'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 43

Originally posted by: dhvanisoni

Awesome paqrt....loved every bit from Ridzie's khichayi untill maya and Gabbar...awesome...great to see Atul being as capable as other docs....awesome part...loved it....

Originally posted by: vaarti

anu...loved it! several reasons why... Thank you so much, Aarti!🤗

1) atul is still funny, but its not the silly humour! he is sensitive but not in the desperate clingy way that we are so familiar with! Yep! That's the way I prefer him, so I try to erase the recent craptastic 'evolution' to his character through SNT.

2) the essence of anjali has been captured just perfectly. while you aren't the most descriptive writer i know (which is good for me), you are far more powerful, cos you manage to evoke quite the animated picture in my mind while reading! and this with minimalistic descriptions. Oh Aarti! Yaar that is a HUGE compliment! Especially coming from a writer par excellence as yourself!!🤗🤗Yes, I am most definitely not the most descriptive of writers...not even halfway descriptive sadly enough😆...but to know that it all still manages to make an impact....Muahhhh! Love you for saying that!

2) thank god atul's favorite plant is still called maya! i thought decent developments would have made you reconsider the name!!! LOL...You thought I'd change the name as well?😆😆....Nahin yaar, cuz here it's all just about Atul the character na! No actors involved😉

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

Ssssmokinnnn!

Anuuu!! a huge 🤗🤗for you.. for such an awesome update!! read the previous two chapters as well.. good job, Anu! 👏 👏

"Diiiiiiiiii," whined Ridz, her mouth open in shock now, "How can you…?" oh, i can very well imagine that scene!! 🤣

totally loved the terrace scene!!

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lovely update........... muahhhhhhhh👏👏

Hehehehe armaan playing prank on ridhima was just classic😆😆. I lowed that....... 😆 and angi taking armaan's side makes it more entertaining........

Well atlast atul is IOTM😆 chalo yaar kithe taan atul bha ji da khata khuleya😆........whoooooopieeeeeeeeeeeeeee i m so happy for atul.........

I specially lowed the part where angi left nurse station without interacting much........ yaar it was so realistic unlike mahanta ki devi n all who do not feel bad at all after losing also......... atleast angi is normal😆😆

Terrace conversation is again very realistic n easy to imagine........ Atul is the only guy who can make angi smile........i lowed that........And that maya n gabbar conversation.........rocked completely.........👏👏

It was so real on angi's part to think that why atul is so nice kyunki oh changi tarah gusse vi nahi ho sakadi ode naal😆 Anu yaar, frankly speaking tu bahoot bahoot bahoot reality involve karadi hain, i mean tu oh saare reactions, thoughts n emotions involve karadi hain, jo bahoot hi normal hunde ne and they are easy to connect with.......👏👏

Superb as u noe.........🤗🤗

par yaar main jinne vi gaane soche si, ik vi fit nahi baitheya ithe........ chalo koi na........ main gaana ga hi dindi haan.......my fav singer diljit's song😳

Hoya ki je nachadi di

baanh phadh layi

daaka taan nai maareya

o hooooooooooo

bahuta saanu jhach gayi si

taan phadh layi

daaka taa nahi maareya.............

hoya ki je nachadi baanh phadh layi

daaka ta nai maareya..........😆

Originally posted by: vaarti

anu sweety...u know it is very easy, commendable all the same, when one describes every lash, every wrinkle, every strand of hair to get the readers to form a mental picture of the scene. Ah ummm...I don't know what to say😆😆😉...I can't stop cracking up over 'every single lash, wrinkle etc.'😆...ok, on a serious note...I actually would kill to be able to be descriptive like that...I've known from the very beginning that I'm unable to describe anything other than the characters' emotions in great detail...maybe that's all that ever registers for me😆...but maybe I'll improve over time and become better at describing other stuff as well. but to achieve the same effect with just choice of lines spoken by characters, not only do you respect the intelligence of your readers to assign chaactersitics based on words they speak, but the aptness of the said lines doesn't make it to abstruse for the reader either and that indeed is applause worthy! Thank you so much once again, Aarti! I don't know if I manage to achieve the same effect as a proper writer though...but it feels awesome to know that all you guys still like it so much!🤗Maybe I'm just lucky to have such super supportive readers😳

for instance the atul here is markedly different from the oe we know and yet its no trouble imagining him say the words or visualise the expressions on his face when he does say them! Oh yes, this Atul is very very different from the Atul in the show currently. I've kind of built this Atul on the Atul from the first few weeks of the show....and just taken the story on a different tangent from there....who knows, if they'd not decided to make Armaan the central character in this show, Atul may not have been turned into such a champu...after all, once in a while storylines like the one where it is revealed that he is Omi's son had a lot of potential to be developed...and that's all I'm basically doing...trying to develop what potential I saw there in whatever way I can.

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

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lovely update........... muahhhhhhhh👏👏 Mehakoo!!!🤗🤗🤗Yaar badi der kitti tu is baar comment karan vich😭😭😆...Thank you so much, sweetheart!🤗

Hehehehe armaan playing prank on ridhima was just classic😆😆. I lowed that....... 😆 and angi taking armaan's side makes it more entertaining........Haha! I knew you would enjoy that!😉😆😆

Well atlast atul is IOTM😆 chalo yaar kithe taan atul bha ji da khata khuleya😆........whoooooopieeeeeeeeeeeeeee i m so happy for atul.........Mehakoo yaar....Atul is not IOTM yet😳....he's just gotten a chance to do a surgery with Keerti....IOTM abhi announce nahin hua hai😉😆😆

I specially lowed the part where angi left nurse station without interacting much........ yaar it was so realistic unlike mahanta ki devi n all who do not feel bad at all after losing also......... atleast angi is normal😆😆 Thanks, Mehakoo! Glad you liked it!

Terrace conversation is again very realistic n easy to imagine........ Atul is the only guy who can make angi smile........i lowed that........And that maya n gabbar conversation.........rocked completely.........👏👏 Thank you, Mehak yaar!😳😳

It was so real on angi's part to think that why atul is so nice kyunki oh changi tarah gusse vi nahi ho sakadi ode naal😆 Anu yaar, frankly speaking tu bahoot bahoot bahoot reality involve karadi hain, i mean tu oh saare reactions, thoughts n emotions involve karadi hain, jo bahoot hi normal hunde ne and they are easy to connect with.......👏👏

Superb as u noe.........🤗🤗As I know?😆😆....It's the only way I know how to write yaar...mera dimaag iddan hi chalda hai😆😆...So glad you enjoy whatever logic/reality I manage to bring to it, Mehakoo!🤗

par yaar main jinne vi gaane soche si, ik vi fit nahi baitheya ithe........ chalo koi na........ main gaana ga hi dindi haan.......my fav singer diljit's song😳

Hoya ki je nachadi di

baanh phadh layi

daaka taan nai maareya

o hooooooooooo

bahuta saanu jhach gayi si

taan phadh layi

daaka taa nahi maareya.............

hoya ki je nachadi baanh phadh layi

daaka ta nai maareya..........😆 I LOVE this song!! I remember listening to it a while back!! The lyrics are so awesome!!😆😆 Thankoo for this song, Mehakoo!🤗🤗Muahhhhh!