'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 63

Originally posted by: inavars

Anu, have you written any PM FF's? If so, give me the link. I want to read them😳

Atul looked at her, feeling helpless yet again, unable to understand what to say to her....HOW does one go about consoling an anguished mother? Would any words really suffice?[/quote]

[quote]"A hole in the heart?" she said quietly after a moment, "Do you know what that means for a little child, Dr.Atul?" she turned her tear-streaked gaze towards him, "It means?..don't run, don't play, don't tire yourself! HOW do you explain that to a little child? A child who wants to jump, run, laugh, play like every other child! How do you bear that wistful, hurt, angry from your child day after day??" She closed her eyes in pain, tears still rolling down her cheeks. "How? How do you cage a spirit like that, Dr.Atul? How?"[/quote]

Aw, man.

You captured Mili's mom's hurt so beautifully, Anu. I absolutely love how it came across as so natural, and Atul's awkwardness and grief mingled together seemed so genuine. Which makes me wonder, say: after a doctor has one of these experiences, does s/he stop getting so closely affiliated with a patient, or do they fall into this trap at other times too? Reminds me of what the Boman Irani said in Munna Bhai MBBS: when you operate on one of your loved ones, the hands start shaking.

On the other, I like the role reversal we've got here. Massive progress in story! Angie's started seeing Atul as a friend, has started caring for him, it seems. But has she taken the next step? You evil child 😈

Lovely update

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

Really nice dear..!!

Lubd it

sonali