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Posted: 17 years ago
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anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—


awesome update as usual........ let us begin........


okay first i loved that ''don't be a crybaby'' 🤣🤣


kabhie aar, kabhie paar

laaga teer-e-nazar

anu ghayal kiya

re tune atul ka jigar🤣🤣

ju said it yaar.............. i lubed itšŸ˜†


but on a serious note, i loved how sapna is helping atul and understanding his majnu sorta situation so well......... awww this remind me of party in DMG where atul n sapna were dancing lovely popped in........ ju forgot lovely🤣🤣

and ridhima's character is just like ju lowe🤣, she is still angry with armaan 😲 and not understanding that he did this to bring her here....... i the knows ju the loves this the types of the Rs🤣, and armaan-angie dancing is so gud to imagien onlyšŸ˜ and mind it na........armaan is taller than angi....... i have seen them dancing on screen n they were of same height with anjali wearing heels, but i m sure once she is without heels, armaan will look talleršŸ˜šŸ¤£.........

and now......... socha na tha song is really ur fav našŸ˜‰, i haven't heard this song ever....... i need to do so......specially after reading this partšŸ˜†....... yaar i really liked AA convo......atul complimenting her n anjali thinks that compliments given by atul are so differentšŸ˜ hayeeeeeeeeee je toh badi achhi baat hai.........

I loved this party part anu......... yaar ULK vi la dindi🤣


anyways muahhhhhhhhhh i loved this partšŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Edited by mehak_kapoor - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
[quote]"This Anjali glows, from within, and that is why she looks so beautiful," he finished softly.[/quote]

šŸ˜
šŸ˜ šŸ˜ Sweet.

Loved the whole dancing sequence, very well written. It's surreal for me to still imagine Angie finding herself unhinged because of Atul's words, but I think subtlety, it's becoming more real, because of the things Atul can say in view of who she really is, and who no one else see's. It's that what is special about Atul, than tons of other guys; the fact that he's able to make her feel that way about herself, lift her out of depths of brooding and the way she borderlines on cynicism. Come to think of it, Anjali is like a little girl, who has no self-esteem. Because of Shank's constant favouritism, it's like she has finds defects in herself. It's Atul, who makes her see someone who is whole, and happy, lovable. He can give her something others can't, which is why I can see a 'them'
šŸ˜

Really liked the bit where Atul finds himself disappointed, and envious of Armaan's ability to chat people up so easily. See, it's things like these which make the characters so much more real.

Lovely part. Cherished reading it šŸ¤—

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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu, I used to be a silent reader of this FF in the DMG forum. I have this soft spot for AA and when I found this FF, I just knew I had to read it. And then suddenly it went missing from the forum...and I was forlorn like AnjališŸ˜’ I guess it was moved to the FF sectionšŸ˜†. You won't believe how happy I am to find it now...you are a fantastic writer. The ease with which you describe every character and their feelings just makes me want to read more and more.

And honestly, the writers could learn a thing or two about creativity from you - the scenes that you've shown AA in have been fantastic - the elevator one (first time and when they get stuck), getting lost in the camp, the fire escape, the bicycle ride...I could imagine these two in every single scene...And you've portrayed a myriad of emotions for these two - happiness, sarcasm (if only from Anjie), sadness, understanding...makes these characters so lovalbe and real!


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

Wow...

And once again, I'm at a loss for words! Anu, that was SUCH a wonderful update! Thanks you so much, Borna! You are too sweet as alwaysšŸ¤—
As usual, the intern interaction was a treat, right from Atul-Sapna to Armaan-Ridzie to Armaan-Angie! (Forest green? Very nice! I like the original blue, too, but I think she'd dazzle in green as well!) Yep, I loved that blue on her as well...but I like this color as wellšŸ˜†...It's Sunaina now yaar...she'd dazzle in any color, won't she?šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
Anjali's bittersweet happiness at Ridz's IOTM victory was captured perfectly...That sense of unknown calm - the reason is lingering in the back of her mind...She just hasn't realized it yet, haina?
As for that "imaginary cocoon," I think that's a great analogy to Riddhima's life in general...At least for now...She's always had a chance to stay lost in the clouds...One of the reasons I've always loved Anjali more than Ridz is because Angie is always grounded. She knows where reality is, but that doesn't stop her from enjoying the little things that life has to offer, even if those instances are very rare... Yep! Exactly! R's generally clueless about a lot of thingsšŸ˜†....and I think she WANTS to believe that everything is fine...so that's what she doesšŸ˜‰
LOL, poor Atul couldn't compliment Anjali properly, the poor dear! But my goodness, the way that he expressed his feelings to her while they were dancing took my breath away! I LOVE the way that you write his dialogues!!! Thank you so much yaar!😳
Socha na tha...Such a beautiful song!!! *sigh* A perfect title, a perfect chapter! This chapter was long time coming....I had always visualized it like this....and the song is very close to my heart...given that I'd named this story that as wellšŸ˜†...it had to make an appearance somewhere...I just couldn't resistšŸ˜³šŸ˜†...and glad you liked it!šŸ¤—

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: princess4120

WOW!! very nicely written.. amazing to see this happy side of anjie.. she is finally lightening up.. atul is such a sweetheart.. and so adorable.. i cant wait to read more ad see how the story progresses..

please update soon! and thanks so much for the pm

Thank you so much!😳...Glad you enjoyed it! Will try to update as soon as I'm able to!😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

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anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤— MehakoooooooooošŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—


awesome update as usual........ let us begin........


okay first i loved that ''don't be a crybaby'' 🤣🤣 ROFL!! I know why ju are laughing at thatšŸ˜ˆšŸ˜†šŸ˜†


kabhie aar, kabhie paar

laaga teer-e-nazar

anu ghayal kiya

re tune atul ka jigar🤣🤣

ju said it yaar.............. i lubed itšŸ˜† hehehe....Atul ka jigar to vaise zyada tar show mein bhi ghaayal hi rehta hai, haina?šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


but on a serious note, i loved how sapna is helping atul and understanding his majnu sorta situation so well......... awww this remind me of party in DMG where atul n sapna were dancing lovely popped in........ ju forgot lovely🤣🤣 LOL....I didn't forget Lovely yaar....main usnu story vich rakheya hi nahinšŸ˜ˆšŸ˜†....kyunki I didn't want that kind of comedyšŸ˜›šŸ˜†....but Atul-Sappy are cute, na??šŸ˜šŸ˜†

and ridhima's character is just like ju lowe🤣, she is still angry with armaan 😲 and not understanding that he did this to bring her here....... i the knows ju the loves this the types of the Rs🤣, Je baaaaaaaattttttšŸ˜ˆšŸ˜†...you the knows me the very wellsšŸ˜‰šŸ˜†....jes, I the lowe this type of the R's bheryyyy much!🤣and armaan-angie dancing is so gud to imagien onlyšŸ˜ and mind it na........armaan is taller than angi....... i have seen them dancing on screen n they were of same height with anjali wearing heels, but i m sure once she is without heels, armaan will look talleršŸ˜šŸ¤£........Mehakkkkkkk🤣....you the imaginings the too much!🤣....ok, just for your happiness, Armaan is 'taller' than AngiešŸ˜‰šŸ˜†...even though milord, je baat puri tarhan sach hai ki even without heels, she is taller than himšŸ˜ˆšŸ˜†šŸ˜†.....jokes apart, they did look very good together in the show...I would've enjoyed watchign them togetheršŸ˜‰šŸ˜†.

and now......... socha na tha song is really ur fav našŸ˜‰, i haven't heard this song ever....... i need to do so......specially after reading this partšŸ˜†....... yaar i really liked AA convo......atul complimenting her n anjali thinks that compliments given by atul are so differentšŸ˜ hayeeeeeeeeee je toh badi achhi baat hai.........Aww so glad you liked that, Mehakoo!šŸ¤—....I don't think vaise gaana tere type da haišŸ˜›šŸ˜†...but I absolutely adore this song....it's very soft, sweet and simple songšŸ˜

I loved this party part anu......... yaar ULK vi la dindi🤣 LOL....waise haje party khatam thodi hoyee hai....aage kuch bhi ho sakta haišŸ˜ˆšŸ˜†....I'm in a strangely evil mood rite nowšŸ˜†...ok, will see if I can put in ULK in the next chapter🤣


anyways muahhhhhhhhhh i loved this partšŸ¤—šŸ¤— Muahhhhhhh! Thank you so much, sweetheartšŸ¤—šŸ¤—

p.s. I am the shocked that ju the didn't the notice that the handsome hunk Vicky got to dance with Angie as wellšŸ¤£šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

[quote]"This Anjali glows, from within, and that is why she looks so beautiful," he finished softly.[/quote]

šŸ˜
šŸ˜ šŸ˜ Sweet.

Loved the whole dancing sequence, very well written. It's surreal for me to still imagine Angie finding herself unhinged because of Atul's words, but I think subtlety, it's becoming more real, because of the things Atul can say in view of who she really is, and who no one else see's. It's that what is special about Atul, than tons of other guys; the fact that he's able to make her feel that way about herself, lift her out of depths of brooding and the way she borderlines on cynicism. Come to think of it, Anjali is like a little girl, who has no self-esteem. Because of Shank's constant favouritism, it's like she has finds defects in herself. It's Atul, who makes her see someone who is whole, and happy, lovable. He can give her something others can't, which is why I can see a 'them'
šŸ˜

Really liked the bit where Atul finds himself disappointed, and envious of Armaan's ability to chat people up so easily. See, it's things like these which make the characters so much more real.

Lovely part. Cherished reading it šŸ¤—

Thank you so much, Fatty!šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—.....So glad you enjoyed the chapter! Yes, it's surreal in a way to see Angie in this way, nahin? But I loved the way you put it....that in her own way she has low self-esteem....because of Shashank's unintended favoritism...and since Atul is the only one who's seen that side to her, it throws her off track when he sees much more to her than the average person....and doesn't that just make you gošŸ˜.....LOL....I'm hopelessšŸ˜†....but yes, that is exactly why I can see a THEM as well!šŸ˜³šŸ˜†....
And glad you liked that bit with Atul envying Armaan as well....thought it would be but an obvious reaction in any regular situation, nahin? I'm sure we all have our own moments like thatšŸ˜‰
Thanks once again for the lovely comments, VeerušŸ¤—
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: inavars

Anu, I used to be a silent reader of this FF in the DMG forum. I have this soft spot for AA and when I found this FF, I just knew I had to read it. And then suddenly it went missing from the forum...and I was forlorn like AnjališŸ˜’ I guess it was moved to the FF sectionšŸ˜†. You won't believe how happy I am to find it now...you are a fantastic writer. The ease with which you describe every character and their feelings just makes me want to read more and more.

And honestly, the writers could learn a thing or two about creativity from you - the scenes that you've shown AA in have been fantastic - the elevator one (first time and when they get stuck), getting lost in the camp, the fire escape, the bicycle ride...I could imagine these two in every single scene...And you've portrayed a myriad of emotions for these two - happiness, sarcasm (if only from Anjie), sadness, understanding...makes these characters so lovalbe and real!


Thank you so much!šŸ¤—Really glad to know you enjoyed it!😳 And reallly sweet of you to take the time out to comment as well! Yes, the FF got moved to this section since the DMG forum was brimming over with too many FFsšŸ˜†...
Glad you enjoyed all those scenes yaar! Those are all my favorites....really enjoyed writing them! And I've totally had a ball exploring the myriad emotions thru these two characters....there is just so much POTENTIAL! I'm just surprised that the creatives don't seem to see it muchšŸ˜•....But really glad to know that there are a few more AA fans out there! We are quite a minority in general otherwisešŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
Can't PM you, dude.

IF :armed: :ras:
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Posted: 17 years ago
AwwwšŸ¤—šŸ¤—,,,,IF is acting unbelievably weird these daysšŸ¤¢šŸ˜†

You wanna talk here then???šŸ¤—šŸ˜†


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