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Posted: 17 years ago
Wowww!!! A totally cliche scene yet it was so totally cute!!!! 😳 😳 😃 Loved it....especially all the interesting interaction between the two and the best part was the

A current seemed to leap from their joined hands suddenly, and their eyes jumped to each other simultaneously for a split second before she suddenly withdrew her hand. "Static?" she said in a little confusion as she shook her hand for a bit before placing it in his again, and gingerly getting up.

That was such a cute way to show the growing attraction between them....I an so imagine the look on Angie's face as she said "static" 🤣🤣 so cute!!! and so confused🤣
And also cute was Atul's songs....I immediately put on Masha Allah when I read the first two lines

😆 😆 😆
That Masha Allah at the ending was just break taking! 😳

Continue soon! And keep Atul singing such cute songs!😆

Now I can just imagine Atul singing "Subah subah yeh ka hua...kyun main hawaon pe chal raha hoon...(from 'I see you') in the morning in the shed (if they survive the night that is) 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: xMarauderx

Wowww!!! A totally cliche scene yet it was so totally cute!!!! 😳 😳 😃 Loved it....especially all the interesting interaction between the two and the best part was the Thank you so much😳...glad you enjoyed it despite the cliche😉😆😆

A current seemed to leap from their joined hands suddenly, and their eyes jumped to each other simultaneously for a split second before she suddenly withdrew her hand. "Static?" she said in a little confusion as she shook her hand for a bit before placing it in his again, and gingerly getting up.

That was such a cute way to show the growing attraction between them....I an so imagine the look on Angie's face as she said "static" 🤣🤣 so cute!!! and so confused🤣 Angie's in massive denial, and that's the best explanation she could come up with😉😆...Atul's much beyond the attraction stage now...as one of my friends mentioned, he is now totally "Lovestruck"😆😆
And also cute was Atul's songs....I immediately put on Masha Allah when I read the first two lines

😆 😆 😆
That Masha Allah at the ending was just break taking! 😳 Thank you so much for liking that part😳😳

Continue soon! And keep Atul singing such cute songs!😆 Will surely try to continue soon! And not to worry! Atul aur singing ka janam janam ka naat hai😉😆😆

Now I can just imagine Atul singing "Subah subah yeh ka hua...kyun main hawaon pe chal raha hoon...(from 'I see you') in the morning in the shed (if they survive the night that is) 😆 LOL, Atul may have sung that song except he's already sung it in an earlier chapter😉😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
anu, mehakie...oye mehakie di bacchi...sirf tu aur anu kyon AM padhenge...main kya ghaas chadne gayee hun...oye tum dono likho, te main padhangi..(usual disclaimer of forgive my punjabi)

Anu, back to SNT:

MASALLAH, meri jaan, mashallah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JANGAL MEIN MANGAL??!!!!!!! 👏

tuney hoshwaalon ko daal hi diya...mind-blowing , mind-blowing....

hum zubaan se keh na paye
unko haaley dil kabhi
aur woh samjhe nahin ye
khamoshi kya cheez hai




Atul picks up Anjie....oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhh.....brilliantly done, easily , effortlessly , mind-blowingly done...Just like it should be. no melodrama, no unnecessary dialogues....just plain, simple, chemistry..........did u see the way he did it in the promo...would have taken a lot of people by surprise , but not me...my atul, the superman....and anjie, the dainty damsel....

u really did me in anu...if only , if only ....things could be soooooooooooo sensitive all the time....

static indeed!!!!!!!!!! ha ha ha.......anjie, my baby, tu kab tak mana karegi..

mujhe pyaar tumse nahin hai nahin hai
magar maine yeh raaz ab tak na jaana
ki kyon pyaari lagti hai baatein tumhaari
main kyon tumse milne ka dhoondhoo bahaana
kabhi maine chaaha tumhe chhoo ke dekhoon
kabhi maine chaaha tumhe paas lana
magar phir bhi, is baat ka toh yakeen hai
mujhe pyaar tumse nahin hai nahin hai...

and atul's reactoin to the sorry...and to say that i totally understand...he does, doesnt he?? he prob understands her better than she herself...

oh, i think i am not going to analyze it too much today...just enjoy it in my heart...mauja hi mauja ...

or should i say jungel mein mangal...

atul not being able to look away from the sleeping anjie's face...

chanda re chanda re
kabhi toh zameen par aa
baithenge baatein karenge

tak dhina dhin...

dam bhar jo udhar muh phere
oh chanda
main unse pyaar kar loonga
baatein hazaar kar loonga..

sorry if this reads like a medley of songs, but i did sooooooooooooooo enjoy it today...gaaney phoot phoot kar nikal rahein hai...



Edited by dmg2c - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
@Sona: Thank you sooooooooooooo much, yaar! 🤗 🤗

Glad you enjoyed it so much! I am totally enjoying your little medley of songs 😆 😆

I didn't see Atul picking her up in the promo, but I've been awwing over that pic that was posted of him holding her 😳 😆 😆

Thank you for understanding the subtleties of things always, yaar! Glad you liked the sorry scene, cuz I felt it was an important step forward in their relationship...it is the first time she fully in a way came forth and apologized for being mean/rude to him...the thing I love the most about him is that he always sees beyond what she may say or act like in the moment...that understanding...it probably doesn't exist in real life, but I think it fits perfectly on the kind of character that Atul is, haina? 😳 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
anu, understanding hota hai, yaar, real life mein bhi hota hai...

soch, agar main across cyber space yeh samajh sakti hoon what u were trying to say or what u were thinking when u wrote something...when u find someone u love the most in the world, someone who is soooooo close to your heart, toh understanding has to happen girl...that is love isnt it??????

and yes, totally...it totally fits atul...thats him all over...just innate perception and sensitivity personified...

and absolutely, the sorry was totally a watershed in the relationship and in the resolution of anjie's own personal probs too...it is the first time she has actually come atleast a few steps towards him and related to him in some way, even if its not exactly coming half way to meet him...but its a beginning....and for her its a very , very big deal...

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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu jaan!
🤗 🤗 🤗

Masha Allah... 😍
This chapter just blew me away!!!

Poor Angie! She just doesn't do well under stress, does she? Awww! Her venting all her frustrations out on Atul reminded me of that scene just before the Valentine's day party...That was a classic scene... 😭 Angie tries so hard to mask her feelings and then it all just comes tumbling out unexpectedly. She's really more vulnerable than she wants to admit.

Oh, Atul's such a darling! Trying to comfort Angie and navigate through the jungle...Loved the Star Navigator and Happy Camper bits! 😆 I use the Happy Camper label sometimes!
Atul's "amazing" plants... 😊 I can only imagine his happiness in that sort of situation!

Angie's second panic attack made me feel sooo sad, yaar! 😕 Man, heels are NOT made for jungle detours! But then she's not one to leave her heels behind, na?
This scene was what I was referring to earlier...It captures her anger and dismay perfectly, and it's so in-character that I actually flinched while reading it!

[Quote]But this time, she extended her hand slowly and placed it in his. A current seemed to leap from their joined hands suddenly, and their eyes jumped to each other simultaneously for a split second before she suddenly withdrew her hand.[/Quote]
Aaaaaah! Such a magical moment!!! *dhak dhak dhak dhak* Beautifully written, Anu! 👏

"Static?" 😕 Wohooo! Even if she's in denial, she felt something! And Atul knows it! 😳

The part when Atul picks Angie up was so sweet! It really must've been easy to carry her...Once again, there's more to Atul than can be seen! And Angie's apology...That certainly was unexpected! But it was wonderful how she wanted to keep talking and Atul just gently cut her off. His understanding of her feelings and intentions is already so deep, and it's only the beginning...

And finally, I can't not mention the ending of the chapter!
Awwwwww! 😳 The way that you described Angie sleeping with the moonlight falling on her, and Atul's awestruck reaction...Blew me away yet again, yaar! This would be another scene worth filming on PS. And Masha Allah...Such an ethereal picture can only be described by a song as beautiful as that. *sigh*

Okay, this is getting too long so I'll stop now! 😉
God, each reply just gets longer and longer! 😆 That just goes to say how much I love this FF, Anu! 🤗 I can't wait to continue reading! What a cliffhanger!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

Anu jaan!
🤗 🤗 🤗 Awww Borna!🤗🤗🤗Finally you made an appearance!

Masha Allah... 😍
This chapter just blew me away!!! Thank you so much, yaar!😳

Poor Angie! She just doesn't do well under stress, does she? No, she doesn't... Awww! Her venting all her frustrations out on Atul reminded me of that scene just before the Valentine's day party...That was a classic scene... 😭 Angie tries so hard to mask her feelings and then it all just comes tumbling out unexpectedly. She's really more vulnerable than she wants to admit. Exactly! It really is hard work being the Ice Queen 24/7...there are cracks in her perfected defense mechanism even though she doesn't fully realize it😉

Oh, Atul's such a darling! Trying to comfort Angie and navigate through the jungle...Loved the Star Navigator and Happy Camper bits! 😆 I use the Happy Camper label sometimes! LOL..you do??😆😆...I've used it only a couple of times myself...I think I read it somewhere once and it totally cracked me up😆
Atul's "amazing" plants... 😊 I can only imagine his happiness in that sort of situation! LOL...yes, he was pretty much in plant heaven there😆😆

Angie's second panic attack made me feel sooo sad, yaar! 😕 Man, heels are NOT made for jungle detours! But then she's not one to leave her heels behind, na? I think she wasn't expecting to trek around so much😆😆...No one gave her the memo, so she thought her heels would be ok😆😆
This scene was what I was referring to earlier...It captures her anger and dismay perfectly, and it's so in-character that I actually flinched while reading it!

[Quote]But this time, she extended her hand slowly and placed it in his. A current seemed to leap from their joined hands suddenly, and their eyes jumped to each other simultaneously for a split second before she suddenly withdrew her hand.[/Quote]
Aaaaaah! Such a magical moment!!! *dhak dhak dhak dhak* Beautifully written, Anu! 👏 Awww thank you so much, Borna yaar😳

"Static?" 😕 Wohooo! Even if she's in denial, she felt something! And Atul knows it! 😳 Aren't these two the cutest thing together??😍😍...No wonder I moon over them so much😳😆😆....and Atul's practically an antaryaami now given that all he does know about her that she has no clue about😆😆

The part when Atul picks Angie up was so sweet! It really must've been easy to carry her...Once again, there's more to Atul than can be seen! Yes yes! There most definitely is! And Angie's apology...That certainly was unexpected! Remember I like to throw unexpected surprises about our Angie darling?😉😆😆 But it was wonderful how she wanted to keep talking and Atul just gently cut her off. His understanding of her feelings and intentions is already so deep, and it's only the beginning... Yes it is...and for some reason when I sit down to write him, that's what touches me about him the most...I can so clearly picture the Atul in the show being like this as well (not the Champu one)....the man is just unbelievably sensitive to her, isn't he?😳

And finally, I can't not mention the ending of the chapter!
Awwwwww! 😳 The way that you described Angie sleeping with the moonlight falling on her, and Atul's awestruck reaction...Blew me away yet again, yaar! This would be another scene worth filming on PS. And Masha Allah...Such an ethereal picture can only be described by a song as beautiful as that. *sigh* Aww thank you soooooooo much for liking that scene yaar!😳...that song really is so beautiful, haina?😍...exactly, I couldn't figure out a better song to show that moment with him being just dazzled by her sleeping in the moonlight😳

Okay, this is getting too long so I'll stop now! 😉
God, each reply just gets longer and longer! 😆 That just goes to say how much I love this FF, Anu! 🤗 I can't wait to continue reading! What a cliffhanger!!! Thank you so much for liking it this much, Borna!🤗
🤗🤗...You are always so sweet with your replies! Thank you for all the encouragement! As for the cliffhanger...I figured that was a good enough place to stop to hopefully keep you all guessing😉😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
CHAPTER 11: New Beginnings

She sat up quickly, and he fell back on the floor just as quickly in response, still blinking at her in shock.

"What the hell are you doing?" she asked in shocked anger.
"Uhh…I…I…" he frantically looked around trying to come up with a plausible explanation. "Fruits!" he said suddenly.

"Fruits?! What are you talking about?" she asked, giving him a look which implied that he was a complete nutjob.

He fumbled around in his pocket for a second, and finally pulled out something which he held in front of her. "Fruits," he repeated. "I...uhh…I found some wild fruits while I was looking for firewood, and I..uhh…I thought you might be hungry, so…uhh…I was…uhh…trying to wake you up to ask you if you wanted to eat." he finished, looking at the ground.

"Oh," she said, somewhat at a loss for words, "Uhh…Thank you."

He looked up at that, and breathed an inward sigh of relief when he saw that she wasn't angry any longer. Close shave there Dr. Atul, he thought to himself.

"You're welcome," he smiled at her hesitantly and handed the fruit to her.

She took it and looked at it a little warily, wondering if she should eat it.

"It's alright," he said, as he noticed her hesitation. "These are perfectly safe to eat, and very tasty actually. I had some the last time I went camping."

"Oh?" she said, still clearly hesitant, but she still bit into the fruit anyways. She chewed on it for a bit, and then her eyes widened. "This is goooood!" she said, taking another bite.

Atul's smile widened and he said, "I told you, haina?" He then walked over to the pile of wood and started arranging some of the pieces them towards the middle. Soon he had a healthy fire roaring, and both of them sat around it, warming their hands. There was a companionable silence for a few minutes as they both stared into the fire, lost in their own thoughts.

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Meanwhile, back at the camp

Dr. Keerti and Shubhankar were conferring with each other that it was really late now, and there was still no sign of Atul and Anjali.

"It's gotten really dark now, Dr. Shubhankar. They should've been back by now." said Dr. Keerti in a worried tone.

"I agree. They should have been back by now." He paused, and then added after thinking for a moment. "I was talking to some of the villagers earlier, and they had mentioned that most of them use a shortcut through the forest to get to the camp. Do you think it's possible that they may have gotten lost on their way back?"

Armaan, Sapna, and Riddhima walked over just then, looking very worried as well.

"Dr. Shubhankar," said Armaan, "We are all really worried about Atul and Anjali. They've been gone for a pretty long time now, and I think they may be lost on the way back. I think we should go and look for them."

"You're right, Dr. Armaan," he replied. " I was just discussing this with Dr. Keerti. I'm going to go and have a talk with the few villagers who are still here with their relatives and see if one of them is willing to help guide us in our search. Oh, and ask Dr. Karan if he can help as well. We will all leave in a few minutes, ok?"

"Yes, Dr. Shubhankar," said Armaan.

As Shubhankar and Keerti turned away and walked over to the villagers, Armaan turned to Sapna and Riddhima.

Riddhima was on the verge of tears and Sapna tried to console her. "Don't worry, Riddhima! Everything will be fine."

"Pata nahin Di kis haal mein hogi, Sapna! And it's so dark now! How will they find their way to the camp?" she said

"Arey Riddhima! Don't worry! Atul hai na uske saath! He is very good at all this camping and navigating stuff! He was just telling me something about it the other day only. So don't worry! I'm sure they're both fine!" said Sapna, trying to reassure her and maybe herself a little bit as well.

"Haan, you guys!" interrupted Armaan. "Don't panic! I'm sure we'll find them soon enough. Don't take tension, alright? We'll soon be back with Atul and Anjali in tow!"

Karan then joined him, and Dr. Shubhankar also walked back with two villagers in tow, and so the five of them set out to look for Atul and Anjali.

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Back at the Shack

"So…you know a lot about this camping stuff and all, don't you?" said Anjali after a while.

He looked up from the fire and saw that she was half-smiling at him. The firelight gave her an ethereal glow yet again. His heart gave what was by now a familiar lurch. He cleared his throat and said, "Yes, I do. I've had a passion for nature since I was very young. Papa used to take me out to camping trips every summer since the age of 8." He said, nostalgia creeping into his voice now.

"You miss him." She said, not really asking but stating it.

"Yes, I do. Very very much." He said with a sigh.

"Doesn't he live with you? You should go visit him then."

He smiled at that, a hint of sadness evident in his eyes. "I wish I could."

She looked at him in confusion, and was about to say something else when he continued, "Papa passed away when I was 17. AIDS. Mom followed a year later. I think she was never able to emerge from the grief of losing him." He said, almost talking to himself.

"I'm so sorry, Atul!" said Anjali, feeling at a loss for words. "I had no idea…I…"

"It's alright, Anjali," he said, coming out of reminiscing and smiling at her. "How would you have known, hmm? He worked at Sanjeevani too, you know.

"He did?" she asked curiously.

"Yes, he started his internship right here, just like I did. Dr. Omesh Joshi. Everyone called him Omi though."

"Dr. Omi? Oh my god! You're Dr. Omi's son?"

"Did you know him?" he asked in confusion.

She nodded, "For a short while, when I was very young. Mom and Dad used to bring me over to Sanjeevani once in a while when there was a break from school. I will always remember…he used to take me to the cafeteria and treat me to chocolate pastries. And…" she started laughing as another vivid memory came to her. "And he would always sing that song for me…Anjali, Anjali, Anjali…pyaari Anjali Anjali Anjali.

"Do you mean that one from that old movie…what was the name? Anjali?"

"Yes! That's the one! How did the song go again?" She tried to sing it, "Anjali Anjali…
"Anjali Anjali Anjali…humaari Anjali Anjali Anjali" he completed for her.

She laughed again, and joined in, "Anjali Anjali…." And they both sang it while laughing together.

"He was a wonderful man." She said, once they both subsided again. "Dad always talked about what an amazing doctor and human being he was."

"Yes, Papa was very much in awe of Dr. Shashank himself…as we all are even today," said Atul with a laugh.

She smiled slightly at that, but didn't say anything.

"Anjali?" he said after a moment.

"Hmmm?"

"Can I ask you something?

"Yes?"

"Uhh…" he hesitated a bit.

"What is it, Atul?"

"Can we be friends now?" he asked, the words coming out in a bit of a rush.

She looked at him for a moment, and then a smile slowly broke out onto her face. "Yes we can, Atul." She said, holding out a hand.

He looked at the hand she was offering, and with a huge grin on his face, put out his own hand and shook hers. "Friends." He said.

"Friends," she repeated with a smile as she shook his hand back.

Phase I accomplished, Dr. Atul, he thought to himself.
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Posted: 17 years ago
okay right now i m going offline, but i will be back after two hrs n will post my comments........ yaar nave nave gaane vi sochane ne 😆 😆

Muahhhhhhhhhh 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaaaaaaaaaay you finnally updated!

continue soooooooon pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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