'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 12

WOWIEEE 😳 .........SEE I KNEW IT..........I KNEW JEET DID IT PUPOSEFULLY......CONTINUE SOON !!! 😳 😉 😉

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

omg their first date wow. today the poems were just mind blowing loved the way sanchi gvae back vinay a really amazing part cont soon

Hi Jyothi...heehehe Date?? hmmm let see...glad to know that this episode had soemthign u liked....ya poems r a bit on serious track..i have been writign too many lovy dovy poems naa..or funny so few serious ones had to come... .willpost next episode soon...😃

Originally posted by: togepe30

WOWIEEE 😳 .........SEE I KNEW IT..........I KNEW JEET DID IT PUPOSEFULLY......CONTINUE SOON !!! 😳 😉 😉

HI Vandu..dekho u to ekdam jaan liya , u can understnad Jeet more than Saachi😉..kya baat hai.. hope u enjoy the next episode as well....😃

awesome parts. loving the fic to the core. waitng 4 the next part. U are an amazing writer bhoomi ur poems are all wonderful.

Originally posted by: golu_1677

awesome parts. loving the fic to the core. waitng 4 the next part. U are an amazing writer bhoomi ur poems are all wonderful.

Hi Golu, thanks so much for all ur encouraging words..i am just new to all this..trying to give what am good at...i know there is a long way to know ho wwell to write ff...am glad u r enjoying reading the poems...my friends keep tellign me keep writign them..or else sometimes i wonder story mey poems kahan se...😆 as u all enjoy it assures me agin ato keep them coming in...😃

Episode 14

01-03-07

Jeet picked up Saachi from her office and they were off to the theatre to watch a movie. As Jeet was trying to talk with Saachi, Ashu called up,

Ashu: Jeet, Akeley ladki key sath movie jaa rahe ho… kaunsi? mujhe bhi nahi pucha, yeh to Maa ney bataya warna tu to bewafa hogaya..

Jeet: bewafa..

Saachi heard and was wondering what is he talking…

Jeet: Ashu ..i think I will speak to u after coming back..

Ashu: Bolna seedhey seedhey…rang mey bhang kar raha hun..

Jeet smiled, Saachi could sense Ashu is pulling his leg and it is something to do with her. She too smiled…

Ashu: Aaj ki date waste matt karma…ek jhappi ya pappi to paa lena..

Jeet: Tu chup kar..aur phone rakh..

Ashu: Saachi ko zara phone de..

Jeet: Kyun…?

Ashu: tu kya uska operator hai..kaun kyun puch raha hai…Phone de yaar…

Jeet was a bit tensed and gave Saachi the phone…, "Saachi its Ashu on line, baat karo."

Saachi : Hi Ashu ..kaise ho..

Ashu: Main theek hun, aap dono ney mujhe bataya nahi Movie ka plan banaya… waise main tumhe woh film bhoot bangla, dikhana chahta tha…

Saachi: kisi aur din sahi Ashu..

Ashu: waise tumhe Jeet ne bataya hoga maine ussey ek kaam karne ko kaha hai..aaj ke din..bas tum ussey yaad dilado.. bhuljo ja sakta hai… bahut important hai… So yaad dilaogi na…kehna jo Ashu ne kaaam kaha woh jarrur kardey..Ok enjoy ….. I mean enjoy the movie..

Saachi: Sure..Bye Ashu.

Humdono ek dusre ke sath hain,

Dil mey pyaar key kitney Jasbaat hain,

Kaash Yeh thodi si jo jhijhak mit jati agar,

To simitt jate pyaar ka saaya hota jeevanbhar…

They reached the theatre. There was premire of a movie and the lead actor was about to come and many people were there waiting to have a glimpse of him. Immediately Saachi said, she likes that actor a lot. They waited to see the actor, soon the lead actor of the film 'Rajeev Khandelwal' came out of his car… It was 'Aamir' film's premier. Rajeev stepped out and all the girls went bersek seeing him, yelling and screaming for him. All girls went towards him and Saachi too went few steps ahead to see, and she said, 'I like him'..Jeet heard and said, 'U like him' never saw u excited like this.. kaash humare liye bhi koi deewana hota.." Saachi stopped hearing this..And went close to Jeet, "Tum kisikey deewane hogey to malum hoga deewangi kya hoti hai.." Jeet liked her answer and said,

Jeet: Deewangi to hai! Haiiiiiy koi samjhto paye..

Saachi: Tum kiskey deewane ho?

Jeet: Samjh to paye kaha…ab jisko jaise samjh aye.. Jaoo ruki kyun jaa ke Autograph lelo...Apne Uss 'Rajeev' ka...

Saachi: Hmm… Haan theek hi hai… (Smiling feeling how he is jealous on this small thing..She went few steps away and heard him saying..

Jeet: Yeh 'RK' aur main 'JK'…kya itna farak hai… na janey..

Saachi felt like pulling his leg..

Saachi: Woh 'RK'…aur tum 'JK'… 'R'… aur 'J' ka farak…don't u see.. 'R' alphabet 'S' ke kitne nazdeek hai… RSTU… (She smiled and was trying to control her laughter…)

Jeet got a bit upset…: haan jaoo… (Now he was actually feeling very jealous…

Tumsey kitna pyaar hai kaise tumhe bataun,

Tumsey milkey lagta hai tumhey apna banaun…

Saachi: Areey main to mazak kar rahi thii.(she came near Jeet )

Keh detey ho tum jaoo main nahi tumhara,

Marjaungi tumbin main, aisa kehna nahi dubara…

Saachi: Jeet..tum to kissi bhi RK ya SRK se bhi jyada ache aur nazdeek ho… So can I have ur autograph… (She smiled very cutely and Jeet was just so happy…) As Saachi held her hand for him to give autograph, Jeet held her hand gently with love looking into her eyes … took a pen and looked into her eyes... Their eyes met and smile was on their face, love was profound in their heart and the love wanted to blossom.

Aaj tumhara hath maine jo tham liya,

Rekhayin kehti hai tumhara ho hi gaya,

Pyaar se tumne kuch likhne ko kaha hai,

Jab ki sara jeevanhi tumhare naam hogaya hai,

Ab hath thamey kehana sirf itna hai,

Iss janam mey sirf tumhara bankey rehna hai…

Jeet saw into Saachi eyes and with a certain romance…held her hand..wrote few lines and came too close to kiss her on her hand..

Saachi first was a bit shy a little scared as he was close, she closed her eyes trying to feel it and………. Their heart beats raised, …….soon the crowd of people pushed her towards Jeet with RK gogin tinto the cinema theatre.. All were trying to get in..and Saachi was too close into Jeet's arms and they closed their eyes hearing each other's heartbeat and looked at each other… they knew they both love each other. They wanted to say it and keepthemselves into each other arms.. Saachi held her hand and was forced to his chest..by the crowd of people getting in…she felt very shy and Jeet tried to comfort her , trying ot give her space… also tried to protect her from the crowd..As the crowd went inside ..Saachi got little away and left her grip from Jeet's shoulder and both went inside the cinema hall. As there was not enough light Jeet held Saachi's hand and took her to the seat… Saachi walked along with him, looking absolutely shy like newly married bride ..

Tumhara chuna Kitna meetha ehsaas yeh lagta hai,

Tumharey siney se lipati rahun to mann behakta hai,

Lagta hai kisi aur hi duniya mey main hun,

Jaise tumhe paakar har gam se anjaan hun,

Woh kuch hi pal lekin manoo dil ko aisa laga,

Jaise Subha ke jharoke se patto par Ooss gira…

As the movie went on both were watching discussing about the scenes in the movie and both enjoyed their time.. In btw Saachi and Jeet both felt like confessing their love but kept that inside.. As the interval was on… Jeet asked Saachi..

Jeet: Saachi come with me..(saachi kept asking where why.. and soon they landed infrotn ..of a person. ) Yes it was 'RK' 'Rajeev Khandelwal'.. Saachi looked at Jeet, saying no..need….Jeet asked RK…

Jeet: Hi RK, can we have an autograph.. We like ur work….

He had a paper chit in his hand.. He gave him and told him to write Saachi name on it.. Rajeev looked at her and gave her the autographed paper.. Saachi shook hands with him, thanking him and soon the movie was about to start,Jeet and Saachi went back to their seat..Saachi kept thinking Jeet is a very caring person, more than watching the movie she kept observing him and feeling more for him, to be with him for the rest of her life..to sit along with him. Jeet too had in his heart a feeling of loving her and caring for her, walking along on the path of life at every step with her.

Chalo zindagi mey bhi yunhi sath rahein,

Ek dusre ke banker jeevan mey pyaar bharein,

Agar Tum aur main Ek hojaye,

Zindagi mey phir to shahad khuljaye…

As the movie was over and they went out of the movie hall, …this little time was so beautiful where they felt so much for each other. Jeet looked at her with love and she too both knew what was gogin in each others heart. As they came towards their car Ashu called up asking, ' jo kaam bola tha woh kiya ke nahi…?

Jeet was a bit shy and looked at Saachi..and than hesistantly said.. Haan apne aap hogaya..

Ashu very exitedly asked..: Areey Wah mere Sher, jhappi lii ya pappi..

Jeet smiled and was observing Saachi looking at him in btw..

Jeet: hmm pehli wali…

Ashu: Tune hii galese lagaya ya bhabhiji ne….

Jeet: Woh ..u know the crowd..

(Saachi looked at him)

Jeet: Woh isliye..bas ..

Ashu: dhat teri ki..kya Jeet…yaar maine jhappi paney ko kaha tha..dhakaa khaney ko nahi… ..kya itna saaa kaam nahi kar sakaa..Chal Saachi bhabhi ko de..

Jeet: Ashu…tu aisa waisa..

Ashu: chal chal…dedey..

Jeet: Tu detectiove hai..hamare peechey kyun lagaa hai..

(Saachi heard and smiled…she was understanding, he may be taking his report of the day)

Ashu: phone deta hai..ya Saachi ke mobile pe karun..

Jeet gave Saachi the phone..

Saachi: Hi Ashu…

Ashu: Saachi maine woh kaam yaad karaney ko kaha tha..Jeet..ko..

Saachi: Main to bhul gayi thi…sorry

Jeet was wondering what they r talking about.

Ashu: Dekho Ab tak mera woh kaam Jeet ne nahi kiya..plzz tum ekbaar pyaar se kaho to maan jaye..

Saachi : achaa…

Ashu: abhi kaho na..main line pe hi hun..woh main kahun to bhadak jata hai..

Saachi a bit confused: ok.. (she told jeet) Jeet I forgot to tellu ..Ashu ka koi kaam tha..woh kaam karlena..Ashu kab se bol rahahai..pehley bhi kaha tha..to remind u ..main hi bhool gayi.. Jeet karogey na..?

Jeet realized what mishcive Ashu is palying and knew he must be enjoying..and was smiling at Saachi innocence.. He smiled and blushed..

Jeet: Saachi tumhe pata bhi hai…Ashu kya kaam karne ko keh raha hai..

Saachi now was bit apprehensive ..Understanding there is some mishcive by the way Jeet was smiling..and was shy..

Saachi nodde her head and said.: Nahi.. Jeet took the phone and spoke.

Jeet: Chal ab phone rakh..tujhe main ghar akey dekhta hun..Aaj teri kheri nahi..

Jeet was smiling all the way while Saachi was trying to figure what must be the mishcive. But she was too shy to ask Jeet. Later Jeet dropped her at her home…they felt a bit pain to leave each other….

As Saachi was changing her dress and washing her face..she saw her hands..and saw the few lines which Jeet had written..She had forgotten to read it at that time.. She read the lines were,

"U have brought Sunshine into my life, my days have become brighter and my nights has become calmer.Saachi U r the Biggest Star of my life."

AlwaysYours,

Jeet

Saachi had a broad smile reading it, she felt shy as well and hugged her pillow tightly and ofcourse didn't wash her hand. She slept keeping her palm close to her heart and feeling as if she is close to Jeet and in his arms.

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😆 "Ashu ur the biggest Rockstar i have come across.........Can i have your autograph 😆 😆 😆 "

Mera ye fanmail......Ashu ta pahuncha dena 😉

hey lovely part just simply loved to see the romance bw jeet and saanchi and the poems where simply amazing and ashu u r toooooooooooooooo good 😈 😈

and 4 u sweety a big jappi as usual 🤗

Howwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet ..... simply loved it..... really amazing... u known there was a big smile on my face thru out..I loved Ashu ...now I want a frnd like him in my life.... DEvar bhi chalega .... yeh to is story ki jaan hai ..... iske lines baar baar padhneka man karta hai ...the way he said, ''jhappi dene ko kaha tha, dhakka khane ko nahi...lol...

Aur yeh kya... Rajeev ka double role...hai hai ... ek Rajeev ko niharne se waqt toh milta nahi..do do pe ahein kaise bhare koi eksath ??? chalo shukr hai...yeh srif ek part ke liye hai... varna mushkil ho jata .

LOved all the parts dear...LIkD Jet a lot when he askd her ,''get married to Vinay ''...knowing what she wud do aftr that... n yea..it's so hard to believe Aamna in such a nrmal n innocent chrecter...

poems r as usual fantastic ... u know one thing ive noticed ..u r improving with each parts ... yea yea... u r always a fab writer ...but in this story m finding a diff skl of ur's ....5th part is mmuch more bttr dan 4th .. 11 th part is a biggr pleasure to read dan 10.. n 14?? haye..... this is the most awesome part ..

keep it up dear ...

Originally posted by: togepe30

😆 "Ashu ur the biggest Rockstar i have come across.........Can i have your autograph 😆 😆 😆 "

Mera ye fanmail......Ashu ta pahuncha dena 😉

Hi Vandana, i sent ur mesage across Ashu..he was smilign as if Ash proposeed him..😆 and this is what he had autograph he gave for u...

" Dear Vandana,

Vandu...u r the cutest on this earth 😳😳and ofcourse have the finest choice😆😆.. If I am the biggest rockstar u the most beautiful star...👏"

Keep loving...and Rocking... 😃Everyones 😃

Ashu😉