The Other Side OF The Mirror- note pg 18 - Page 2

wowwwwwwwowwwwwww...........hold on.... kya kaha interesting hoga toh kehena. dear saba tum joh bhi likhti ho na interesting hi hota hai balki it's beyond imaginations 👏 . i lovedddddddddd the part sooooooo much 😉 .hmmmmmm......so sujal kashish are married huhh....lekin sujal is action like a dumb person . aur woh saniya ko dekhke itna bokhla kyun jata hai . is she his past aur that priyanka's past 😡 .noooo wayyyy yaar bechari kashish abhi abhi shadi huyi hai aur yeh sujal iss tarah pesh aaraha hai bechari ke saath 😭 .thoda toh hasna chahiye,bolna chahiye 😡 .waise bechari ki galti bhi nahi hai na 😭 .newyork se aaya hai na. aur joh log yaha saalonse rehete hai aise hi hote hai,khud mein kahi khoye rehete hai kyunki inhe lagta hai saari duniyan ke pareshaiyan inke kismat mein hi hai aur baki saab pagal logg duniyan mein rehete hai 😆 . issiliye itne shant aur dumb person kehelwate hai 😆 .i am not at all like that 😉 . kyunki abhi abhi india se aayi hu na 😉 . i am toh bakbakiyan. lekin senseful aur meanigful batein karti hu 😆 .hey the part was awesome and sooooo interesting 👏 . i am waiting for the next one 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

Originally posted by: fravashi

wowwwwwwwowwwwwww...........hold on.... kya kaha interesting hoga toh kehena. dear saba tum joh bhi likhti ho na interesting hi hota hai balki it's beyond imaginations 👏 . i lovedddddddddd the part sooooooo much 😉 .hmmmmmm......so sujal kashish are married huhh....lekin sujal is action like a dumb person . aur woh saniya ko dekhke itna bokhla kyun jata hai . is she his past aur that priyanka's past 😡 .noooo wayyyy yaar bechari kashish abhi abhi shadi huyi hai aur yeh sujal iss tarah pesh aaraha hai bechari ke saath 😭 .thoda toh hasna chahiye,bolna chahiye 😡 .waise bechari ki galti bhi nahi hai na 😭 .newyork se aaya hai na. aur joh log yaha saalonse rehete hai aise hi hote hai,khud mein kahi khoye rehete hai kyunki inhe lagta hai saari duniyan ke pareshaiyan inke kismat mein hi hai aur baki saab pagal logg duniyan mein rehete hai 😆 . issiliye itne shant aur dumb person kehelwate hai 😆 .i am not at all like that 😉 . kyunki abhi abhi india se aayi hu na 😉 . i am toh bakbakiyan. lekin senseful aur meanigful batein karti hu 😆 .hey the part was awesome and sooooo interesting 👏 . i am waiting for the next one 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

Thanx Nikki an the New York PPl waali baat was funny😆😆😆

Firstly to tell u that Kashish's friends' love interests will not be shown, they might be mentioned but they will not make an entry until and unless crucial for the story. And don't worry abt them either b/c they are only be there in bits of the story.


Kashish was sitting in the middle of the bed, the room and the bed everything was decorated beautifully the floor was full of rose petals and the room was lighted with scented candles which added a great effect of the whole 'Suhaag Raat' setup. The creaking of the door brought Kashish back on earth and she became conscious of another person's presence in the room and then there was a 'click', the door had been locked.


Kashish's heart was beating faster and she shut her eyes tightly waiting for Sujal to start a conversation or make a move.

2 minutes gone, nothing happened

3 minutes, still nothing happened

5 minutes, she could not take it any more so she opened her eyes and glanced sideways and what she saw left her shocked.

Sujal was sitting on the sofa in the suite and drinking with 2 bottles on the table in front and one was half-empty. Kashish was shocked to death b/c this man was her newly-wedded husband half-drunk and that also on their wedding night!!!

She was looking at him wide eyed, Sujal looked u and saw her staring at him, he looked at her with his nasheeli eyes, Kashish got scared and got off the bed and was heading towards the washroom to change. She had almost reached the door when Sujal called out for her

Sujal- listen

Kashish turned and looked at him with pure innocence

Sujal- we need to talk

He gestures her to come and sit beside him on the sofa, She being an 'aadarsh patni' quietly went and sat beside him gazing on the floor

Sujal sipped the wine and then started- dekho I don't believe or like whatever this marriage stuff and all and I didn't even wanna get married and all but dadi pressurized me and [sighs] forced me to get married, and now that we are married let me tell you one thing and I want u to keep that in mind so listen clearly, I don't want any interference in my life I'll do what I like and u plz stay out of it and to be fair and square u can do whatever you like and I won't interfere in your life { Kashish still did not react a bit, Sujal made a face looking at her} is that fair enough.

Kashish was so shocked that she could not speak. Sujal left the room and when he came back Kashish was taking off her jewellery, she had taken off her dupatta and opened her hair, due to the heavy wind coming from the open window her long, silky hair were flying, Sujal was mesmerized by her beauty, she looked so pure, so innocent.

Sujal- you still haven't changed yet, wait I'll go and change first

Sujal went in and when he came out Kashish went in and when she came out she made a face looking at Sujal who was sitting on the bed with his laptop in his lap and a cigar in his mouth, being a doctor she simply hated smoking and her own husband was, [sigh] well what could she do abt. It.

She quietly went and sat on the bed beside him, Sujal looked at her and spoke

Sujal- you only have to tolerate me for a few days once we reach NY you can have a separate room.

Kashish keh moo par dhamaka 'separate rooms' God her wedding night couldn't get any worse, first her husband his half-drunk and tells her that this marriage is nothing but a compromise for him and now he is telling her that they would have separate rooms!!!, well Kashish had a bad habit that she got irritated very easily.

Kashish irritated- aur kuch

Sujal raised his eyebrow and then smiled secretly, he had this quality of understanding ppl quickly and he had at least understood that Kashish got irritated very easily and did not like to be ordered around, boy it sure was going to be fun.

Kashish realized the tone she had used- wo I m sorry wo I wanted to ask keh can I sleep her or do I need to sleep on the sofa

Sujal looked at her surprised- you can sleep here if u don't have any problem sharing the bed with me, and if you so then I'd just take another room but the thing is that dadi might notice and I don't want to hurt her.

Kashish was extremely depressed - good night

She lies down on the bed facing the wall, Sujal also closes the light and drifts off to sleep.

Meanwhile Kashish was lost in her own thoughts

Kashish thinking- kya socha tha aur kya nikla {she closes her eyes} kabhi sapne bhi nahin socha tha keh aisa hoga {opens her eyes and tears flow from her eyes}

Tears keep on flowing from her eyes till she falls asleep.

Next Morning

Kashish woke and it took her a while to recognize her surroundings, she glanced at Sujal who was sleeping peacefully on the other side of the bed, she got up and went to get dressed for the pag phere ki rasam. She wore a blue coloured designer saari and jewellery and applied very light make up.

Sujal woke up, he was having a severe headache b/c all the alcohol he had taken yesterday. He was holding his head and his vision was blur, he could see a blurry outline of Kashish, Kashish looked at him through the mirror, even Sujal looked at her he got up and went to the washroom still holding his head.

When he came out of the washroom, Kashish was not in the room and there was a cup of coffee and a note on the table

Sujal- bhaag gayi kya, good for me

He picked the note it said

'Dadi is waiting for us in her suite'

Sujal- Oh matlab bhaagi nahin dadi keh room mein hai [he said this a bit disappointed]

He drinks the coffee and went to his Dadi's suite

He knocked on the door and it was opened by Kashish, she moved aside and let him in and closed the door.

Sujal goes and sits beside his dadi

Sujal- hey dadi whats up [u know like friends say to each other]

Kashish was again surprised the way Sujal addressed his dadi, it was so'..um'..frank.

Dadi- array Kashish tum wahan kyun khadi ho, idhar aao baitho ere paas, Sujal tum doosre sofay par baitho

Sujal moved and Kashish sat on his place

Sujal- dadi why are we having our breakfast in your room

Dadi- kyun keh hum tum donon se kuch baat karna chahte hain

Sujal- kya baat

Dadi- pehle naashta karlo phir

Sujal- fine

[They have their breakfast]

Sujal- dadi ab batayein na

Dadi- array thoda sa bhi saber nahin hai ismein, ruko

[She went to cupboard and took out a white envelope and handed it to Sujal]

Sujal- whats this

Dadi- tujhe itna padhaya likhaya is liye tha keh tu padh bhi na paaye

Sujal- Dadi [he opens the envelope] dadi yeh

Dadi- tum donon keh honeymoon tickets aur visa Paris keh

Sujal- bhaag gayi kya, good for me

hahahahahahahahha!!!! 😆

Omgg!! Sujal is really too much...... 😆

Originally posted by: togepe30

Sujal- bhaag gayi kya, good for me

hahahahahahahahha!!!! 😆

Omgg!! Sujal is really too much...... 😆

Thank You 😆

Originally posted by: le_me_star

awesome part saba 👏 😉 😊 😉 👏!!!!!!!......i really can't understand sujal sometimes 😕, he come goes to his room n start drinking 😭.....no one does that in their "own" wedding night 😡 😕 !!!! bechari kashish kya kya sapne dekhe hoge usne 😍, jo ke sujal ne tor diye 😭 !!!!!!!!.........i know that he only got married to her for his dadi shake😭 😊 😭, but what he said was really rude 😭 😡 😕!!!!!.........kashish has a bad habbit of getting irritated really easily n sujal of knowing people reactions easily 😆 😉 😛.....kya combination hai 😉 👍🏼 😉 !!!!!!!!!!!! sujal ko bohot kaldi parhi hui hai new york ka ne ki 😆 !!!...........sujal having a bad headace in the morning (kyu pite ho ke sar me itna dar hoe 😆 😕 😆!!))))..........he goes to freshen up, while kashish is still getting ready 😉......when he came out, he thought that she had run away 😆.......sujal kashish ko bhagane ke jakar me hai 😆 😭 😉......but for his dissanpointment she has gone to dadi's room 😉.......they have their breakfast n then dadi give an envolope to sujal 😉, n what sujal saw inside it made him hell shocked 😲 😲 😲.......sujal n kashish are going for there honeymoon to paris 😉 😊 😭 😛 😉 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........i can't wait for the next part yaar !!!!!!!!.............great going 👍🏼, continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

YOu will understand Sujal eventually as the story moves further,Kashish has a bad habbit of getting irritated really easily n sujal of knowing people reactions easily 😆 😉 😛.....kya combination hai As it is said Opposites attract 😉, I don't know what made me write the bhaagne waala dialog 😆😆😆

saba that's absolutely fabulous dear.. i completely loved it... it is so damn interesting... mast hai tumhari yeh story... sujal ka attitude.. kashish ka bartaav... un dono kii nayi shadi-shuda zindagi ka portrayal all are just too good... jis tarah se story agge badh rahii hai mujhko behad zyada pasand aa raha hai.. it is absolutely zabardast... keep up the good work going yaar.. amazing...superb... fantastic... 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part very eagerly... and i would really love to see kashish bossing over sujal tab aayega oont pahaad ke neeche.... jaldi se continue kana..... 😉

Originally posted by: sun_423

saba that's absolutely fabulous dear.. i completely loved it... it is so damn interesting... mast hai tumhari yeh story... sujal ka attitude.. kashish ka bartaav... un dono kii nayi shadi-shuda zindagi ka portrayal all are just too good... jis tarah se story agge badh rahii hai mujhko behad zyada pasand aa raha hai.. it is absolutely zabardast... keep up the good work going yaar.. amazing...superb... fantastic... 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part very eagerly... and i would really love to see kashish bossing over sujal tab aayega oont pahaad ke neeche.... jaldi se continue kana..... 😉

thanx suri, me glad u liking the fic 😃😃😃 aage aage dekhna Kashish aur Sujal a behaviour 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: aishwaria

thanx suri, me glad u liking the fic 😃😃😃 aage aage dekhna Kashish aur Sujal a behaviour 😉😉😉

saba yaar me eagerly waiting to see sujal , kashish ka behavior.. please yaar jaldi se continue kar na.. ab intezaar nahii ho raha hai...😊😃😛