'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 44

Originally posted by: marisa

anuuu 🤗 fantastic job again!! oh A playing prank on R was hilarious and i can visualize the mouth wide open act as well 😆 😆 simply luvin the way u r unfloding different layers of angie's character..its too good yar!! and the terrace scene is brilliant! 🤗

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Awesome fic! 👏 Pls continue soon! 😊

Originally posted by: Sanaya_86

Anuuuuuuu!! 🤗 😃 yaar im soo sorry for the late comment..maarna mat meiko ok! 😳 Sareenaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!🤗Main kabhi tere ko thodi naa maar sakti hoon, sweetheart! Muahhh!
did i tell u ur brilliant?think i have..well let me tell u again tht ur Brilliant.
ur descriptive narration is awesome n it really captures the reader.just as in the terrace scene where feelings of both the characters were just rightly defined n it surely was very real!
one can actually visualize the whole situation..the terrace,the sunset,their conversation.Very endearing! Aww thank you sooooo much, sweetheart!!🤗🤗So glad you enjoyed the terrace scene! I just find both these characters so interesting and endearing myself that I love delving into their minds!
..oh n the prank..if only u had a firecracker in her locker.Evil is it!? 😆 Not at all! I'll see if I can put in something next time!😈😆😆
Plz Continue soon.Will surely try, yaar! Thank you so much for taking the time out to comment!🤗Muahhh!

Originally posted by: Mosammad

Anu di, I didn't know you even had a ff. Someone should have enlightened me on this 😉 😆 😆

Anyway, you've got SOME writing skills lady, just so good 👏 And I loved the fact that Anjie didn't take Riddhima's side. Hahhh, our little (cough cough choke) Bholi bhali girl (rolls eyes) is steadily learning about how in life, support isn't always something that comes free 😆

Poor Anjie, worked so hard. I don't know if I should feel bad for her or happy for Atul. I'm in such a hectic stage right now. 😆 But I'm happy Atul cheered her up on time. Seems like they're getting somewhere! 😆 👏

Great job, my lovely! I loved it! 👏

Originally posted by: Mosammad

I commented and I didn't know? Woah, I musta been drunk or something! 😆