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ifrahnaqash thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Smokinnnn *Says it like The Mask* 😆 😆
Anuuu.. 🤗 What an amazing part it was!! 👏 👏 👏
don't wanna embarrass you.. but have you ever thought of writing a book? if no, then start thinking about it from now! n trust me, i'll be the first one to buy it!

comming back to your FF, really loved reading the part in which Anjali's playing with the puppies and Atul watches her.. even i'd never thought that she had this whole new, astounding side to her! n i just hope she wins the IOTM award!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu....once again..wonderful writing 👏 . Boy, Anjie 😊 😊 playing with those puppies had me smiling too 😊. That was a real nice touch you gave her character. I liked the way Atul understood her attempts to hide her hurt, and then saying "sorry", for the pain she was going thru. The maturity with which he handles the situation when facing her, trying to find out what is wrong with her was superb. She is going to be a tough nut to crack !!! Wish the DMG creatives would come up with such stuff too.

Oh...the Armaan-Sapna scene was nice too. Always liked their relationship, though the creatives never explored it much.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu u can never be random yaar 🤗

Once again BRILLIANT update, and u made my evening....... 😉 😉

Okay back to ur story..........

Yaar i m really feeling bad for angi now....... and i feel like embracing LR with sumthing........everytime angi starts her open convo with shashank, she has to butt in 😡

Anyways....... i m so happy that atleast atul is noticing her pain.......do u remember we use to discuss this that atul shud be shown comforting angi in her hard times???? Unfortunately in the show it seems to be impossible, as they have totally changed the track n angi's character.......... but dearest anu u fulfilled my dream, of seeing atul taking care of angi's feelings 👏 👏 👏 Loove u soooooooo much 🤗

Now, i loved the way angi said ''The Intern of the Month award will be mine'' reminded me of initial angi....... i can just imagine her face with expressions of ''Ridhima i will kill U'' 😆 😆 😆 I hope she do sumthing like this ASAP......... 😆


And yaar after a long time...... i can imagine armaan saying puhlezzzzz n making those cute actions with his hands, since one week i haven't seen him like that....... poor baby is crying n crying n crying........thankoo for this also 🤗

AND NOW PARTYYYYYYYYYYY TIME 🥳 🥳

They are going for Medical camp.........BALLE BALLE 🥳 I noe uthe kuch mazaa aun wala hai....... i hope this time angi get stuck in the middle of forest 🤣

And last but not the least....... angi is sucha soft person at heart.......... yaar kinni sohne tareeke naal tu aakhri wal apart likheya hai........ haayeeeeee...... i can totally imagine angi sitting amidst those puppies n laughing........ wah bhai wah

ANU KI HO GAYI WAH BHAI WAH 🤗 🤗

Yaar anu....... no doubt u are being adored....... u are sucha great writer....... 🤗 🤗 🤗

Okay a song for u

Pare ho ja sioniye
Anu di rel gaddi aayi
Pare ho ja soniye
Saadi rel gaddi aayi............
😆

Ithe imagine kar ke apan dono ne rel gaddi banayi hoyi hai n apan poore forum de chakkar kat rahe haa.....dheere dheere dooje vi apan nu join kar rahe ne and our rel gaddi lambi hundi ja rahi hai and music changes to BRAZILLLLLLL TA RA RA RA RA RA RA RA RA RA.......... and we all start jumping dance.........maujaan hi maujaan😆

Edited by mehak_kapoor - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Haii........ 😳
Main to mar gayi!!! 😉

WOW!!! I really have no idea wat to write.... im just speechless!!! I just love this part!!! 😃 This is no way just a random part... If this is random.. i truly wonder what a brilliant part would be!!!! 😆 😆

It is just truly wonderful... i dont know wat else to add, everyone else have said wat i wanted to say and i dont want to repeat it and bore u!!!

Anji's character is just brilliant, and Atul is just marvellous...
The puppy scene... was just too cute and i can actually picturise this scence...and atul falling in love with her even more... awwwwww 😳 😳

I love the singing at the end... and i truly agree with "ifrahnaqash" u shud definetly write a book... i would so buy it!!! 😃

Thanks 😃
xxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
dat was


AWESOME......



SO BEAUTIFUL anji so sweeeetttt jus luved da prt it was relllllllllllllllllyyyy nice n cuteeeeee 😃
cont super soooooooooonnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jenny1000

Wow 😍 😍 😍 That was a great part.. 👏 👏 👏 Very nice transformation of Anjali's role 👏



Thank you so much, Jen😳...Glad you liked it!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

That was not random at all! 😆 😆 😆 As I see it, you're just building up the romance 😉 😆

Angie and the Pups = Cute. Especially the one threatning to fall inside her shirt 😆 😆 😆 LOL...that would be the incorrigible Milo😉😆

Atul singing at the end = Cuter! 😍 Whew! You liked that? I thought the song might feel a little abrupt there, but I still went ahead with it😕😆😆

IOTM Race = Fierce! 😈 😆 😎 It sure is!😉😆😆

Armaan/Saps = Dhansu appearances 😎 Both extremely charming and likable. "Stupid autowala..." 🤣 🤣 🤣 So glad you enjoyed that, Fatty Bear! I miss Armaan-Sappy scenes so much!!😭😭...and I miss Sappy complaining about her autowala all the time as well😆😆

Medical Camp = Looking forward to 😉 😆 🥳 As you well should!😉😆

The writing seems to be so comfortable, like it comes naturally. Flawless update 👏 👏 👏 LOL...dunno about naturally...it has it's speed breakers in b/w😉😆😆...Flawless it's surely not, yaar! but thank you soooooooo much for the wonderful compliment, Fatty bear🤗🤗🤗

🤗 🤗 🤗



Woohoo! Got ya out of your goofa earlier than usual this time! Muhahahaha😆

Fatty bear, if there is anyone I expect to understand my randomness, it's you...so I knew you might be one of the few ppl who wouldn't find it so random🤗😆😆

Made my day, Veeru mere dost!🤗🤗🤗


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaya_86

IT's AWESOME!!ur FF is just one of it's kind..just amazing!!i dunno wht to say??just BRILLIANTO!!
two times thumbs up to u for it!! 👏 👏 👏



Thank you so much, Sanaya!😳😳...Glad you liked it so much!🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: DivineSelf

@Anu: I think I am in love with Anjie..... 😍 .... I've been in love with her myself for quite a while!😍😆😆

The way she was thinking of the incidents...I felt she was magnifying the Ridz-Shashank scene way too much and I felt she is trying too hard to see the negative even in an otherwise positive scenario but on second thoughts I realised...

that its true...even if we get 99compliments and 1 criticism, we will magnify the criticism more...and easily forget those 99compliments....and that is what happened with Anjie.... even that slight shade of extra brightness on Shashank's face for Ridhima has marred everything he just said to her😭😭 She is magnifying things yaar....because her entire world revolves around winning her father's love and approval, and she is extra sensitive about it because of Shashank's faulty parenting all these years...Shashank doesn't realize how big of a damage he's done. And that's just the way she's now become...but hopefully that will change thanks to our darling Atul bear very very soon😉😆

I hope Atul gets Anjie out of this trauma she constantly puts herself in, because its very disturbing for me to see her like this, I too feel like Atul, just want to give her a Jaado Ki Jhappi and say Honey you are a wonderful person and you don't need to prove squat to anyone.... She will come out of it eventually yaar...but it's too big of a thing for her to emerge from overnight having lived her entire life a certain way now. But don't worry...Atul the magic Bear hai na😆

I hope Shashank realises that inadvertently he is kind of taking his love for Anjie for granted (in the sense, that she knows I love her)...and mollycoddling his other daughter a bit too much for her own good. Oh he will...all in good time, my dear😉😆

And i love this line
"There was so much pain hidden in those beautiful eyes, that he was surprised he'd never noticed it before. "Maybe that was the clarity that came with Love," he mused to himself".... 😳 😳 I am in love with Atul here.. 😳 😳 Thank you so much yaar😳😳...I've been in love with Atul myself for quite a while now😍😆😆

OK never given such a long feedback...but hey I loved my Atul and Anjie here...let me tell you I love the romance reflecting here...than all the AR romances put together...this touches me so 😳 Thank you so much, yaar! That is a wonderful compliment! and yes, this romance touches me a lot more than the AR "romance" too😉😆😆

Lage Raho Anu.... 🤗 🤗 🤗Aapke aashirwaad se bilkul lagi rahoongi, Shaliniji!🤗🤗🤗

Aaaaargh!!!I blame you for taking me out of my comfort zone of "Silent reader"😆 Muhahaha😈....So glad to get you out of your "silent comfort zone" yaar!🤗 Thank you sooooooooo much once again for such wonderful comments! Muahhhhh!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

Smokinnnn *Says it like The Mask* 😆 😆
Anuuu.. 🤗 What an amazing part it was!! 👏 👏 👏 Oooooh Smokin??😆...Thank you soooooooooo much, Iffy darling!🤗That's my new name for you btw😉😆
don't wanna embarrass you.. but have you ever thought of writing a book? if no, then start thinking about it from now! n trust me, i'll be the first one to buy it! Oh wow😆😆...Come on yaar...me and writing a book? This is just an indulgence of my imagination yaar!😳...I'm definitely not good at the technicalities of writing...agar maine likh bhi di, to kabhi publish nahin hogi😉😆😆...but thank you so much for giving me such a huge compliment yaar!🤗

comming back to your FF, really loved reading the part in which Anjali's playing with the puppies and Atul watches her.. even i'd never thought that she had this whole new, astounding side to her! n i just hope she wins the IOTM award! Yeah, the Angie in my FF tends to throw up mini unexpected surprises like that😳😆...and that's what I love about her!...so glad you enjoyed the part with the puppies though yaar! Wrote it totally on impulse! As for the IOTM award, wait and watch my dear!😉

Edited by nureat01 - 17 years ago

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