FF-RK-the end-a death n leap @ end pg21!! - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ek request yaar.........plzzzzzzz make ranya one 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
thx guys for the appreciation
will get more ranya scenes later

shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
plz continue its v.nice 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
its beautiful yaar...
i hope coming soon is ranya hot scenes
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ahhhhhhhhhhh this fanfic is so very beautiful😍😍😍 and hilarious😆 I don't mind Kanya-Ayaan love scenes as long as it's Raka till the end😳 Please don't seperate Raka😳😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok here i go agen-gosh there as so many ranya fans out there-im a kayaan fan!!!

but sabse pehle recap:
*kanya n ranbir have a lil nok rok
*ayaan n Big D tlk bout looking for a girl for ranbir kanya
*ranbir breaks through the cave rocks and walks out while kanya faints

lets see what happens next:

Kanya is lying unconsience on the floor.Ranbir walks outside and inhales the fresh air and ruffles his hair

R:im free....finally mein azaad hoon usse chipkali se

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ayaan is in his room-its nearly dusk.Him and the family knew that ranbir and kanya wud be late as ranbir had to meet their business clients so they wud arrive late at night or early in the morning but the fact was that the meeting was cancelled so ranbir and kanya were coming straight to delhi-but ayaan didnt know anything about the attack or the fact that kanya was in danger-he was lying on the bed watching his and kanya's engagement video-they were dancing to mauja hi mauja 😃

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Kanya was bleeding from her forehead and her hand was badly bruised so it looked at an odd angle.If she wasnt given oxygen any time soon she wud go into coma

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Kanya was in a dulhaan's joda and sitting on the beautifully decorated bed when ayaan walks in.He takes off her ghongat and they have an eye lock then they embrace when....
ayaan comes to his senses he had been dreaming and the woman he was hugging was the house cleaner

(abbreviation for house cleaner is HC)

A:tum!!
HC:ji sab par app rok kyun gaya 😆
A:what!!!tum ho kaun aur mere kamre meh kya kar rahe ho
HC:sab hum toh iss ghar mein nokari kar rahe hai aur woh bhi char saalonsi aur app puch te hai hum kaun hai...vaise hum kaam toh rasoye ghar mein karte hai..arre tum log kya usse kehte ho..KICHAN 😆 mein par aaj woh vadi malki neh humme apka kamra khaliy karne ko kaha

A:wot!-ye yum kya kerahi ho

HC:matlab saaf karna....vaise sab app ki woh hone wali ki nakrani haina woh shanta usski hum saheli hai toh humhari tip zarra badha dena

A:tum yahan se jaane ka kya logi

HC:apka autograph

A:kya?

HC:aare tum badhe log kuch samajta nahin...apki autograph ki saath kaal mein page teen mein aungi

A:just get out of here phir autograph toh kya pura blank cheque de dunga

House cleaner leaves after making a fuss

A:ye BD na kaise logon ko kaam pe rakh leti hai...par ye sab pyar ka natija hai kanya(picking up her photo)(arre re arre kya hua playing in the background)mein tumhare pyar mein itna pagal ho gaya hu ki ek nakrani mein bhi mujhe tum deekh ti ho....par najane kyun mujhe lag raha hai ki tum koi musibaat mein ho...i hope everythings ok

The following scene is an absolute treat for Ranya fans
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Ranbir walks back in stares at kaanya lying on the floor
(a slow breeze comes in and touches ranbirs face and blows kanyas hair in her face)
Ranbir walks slowly towards kanya and bends down but then thinks to himself
R:ye mujhe kya hone laga hai mein kyun is chipkali ki liya vaapas agaya mein toh yahi chahta tha ki ye ayaan se dur ho jaye ...(then he has another thought)
phir bhi insanyat ki khatir mujhe usse baajana hoga varna ye maar jaye gi

he moves her hair out of her face and then slowly puts his hands arond her body n picks her up-he feels a chill down his spine-a feeling he had never felt before but he trys to ignore it

he gets up with kanya in his arms and walks out
he realises that she is breathing very slowly and takes her outside in the open

kanya gasps for air and after a while is becomes consceice well sort of as she can kinda talk a lil

K:pani....pani...mujhe pani...

and she faints again

R:pani mein kahan se launga

then he realises there is a small stream near by and takes kanya there

Ranbir splashes water on kanya's face but she regains conscience only for a few seconds

Ranbir senses this is because of her wounds and blood lose so he ripes of a bit of his shirt and wipes off the blood and ties it around her forehead and all then picks her up again and trys searching for their car
in his mind he is praying that kanya gets alrite 😳


well guys thats all for now hope u liked it!!!
forgive me for any mistakes
give me any suggestions 😊

and thanx for reading it and keeping up with it!!!

shona 😳


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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry guys for the terrible hindi-just take into account im not a regular hindi speaker and forgive the errors that i make while typing
thx
shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update. loved ranvir caring for kanya.hope in serial it happens.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i luv it .. i luve it.. its really good.. update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: **Shona**

sorry guys for the terrible hindi-just take into account im not a regular hindi speaker and forgive the errors that i make while typing
thx
shona

Don't worry ji it's not like I understand hindi the first time anywayz and sumtimes I don't get even if I go over it 10 times😳😆 I am not a hindi speaker either so kinda gets hard to understand buttttttttt AYNTHING for my Ranya😳🤣

BTW Boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooootiful part👏 Absolutley Amazinggggggggggggggg👏 I totally heart it😳

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