'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 14

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

P.S - Fatty ghosty thankooo for holding me........ and u are not late at all....... i was chanting Armaan armaan and so i was stuck in the air n wen u came, i stopped chanting n luckily and was abt to fall wen u grabbed me......... thankoooo 🤗

I didn't know KSG jaap had the ability to sustain people in the air 😆 😆 😆

Maybe I shall try it, or is it only limited to real bhagts? 😉 😆 😆

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Anu meri jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!!!! I'm sooo sorry yaaar I just read the last 3 parts now! HEY BHAGGU!!!!!!!!! Can I just say that they should I hire you to write for DMG???!!! A-R ko dekh dek ke pak gayee hoon yaar! they're cool and all lekin I've been waiting for my favorite couple for the longest time!!!! You're currently the only one writing about them!!! Aur kya likh rahi ho yaar! Amazing!!!! If they don't start showing more A-A and less A-R Bhaggu kasam I'm going to physically drag you to the creatives and make them let you write! Kuch toh mazaa aaye A-A ke kahaani mein!!! At least then we'll actually get more than a 30 second glimpse of them! Love you kudiye!!!!

Komz

Originally posted by: xMarauderx

Wowww!!! Amazing...brilliant...what do I say!!! This piece of fic really put a smile to my face as it was written really nicely and the characterization is just great! Awww...thank you so much!!😳😳....So glad that I was able to make you smile!😃Angie's sort of my favourite character (I can't bear the saccharine brigade 😆 good job on that line btw) LOL, thanks! and she's kinda my fav. character along with Atul too😉😆😆and I loved all the subtle nuances in her character that you have managed to explore so far in the fic. Shashank's parenting and subconscious bias towards Riddhima is damn annoying to watch but I'm glad you have shown that from A's POV in a really great way along with all her insecurities and resentments and the Ice Queen facade which she perfects so well..... Thank you yaar!😳...Glad you liked that!

And as for Atul....well..."champ"s doing fine...singing on his bike🤣 and muttering about pollution...loved all his impromptu songs for Angie esp the Cheeni Kum one 😆 😆 😆 LOL...that was my fav. song of his as well!!That bike scene was the greatest 😳 Awww thank you so much! I really really enjoyed writing that one!😳😳The best thing about your writing is that its so easy to visualize it all happening infront of your eyes. The lift scene was hilarious and quite cute..."lillies" ...so I suppose that Atul will give her lillies(Hey they're one of my favourite flowers too 😳 ) instead of he traditional roses?I honestly don't know what Atul will do😆😆....to tell you the truth, I have nothing concrete planned out, and I just go with the flow of whatever comes to my head😆....but that is an excellent idea! will keep that in mind!😉 That's a nice change from the cliched...

Do continue! 😳 Will surely try to continue soon, yaar! Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and encouragement!😳

I wish the showed more of the Atul-Angie story rather than boring me with the inanely mundane run of the mill AR scenes that they're doling out(atleast show something different in AR!) My sentiments exactly!!

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

Surprise Indeed! This HAS to be the fastest update ever! 😆 😆 😆 Yes indeed!😆😆....I'm hoping it was a pleasant surprise for you, Veeru😉😆

There was one thing that underwhelmed everything else in the whole part: Atul's ability to see Angie during that little IOTM exchange. Reminded me a bit of a certain other we know, who was able to see the heart in an otherwise detached man 😍 Ah Fatty!!😍...What an insight, yaar!! I'd just inserted that in between there, and I guess I didn't realize how amazingly it would stand out. It's good to know that amidst all the people who are just looking at Angie, there is Atul who can touch the surface, or atleast is inkling to.

All I need is a little bit of Sap to make me happy - 🤗 Good to see her and the others interacting. Glad you liked it!🤗I was hoping it would be a nice surprise for you! I've been really missing Sappy a lot recently!...btw, WHEN are you going to update FITB???

As for Angie, I'm hoping in the future we get see her solve differences and change views regarding her sister. With a change, should come along her understanding for why her sister and father behave the way they do. All in good time, baccha😉....kahaani to abhi shuru hi huyee hai😉😆😆

And once again, Atul's ability to admit the truth makes me want to give the guy a squeeze - He doesn't delude himself with denial.

Beautiful Update. I'm loving the development, and how the plot is shaping up to be. Thank you soooooooooo much, Fatty bear!🤗🤗🤗...I'm hoping I can squeeze out another update soon so that you give us darshan again😉😆😆

Anu Bear 🤗 🤗 🤗

P.S. *Grabs Mehak Baba* Uh-oh, I think too late 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

Yaar anu i totally forgot to mention that i LOVED MITHOON WALA PART ALSO 🤣 How cud i miss that mithun dance of atul 😆 😆 ....... i m amazed to see the way u have included ur fav actor in ur FF 🤣 Too gud anu too gud 👏 👏 ''Ayeeeeeeeeeeeee'' *Mithoon ishtyle* 😆