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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
heyya
sorry ppl havent updated in ages!!
been a bit busy lately but hopefully i will update by tomorrow!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
will be waiting nishat .. plz update soon ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
part 5

[ridz was shocked! she had totally forgotten about maya, ever since ridz sent her to jail
maya was completely scraped from ridzies thoughts]

RG: main kya karu...woh kya armaan ko..NAHI!! woh mujhe aur armaan ko kabhi alag nahi karsakta!
KOI nahi karsakta [in thoughts]

AM: riddhima?!..hello?!
RG: armaan mujhe kuch karna hoga..Woh agar tumko kuch..
nahi, mujhe kuch karna hoga
AM: nahi riddhima mujhe kuch nahi hoga likin tum sirf apna kiyal rakna ok?
RG: haa
AM: see you tomorrow, bye, love you
RG: bye

[and she put the phone down]
[The next day riddhima walked into sanjeevani remembering about maya]
[Dr keerti was assigning everyones duties while ridz was thinking]

DrKEERT: Dr armaan aur..
[she noticed that ridz wasn't listening]
DrKEERT: dr riddhima
[she said nothing]
DrKEERT: DR RIDDHIMA

[ridz finally came to her senses]

RG: haa..yes dr keerti
DrKEERT: concentrate Dr
RG: yes maam

[at that point a girl walked in]
[she looked familiar, VERY familiar]
RG: maya?

MAYA: hello Dr keerti
DrKEERT: hello maya, everyone this is maya, she will be working with us for a few days.
AJ: par dr keerti ussne to armaan ko frame kiya tha
[muskaan nudges atul]
M: woh kaun? aur ussne armaan ko kya kiya?
AJ: baad main batounga
[dr keerti walked off assigning everyones duties, as maya went off with dr keerti she winked at armaan]
[rahul saw her do that to and he thought armaan was trying to flirt with her]
R: armaan tum kabhi sudroge nahi, jabhi ek lirki dekti ho usske saath flirt karna shuru kardete ho
AM: what?
RG: rahul, tum aisa soch bhi kaise liya?
[rahul was shocked, ridz was telling HIM off!]
R: riddhima main tho
RG: armaan aisa kuch nahi kiya, uss maya nai armaan ko frame kiya tha! haa past main woh armaan ki girlfriend tha likin she cheated on him! aur ussne natak kiya aur sanjeevani main aagayi.
M: kya? armaan agar main tumhari jaga par hota na, to main usske ek zor se thapar deta!
RG: main itni stupid thi ki mujhe laga tha ki armaan ussko cheat karehe hai aur main armaan ko..jail..
AM: arre woh saab purane baate hai , lets talk current events!
A: haa hume usse yaha sai bagana hoga, varna woh kuch karegi
AJ: haa!


Edited by nishat_1995 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
it was really very nice but short but i understand ..
dis part was absolutely fantastic ..


keep rockin'
--Tia--
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
hey
well done loved it so mch i remember maya really well i hate her 😡 so much she a b**ch i hate her so much but anyway loved your ff so much
plz continue
😊 swansea 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
heres part 6!

[after they finished work they all went to the canteen]
A: hum kya karenge..
[ek minute main kana lekar aati hu!]
A: ok!
M: mujhe ek zabardast idea aya!
[everyone turned to look at muskaan]
EVERYONE: KYA?
M: hum na, ussko kidnap karlete hai
[they all sighed and looked back]
R: yeh kya idea hai? [mutters, bakwas]
M: tho kya tuje better idea hai?
R: nahi likin hota tho teri idea se bhetter hota!
[they both stood up]
M: main na! tumko ek mardalongi
R: tik hai aaj hi karlo!
[muskaan went up to rahul and started strangling him!]
M: idiot
R: loser
AM: STOP IT!!!
S: hee hee, armaan muskaan aur rahul, tum aur riddhima ki tara hai, sirf jagra!
A: haa!
[and they all started laughing!]

[just then maya walked in]
MAYA: hi guys!
[riddhima had got the food and was about to sit in the seat next to armaan, but maya happened to sit in it before her]
[armaan saw and he moved and sat next to ridz]
MAYA: kya hua armaan? tum meri saath nahi betna chati?
AM: nahi
MAYA: armaan..
[she put her hand on armaans]
MAYA: i'm sorry honey, i was stupid, main kaise tumko cheat kiya...
AM: save it! main tumhari saath nahi baat karna chati, tum sirf yaha ayi ho kyunki tum mujhe phirse jail bejwana chati ho
MAYA: na na na! main tumko jail nahi bejwata! iss lirki nai kiya tha!
[she pointed at ridz]
[at that point tears fell down riddhimas eyes]
[she stood up and was about to run for it, but armaan caught her hand]
AM: dekho maya, riddhima nai galati se woh saab kiya tha, aur maine usse maaf karliya..tum please aur problems mat karo
MAYA: whatever
M: oye churel tu armaan aur riddhima ke dur rehna ok
MAYA: maya stormed off which left everyone laughing
AJ: waah bhai waah muskaan!, tumne tho uss churel ko bagwadiya!
M: dekha rahul main itni stupid nahi hu jitna tum kehte ho!
R: your right..tum zyada stupid ho!
[and he runs out of the canteen followed my muskaan!]

SPEAKERS: ATTENTION ALL INTERNS, PLEASE REPORT TO DOCTOR KEERTI IMMEDIATLY FOR SANJEEVANI CAMP INFO

AJ: haa main to bhul gaya tha hum aaj sanjeevani camp ja rahi hai!
[they all started walking to doctor keerti]

DrKEERT: doctors, sanjeevani camp ki jane ki plan postponed hai, aap saab kal jayegi
9.00am early aana, i hate latecomers
AJ: phew!
DrKEERT: excuse me?
AJ: uhh sorry
DrKEERT: aap saab apni duties par jaye
M: likin humari duties tho katam hogaye!
DrKEERT: tho aap saab ghar jaye
[everyone went to the locker rooms except sapna]
S: dr keerti!
DrKEERT: yes?
S: aap aur dr shubhankar ki beech kya hua?
DrKEERT: abhi tho kuch nahi,likin woh mujse aaj kaal dur rehrahe hai
S: oh, ok bye!
[sapna started walking in the direction on the others]
S: yes! mera plan kaam karehe hai! Dr shubankar sirf mera hai! dr keerti!

sorry its short again! its coz its just a addition to the part b4 coz that bit was short too!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
it was really nice .. and now sapna turns into a villian ?? dats interesting ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
lol i thought she needed a change!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: if.addict

nishat main tumhe maar dalungi 😡 , agar dubara short part lekar aayi to ,maine pehle bhi kaha tha next part lamba lekar aana 😉 .
dontw orry sweety

nice part hun ,
par this time im serious , next part shud be shud be shud be longgggggggggggggggggggggg.



ok dnt worry will defo be long next tym!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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here is part 7!
[hope this is long enough 4 ya if.addict!!]


[in the OPD are maya, atul and muskaan]
M: atul hum kya kare uss maya ko yaha out kaise karenge..
AJ:...uhh..nahi...HAA!!..nahi..HMMM!!..nahi arre yaar i have no idea!
M: mera ek plan hai!!
[she whispers something into atuls ears]
AJ: haa! fantastic!
M: tho jao!
AJ: ohh haa!
[atul starts walking up to maya, he puts his collar up, fixes his hair and rolls his sleeves up]

AJ: hiya maya [simrans english accent!]
AJ: tum aaj kaise ho
MAYA: uhh..i'm fine
AJ: uh huh
[he grabs her arm]
AJ: tum aaj mera saath date pe chaloge!
MAYA: uhh..let go of my hand!
AJ: NAHI! TUMHE JAWAB DEHNA HI HOGA! TUM MERI SAATH DATE PE CHALOGE!
[he said it so loud that the whole ward heard!]
MAYA: i said let go of my hand!
[maya let herself free and started running away from atul!]
AJ: hey hot stuff! tum kaha ja rahe ho!
[MEANWHILE EVERYONE STARTED CHANTING]
EVRYONE: ATUL ATUL ATUL!!
AJ: dekha maya...sab chate hai ki hum dono ek saath rahe! come here my darling!!
[he see's a rose on the side table, he picks it up and puts it in his mouth and starts running after maya!]
AJ: maya!!
[unfortunatly lovely see's this and starts crying]
L: **sob** **sob** atul ji, aap first meri saath dokha, aur ab dr anjali ki saath dokha **sob** **sob

[in the OPD]
M: he he he ha ha ha [muskaans wierd laugh]
[just then dr keerti walked in]
DrKEERT: ye sab kya tamaasha hai? kaam par dyan do, dr atul aur maya kaha hai?
M: woh..woh uh dr atul tho bathroom gaya hai likin maya mujhe pata nahi...oh yaad aya! woh break par gaya hai!
DrKEERT: KYA? BREAK, break ki abhi bhi 1 gant bakhi hai, she is not aloud to do this!
[and she storms off!]
[muskaan high fives the ward boy next to her!]
M: dekha main kaise dr keerti ko pata diya!!

[maya had no where to go so she ran into the ladies bathroom, in there was ridz]
MAYA: upho! uss idiot ne tho mera makeup karab kardi!
[ridz recognized that voice, she turned around to see maya!]
[she quickly washed her hands and was about to go outside when..]
MAYA: kaha ja rahi ho riddhima..mujse itna darti ho?
RG: huh?..uhh nahi main late hu, dhh..dr keerti se milna hai
MAYA: ohh
[maya walks up to ridz]
MAYA: dekna riddhima main tumhari armaan kya karti hu..
RG: th..tum meri armaan ko haath mat lagana
MAYA: ohh! tho woh tumhari armaan hai!...likin yaad karo riddhima..woh first mera tha aur abhi bhi mera hi hai!
[and she walks out the door, but what she didnt see was atul!]
AJ: maya!! tum itni der laga diya!!
MAYA: dekho..dekho tum meri paas mat aana!
AJ: tik hai tho tum meri paas aaja!
[just then anjali walked past!]
AJ: uhh anjali jo tum soch rahi ho aisa kuch nahi hai!
A: haa haa whatever..

SPEAKERS: CAN ALL INTERNS PLEASE REPORT TO DR SHASHANKS CABIN
[with dr shashank]

DrSHASH: Hello doctors, aap sab probably bhool gaya hai ki aaj intern of the month chune jayenge
[everyone was shocked! they totally forgot!]

DrSHASH: Aur sanjeevani main this year hum ek naya thing shuro karehe hai aur woh hai ki jo bhi intern of the month chune jayegi/jayenge woh ek hafte ki liya moniter banege! aur dr keerti ko ek hafte ke chuti hogi. now aap sab apni duties par jayeh
[dr keerti whispered something to shashank]
DrSHASH: aur haa, maya, aap nayi aayi hai aur sirf a few hafte ki liye aaye hai, so we dont expect this from you
MAYA: uhh expect? i dont understand sir
DrSHASH: aap break ki ek gante aage break pe gaya, you are not aloud to do this!
[muskaan and atul looked at each other and smiled]
MAYA: kya? par main tho..
DrKEERT: excuse me? aap abhi bhi explaination dehna chati hai?
MAYA: likin aapko yeh kisne batayeh?
DrKEERT: dr muskaan ne
M: haa dr keerti, maya ne mujko aur atul ko bhola ki woh break pe jah rahehe, hai na atul
AJ: haa!
DrSHASH: maya i dont want to see this again, understand?
MAYA: yes sir

SPEAKERS: CAN ALL INTERNS GO TO THE MAIN HALL FOR INTERN OF THE MONTH ANNOUNCEMENT
[everyone goes there and sits]

DrSHASH: december 2007 ki intern of the month hai..
dr...ARMAAN!!

ALL INTERNS: WHAT?!
AJ: hey dont worry! yeh hamaara armaan hai! woh hume overwork nahi dega
A: haa your right
R: woh kyun anjali ya riddhima should have been intern of the month! ya phir main!
AJ: oye! tu! intern of the month? tujhe doctor bhi kaise bhane diya mujhe pata nahi, tu bare bhakwas hai!
R: oye! bakwas kisi bhol raha he?
M: tujhe aur kaun!
S: tum dono bhi na!
BOTH[M/R]: KYA?

[after everyones duties were finished they all headed home]
RG: chale di?
A: ridz main meri friends ki saath bahar ja rahi hu sorry, armaan can you drop ridz home?
AM: s..
R: armaan kyun main drop kardeti hu
RG: no thats ok main armaan ki saath jati hu..
MAYA: tho mujhe kaun gar drop kar dega?
AJ: main!
MAYA: NO WAY! main auto lekar jaati hu!
AJ: kyun maya main hoon na!
MAYA: ughh!!
[and she runs off]
[muskaan high fives atul!]
[ridz and armaan are walking to armaans car holding hands]
[armaan opens the door for ridz]
AM: my lady
RG: thank you

[the next morning in ridzies house]

RG: di..di utho!! we are gonna be late! aaj hum sanjeevani camp ja rahe hai!
[anjali woke up straight after hearing that]
A: haa oh no! jaldi karo ridz!
[they both started getting ready]
[they ran downstairs]
A/RG: by nani!
RG: chalo papa!
SHASH: sorry beta main aah nahi sakti bahaut kaam hai!
A: kya? again? aap last time bhi aayi nahi!
SHASH: sorry!

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