The Other Side OF The Mirror- note pg 18 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
yup Paris good for honeymoon... 😳 😳 saba continue soon..me waiting palkein bichake... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
ple continue karo na..........paris ho ya rome hume to sirf sujal aur kashish se matlab.........yaar ab kitna aur intzaar karvaoge...........

love

kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
@Vandu
@Suri
@kashish

Here is the part 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sujal- kya!!!

Kashish was surprised as well

Dadi- ab ismein itna hairaan hone ki kya baat hai shaadi keh baad sab honeymoon par jaate hain

Sujal- haan par……………… um………. Office kaun sambhaale ga waise hee itne dinon se nahin gaya hoon

Dadi- wo Prem ya phir wo Shiv sambhaal le ga

Sujal knew he had lost the battle- kab ki flight hai

Dadi- parson subah ki

Sujal- itni jaldi

Dadi- to kya eik saal baad jaane ka irada hai

Sujal- Dadi

Dadi- ab tu hee bolta rahe ga ya phir mujhe bhi bolne de ga

Sujal- jee kahiye

Dadi- tum log Paris keh baad seedha New York chale jaana, main tum logon ka wahin intezaar karoon gee

Sujal's eyes lit up- aap ab humaare saath rahein gee

Dadi- nahin beta main bas apni bahu ka swagat karne aaun gee aur wahan par eik bara sa reception karein ge after all Jaanki bhi to nahin attend kar payi shaadi

Sujal- haan I missed Nani and Nanoo unki bhi tabiyat abhi kharab honi thi

Dadi- koi baat nahin ab is reception par hum sab saath honge

Sujal is like ya whatever

Dadi- aur tum donon kab nikal rahe ho

Sujal- Dadi humein parson jaana hai

Dadi- main Paris ki nahin Kashish keh ghar ki baat ka rahi hoon

Sujal- eh… wahan kyun jaana hai

Dadi- pagphere ki rasam keh liye {I dunno whether I have written it correctly or not}

Sujal- kis keh liye?

Dadi- uff taubah angrez ki aulaad {Kashish smiles at this} ab jao Kashish keh ghar waale intezaar kar rahe honge aur Kashish tumhein raaste mein bata de gee keh iska matlab, aur yeh Shiv kahan hai

Voice- main yahan hoon

Sujal- speak of the devil and the devil

The Camera zooms on his face and he is Iqbal Khan, not the god waala a spoilt brat like he was in KAA at start

Comes and sits n the sofa

Shiv eating an apple- hey Kash whats up every1?

Dadi- tu kahan tha itni dair

Shiv- dadi raat ko itni dair ho gayi thi yaar, I was asleep

Dadi- chup kar sun Sujal jaa raha hai do hafton keh liye aur uski ghair haaziri mein office ka khayal tujhe rakhna hai

Shiv- main

Dadi- haan {to Kashish} Kashish beta tum kyun itni chup ho

Kashish in a low voice- nahin wo kuch nahin dadi bas yunhi

Shiv- itna chup raho gee to Sujal par hukum kaise chalao gee

Sujal does not let him finish- shut up ok

Shiv- why

Dadi to kashish- beta chalo hum donon neeche chalte hain, in donon keh jhagda to khatam hee nahin hote

Dadi and K leave nw its only S2

Sujal- ya bak raha tha

Shiv trying to act innocent- maine kya kiya

Sujal- wo hukum chalane waali baat kisne kahi phir

Shiv- chill yaar, I was just kiddin

Sujal rolled his eyes

Shiv- waise agar wo tujh par hukum chalaye gee to maza bohat aaye ga

Sujal- shut up aur sun saare kaam acche se sambhalna

Shiv- tu honeymoon mana aur main tera kaam karoon {makes a face}

Sujal- main kaunsa jaana chahta hoon bas yeh sab dadi keh liye kar raha hoon

Shiv seriously- Sujal kabhi apne baare mein to socha kar humesha doosron keh baare mein sochta hai, life mein aagay badh, jo hua use bhool ja start a new life with Kashish

Sujal- bhoolna itna aasaan nahin hai Shiv

Shiv- main jaanta hoon lekin yaar Kashish is a really nice gal, tu uskeh saath bohat khush rahe ga

Sujal- mujhe apni khushi ki koi parwa nahin

Shiv- theeq hai apni nahin to uski khushiyon ka to soch, just remember 1 thing that ab every decision that u take is going to affect not only yours but her life as well

Sujal- you sound like Nani

Shiv smiles- Hey don't compare we wid Hitler accha chal they must be waiting for u down stairs, lets go

Sujal- chal
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Cut to downstairs

Dadi- and Kash were waiting downstairs for the boys

Dadi- Kashish

Kashish- jee dadi

Dadi- beta main tumse kuch maangna chahti hoon, maano gee meri baat

Kashish- dadi agar mere bas mein hua to zaroor

Dadi- beta agar Sujal se kabhi bhi koi bhi ghalti hojaye ya phir anjaane mein wo tumhaara dil dukha de to plz usay maaf kar dena, wo dil ka bura nahin hai

Kashish- dadi main koshish karoon gee

Dadi- aur eik aur baat

Kashish- kahiye

Dadi- kabhi bhi uskeh parents ka zikar mat karna tumhein pata hai na kyun

Kashish- jee dadi papa ne mujhe bataya tha

Dadi- wo is baare mein bohat sensitive hai

Shiv and Sujal come

Sujal- chalein

Kashish- jee

They bid bye to every1

In car, S is driving { usay raaste yaad thay as this wasn't his first time in Shimla, he had been there loads of times

Both of them r chup no one is saying anything

Sujal gets fed up and turns on the radio, the song Numb from Linkin Park is playing, Kashish is getting irritated by the loud noise of the music { hope u all have heard Numb, I love this song} She gets fed up and changes the channel and ajab si from OSO is playing

Sujal- yeh kya kiya

Kashish calmly- channel change kar diya

Sujal- but why, I love that song

Kashish- wo gaana tha, gaana nahin sirf shor tha

Sujal- accha jaise keh yeh gaana bada accha hai

Kashish- its so soothing

Sujal- soothing!! Whatever {changes the channel}

Kashish then changes the channel

Aisay hee donon change karte rehte hain when donon keh haath takra te hain and koi aur channel lag jaata hai

Sujal- look na tumhaari marzi aur na meri ab yehi lage rehne dete hain

The Song Bibi Shireen { I haven't heard this song ever but my friend has told me that it is a really funny song, its in Pashto so u can imagine what it would be ike} starts

Sujal is like what the hell is this and Kashish laughs looking at his face

He shuts it off

Sujal- that's better

K smiles- very better

Sujal looks the other way and smiles

After some time Sujal takes out a cigar and starts to smoke

Kashish after some time starts to cough, her coughing increases and Sujal is forced to throw the cigar

Kashish ka ghussa to saatwein aasmaan par tha, usay do cheezein bohat buri lagti theen, eik to cigerrete aur sharab and dusri spoilt brat, and unfortunately for her uskay husband mein wo donon buraayian theen

She turns to Sujal and abruptly says- eik baat poochon

Sujal- haan pucho

Kashish- aap drugs bhi lete hain kya

Sujal- what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what the hell what type of a question is this

Kashish innocently but their was sarcasm in her tone- kyun aap cigar peete hain sharab peete hain to maine socha drugs bhi lete honge

Sujal- I don't take drugs

Kashish smiles - chalo eik buri aadat to kam hui

Sujal thinks- Oh man mujhse is tarhan se baat aaj tak kisi ne nahin kii, must say she has some guts yaar, I thought keh yeh bohat hee obedient wife hogi mujhse darr kar rahe gee and all but yeh to dynamite nikli, I think we'll have fun 2gether

He smiles mischeivously

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A little boring, bohat jaldi jaldi likha hai plz ignore the grammatical errors if any 😕

Need Suggestions.
Need a modern girl for a role in TOSOTM plz suggest.

Check out the last pg of the Title Script and Dhaba, & let me inform u guys that i'll be ending one of my fics on my birthday, i don't know which one 😆 😆 Most probably it'll be Zindagani or if not that then Friends 😃 😃 😃 . and my new years resolution is that i will not start any other fic till i finish Zin. 😃 😃

Comments awaited,
Luv,
Saba.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
hey nice part wese when is your birthday and as far as the modern girl goes why dont you take surveen
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
hii.....awsume part yaar.....tooooooo good.....👏
nowwww plzzzzzz continue soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

very nice ff cont soon 👏



will do your name is Laiba right?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: neh0307

hii.....awsume part yaar.....tooooooo good.....👏
nowwww plzzzzzz continue soon.....



will try continuing soon 😊😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey nice part wese when is your birthday and as far as the modern girl goes why dont you take surveen



ma bithday is quite dur so its not ending any time soon hmm.. Surveen... i wil consider it 😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40


Vandu tere lafz kahan gaye 😆

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