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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
ok next bit
this is complete ranya part
here we go
soz im not giving a recap today:

in the morning ranbir n ayaan learn that their is a major crisis in their factory in turkey so one of them must go

A:chachu mein chala jata hoon

R:par ayaan kuch dino mein tumhari shaadi hai toh rook jao...vaise bhi mujhe...woh

A:no...im going....BD mein aaj turkey ja raha hoon aur kuch dino mein vapas aaj jaun ga

BD:teek hai putar....ranbir woh Yuvraj catering ko phone kar ki book kar liye haina

R:ji BD

*~*~*~*~**~*~*

Later on ayaan departs
That night kanya is alone in her balcony thinking about Ranbir...theres a knock on the door....its ranbir

R:hi...woh tumhare liye coffee

he hands over coffee to her

K:thanks...

they both look at the night

R:ye raat...chand...sitare sab kitna khoobsurat lag ta hai...hai na

K:hmm...ek minute,ek minute....ye sab tabhi itna accha lag ta hai jab pyar ho jata hai...tumhe pyar hua hai....kaun hai woh ladki?

R:nahin nahin aise koi baat nahin...mein toh aise hi

kanya takes his hand n places on her head n says

K:kau meri kasam?

R:huh?

K:oh im so sorry woh mein jab sure nahin hoti ki koi apna sach keh raha hai ya nahin tab mein meri kasam deti hoon...par...

R:mein bhi abb tumhara apna hi hoon...i mean after all humara rista baan ne jaah raha hai....

K:haan paar usse pehle mein ek aur rista bana na chahti hoon tumhare saath...dekho ranbir pehle hum jagade aur ek duusre se nafrat ki par abb humne itna waqt saath bitaya hai ki ....ki abb shayad humare beech dosti ho sakti hai

R:your right hum dost toh baan sakte hai

mallika is outside the door thinking
M:kaash kanya meri bahu ho paati...par shayad...

R:ek baat bolun meri bhatije mein aise kaun si baat thi jo woh tumhe itna pasand agaya

K:paata nahin par aise hi uske saath pura din bita kar pasand aneh laga aur uski style bohat pyari lagi mujhe...par tum kyun pooch tahe ho?

R:nahin nahin aise hi...shayad mujhe ek ladki pasad agaye ho aur usse impress kar ne ki liye...

K:ranbir tumhe ayaan ki jaisa hoone ki zarurat nahin hai...kyunki tumhe koi bhi ladki mil sakti hai

R:koi bhi?...accha...par mujhe jo ladki chahi ye woh kisi aur se pyar kar ti hai

K:tut...kar hi nahin sakti...dekhna usske dil ki kisi koone mein tumhare liye pyar zaroor hoga

R:tut...nahin hoga...woh kisi aur ki pyar mein itni pagal hai ki uski liye mein kuch mayne hi nahin rakh ta

K:aise baat nahin hai...acha toh tum competition karo...tumhare aur uss ladke mein se kaun ladki ko lejata hai

R:haha kash kar paata...woh ladka koi apna hi hai

K:ohh aise baat hai...ranbir paata nahin ye kitna saach hai par log kehte hai ki agar pyar saacha ho toh usse apni manzil mil hi jati hai

R:acha meri choodho...tum ayaan ko miss kar rahi ho

K:haan aur tum uss ladki ko miss kar rahe ho

R:nahin toh mere samne hai

K:what?

R:mera matlab hai mere dil mein...mere saath...goodnight

K:goodnight

ranbir goes but kanya remains

ranbir looks from his balcony n sees kanya dancing under a tree full off pink flowers in her balcony

The song Akkon mein teri ajaab si ajaab aadayen hai playing in the background



baby_gurl#1 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
shona plezzzzzz continue soon!!!! more ranya !!1 omg tat was soooooooooooooo swweet!!!!
shona. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
thank u everybody
more ranya will b e coming soon!!!
im planning it out-it has to be mega sweet
**Rekha** thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
the ff is sikkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
u rockkkkkkkk šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
Phew!!! Finally here to give my comment!! Awww I want more Ranya!! U're a brilliant writer!!!
shona. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
thank u so much chevi
now that u guys have praised me i think im goin g to see if i can make my own serial wen im older šŸ˜† maybe i'll be like ekta one day coming up on stage to take best producer award n i'll be like

"firstly i'd like to thank my I-F KIT family for encouraging me if it hadnt been for them i wudnt get here....they read my good work n praised me...thank u guys!"- šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
Niroo thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
Hey shona..
just read ur.. ff.
as new to this forum
anyways..
aww ranbir.. is so chweet.. heheheh
and.. kan.. i hope she gets to know.. that ranbir.. likes her.. noo loves her. hehhe😳😳😳
continune soon
nirā¤ļø
tanyadas13 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
wow šŸ‘
i can juat daydream now... šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ˜ šŸ¤—
shona. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
been long time since updated so i will do that today if my net connection lasts
nways missed u guys n all coz been caught up with things but i'll catch up later with a new part to ranya story

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yes plezzzzzzzz continue soon.... šŸ˜› diein 2 read nex part!!! šŸ˜†

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