'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 42

Originally posted by: nureat01

"Hey, Gorgeous!" Armaan called out to her, "You just missed all the fun! Basket here put up a very entertaining performance for all three of us," he smirked. [/quote]

Armaan is honestly such a likeable guy 😆 😆 Loved the countdown and dhamaka! 😆 ☢️

[quote]All of them leaned forward in anticipation, hoping and praying that their name would be announced.

"….Dr. Atul Joshi," announced Dr. Keerti.

Atul looked at Dr. Keerti in complete surprise.

Tell me how long we've waited to hear this? 😍 Someday...

The scene on the terrace 😎 Liked it very much. Very subtle, yet wholesome and nice. Atul certainly knows how to strike up a conversation and touch the chords, huh? 😉 😆 His plant-talking is definately smooth! 😆

Sappy as always, is a vision 😳 (one only in my head, I suppose...) I didn't mind the bit Riddhima had either. Good to see how you're integrating AR into the story as well 👍🏼 Looking forward to the next chapter. The relationship between AA1 is getting mellower..only a few more chapters, I assume that you'll make us wait? 😉 😆 Ahhh, I kid myself as to whom I'm dealing with Make it come soon?

Lovely part, Ms. H-H! 🤗

Originally posted by: hdalal

Anuuuuuuu.... Hemaaaaaaaaa😆😆

"Dr. Joshi sure has a knack for cheering up people." Sure he does. and you have a knack of getting us hooked to the story more and more. Aww thank you, yaar! Actually I think it's more like my restless mind which has to keep writing something or the other...it's a bonus that it entertains you guys as well!😆😆
Boy, you are having fun taking potshots at ridz aren't you? And keeping us entertained too!!! Arey kya yaar! This time to I actually tried to show a different side na! With her talking to Atul!😉

""Diiiiiiiiii," whined Ridz"... so reminds me of arrmaaaaaann. 😆 😆. SB to SB hi rahegi !! Haan that was something I couldn't resist😳😆😆

I am really liking the fact that Atul is able to calm her down every single time. How easily he is able to understand her thoughts. Loved the terrace scene and their admiring the sunset. 👏 Thank you so much, Hemangi!😳 Glad you enjoyed that scene!
And a huge 🤗 🤗 for making ridz jump up the bench. Entertaining, very entertaining. 😊 LOL...I see that dialogue lives on😛😆 A huge 🤗🤗for you as well yaar! Glad you enjoyed Ridzie's little jump onto the bench😆😆

Originally posted by: sidsk

Anuuuuuu.....this story has gone so far ahead and I didnt even know. 😭 Ek PM would have been helpful. 😡 😆 😆 Siiiiiiiiid!! Yaar I did PM you a couple of times, but then I figured you were really busy with exams and stuff, so I shouldn't bother you😳
The last chapter I read was Ch 5. 😕 Ok so I just caught up on all. 😳

Ch 6:
Suddenly he stopped singing midway, and froze for a moment. Why could he smell Lillies? Did that mean….?
Oh I simply loved this bit......mostly bcoz even I've got the lillies reference in my ff. 😆 Lol it was funny how Atul concludes that he was only reacting to the perfume and not Anjali.
I simply loved the way you described the whole elevator scene....Atul's rection when she sees her,his emotions when she's standing so close to him and how he leans forward and sniffs her hair.Awww too good! 👏 👏 👏 Thank you so much, yaar! I loved writing both these scenes a lot!😳

Ch 7
Briallant!! 👏 👏 The first bit where he's internally scolding himself for liking Anjali even though he thinks she's rude and all ....very well writen.
Love how he observes her talking to Shashank and how he sees her pain and THEN realizes that he's in love with her! You're doing such a good with this story. 😳 👏 Thanks yaar Sid😳🤗

Ch 8
And again Im repeating myself but cant help it.That scene between Anjali and Atul--brilliant! I mean really.Simply loved these lines.
Atul stared at her for a moment, and for the first time, saw with blinding clarity, the hurt and anger behind the cool expressionless mask that she was wearing right now. Her icy, razor sharp words barely registered.
"I'm sorry, Anjali," he said softly, not talking about their current conversation at all. "I'm so sorry," he repeated in his head silently. "So sorry for all the pain you hold inside yourself."
Aww teh puppies bit was so cute! 😳 Loved Atul's emotions then as he watched her and realized that he just cant help but fall in love with her even more. Oh thank you so much for liking that scene...the AA1 scene at the Nurse's station yaar!🤗🤗And glad you enjoyed the puppies as well!😳

Ch 9(oh and you might want to change the page number of this chapter on the first page.You've writtten Pg 30 instead of 31 😉 ) Done! The pages keep shuffling around on me!😕😆
Liked the whole telepathic-ness(im sure that's not a word) in the bus.😉
And how he helps her out in his typial Atul style.....oh and I just love how he sings while walking away. 😳
Lol I really like Armaan in ur ff...and how he tells her to stop shrieking as it will endanger the wildlife.😆 😆
And wow they're lost!I love it when couples get lost in jungles. 😆 😆 lol, Sid! That's cuz we're all too used to Hindi soaps!😉😆😆...but I tried to make it slightly different atleast😳

Ch 10(umm mistake again....You wrote Pg 36 instead of 35 😆 ) Fixed it!😛😆
the Happy Camper accompanying her seemed to be completely unperturbed and kept on pausing to point out some kind of plant or tree every few minutes...... 😆 😆 So Atul!
I somehow loved this part a lot 😳 He bent and lifted her up in one smooth movement, catching her completely by surprise. She looked up at him with clear astonishment on her face. He bobbed both his eyebrows at her in response as if to say, "What did you think?",.....She found herself feeling oddly delicate and vulnerable in his arms, and that disconcerted her for some reason that she wasn't able to pinpoint.Love the songs Atul sings."Hoshwalon ko khabar kya" is one of my faves.
And wow the last bit was seriously sooooo romantic 😍 ...i was smiling like a silly fool when he was singing "Mashallah"....but then she opened her eyes! Aww so glad you enjoyed all these parts, Sid!🤗🤗Thank you sooooo much for all the wonderful comments! Will look forward to your input on the rest of the chapters!😳

Ok I will read the next 3 tomorrow....really late here now. 😛

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

ANU DIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What do I say to you??? Jab tak aap apni tareef naa sun lo you just don't stop right? GOOD! Don't even think about it! I totallly loved it Di!

I love the prank that Armaan played on the n-o and then Anjali giving him a better option! 😆 Too good!

What totally got me was the last scene on the terrace! Hey bhaggu!!!! Kamaal kardita yaar! He completed her sentence! Choooooo chweeeeet!!!! Anjali's disappointment on things like that is something we totally don't see anymore! But whatever. We used to and I honestly could picture every single thing in that scene!!!

Di why are you not the creative writer for A-A???? You write the best scenes for them!!!! I love your FF! If you end it, I'm never ever going to talk to you again! This FF should go past 300 chapters! 😆

LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Komzie

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

Tell me how long we've waited to hear this? 😍 Someday...Oh yes we have waited eons, Fatty meri jaan😍...and I said I'd try to do my part for Atul in here, didn't I? So here we go!😆

The scene on the terrace 😎 Liked it very much. Very subtle, yet wholesome and nice. Atul certainly knows how to strike up a conversation and touch the chords, huh? 😉 😆 His plant-talking is definately smooth! 😆 Thank you so much for liking that scene yaar!🤗...and glad you enjoyed his 'smooth' plant talking as well😆😆

Sappy as always, is a vision 😳 (one only in my head, I suppose...) I didn't mind the bit Riddhima had either. Good to see how you're integrating AR into the story as well 👍🏼 Looking forward to the next chapter. The relationship between AA1 is getting mellower..only a few more chapters, I assume that you'll make us wait? 😉 😆 Ahhh, I kid myself as to whom I'm dealing with Make it come soon? LOL...I see you're getting more impatient to see them together now, haan Fattyji?? But you know me, right?😈😈😆...haha...actually, I frankly can't really put a timeline on it myself😕....it could happen in the next chapter...OR it could happen a few chapters after that...anything's possible!😉😆😆

Lovely part, Ms. H-H! 🤗 Thank you sooooo much, Mr. India!🤗HH is really glad to know you liked it so much!😆

Originally posted by: *Sunita*

Anu... 🤗 Suniiiiiiii a.k.a Basantiji!🤗🤗

For the first time, I m reading ur ff and what can I say.. I m on the floor "faints"... 👏 👏 👏 Aww thank you so much yaar!😳...

I just read the intro and first part as of now and its absolutely stunning.. u and (Fatty) have an awesome style of writing like professonal writers.. 👏 👏 👏 Just speaking for myself....kahaan yaar!! Definitely not even remotely professional! But thank you so much for the lovely compliment!🤗🤗Muahhhhh!

I am going to catch up on the other parts soon and will add my comments.. Thank you so much for taking the time out to read and comment yaar! It means a lot!😳🤗