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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

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Haila anu, i just came back from college n saw ur PM..........

thankoooooooooo sooooooooo much for this beautiful surprise.........You are always always welcome, Mehakoo sweetheart!🤗🤗🤗Muaahh!!

Bada vadiya title ditta hai JANGAL MEIN MANGAL...........👏👏👏 Thank you so much, yaar!

Bade notty hunde ja rahe ho tussi puttar ji😆 LOL, Notty??! How??😆😆

Okay now back to FF.......

Atul THE Star Navigator and HAPPY CAMPER🤣🤣

Kitho kitho word dhoondh ke layai hain😆 I think I've read these phrases at some point of time or other and the ones that are funny like that stay in my head😆😆Wat did atul got as prize???? A COMPASS???? Bada wala compass😆 Haanji ji, he got a bade wala compass, a swiss knife and special hiking boots😉😆😆

Chalo atleast angi is not scared of ants😆😆😆........Woh to paagal ditch saamne aa gaya nahi toh angi wudn't have stopped😆 Eggjactly! Angie our supergirl wouldn't stop for just anything!😎😆

Yaar anu pata nahi kyun???? but wen i m imagining atul carrying angi, i can't control my hassi🤣, i can imagine angi in atul's arms with her legs dropping down,as she is bhery tall na😆😆, Mere mind vich badi hi funny image aa rahi hai, pata nahi main tainu samjha pa rahi haan ki nahi, but je tu mere mind wali image dekh lain, taan hass hass dohri ho jaayein😆😆 LOL, Mehakoo, mainu pata si ki tu iven hi sochengi😆😆...Yaar she is not THAT tall also! Can't you picture him carrying her from the holi pics?😉😆😆...waise bhi I tried to make the scene not so "romantic" or whatever😆😆

But sucha nice scene yaar........our sau munde ne pehalan poocheya n surity ditti ki ''I won't drop u''😆😆 Glad you still liked it yaar😆😆...Main iho hi taan sabh nu samjhan di koshish kar rahin haan ki munda sacchin bahut sau hai😉😆😆

He was feeling so proud after he lifted her, hai na.......Aakhir angi kya samajhati hai.......humare atul mein taakat nahi hai???? Angi has forgotten that our atul is BLACK BELT CHAMPION....... n he is strong enough to pick her up.........waise vi pau killo di taan hai😆😆 Thank you!! That is what I was trying to imply without writing it out!😆😆...Black belt champion oh iven taan nahin ban gaya, right?...and yeah, she is a total sukkad dandi, so it's definitely not a problem😆😆

While carrying her,atul must be singing this in his mind

Kache doodh warga swaad ni

Tere haaseyan cho simadaa pyaar

Jiddan galli de vichon lang jaayein

Kandaan te jawaani jaandi aa😆 LOL, nice song Mehakoo!😆😆

Now arey wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh atul found a blanket👏👏👏, thank lord there was a blanket,otherwise atul wud have to take off his shirt n offer it to angi, so that angi cud be protected from cold, otherwise shashank wud have said that ''Ek shirt ke liye tumne meri beti ko thand mein maar diya'' And bichara atul toh double shirt bhi nahi pehanta😆 Wah bhai wah, Mehak! Kya logic hai😆😆...You'll compare everything to what your safed billa did in the same situation?😆😆...Saada Atul is a unique man, yaar!😉😆 Anu yaar damn creative imagination🤗 Aww thanks, Mehakoo🤗It's not really creative, but nice of you to say so..Muaahh!

Tooooo gud.............👏 THank you so much, yaar!Jnagal vich sachi mangal ho gaya..........sheran nu atul di shayari n nave nave gaane sunan nu jo mil rahe ne😆 LOL, haanji, it's suspension of belief...main jangli jaanwaran baare socheya hi nahin😆😆

Random- Main punjabi romantic FF likhan wali haan😆😆. An exclusive part only for u.......anu ji😆

Okay now atul singing this to angi

Dil nu tere naal kinna pyaar hai........

Saanu te kehana vi nahi aunda..........

Haaye..........saanu te kehana vi nahi aunda.............

And angi saying.........

Mar janeya nazar kaisi laayi ve, meri tang tutt gayi, tainu main pehalan hi keha si, changi tarah soch vichar kar ke ke hi agge chalanga.......par tainu taan aakhar aayi hoyi si, pata nahi kehri gal di kaali machi hoyi si....... hun lai lai swaad........utton mainu gaane sunai janda hai........moonh sil davangi........chup chap konne lag ke baith ja........ nahi taan chittar te hath dharan nu mainu der nai lagani..........lips utte fingers rakh chheti kar........ mainu jehar chadh reha hai......... 😆

Atul- Anjali mainu maar kar de, main jaan ke rasta nahi bhuleya, mere compass ne mainu dhoka de ditta, main onu ulta phadeya hoya si, khasmanu khane ne daseya hi nahi ki ''Paa ji tussi mainu ulta phadeya hoya hai''😆......please anjali mainu jehar chadhi hoyi nazaraan naal na dekh, darr lagada hai........aggo main eho jihi galati nahi karoonga.......😆 ROFL, Mehakoo!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Sacchin hass hass ke mera tidh dukhan lag piya hai!! Yaar you should TOTALLY write a fan-fic!! I'm serious!! Yaar, it will be AWESOME!!

Edited by nureat01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaya_86

ANNNUUUUUUUUUUU!!u finally updated!! 👏
AWESOME WORK!!my favourite part was "Static"..AHAA,Angie felt the current han..just amazing..
The characters seem sooo real!!Man Atul's Evergreen Humming is Adorable..one can actually visualise every single bit ..SUPERB!! 👏 👏
i know ur amazing brain cells need some rest but im anxious as alwayz! 😃
Plzz Continue soon.



Thank you so much, Sareena!🤗Glad you liked the Static part😳....lol, my amazing brain cells?😆😆...Will surely try to update as soon as possible😃😃...Waise bhi, my own urge to update is usually pretty strong....but time constraints and life tensions come in the way usually😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

Annuu: 🤗🤗🤗 Ifffyyyyyy!! 🤗🤗🤗
B.R.I.L.L.I.A.N.T!! 👏 👏 👏 Thank you so much, yaar!!
thank God you updated your ff.. us stupid track ke baare mein soch soch ke mera dimaag kharaab ho raha tha! I can totally understand, I feel the exact same way😉😆
anyway, just loved the title "jungle main mangal" 😆 😆 😆 LOL yeah, everyone was expecting it in a way anyways I think..."Jungle mein Mangal"😆😆

"Anjali looked at him in bemusement. "Very impressive, Dr. Atul. Well, lead on then." She said, her tone mocking him slightly. "I guess that's our best option right now."
oh, how much i loved the sarcasm there! Glad you enjoyed it yaar!😉😆

continue soon! 😊 Will surely try! Meanwhile I know you have other FFs to entertain you😉😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: marisa

👏 👏 👏 superb anu!! luved it 😃 "la deja vu..static ..star navigator..amazing plants.." bahat maza aya 😆 😆 atul's care n concern 4angie..sooo sweet...thnx 4updatin.. 😛



Thank you so much, Marisa!😳 Glad you enjoyed all those parts!
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Posted: 17 years ago
ANUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!
Wow!! Loved this update to bitss!! 😉 Atul singing was soo cuteee!! 😃 And then endingg..hai..continue..don't keep us in suspense!! 😳 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Leenasmg

ANUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!
Wow!! Loved this update to bitss!! 😉 Atul singing was soo cuteee!! 😃 And then endingg..hai..continue..don't keep us in suspense!! 😳 😆 😆



Thank you so much, Leenu!🤗🤗...A little suspense is good na?😉😆....will try to update soon yaar😳😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Edited by mehak_kapoor - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
First of all 👏

Happy Camper/Star Navigator...great names 😊

The man is explaining varieties of flora around, while being lost in the jungle in the middle of the night!! Only Atul can do that.😆. He is one of a kind isn't he? 😃

Anjie still trying to hold her defenses strong... hmmm...but looks like Dr Atul is finally able to atleast punch a crack there. Liked the way Anjie explained away what she felt when she held Atul's hand by calling it "Static". Atul carrying Anjie 😍 😍. How i wish they would show this on the show too. Lagta hai Mehak ne usko bhi bournvita pilaya hai.

Very well thought out and executed jungle scene i must say. It is just as it should be...nothing more, nothing less. Atul is so sober, subtle, and yet effective in getting through to her. I like the way you are taking this relationship ahead, esp Anjie slowly warming up to him. The buildup to her eventual realization of what Atul really means to her is impressive. No unnecessary display of emotions, just enough to make both of them understand what is going on.
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Posted: 17 years ago
@Mehak: LOL I just realized AM can also work for us 😉 😆 😆 btw, nice song for Angie our "Jhansi ki Rani" 😆 😆 aur meri "naughtiness" ka level thankfully kaafi kam hai compared to a lot of other ppl 😉 😆 😆 and wow yaar! You gave ULK to AA1! Now I can fully understand you much you like them 😆 😆

btw trust me, oh FF total hit hovega! Everyone will love it!

@Tapasya: Thank you. Will continue soon.

@Hemangi: Thank you so much 😳 Glad you enjoyed the jungle scene. Yes I did try to make it atleast slightly different from the usual "jungle/tabela" variety in every single show cuz I'm frankly pretty bored of those. Plus AA1 being such different characters gives the chance to explore more 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nureat01

@Mehak: LOL I just realized AM can also work for us 😉 😆 😆 btw, nice song for Angie our "Jhansi ki Rani" 😆 😆 aur meri "naughtiness" ka level thankfully kaafi kam hai compared to a lot of other ppl 😉 😆 😆 and wow yaar! You gave ULK to AA1! Now I can fully understand you much you like them 😆 😆 Bebe!!!!!!! nottiness iko type di nahi hundi........😆😆 tu notty hai mere vargi😆😆 je koi saddi discussion padhada hove...... taan apan nu notty nahi taan kya sau bache samajhega???? heheheheh n AM rocks na😆

btw trust me, oh FF total hit hovega! Everyone will love it! Dono mil ke likhange,,,,,, tu atul da part likhi n angi da😆

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