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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ppiyu

Continue Rashi, Phir kya inaam hoga?

yup piyu

u really liked them........... 😳

thnks...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Ok i continue piyuuuu

the story continues like this... 😳

Veer : soch ke boliye rajkumari ji 😛
MC : (angry) ha mango kya chahate ho aap….. 😡
Humpe bharosa nahi kya………😡
Veer : to thik hai .hum aap ka haath mangte hai… 😆
MC : ( gusse se lal ) kya tumhari itni himmat……..
Aaisa kaise keh sakte ho 😉

(song in background "Agar mein kahu mujhe tumse mahobaat hai" 😆)
Veer : maine aap se pahele hi poocha tha…aab aapko vada nibhana padega 😛

(song in background "Jo vaada kiya woh nibhana padega" 😆)

MC : Sipahiyon pakad lo ise……. 😡
Veer : thik hai par aapko apna vaada nibhana padega…
MC : zopdi mein reheke mahalon ke khwab dekhte ho… 🤪
Veer : mahalon ke nahi aapke… 😳


And then by that time the soilders come to grab him…
Them veer's jumps like hero's in the movie… and dharm comes to escape
Both of them fight with all the soilders and manage to escape……..
MC very angry with soilder's…… Itne log milke do aadmiyonko nahi pakad paye……
And then she rushes to her room…
Standing in front of mirror……she looks at herself…….
Uski itni jarrurat who aisa kah kaise sakta hai………
She throws a flower vase on the mirror….. mirror shattered into pieces…..
Angrily his face hallucinating in front of her all the time……

Somewhere away……….
Dharam scolding Veer for his deed…….
And veer completely lost in her thought's…..


To be continued…

Edited by Rash2cool - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
WAW RAshi................ur doin GUUUUUUUUUUUUUD haaaaaaan 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

No one liked my story.......
no comment's 😭
😭

Shall I spank u....😡😡😡.....itz the best continuation,Rashi....I liked it.....dun ever think of that,OK!!!!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sanniya

WAW RAshi................ur doin GUUUUUUUUUUUUUD haaaaaaan 👏

Sannu u really liked it.......... 😳

thnks for appreciating

ma inspiration's are Nandu,Piyu, ishu u and many more... 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: kudiya

hey my dear Nandini...it was really very nice...the way you started the story and the line up and that rain situation....every thing.....wonderful...please continue the story guys

Thanx Anjy di....m glad u liked it!!!!😛

Edited by Nandini Bhat - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

Sannu u really liked it.......... 😳

thnks for appreciating

ma inspiration's are Nandu,Piyu, ishu u and many more... 😉

ur welcum dear...dun mention it.....😃

K whr ma name.......😆 in ya list of inspirations

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Posted: 17 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Nandini Bhat

Shall I spank u....😡😡😡.....itz the best continuation,Rashi....I liked it.....dun ever think of that,OK!!!!😛 (Ok 😳)

plz don't spank at me.........

now read d next one... 😳 Hope u like it too.... 😳

2moro i'll post the remaining... 😛

Love u guy's for encouraging me..

🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: sanniya

ur welcum dear...dun mention it.....😃

K whr ma name.......😆 in ya list of inspirations

Yup......U meand u sannu.... 😉 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

plz don't spank at me.........

now read d next one... 😳 Hope u like it too.... 😳

2moro i'll post the remaining... 😛

Love u guy's for encouraging me..

🤗

yea yea Rashi 🤗ans ma qus first.......?

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