'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 61

Originally posted by: inavars

Awesome part Anu!!

Although I missed the Atul-Angie interaction, it was nice to see that both Angie and Shashank are trying...although they don't seem to be getting anywhere..

I hope Mili's ok...and Angie/Atul use this opportunity to get to know each other better hehe

Originally posted by: princess4120

YAY!! you updated.. was wondering when you would!! :) this was a great part.. important to place the story.. anjie trying to be happy for ridz with atul's support.. atul just always looking out for anjie.. still annoys me that shasank cant read anjie .. oh no.. mili.. i hope she is ok.. usse kuch na hoye.. please.. i do hope anjie goes after atul to support him in the hopsital.. while they wait for mili to recover..

great great part.. looking for more anjie atul interaction.. ajie ridz patch up.. and confrontation between shashank and anjie,,

thanks for the pm.. hope u update soon

[quote=nureat01]"A glass of water, please," said Anjali as she reached the bar.

"One for me as well," said Shashank as he came and stood next to her.

Anjali glanced up at him in surprise for a moment and then smoothing out the expression on her face, replied in a cool tone, "Hi, Dad."

"Hi, Anjali," he replied with a soft smile.[/quote]

Wow, this little exchange made me go back to the years where Shanks used to try to entice her with chocolates and gifts. To think of how relationships change over the course of time, how these two have turned out, huh? The little sweet girl with missing teeth, and the dark, brooding man. Now a beautiful, insecure young woman, and her torn old man.

Loved Atul telling Angie to smile through a simple gesture. Only someone who could get through to her would be able to achieve that, and all the power to him. Didn't know that the rest of the interns were unaware of Shanks/Angie/Riddhima's relationship, hmmmm. Looking forward to what happens with Mili. Am I crazy, or why is it that I imagine Riddhima always screeching and whining, even when I'm reading the simplest of words? 😆

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

Thanks for the comments, CB!🤗

Originally posted by: hdalal

Anu 🤗. Bravo once again, for the superb update. Not much of Atul-Anjie but still loved the way Atul gestured her to smile, and she did. Atul has become such an imp part of her life now, only if she accepts it to herself and to him. Absolutely loved the Shanshank-Anjie scene. Anjie's attempts at brushing off every effort her dad makes to get through to her, speak volumes of her pain. And Shanshank's attempts at getting through to her, though commendable, seem too feeble. Eagerly waiting to find out when & how Shashank manages to understand her, if he does that is.

I really like the way you portray the strong, yet subtle emotions and undercurrents that exist between the characters in your story. And the best thing is you don't stretch the scenes to the extent where they become melodramatic. 👏

Originally posted by: inavars

Hey...when are you updating?😛

Originally posted by: sweetdamage

okay...so it is 12:00 am here...I have to get up at 5:00 am..but still I could not stop reading yourr fanfic...I have to say it is an AMAZING fanfic..and PLEASE continue soon...dyring to know what happens next...I will better review next time...right now I am pretty tired..lol...but great job!!!!!