'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 8

hehehehehe!! mast part! mereko last wala poem bahut funny laga.....sachi ki mom ka 😆

Originally posted by: togepe30

hehehehehe!! mast part! mereko last wala poem bahut funny laga.....sachi ki mom ka 😆

😆ehhe when i wrote and posted here i had a preview check and i just remembered u..feelign u will have a great laugh at it...😉and dekho mera kaam hogaya.....changa munda wali linese to hassi ayegi i felt..😆 hope u have more smiles reading the comign ones..

hey a really fab part just loved it evry poem had a diff emotion i really liked the one which is on the father son rel. just amazing

now i am waitin 4 their actual love angle to star tussi toooooooooooooooooo good ho 🤗

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey a really fab part just loved it evry poem had a diff emotion i really liked the one which is on the father son rel. just amazing

now i am waitin 4 their actual love angle to star tussi toooooooooooooooooo good ho 🤗

Hi jyothi... am so glad that u liekd this one... this was indeed the poem i told u , am waitin u too read there some mroe long ones comign..am sure u will enjoy reading them as well....u waitign for actual love to satrt..hmm...can just say..the 14th part will be lost of fun....😉

Hi Bhoomi......finally I m here ..OH God it feels so gud to see u back in action... n what a dhamaka ..wah wah ... i just completed reading all the parts ...sooooooooooooooooo sweet yaar ... Had a great time ....was abt to feel the KTH mood for the cas but it has anothr flavr as well so I can get so many nice feelings....

As usual..the best is the poems ..simly briliant.. cant say which one i loved most... sabke sab ekdam mast... they just bring a smile on my face ....ahaaan...

Shabbir ka role to fav hai ...hehe..I enjoyed a lot when he says,''I knew yeh capscm pizza hit hone wala hai''...sach mein shabbir yaad aagaya...i just cud imagine wo yeh line kis andaz se bola hoga...


Jeet n Sachi..loveble characters ... Sachi is really sweet..Jeet toh..what can I say??Tumne jisko yeh kirdar nibhaneke liye diya hai...unki shakal yaad atehi kehne ke liye kuch bachta nahi ...lol... yaar...he is mixture of Rajeev n Sujal .. uff..kitna confussion..his emotions..His silence ..his anger , his intensity is like Sujal's..but the way he says,'' u dont need to explain, n give any explanations...jo bhi man mein hai say it..it's abslty fine'' it reminds me of Rajeev ....n when Sacchi askd abt the black color n his room.... i cudnt help it n got sidetracked frm ur story ......Rajeev ki living room k black Ceiling yaad jo agaayi ....Gosh.. why m so crack? gt my Hosh back with ur amazing dialouges..''kala rang sab kuch dhak deta hai ,, n what does ulaja mean n how imp it is... beautifully written..

I loved Sacchi n Jeets mother's convo..it was very sweet ... arey wah..pehli mulakat mein hi maa kehna shuru? gud going girl ...

n last but not the least..till now my best moment in the story is the phn convo of jeet n Sachi..I actually cud relate what Sachi says,'' when u take my name it sounds so diffrnt.. so true ... not for her only ..it is just so real..the person we like /who r spe...when that person takes our name it feel just so gud n diffrent...U remember ..I gave this one a shot at my story as well long back... someone taking her name n she just closes her eyes ... such a beautiful feeling ...n u have written with such an ease....

till now..it's been a grt experience to read it....keep posting dear.. n writer ji , Can we get a Role for Chaitanya as well? thoda adhura nahi lagraha without him???

love it just keep on continuing!!!!!! 😉 👏

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Hi Bhoomi......finally I m here ..OH God it feels so gud to see u back in action... n what a dhamaka ..wah wah ... i just completed reading all the parts ...sooooooooooooooooo sweet yaar ... Had a great time ....was abt to feel the KTH mood for the cas but it has anothr flavr as well so I can get so many nice feelings....

As usual..the best is the poems ..simly briliant.. cant say which one i loved most... sabke sab ekdam mast... they just bring a smile on my face ....ahaaan...

Shabbir ka role to fav hai ...hehe..I enjoyed a lot when he says,''I knew yeh capscm pizza hit hone wala hai''...sach mein shabbir yaad aagaya...i just cud imagine wo yeh line kis andaz se bola hoga...


Jeet n Sachi..loveble characters ... Sachi is really sweet..Jeet toh..what can I say??Tumne jisko yeh kirdar nibhaneke liye diya hai...unki shakal yaad atehi kehne ke liye kuch bachta nahi ...lol... yaar...he is mixture of Rajeev n Sujal .. uff..kitna confussion..his emotions..His silence ..his anger , his intensity is like Sujal's..but the way he says,'' u dont need to explain, n give any explanations...jo bhi man mein hai say it..it's abslty fine'' it reminds me of Rajeev ....n when Sacchi askd abt the black color n his room.... i cudnt help it n got sidetracked frm ur story ......Rajeev ki living room k black Ceiling yaad jo agaayi ....Gosh.. why m so crack? gt my Hosh back with ur amazing dialouges..''kala rang sab kuch dhak deta hai ,, n what does ulaja mean n how imp it is... beautifully written..

I loved Sacchi n Jeets mother's convo..it was very sweet ... arey wah..pehli mulakat mein hi maa kehna shuru? gud going girl ...

n last but not the least..till now my best moment in the story is the phn convo of jeet n Sachi..I actually cud relate what Sachi says,'' when u take my name it sounds so diffrnt.. so true ... not for her only ..it is just so real..the person we like /who r spe...when that person takes our name it feel just so gud n diffrent...U remember ..I gave this one a shot at my story as well long back... someone taking her name n she just closes her eyes ... such a beautiful feeling ...n u have written with such an ease....

till now..it's been a grt experience to read it....keep posting dear.. n writer ji , Can we get a Role for Chaitanya as well? thoda adhura nahi lagraha without him???

Oh my my...getting ur reply to my story was a must and what a way to get it..it just made me feel like reading a summary of my story uptil now...and i dont knwo how much i have tried to do justice..but one thing u got it right..my Jeet here is a mixture of rajeev and sujal....i dont like many things in Rajeev which i love in Sujal and i dont like little few mintue things abt Sujal which i like a lot in Rajeev..so tried to sum up..ehheheh

I am so happy that u liek Saachi...u knwo its been a difficult time to think Aman in with a swweet inncent charcter i tried my best and yup Ashu hcarcter had to be thre to fulfill our KTH feel... And wow!! what am i seeing u enjoyign my poems..ahaahhah...am feelign great that m,y very atpatta poems r enjyable..u know sometiems i wonder should i or not to write poems her inthe story but u always told me..i so i keep writign them in...

About Chaitanya...i may not.... i think there is a very important charcter yet to coem who have already decided and chaitanay doesn fit in my story..but keeping ur and few others who asked me..i will see if can....but as far as now with my episodes written i havnt kept him in mind...he doestn have a role yet..

thanks dear for all the encoruagmetn u gave..it feels really nice..and this story started keepign a lot of things u n i discussed... Hope u enjoy readin it.... and ya 14episode is soemthing i am waitign for u all to read...so keep waiting😉

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Tumse Milkey

Episode -1

01-01-08

It was nice part bhoomi.. though was little confusing as i cant understand who is who? why dont you give a brief character sketch in the beginning of ur story?

Originally posted by: aredhel

love it just keep on continuing!!!!!! 😉 👏

thanks for encouragment... will post next episode soon..😃

Originally posted by: gaurifan

It was nice part bhoomi.. though was little confusing as i cant understand who is who? why dont you give a brief character sketch in the beginning of ur story?

hehehe Hi Reena, in my intro i explained the leads who r playign who....and later i would like to go with the flow ...as the charcters come up i will have their pics..i find this an interesting way...though will see that it deosnt become confusng dear... . am glad u liked the 1st episdoe..😃