'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 40

Finally i read this.........😛.

Anu yaar this was so so so so so so so brilliant....... really...........🤗

While reading that part where angi was thinking abt smriti ,her death n situation after smriti's death, i really had goosefleshes
all over....... yaar u described each n every emotion so beautifully
that i could picture her death scene........awwwwww man n that
was scary...... really.........😭

Yaar anu ik jhappi de de....... main sachi ro rahi si on reading
that death part, 🤗🤗🤗as i realized that it is really very very hard to live
without ''MOTHER''.......Momma is the most important in one's
life n angi lost her mother at a very tender age n on top of that
ur words described her plight so aptly that my heart went
BOOOOMMMMMMM [Now don't ask me wat is this booom,
bas ho gaya tha]😭

Okay now moving onto next part.........😉
As usual i loved atul n sapna's interaction specially wen sapna
asked him directly abt angi.......heheheheeh kabhi na kabhi
bakra phasega hi........hihihihihi😆

Wen i read that 1000 watt smile on his face.......
i recalled our conversation abt our BOOTHE CHAMKOING
like 1000 WATT bulb on being insulted....... heheheheehe......😆

Yaar i m just lowing atul more n more....... the way he notice
even a minor action performed by angi really shows that
he lowes angi a lot.......... mind-blowing yaar........👏.👏

Then, last but not the least milli.........awwwwwwww milli is here.🤗
I m just lowing this more n more....... i can imagine glow on ur face
as u always missed mini n now u will make
Milli rock!!!!!!!!!!! muahhhhhhhhhh anu u are just
toooo goood...............🤗

And and and tubby????? tubby???? heheheheheeh FATTY MUST BE
BHERY BHERY HAPPY ON READING THIS..............
Veeru cum tubby cum fatty is a star elephant now hehehehe😆😆

Anu i just lowed it........ muahhhhhhhhhhh🤗

Originally posted by: vaarti

Whew!!! Ok! Just got done reading all of it in one shot and since I have been outta the loop for so long, u know I haven't read ANY of the comments…so these are solely my reactions, no bias, no prejudice!!

I just love the fact that you have twisted the existing tracks in DMG to suit AA. And not just that, given each incredulous track adequate explanation too, making it palatable…for instance the shack in the jungle!! It's refreshing to see that while Atul remains the sweet idiot, he's no longer the champu…his sensitivity charms…

And of course, that Anjie has another side, an explanation to her behavior has been beautifully elucidated…I loved the puppy scene…the need for Anjali to make sure no one was watching, guarding her real self so carefully was just a brilliant stroke!!

Thanks for giving Mili a mom!!! and some semblance of a family!! And Thanks for bringing Smriti into the picture!!

And finally, there are different kinds of originality…while some choose to rehash movies, some pick their favorite maudlin romance books as a base, I do not want to compare your with theirs…cos you have given us what we thirst for…a sensible, believable DMG, where AA are on top…and AR are just peripheral!!

Now so ppl don't start saying am lavishing praise on you cos I love you so, the plural for fruit is fruit…not fruits!!

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

Finally i read this.........😛.

Anu yaar this was so so so so so so so brilliant....... really...........🤗 Thank you so much, Mehakoo🤗🤗🤗

While reading that part where angi was thinking abt smriti ,her death n situation after smriti's death, i really had goosefleshes
all over....... yaar u described each n every emotion so beautifully
that i could picture her death scene........awwwwww man n that
was scary...... really.........😭

Yaar anu ik jhappi de de....... main sachi ro rahi si on reading
that death part, 🤗🤗🤗 Aww Mehakoo🤗🤗 I didn't mean to make you cry yaar! Jinni marzi jhappian laoji!🤗🤗as i realized that it is really very very hard to live
without ''MOTHER''.......Momma is the most important in one's
life n angi lost her mother at a very tender age n on top of that
ur words described her plight so aptly that my heart went
BOOOOMMMMMMM [Now don't ask me wat is this booom,
bas ho gaya tha]😭

Okay now moving onto next part.........😉
As usual i loved atul n sapna's interaction specially wen sapna
asked him directly abt angi.......heheheheeh kabhi na kabhi
bakra phasega hi........hihihihihi😆 Chal tu hassi taan sahi!🤗 Glad you enjoyed that part, yaar!

Wen i read that 1000 watt smile on his face.......
i recalled our conversation abt our BOOTHE CHAMKOING
like 1000 WATT bulb on being insulted....... heheheheehe......😆 LOL yes...in fact, I also remembered it instantly when I wrote that line😆😆

Yaar i m just lowing atul more n more....... the way he notice
even a minor action performed by angi really shows that
he lowes angi a lot.......... mind-blowing yaar........👏.👏

Then, last but not the least milli.........awwwwwwww milli is here.🤗
I m just lowing this more n more....... i can imagine glow on ur face
as u always missed mini n now u will make
Milli rock!!!!!!!!!!! muahhhhhhhhhh anu u are just
toooo goood...............🤗 Aww glad you liked her, yaar!🤗 I see that everyone is expecting a Minnie part 2 now, haina?😆...I considered just bringing Minnie in directly at one point as well, but then she was a little too connected with Armaan, haina? Wouldn't have been exactly right for Atul....what do you think?

And and and tubby????? tubby???? heheheheheeh FATTY MUST BE
BHERY BHERY HAPPY ON READING THIS..............
Veeru cum tubby cum fatty is a star elephant now hehehehe😆😆 ROFL! Yes, Fattyji was pleasantly surprise to see that the elephant was named Tubby😈😆😆

Anu i just lowed it........ muahhhhhhhhhhh🤗 Thank you so much for liking it so much, Mehakoo! Muaaaaaaaahhhh!🤗🤗

Haye Anuuuuuu!!legayee kuriye!!🤗ur immensely talented yaar!👏👏

The years seemed to fade away in that moment and he could see the 8 year old Anjali in front of him all of a sudden. He was almost about to pick her up and carry her to bed, before reality returned to him and he laughed at himself self-deprecatingly in his head. He reached a hand out and softly brushed her head, then slowly maneuvered the album out of her grasp and turned it over.

His heart turned over as he looked at Smriti, smiling that beautiful smile at him through the picture. He brushed a hand over it, and looked up at his daughter sleeping quietly. The daughter who was so like her father in almost every way….but she had gotten one thing from her mother…that wonderful smile…the one that lit up her entire face, but had sadly been so rare since quite a while now. He sighed to himself as he closed the album and kept it on the table. He went and found a blanket, and covered Anjali with it, brushing her cheek softly for a moment, before walking back to his room. He went straight to his bedside, and lifted the picture of Smriti lying on the bedside table. "I miss you, Smriti." he said to her softly, holding the frame close to him. "And so does your daughter. Why did you leave me alone to do this by myself? I just…never seem to be able to communicate with her properly! I wish…I wish you were here." He looked at her for a few moments, and then put the frame back on the table. He got up and turned to go and change, but then paused suddenly. He turned around once again, and kneeled next to the table, eye level with the picture. "Happy Anniversary, Smriti," he smiled at her. Then he got up and went finally went to change.
my favourite part..Totally capturing!! 👏 👏 👏 i was almost in tears.loved ur narrative style ..u made it soo real...just Amazing!!

n now Milli's here..more like minnie i guess but will try not to compare thm.ur rite Minnie is more closer to Armaan soo Milli was perrfect!Toy Ele' Tubby!!very sweet!😃

Update it soon plzz!😊