps herself mum for a while and den
says in a heavy voice….turning back to dem…

sir..ek baat puchu… sayed touhin hogi par maaf kijiega…..!!

aapne kabhi aapne peyar ko apne aankhon ke samne …….aagke lapetome jalte huye dekha hai…..??

....kavi dekh lena sir…sayed aapko samajh aa jaye…

and leaves d place…leaving dem bemused…

Raj has got it….he has again hurt her…but she is so stubborn…

but she luvs u capt….she is apprehensive…shaliny says..."ab jaiye aur jake use manake wapas laiye…."

"capt deal her wid care…she is not only ur cadet…but ur love also..…u hav to deal d both….aap yehi baat peyarsebhi samjha sakte the…."

"yes shaliny I m sorry…u r right…raj nods..i will be right back..wid her..i will talk to her….now….."

"yes Capt.…we don't hav much time…I hav to get back academy…today….and also hav to make a alibi … ..whr I was dis two days.."

"hmm doc…I can understand….."

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naina.....aree....tum ihaa ho....ohho mai kaha kaha nahi dhundha tumhe...
naina.....

naraj ho..?

he turns her towards himself..

aree yeh kya...u r crying...??

Naina…I m sorry….plz…plz…idhar dekho…

naina...meri taraf dekho...plzz....

…naina…plz..chup ho plz…dekho I cant handle tears in ur eyes…

jaan…samjho plz…tum bhi absconder ho…agar tum unke hath lag jaoge to mai….mai…mai kya karunga naina….plz…rou mat..mujhse galti ho gayi fir kavi nehi daantunga…par plz samjho…plz..tum to mere saamajhdaar bacchi ho na..?haan....??

mujhe aanahi hoga…sath marenge….kiu?..

Naina…clungs him..listening dis…and just silence revealed how much dey loves each other…

After sometime she parted from him reluctantly..…and says…"but sir wat will be about our det center punishment……!!!!!!.."

"Yes naina…u hav to go through d punishment…."

"emmm…but not now…caz it will depend upon d case…in d day of next trial….court of honour will punish you…."

"i hope…till den we will be able to prove everything…and court will mercy u to some extend…….."

"we hav to prove bhargav also as d part of d deadly conspiracy…..he doesn't deserve d place….VDC…..he is using his power negatively…and u don't hav to go through all dat…not in dis condition at least….after a pause raj continues…see naina….watever we hav to do…do it fast…caz…every proofs will be ruined wid time…"

"dats why I failed to prove navin's innocence…."

raj pauses....and starts after a long breath....as naina puts her hand around his neck...he nods slowly....

"dis time….i will not let dem win dats a promise to my best friend…….i hav to dat at any cost…..and naina…u hav to do…also….i know ….u should continue ur det center punishment above everything…caz u hav to be d best cadet….u hav to prove navin…..but…if u go back derr….bhargav will finish u up….and declare a case of suicide….so as huda n aalekh….."

"But sir if puja…yudi ali also wants to come along wid us den..?? as far I know dem….dey will do dis….u don't know sir…wen dey will come to know about u…d news will act as a high dose steroid injection to dem……dey will be so happy….everybody…I can imagine dis now…..and so as me..to tell dem….." ...naina jumps on her feet in excitement

"Relax naina…..stop dreaming babby……".raj chuckles….

"I m not babby….."..naina says wid mock anger....

"Ok nani amma…".raj mischievously says…pulling her cheeks….

"Ahem ahem…..humvi yehi hai…agar aaplogon ka khatam ho goya to kuch mere mission ke bareme discuss kare….!!!!!!!!..."....shaliny….interfares d love birds…
ahhh....aaaa..chale...? embarrased raj leaves naina's hand...

naina blushing hard.....

after sometime.....*********

raj : "Ya….shaliny….do one thing…give me ur cell..u manage another….we need to keep in touch…u manage another"

"Dats perfectly all right…here it is…" shaliny hands over d phone to him…

"Naina …we need ammunitions first….listen to me carefully….."

"we hav to collect dem right now…caz our operations start tomm.u r taking shaliny to kma now…u will leave her at dhava….and come back to da jungles margin…I will be derr waiting for u….den u will start at 6.30 pm from derr u will reach just middle of d dinner time….….i will be at d north west gate…..dis time is for d faculties…nair will hav it in d room…so as briig chandok…."

"capt Chauhaan will be at mess….taking his dinner….."naina interfares..

raj gives her a praising look...and continues...

"Shaliny u will keep nair and and chandook busy just after d dinner…caz…nair takes 9 minutes…and brigg takes 7 mins to complete derr dinner…"

"Naina…u will enter kma…just before dey starts it….u hav to reach ammunition room widin dis 7 mins…."

"shaliny…u hav to send dem derr meal at same time….u will start divert brigg from 6th min..of his starting time of his dinner…u hav finish it widin….6.30 min…and nair will be next to his room…u hav to take him wid u in next 1 min…………nair ko sabdhanise tackle karna…"

"naina….u hav to tackle 5 armed guards and 3 orderlies widin dis time…means 8…..u hav a gress of 30 sec……"

"Shaliny….u hav to keep dem busy both in d same room for next 10 mins……derr room is at south east….So I think dey will barely hear dis….."

"Naina u r getting 10 mins to take d guns and to reach me…I will be right behind at d absconder bell…..wid a jeep…I will manage it from d parking lot of kma….and
I will manage if anybody tries to come towards derr from mess….i will take care of abhimanyu too "

"dats d plan!"
"Any confusion cadet.?"

"No sir….!!"

"Doc ..??"

"No capt !"

"dispersed..."