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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurifan

Heyy Bhoomi this part was really sweet and naughty too.. i love how u developed Ashu's character... and poetry wht to say about it, the less i say the better you understand... 👏

Ya Ashu is a my way of brining some smiles and laughter...😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 12

30-02-07

Saachi was at the office and Vinay came inside her cabin, Saachi asked him what the matter was. Vinay told her that nowadays she is looking very happy and her face is glowing is it because she has come to know that he is going to meet her parents and ask her hand. Saachi was very shocked and she said,

Saachi: Vinay, I have told u many times, I don't love u… marriage no Vinay I think u need to clear this I am not going to marry u ever… plzz understand…

Vinay: Saachi, I love u …I like u …the whole office feels we r made for each other and U love me...i know …I can see that in ur eyes... Everyone here can see…

Saachi: Vinay I don't love u … and in my eyes...Its not u but someone else..

Vinay got angry and said; someone else…who…?

Saachi suddenly realized what she said: I like someone else… (She was been honest to him but not rude)

Vinay: who is this? So finally u want to say aaj kisi aur pe dil aya hai...

Saachi: Aaj kisi aurpe..? Vinay …I have always told u that I don't love u… why r u after me.. I like someone else and I will only marry him… plzz I don't want to hurt u… and thats why always cleared it to u..

Vinay opened the cabin door and held her hand and took her out..he started talking loudly and the whole office gathered…Saachi was not understanding what he is up to..

Vinay: Listen...everyone...Now she says she doestn love me any more…itne saal mujhse pyaar kiya aur aaj shayd koi aur amirr aur achaa dikhne wala milgaya to mujhe jhod ne chali….

(He started his drama, crying) Vinay: Kya kammi hai mujh, mey… the whole office knows I was so good to u, I alwyas loved u ..And u also loved me, u told me..

Saachi: No..I… (Vinay didn't let her complete her lines)

Vinay: plzz Saachi aisa matt karo...Main ab bhi tumse utna hi pyaar karta hun plzz mujhe matt chodo.plzz….

All the office people were shocked and kept saying to Saachi, not to do like this, they have always seen him loving her so much, he told them how u both planned ur house after marriage..None were listening to her side but trying to make her change her decision.. Many told her she is beautiful and so is playing with his emotions, she is a selfish woman…Saachi just couldn't hear more...and went out of the office. She came home and started crying in her room. Her mom asked her but she just kept crying...she felt humiliated infornt of office people and felt how she is going to face them again...

Main ab kaisey logo ko samjhaungi,

Maine kiya nahi kisisey koi dhoka hai,

Kaise main sabko batalaungi,

Vinay Sarphira aur ek numberka jhuta hai…

Saachi called up Masumi who told her to complaint to her boss, but Saachi felt even there as well Vinay will do some drama. Her boss was already a heart patient and she found asking him to help her can lead to more stress to him.She was upset and she thought to call Jeet. But everytime she felt what to say how to say and somewhere she felt Jeet may just bash Vinay which will again create more problems… she just rolled the names on the mobile and everytime stopped at Jeet , and again went back… suddenly the mobile rang and it was Jeet's call..

Jeet: Hi Saachi..

Saachi was much tensed: Jeet… (She said with a lot of pain)

Jeet felt from her voice something is wrong; Saachi is everything fine...u r sounding very low.

Saachi: Woh nothing... (There were tears in her eyes)

Jeet: Saachi ….dont hide anything… tell me...what happen?... I felt like calling u ..And called u up…. There is something wrong...what happen…

Saachi started crying and Jeet's heart could feel her pain…and Jeet asked her what happened…she told him the whole issue about Vinay..

Jeet: Hmm… he took a long pause…

Saachi was getting scared he may get angry at Vinay..

Jeet: Saachi u should have given him back….and should not have come back like this…

Saachi: but how can I, I can't be so aggressive and talk rudely…

Jeet: So gently u want to say… 'Vinayji dekhiye aap ka mann jo kare woh kahiye..haan..?

Saachi: Don't make fun of me..Jeet.. (she got a bit upset.)

Jeet: U r making fun of urself…

Saachi: I am not…If I create an issue its not gogin to be easy, U don't know my boss is like my father figure and he is a heart patient too…with so much of stress and so much of mess around.

Jeet laughed: Agley din jab Vinay Kahega ki usko High Blood pressure hai , to tum phirse uska dil nahi todpaogi…u know u wil say no to marry him and that can make him sick..so u shoud actually think of his health.. such a smart fellow, very nicely he is playing with ur emotions..wow!

Saachi: Jeet what r u saying..

Jeet: What can I say, not one can do anything for u, ….My last word…get married to him…all will be happy and merry…akhir dil todna nahi chahiye kisika bhi..ok…

Saachi got very angry as he said 'get married'…she had thought that he will support her and tell her he will look into the matter and may get angry at Vinay but he was angry at her and the last thing she would want to listen from him..to get married to Vinay… she bang the mobile down and as Jeet heard it the loud bang of the phone.. He smiled and said…. 'that's the way'… he was very very happy.

Main Itni mushkil mey thi,

Dil mey kitna dard le ro rahi thi,

Tumne ghav pe naa mere marham lagaya,

Mujhpar bares,mujhe kitna dard pahunchaya,

Main mann mey soch rahi thi tum mere liye ladogey,

Socha natha, Tum Shadii kar lo ussey aisa kahogey,

Jeet main ab tumse naa kuch umeed karpaungi,

Jab Umeed nahi, to kaise tumhe Apna kahpaungi?

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Posted: 17 years ago
hehehehehe!! jeet gussa dila raha hai saachi ko.......taki wo gusse me ake vinay pe chilla de!! 😆

smart boy!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Episode: 12

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Bhoomiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.. yeh part tha.. pata bhi nahi chal kab shuru hua aur khatm... awww poor saachi and wicked jeet hehe..i think he has something in mind..jaldi next part send karoo..

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey this was a really nice part us vinay ko tapka ne ka maan kar raha hai any ways jaldi se cont aro
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

hehehehehe!! jeet gussa dila raha hai saachi ko.......taki wo gusse me ake vinay pe chilla de!! 😆

smart boy!! 😉

haiiii haiii Vandu.... u r gettign close to the next episode...😉... Smart boy😆..and U smart girl😃.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurifan

Bhoomiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.. yeh part tha.. pata bhi nahi chal kab shuru hua aur khatm... awww poor saachi and wicked jeet hehe..i think he has something in mind..jaldi next part send karoo..

Reena...😆u sacred me..😉..... achaa so u feeling sad for Saachi awww thats sweet..chalo koi to Saachi ka dard samjh raha hai....😃..Jeet hmmm this fellow next part will explain everything...u knwo me i dotn keep pending things for long....😊...next episode has some encouragign poems...hope u all like it..

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey this was a really nice part us vinay ko tapka ne ka maan kar raha hai any ways jaldi se cont aro

Hi jyothi... am glad u liked this part.... Vinay ko tapkane ka😆..bechara Saachi ko koi sahar to mila....she thought Jeet will feel like this...lekin...hope u like the way the next part turns out..and ya it has some thoughtful poems as well...😃..aur apun milekey later tapkayega Vinay ko...charcter apnech hath mey😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 13

31-02-07

Saachi early in the morning went to the office; she still had the anger on Vinay and the way Jeet spoke to her. She reached office and was just very very uneasy and didn't look at anyone just waited for Vinay to come. As Vinay reached at the office, she looked at him, straight into his eyes and waited. After a while she went to the centre of the office and called everyone, Vinay too was called by the poen and the boss was called upon to hear.

Saachi: Vinay ji ayiye, Ab hamari shaddi ki date fix karni hai..

Vinay was very happy he felt that Saachi had fallen into his trap and she had no option …he smiled…

Saachi: Ayeye...Vinayji,

As Vinay came near, she didn't wait for a sec and slapped him straight. Vinay was absoultey shocked and even others…

Boss: Saachi yeh sab kya hai..?

Saachi: Yeh sab kya hai Vinay? bataoo…tumhe to dhindora pitaney ka bahut shauk hai…logo se baatein karne ka….baton ko kuch aur hi rangdeneka…

Vinay was very angry and he looked at her with anger..

Saachi: Kya ankhen dikharahe ho… main tumse nahi darti, na hi tumhari jhutti batoo aur Iradose..

She looked at everyone around and said: Jab yeh aap sabse kehta raha, Saachi yeh kahti hai woh kehti hai… aaap sabko yeh lagta woh sach hai.. Banavati baton pe agar aap sab ko yekin karna hai to kariye I DON'T CARE.

Vinaay: Saachi, bahut himmat agayi hai…Usss ka hii asar hai lagta hai..jispe aajkal tumhara dil agaya hai…

Saachi looked at him with more confidence: Haan… mujhe jhutti meethi chubli baat karne waley, baifajhul aagey peechey mandarrate chelo pe apna waqt jhaya karna nahi achaa lagta …

Saachi to her boss: Sir, I have been ignoring him whenevr he tried to come close to me, he tried to show everyone how much love he has for me, I was never interested in him. Now he has a problem that I am not giving any importance and he created a big drama and all the collegues here didn't care about my situation kept on taking his side…such an atmosphere how should I work... I had to clear it out here in fornt...or else I wouldnt have disturb the office atmosphere...

Saachi's boss Kriplal was very surprised with Saachi's behaviour but very happy to see that she can get the courage to give it back to such people in this way. He patted her and said, "Saachi I know u well and I know Vinay as well, Vinay if u want to work in this office, stay within ur limits..", he went..Away..

Saachi: Stay away from me…that will help u …or else...I am not going to ignore or avoid u but give it back in the way u seriously require.

Vinay was taken aback by her sudden change in behaviour he felt Saachi can't lash out at him. All the collegues were silent and went to their seats and knew the way Saachi said, they were guilty at their own doings... and they didtn support Vinay at all.. Vinay felt they will say something to support him but they didn't even look at him..But let their heads down n went back.

Tumne socha tha meri namrata ka fayada uthaogey,

Mujhe beizzad kar apne irado ko pura kar paogey,

Lekin main tumhe nahi yunh jeetney dungi,

Khudd ko mazbood kar palat ke Shisha dikhaungi…

Saachi worked as usual without any mark of stress and as she reached home..She got a call from Jeet.

Jeet: Hi Saachi..

Saachi: why have u called now? (She was angry and upset)

Jeet: I am sure u must have given him back… Am so proud of u..

Saachi: How did u know? (She was very surprised)

Jeet: I know, the way u bang the phone,…u started to get the strength..that was ur first step, I knew u have within urself the courage to teach him a lesson and one has to first try find the strength within oneself and if not than look from elsewhere. Saachi when u on ur own bring justice to urself. Ur self esteem, confidence rises.. I am sure u feel more satisfied …u know..u were been too soft and gentle…nice to all…sometimes is requires to be rude and harsh..For people to shut up and listen.

Agar kissiko koi sabbak sikhana hai

To pehle apne ander taakat bharna hai,

Kissikey agey naa yunh kamzoor padhna,

Kamzoori ho to bhi nahi tum darna,

Buland karlo hausle aur agey ek baar badho,

Pahoncho agey chahey peechey naa koi ho,

Tumhari takkat, hausle se samnewala ghabrajaye,

Saath jo koi de tumhara dushamn ke hosh udjaye…

Saachi: Jeet u did that purposely..Jeet.. I bang the phone… oh God.. ya..u .. (she was now understanding him)Jeet thanks..I feel much better..Vinay's face was full of shock, even my collegues ,they can never take advantage of my gentlness again… U made me know how to find my strength within me…

Jeet: I am happy for u…when u were crying I felt like doing something to make u happy… really was getting angry at the guy ..but I knew when u help urself on ur own ..apne ander ka atma vishvas badhjata hai..insaan akele bahut kuch sehney ki takkat rakhta hai… ..and that's important in life Saachi..

Saachi: Jeet…(she just was out of words…and smiling..)..Jeet..

Jeet: Lets celebrate this.. give me treat…lets meet out…lets watch a film together.. (he was crossing his fingers and thinking..opps I asked will she agree)

Saachi was very happy that he asked her out for movie, she was shy and immediately said, "Hmm yes...Wherever u say(in a soft sweetvoice)... Jeet smiled...With her answer.

Aaj humdono ek dusre ki takkat ban paye hain,

Aaj humdono ek dusre ko kitna samjhpaye hain,

Saath rehneka, Saath zindagi jeena Ka mann hai,

Abjo judaa hue to, Jeena Maut ke samaan hai…

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Posted: 17 years ago
omg their first date wow. today the poems were just mind blowing loved the way sanchi gvae back vinay a really amazing part cont soon

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