A story I created......Plzzz do read it!! - Page 5

I'll continue Nandu with ur permission….
It's ma first trail hope u like it….. 😳
If not then

Now our veer goes with dharma but his heart is lost over the mesmerizing beauty of MC (Rajkumari)
And he is lost it……. 😛 (as usual😆 )
Always in the thought's of MC
And MC too quite impressed by the charm and dare of a handsome hunk. 😛
At night both of them looking at the moon searching for glance .😳 (lol sagar's ur idea stolen by me) 😉 😆
Veer always in the thought's of Rajkumari (MC) makes Dharam to worry abt him… 😕
Then they both decide to go to her kingdom to have a glance of her 😳
Now our princess is quite sportive and likes the talwarbazi……. 😛
And in her kingdom such a talwarbazi competition is arranged
Veer and Dharam manage to go to attend this competition…. 😊
They are in the audience when this dreadly competition is going onnnnnnn…
The best talwarbaaz (ie. Surma ) of her kingdom defeat all the competitors that come in front of him ( the one like Alah and Udal in PRC)
And then MC declares
MC: Kya hua is rajjya mein koi bhi aaisa insaan nahi jo ise hara sake…
Aur hame lagta hai kisi bhi rajjya mein aisa koi nahi hoga jo ise hara sake…
To aaj yeh ailan karte hai hum ki job hi ise harayega use muh manga innam milega..

Listening to this veer gets up and when he is abt to say something dharma tries to stop him doing so
But veer rukne valon me se nahi tha (jawani ka ubalta hua khun as u all know lol 😳)

Plz comment 😊

Originally posted by: castrafa

Hi Nandini really nice concept 👏 .
One confusion thou is this Veer prince or dharam prince in ur story. Caus there is some confusion going on that RT is dharam and he is not prince in the serial so in ur story line RT is veer and he is the prince. gosh what am saying 😆 . hope u get what am trying to say here. pls let us know. will be waiting for ur next part. plssssssss do continue dear.
sash

Veer is blacksmith and Dharam is prince dear sash...😳

Originally posted by: Barbie3143

no dear both are prince. i know it from promo of DV

no fatty I know both are prince

but one is bought up as a prince and another by a black smith....

Originally posted by: itsmesanyo

gd 👏 👏 👏
i think forum become alive day by day thanks 😊

**kritika**

thanks kritika atleast u liked it... 😳

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