'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 29

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWW dat was such a cuteeeeeeeeee n sweeeeeeeeeeeeettttt
prt yaar cho nice
jus luv da way atul sings kya timing hai 😆
cont super soooooooooooooooonnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

Originally posted by: nureat01

He got up, and offered her a hand to help her up. She looked at it for a moment again, and he felt a sense of dj vu from earlier in the day on the bus.

Loved the reference, a la deja vu! 😍

She looked up at him with clear astonishment on her face. He bobbed both his eyebrows at her in response as if to say, "What did you think?"

Made me laugh. It's one of those days.

Lovely part. Felt it showed alot of you in the writing, in terms of thoughts/ideas, with the old-world romantic taking over 😉 😆 Angie feeling delicate, vulnerable in his arms 😍 Very sweet, indeed. Atul is a wonder as usual, the cutest guy around.

Great update, hope you're well 🤗

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

Loved the reference, a la deja vu! 😍 Thanks, yaar! Glad you liked it!

Made me laugh. It's one of those days. It was INTENDED to make you laugh!😆😆...So wait...you're only laughing cuz you're having a weird day?? Damn it! There goes my lame attempt at humor down the drain again😆😆

Lovely part. Felt it showed alot of you in the writing, in terms of thoughts/ideas, with the old-world romantic taking over 😉 😆 Thank you so much, yaar! Yes, it did show a lot of me, mainly my loser archaic romantic side😆😆Angie feeling delicate, vulnerable in his arms 😍 Very sweet, indeed. Atul is a wonder as usual, the cutest guy around.

Great update, hope you're well 🤗 Thank you for dropping in, Veeru!🤗🤗 Glad you liked it! I'm doing well, and I hope you are as well!

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

ANU DIIIII!!!! MERI PYAAAARRRRRIIIII DIIIIII!!!! I LOVE U I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! Firstly, aapne apne exams ke time par continue kiya mere kehne par, uske liye I love you!!!! Phir, aapne itna khoobsurat part likha uske liye MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!! 🤗 Mera Atul bechaara!!! Best navigator award! Why does that not surprise me!!! 😆 😆 😆 And lastly, aapne meri favorite flim ka gaan daala!!! Masha Allah! I love you!!!!!!! Of course you know that already! Diiiiii, you make me fall in love with Atul-Anjali more and more and more and more!!!! Haaaaiiiyeee.... kya baat hai aapki Di!!!! Honestly this was me during this part...
😍!!!! I love this fic!!!! Di you CANNOT ever end this fic!!!! It's amazing. I love how you had atul bobbing his eyebrows at Anjali. Lol. Cute, waise even I was wondering how is he going to lift her, then I remembered ther Holi pic, also I remembered that Anjali is a twig. Aur waise bhi Atul ne Armaan se dosti ki hai toh body building bhi saath saath karte honge dono bhai! lolz. Kitne pyaar se utthaya usne Anjali ko!!!!😍 😍 😍 Continue soon di!!! Aur haan. Tussi fikar naa karna! twaade exams chungey hon ge.

love u hamesha,
Komzie

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Haila anu, i just came back from college n saw ur PM..........

thankoooooooooo sooooooooo much for this beautiful surprise.........

Bada vadiya title ditta hai JANGAL MEIN MANGAL...........👏👏👏

Bade notty hunde ja rahe ho tussi puttar ji😆

Okay now back to FF.......

Atul THE Star Navigator and HAPPY CAMPER🤣🤣

Kitho kitho word dhoondh ke layai hain😆 Wat did atul got as prize???? A COMPASS???? Bada wala compass😆

Chalo atleast angi is not scared of ants😆😆😆........Woh to paagal ditch saamne aa gaya nahi toh angi wudn't have stopped😆

Yaar anu pata nahi kyun???? but wen i m imagining atul carrying angi, i can't control my hassi🤣, i can imagine angi in atul's arms with her legs dropping down,as she is bhery tall na😆😆, Mere mind vich badi hi funny image aa rahi hai, pata nahi main tainu samjha pa rahi haan ki nahi, but je tu mere mind wali image dekh lain, taan hass hass dohri ho jaayein😆😆

But sucha nice scene yaar........our sau munde ne pehalan poocheya n surity ditti ki ''I won't drop u''😆😆

He was feeling so proud after he lifted her, hai na.......Aakhir angi kya samajhati hai.......humare atul mein taakat nahi hai???? Angi has forgotten that our atul is BLACK BELT CHAMPION....... n he is strong enough to pick her up.........waise vi pau killo di taan hai😆😆

While carrying her,atul must be singing this in his mind

Kache doodh warga swaad ni

Tere haaseyan cho simadaa pyaar

Jiddan galli de vichon lang jaayein

Kandaan te jawaani jaandi aa😆

Now arey wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh atul found a blanket👏👏👏, thank lord there was a blanket,otherwise atul wud have to take off his shirt n offer it to angi, so that angi cud be protected from cold, otherwise shashank wud have said that ''Ek shirt ke liye tumne meri beti ko thand mein maar diya'' And bichara atul toh double shirt bhi nahi pehanta😆 Anu yaar damn creative imagination🤗

Tooooo gud.............👏 Jnagal vich sachi mangal ho gaya..........sheran nu atul di shayari n nave nave gaane sunan nu jo mil rahe ne😆

Random- Main punjabi romantic FF likhan wali haan😆😆. An exclusive part only for u.......anu ji😆

Okay now atul singing this to angi

Dil nu tere naal kinna pyaar hai........

Saanu te kehana vi nahi aunda..........

Haaye..........saanu te kehana vi nahi aunda.............

And angi saying.........

Mar janeya nazar kaisi laayi ve, meri tang tutt gayi, tainu main pehalan hi keha si, changi tarah soch vichar kar ke ke hi agge chalanga.......par tainu taan aakhar aayi hoyi si, pata nahi kehri gal di kaali machi hoyi si....... hun lai lai swaad........utton mainu gaane sunai janda hai........moonh sil davangi........chup chap konne lag ke baith ja........ nahi taan chittar te hath dharan nu mainu der nai lagani..........lips utte fingers rakh chheti kar........ mainu jehar chadh reha hai......... 😆

Atul- Anjali mainu maar kar de, main jaan ke rasta nahi bhuleya, mere compass ne mainu dhoka de ditta, main onu ulta phadeya hoya si, khasmanu khane ne daseya hi nahi ki ''Paa ji tussi mainu ulta phadeya hoya hai''😆......please anjali mainu jehar chadhi hoyi nazaraan naal na dekh, darr lagada hai........aggo main eho jihi galati nahi karoonga.......😆