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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
hey
loved it amazing
😊 swansea 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
kool part ..luved it hope d story of ar becomes more romantic at d camp.......hmm plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
too cool .. dis part completely rocked ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
do continue soooooooooon i loved ur ff pls do do do continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey sos i culnt comment u on ure oder prts i jst read dem all now! so dey r goi on camp! really gd! i hpe dis maya dnt seprate AR!!!!!!!! cnt w8 to read da nxt prt! romantic sences of AR in camp! i hpe maya dnt ruin dem! šŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it is so good tht i can imagine every scene in my head
n i read the whole ff today in one go plez continue soon i really loved it u r so good
n plez pm me the next part when u update it if u can
thank you
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sure sarazhid! i'll pm ya!
nd THX SOOOOOOO MUCH KT!! for all the lovely comments! and evryone else!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 8!

RG: ok bye!
N: ek minute!, tum dono ki liye maine khana tiffin pe ready kiya, lo
[ridz opens the tiffin]
RG: mmm! aloo ka parathe! thx nani!
A: chalo ridz!

[they both ran outside and drove straight to sanjeevani]
[there waiting outside the hospital was a coach]
A:CHALO RIDZ!!
[saying that anjali ran inside the coach]
[ridz was carrying quite a few bags thats why she was a bit slow]
[armaan saw her and went and stood on the doorstep of the coach]
[when ridz was standing in front of the door armaan gave her his hand]
R: armaan, theres no point dude, riddhima tumhare jaise lirke ka haath nahi lenge
[but ridz did she held his hand and got onto the coach]
[rahul was shocked!]
[as ridz and armaan went to their seats armaan winked at rahul]

M: arre yaar armaan, aur kitni der lagi gi, i'm sooo bored
S: haa main bhi [yawn]
AM: pata nahi..

[it wasnt long until most people on the coach had fallen asleep]
[ridzies head fell onto armaans shoulders, and she put her arms around him, armaan was also asleep so he didnt notice]
[rahul saw ridz and went absoulutaly red!!]
[rahul says to himself]
R: mujhe laga tha ki riddhima armaan ko nafrat karta hai, tho phir..woh armaan ko..

[CRASH!!!]
[the coach had stopped and it woke everyone up!]
RG: k..kya hua..coach ruk kyun gaya?..
AJ: main dekte hu
[atul got up and went over to the driver]
DRIVER: **SNORE** **SNORE**
[the driver had fallen asleep!]
AJ: OH NO!!
AM: kya hua?
[armaan got up and went over to atul]
AM: GREAT! the drivers fallen asleep!
EVERYONE: kya?
M: itna lamba journey tha?
[atul and armaan tried waking up the driver but nothing happened, he was in a deep sleep]
AM:uhh..main drive kar leta hu
AJ: likin armaan tu address maloom hai kya?
AM: nahi likin..
[armaan spotted a sat nav] [its like a built in map in a little computer type thing]
AM: dekho..navigation hai na!
AJ: tik hai..chalo
[atul started walking back to his seat]
AM: champ ruko, main kya uska upar betungi? help me move him!
AJ: oh haa..
[they both moved him next to rahul]
R: arre mera seat pe kyun
AM: because you to make a lovely pair
[armaan went and sat in the drivers seat, he turned the engine on and off they went!]
[they were halfway there already..but it wasn't long until everyone started to moan]

M: arre yaar armaan..mujhe bahout bhook lagrahi hai..
AJ: haa..koi dabha hai..
AM: mujhe tho bahout mazaa arehe hai, yeh coach chalane main!
M: come on please armaan!
AM: ok then.
[when he found the next dhaba he stopped the coach]
AM: chalo..
[they all got out one by one]
[ridz tripped on the last step, but rahul caught her in his arms]
[armaan was FURIOUS!! that should have been him holding her!]
[he was just about to go and snatch ridz from rahul when ridz got up and walked up to armaan]
AM: riddhima tum tik ho na, tumhe koi chot aya?
RG: nahi armaan main t..tik hu
AM: woh rahul nai tumko kuch kiya?
RG: nahi armaan main ussne kuch nahi kiya, chalo
[she grabbed armaans hand and walked into the little shop]
AJ: muskaan, yeh dhaba ka naam tho dekho!
M: haa! laloo prasad ki dhaba! waah bhai waah kya naam hai!
R: haa! tumhari naam se better!
M: oye! meri naam teri naam se acha hai!, patyala ka hai na!
[and they both started argueing again]
[after they all had something to eat they went back into the coach]
[and continued their journey]
[soon enough they arrived]

[after all the stuff was unloaded from the coach everyone went to introduce themselves the the people who lived in the village]

DrKERT: hello! hum sanjeevani se phir se ayi hai, aur dono nayi doctors ke saath [to the villagers]
AM: hi
RG: hi!
AJ: hello!
R: hey
M: hello!!! main dr muskaan hu!
S: namaaste
A: heyy
DrKERT: aur maya jo sirf help karne ki liye ayi hai
M: hi

[there was a girl, who liked the site of armaan.]
[armaan looked at her and the girl winked at him]
[armaan straight away went closer to ridz and held her hand so the girl would know that he already liked someone!]

[they all sat down on tables and all the doctors were checking everyone]
[at armaans table]
AM: aap ko koi problems nahi!
PERSON: shukria
AM: NEXT!
[the girl came]
AM: uh..h.[cough] haat dekhaiye
[she gave him her hand]
GIRL: arre dr! aap mujse itna darte kyun?! main waise lirki nahi hu jaise aap sochti hai!
[armaan was confused..she was a muskaan type of girl..LOUD]
AM: main? darta hu? no way! ok aap ki pulse rate perfect hai
GIRL: main janti hu! mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta! main perfect hu!

[after everones work was finished, and the moon was out, they all sat down to play truth or dare]
[sapna spinned the bottle and the bottle pointed at anjali]
A: oh no! dekho koi hard dare ya truth mat dehna!
AM: relax anji!
S: ok anjali! truth ya dare?!
A:..uh..dare!..nahi truth!
R: ok! tum bathou ki ek lirka hai jo tum pasand karte ho?
M: haa bolo bolo!
AJ: haa anjali bolo na!
A: ek..hai..woh mujse bahaut pyar karta hai..aur shayad main bhi..
[she looked at atul and smiled]
[atul was shocked!! he didnt know what to say or do! finally anjali had started liking him!]
AJ: excuse me..
[atul got up and walked behind tree..]
AJ: WOOOOHOOOO ANJALI MUJSE PYAR KARTI HAI!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[everyone heard! and started laughing]
[anjali just blushed!]

PLZ COMMENT!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
it was really cool .. lol .. atul is really funny .. rockin' part ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
Hey. it was really cool part, do update soon. Atul is so funny and so i muskaan and rahul.loved it. šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

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