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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok bahat intazaar karaya...actually my net was playing up....but ne=ways im here for my next part which im sure u guys will enjoy

recap:
*ayaan goes turkey for business
*ranbir n kanya have a cute convo
*ranbir n kanya actually becomes friends

heres next:

Ranbir n Kanya both go to sleep in their different rooms

In morning at the breakfast table everyone is having breakfast.BD talks to anand and pammi

BD:ji agar app ko koi problem na ho toh hum chahenge ki kanya kuch aur din yahan humare saath rahe...abhi tak toh usski shopping bhi nahin hue

A:teek hai...hum aaj hi nikal te hai...woh shaadi ki tayari bhi toh karni hai

M:haan haan kyun nahin...haan agar pooja tehar na chahe toh

POO:nahin nahin anuty...thanks par mujhe kaal kaam pe jana hoga...warna mere boss naraz ho jayenge

BD:haan tum jao...par haan apna promise yaad rakh na

Pa:kaun sa promise?

BD:issne mujhe waada kiya hai ki mujhe Kwahish serial mein zaruur ek role de gi

all laugh

Anand,Pammi,Pooja,Harry n shanta tayee take leave

BD:kanya putar aaj nah tum apni shopping karle na...mein driver ko boldungi...arre tum itni ghabraye si kyun ho

K:woh actually badi dadi meine khabhi pune bhi teek se nahin dekh aur delhi toh duur ki baat hai

BD:kaash mein tumhare saath ah sakti...ab kisi aur ko he bhej doon...kise bhejun...

Ranbir walks down the stairs

BD:ranbir ithe aao putar...acha paata yu aaj kya karne wala hai

R:kuch kaas nahin...office mein aaj kuch zyada kaam nahin...kyun

BD:mujhe ek khaas kaam hai...kanya ko tum aaj pura delhi ghumao ge...aur shooping bhi karaoge

R:wot!!BD no

BD:ranbir yeh request nahin order tha...abb chalo...now go

After a lil hesitation ranbir and kanya leave

in the car kanya says
K:agar tum nahin ana chate toh koi baat nahin...mein phir kabhi delhi dekh lungi

kanya is about to get out when ranbir holds her hand

R:kanya rooko...hum delhi saath mein dekhen ge..chalo

They both leave....

Ranbir stops a car outside a big restaurant

K:yeh hum kahan ah gayye

R:one of delhi's best restaurant

K:ranbir tum aaj kyun kuch alag nahin karte...sirf ek din ki liye ranbir nanda se ranbir ban jao

R:kya matlab

K:tum aaj bilkul ek middle class ki tarha ban jao...ek daam meri tara

R:kaise yahann sab mujhe pejchante hai

K:aao mere saath

a few minutes later ranbir was wearing ordinary clothes with no designer brand on it and had basically a make over into a middle class person

K:kafi ache lagte ho...abb chalo

ranbir n kanya had pani puri from one of the stalls where kanya spent 15 mins teaching ranbir how to eat it properly


Then they looked at all the shops and did their shopping and basically explored Delhi

one thing was for sure this was one of the best days off their lives

Behind Nanda house they stopped the car

R:thank u kanya

K:kis liye

R:meine aaj taak middle class logon ki bare mein sirf ye hi socha tha ki woh gareeb hote hai par aaj pata chala ki mujse better hai...meine sirf paise banaye hai par aaj tumne yaadein banana sikha diya...meine socha tha ki paisa hi sab kuch hai...aaj pata chala ki kitna ghalat tha mein....pyar hi sab kuch hota hai

K:ranbir woh ladki kaun hai...mein jaana chahti hoon

R:nahin ye tumhai nahin pata sakta

Kanya continued to insist

R:aach chalo ek khel khel te hai...mein tumhe har rooz ek clue dunga uss ladki ke bareme...guess kar sakti ho to karo...bohat deer ho jaye usse pehle

K:mujse challenge karoge toh pachtao ge

R:shaayad yahi chahta hoon mein

K:wow yum mein to middle class people ka spirit bhi agaya

R:kanya ab mein ek asi harkat karne ja raha hoon jo bilkul middle class nahin hai...aur shayad tumhe aachi na lage par....

K:huh?

Ranbir leaned over and gave her a gentle kiss on the cheek

R:thank u very much tumne aaj mujhe jo diya woh kisi ne mujhe nahin diya

kanya half smiles n have looks shocked and leaves the car n goes inside

R:i love u



Kanya is in her room
a gentle breeze making her hair fly slightly
it was a full moon

kanya was having flashbacks....ranbir kissing her...ranbir giving her a flower earlier today...ranbir selecting clothes for her...a shop keeper saying to her n ranbir "u make a perfect couple",ranbir and her having an ice cream

K:ye mujhe kya ho raha hai...mujhe toh ayaan ki kwabon mein khoona chahiye par ranbir...baata nahin aaj kaal uske saath waqt bitane ko ji kyun chahata hai....pata nahin kyun ayaan ko bholne ko dil karta hai...mujhe kahin ,,nahin nahin...mein ranbir se pyar kaise kar sakti hoon......kya sach mein, mein ranbir se pyar karne lagi hoon...

on the other hand ranbir is think as well

R:kanya mein pagal ho gaya tha jo ayaan ki liye apna pyar kwone wala tha...tum toh mere saath khush ho aur shaayad mujhe se pyar karti ho aur tumhe mein koi bhi kimmat pe pahlunga....ayyan move back hate guru is now in the field to hit his century!!!

with that thought he went to sleep

PRECAP:wedding preparations on full swing....on the other hand there is a huge accident


thats all for now guys
hope u liked it

feel free to give any suggestions


Shona




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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
ok bahat intazaar karaya...actually my net was playing up....but ne=ways im here for my next part which im sure u guys will enjoy

recap:
*ayaan goes turkey for business
*ranbir n kanya have a cute convo
*ranbir n kanya actually becomes friends

heres next:

Ranbir n Kanya both go to sleep in their different rooms

In morning at the breakfast table everyone is having breakfast.BD talks to anand and pammi

BD:ji agar app ko koi problem na ho toh hum chahenge ki kanya kuch aur din yahan humare saath rahe...abhi tak toh usski shopping bhi nahin hue

A:teek hai...hum aaj hi nikal te hai...woh shaadi ki tayari bhi toh karni hai

M:haan haan kyun nahin...haan agar pooja tehar na chahe toh

POO:nahin nahin anuty...thanks par mujhe kaal kaam pe jana hoga...warna mere boss naraz ho jayenge

BD:haan tum jao...par haan apna promise yaad rakh na

Pa:kaun sa promise?

BD:issne mujhe waada kiya hai ki mujhe Kwahish serial mein zaruur ek role de gi

all laugh

Anand,Pammi,Pooja,Harry n shanta tayee take leave

BD:kanya putar aaj nah tum apni shopping karle na...mein driver ko boldungi...arre tum itni ghabraye si kyun ho

K:woh actually badi dadi meine khabhi pune bhi teek se nahin dekh aur delhi toh duur ki baat hai

BD:kaash mein tumhare saath ah sakti...ab kisi aur ko he bhej doon...kise bhejun...

Ranbir walks down the stairs

BD:ranbir ithe aao putar...acha paata yu aaj kya karne wala hai

R:kuch kaas nahin...office mein aaj kuch zyada kaam nahin...kyun

BD:mujhe ek khaas kaam hai...kanya ko tum aaj pura delhi ghumao ge...aur shooping bhi karaoge

R:wot!!BD no

BD:ranbir yeh request nahin order tha...abb chalo...now go

After a lil hesitation ranbir and kanya leave

in the car kanya says
K:agar tum nahin ana chate toh koi baat nahin...mein phir kabhi delhi dekh lungi

kanya is about to get out when ranbir holds her hand

R:kanya rooko...hum delhi saath mein dekhen ge..chalo

They both leave....

Ranbir stops a car outside a big restaurant

K:yeh hum kahan ah gayye

R:one of delhi's best restaurant

K:ranbir tum aaj kyun kuch alag nahin karte...sirf ek din ki liye ranbir nanda se ranbir ban jao

R:kya matlab

K:tum aaj bilkul ek middle class ki tarha ban jao...ek daam meri tara

R:kaise yahann sab mujhe pejchante hai

K:aao mere saath

a few minutes later ranbir was wearing ordinary clothes with no designer brand on it and had basically a make over into a middle class person

K:kafi ache lagte ho...abb chalo

ranbir n kanya had pani puri from one of the stalls where kanya spent 15 mins teaching ranbir how to eat it properly


Then they looked at all the shops and did their shopping and basically explored Delhi

one thing was for sure this was one of the best days off their lives

Behind Nanda house they stopped the car

R:thank u kanya

K:kis liye

R:meine aaj taak middle class logon ki bare mein sirf ye hi socha tha ki woh gareeb hote hai par aaj pata chala ki mujse better hai...meine sirf paise banaye hai par aaj tumne yaadein banana sikha diya...meine socha tha ki paisa hi sab kuch hai...aaj pata chala ki kitna ghalat tha mein....pyar hi sab kuch hota hai

K:ranbir woh ladki kaun hai...mein jaana chahti hoon

R:nahin ye tumhai nahin pata sakta

Kanya continued to insist

R:aach chalo ek khel khel te hai...mein tumhe har rooz ek clue dunga uss ladki ke bareme...guess kar sakti ho to karo...bohat deer ho jaye usse pehle

K:mujse challenge karoge toh pachtao ge

R:shaayad yahi chahta hoon mein

K:wow yum mein to middle class people ka spirit bhi agaya

R:kanya ab mein ek asi harkat karne ja raha hoon jo bilkul middle class nahin hai...aur shayad tumhe aachi na lage par....

K:huh?

Ranbir leaned over and gave her a gentle kiss on the cheek

R:thank u very much tumne aaj mujhe jo diya woh kisi ne mujhe nahin diya

kanya half smiles n have looks shocked and leaves the car n goes inside

R:i love u



Kanya is in her room
a gentle breeze making her hair fly slightly
it was a full moon

kanya was having flashbacks....ranbir kissing her...ranbir giving her a flower earlier today...ranbir selecting clothes for her...a shop keeper saying to her n ranbir "u make a perfect couple",ranbir and her having an ice cream

K:ye mujhe kya ho raha hai...mujhe toh ayaan ki kwabon mein khoona chahiye par ranbir...baata nahin aaj kaal uske saath waqt bitane ko ji kyun chahata hai....pata nahin kyun ayaan ko bholne ko dil karta hai...mujhe kahin ,,nahin nahin...mein ranbir se pyar kaise kar sakti hoon......kya sach mein, mein ranbir se pyar karne lagi hoon...

on the other hand ranbir is think as well

R:kanya mein pagal ho gaya tha jo ayaan ki liye apna pyar kwone wala tha...tum toh mere saath khush ho aur shaayad mujhe se pyar karti ho aur tumhe mein koi bhi kimmat pe pahlunga....ayyan move back hate guru is now in the field to hit his century!!!

with that thought he went to sleep

PRECAP:wedding preparations on full swing....on the other hand there is a huge accident


thats all for now guys
hope u liked it

feel free to give any suggestions


Shona




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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
yes finally u updated!!!!!! 😆 😆 tat waz really good luv da part were ranbir kisses kanya on da cheek!! 😛 HATE GURU IS BACK PPLS!!!!!! YES!!! great part shona con't soon! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
WOWWWWWWWWWWWW
ur gr8
u wonder whos in the BIG ACCIDENT
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
great updatee 😃

Continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
Wow Shona...you are so good! It must be very hard for you to write about Kanya when you are kaayan fan. I don't think there is anything wrong with Aayan it's just compared to Ranbir, he is so dull and boring...By the way I read all of your fanfics yesterday at 2 am. I coudn't stop myself. You are better than Ekta. You should definetly have you own show someday!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
Shona i have to say this is brill stuff... u have a very imaginative mind.... pls do continue i can't wait for the next part...and someday (if god wills) when u have ur own show i'll tell everyone that i used to read ur ff's....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfangel5655

Wow Shona...you are so good! It must be very hard for you to write about Kanya when you are kaayan fan. I don't think there is anything wrong with Aayan it's just compared to Ranbir, he is so dull and boring...By the way I read all of your fanfics yesterday at 2 am. I coudn't stop myself. You are better than Ekta. You should definetly have you own show someday!



yaar thx
hey i think i forgot to mention but since a while i've had a change of hearts n im a ranya fan now
i havent managed to change avi n siggy coz the profile page wont load up on my computer so i leave it

thanks for the complements and staying up til 2 to read my work!!! 🤗
werent u 🥱
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: KC294

Shona i have to say this is brill stuff... u have a very imaginative mind.... pls do continue i can't wait for the next part...and someday (if god wills) when u have ur own show i'll tell everyone that i used to read ur ff's....



aww thank u dear 🤗
if i ever make my show then i tell everyone it was u guys who encouraged me to do my own show
shona. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
im a lil busy at the moment but if i can i will update shortly
hope u guys will like it
btw one more thing
im thinking of ending this ff soon

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