The Other Side OF The Mirror- note pg 18

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Prologue

The pheras got over and the newly married couple bent to take the blessings of their elders, they first proceeded towards an elderly lady smiling at them and took her 'aashirwaad'.

The lady- khush raho, bhagwan tum logon ko duniya ki saari khushiyon de {she looked at the bride} Kashish beta mere is shararti pote ki zimedaari tumhaari, ab se Sujal ki saari ki saari zimedaariyan tumhaari

Kashish smiles whereas Sujal had a straight face. They took the blessing of others present.

They newly married couple was standing on a raised platform where ppl were coming and wishing them. Kashish glanced at her husband; they had only met or in more appropriate words seen each other twice on their engagement and on their sangeet. She had thought or rather hoped that he would talk to her, but all her hopes went down the drains, he hadn't even made an effort to talk to her, was he always like this she wondered but his dadi had described him differently, she had said that he was a very fun-loving and happy-go-lucky person well he looked really '.. um'' serious and dull, oh well he might be very nervous or was shy, he would speak to her later, ya that was it he must be wanting to talk to her in private exactly that must be it, but why in private she was craving to hear his voice, even one word would be enough but {sigh} she did not let her hopes up b/c at present there wasn't any room for them.

Her brother Akshat came up to them

Akshat- hey jeej, I hope u won't mind me calling u jeej

This was the first time kashish was seeing him smile {but a kanjoos wali smile}and moreover hearing his voice, he had a deep attractive voice.

Sujal- of course not, why would I mind

Just then Mehek, Kashish's sister came up to them

Mehek- jeeju mujhe aapko kisi se milwana hai

Sujal- kis se

Mehek- aapki saaliyon se

Sujal was confused if he remembered correctly he was supposed to have only one saali, at least that's what his dadi had told him

Sujal puts on a fake smile- sure

And then came a group of 3 girls, Sujal was a bit shocked

Mehek- these are Kashish dee's friends

Anita

Neha

Pallavi

Mehek- array yeh Sania dee kahan gayi

Peeche se eik awaz aati hai- main yahan hoon

Sujal's eyes fell on the owner of the voice, she looked an awful lot familiar but he couldn't recall where he had seen her and he felt strange and queer the way she was looking at him, and to his utter most disbelief her gaze was making him weak she seemed to look far beyond what was in front of her.

Mehek- to jeej and these are your saaliyan Kash dee ki best friends and guys this is

Sania interrupted- Sujal Garewaal

Mehek- how do u know

Sania- well one of my childhood friend, Priyanka (Sujal's stomach did a flip-flop at the mentioned name) told me, she knew him personally I think u must be knowing her

Sujal's mind was racing he didn't know what to say so he just whispered a small 'yes'

Sania smiled and Sujal also gave a faint smile to her

The five friends start to talk well it was ore of teasing, they were all teasing Kashish about her wedding night except Sania who just kept on smiling

Sujal had excused himself and had gone outside b/c he needed fresh air after a while he saw a shadow he didn't need to turn to see who it was b/c he perfectly knew who it was

Sujal without even looking at the back- What are you doing here?

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It was the time for the bidaai Kashish

She was crying whereas Sujal had a straight face

and all her family members were emotional and Kashish came and sat in the car besides Sujal and was crying, she kept on looking at the back till her family was out of sight, she looked at Sujal who was looking out of the window. She was a bit disappointed and also started to look out of the window.

30 minutes later

Kashish thinking- God what does he find so interesting outside the window when he has a living and talking person sitting right beside him for the past half an hour { she sighs and mutters 'bloody hell'}

Just then Sujal looks at her and for the first time speaks to her

Sujal- did you say something

Kashish's heart started to beat faster and she very softly said- 'no'

He again starts to stare out of the window, Kashish sighed at least he spoke to her

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The couple reaches the hotel, where Sujal was staying; Sujal's dadi escorted her to his suite

Dadi- filhaal tumhein kuch dinon keh liye yahan rehna hoga phir Sujal tumhein tumhaare ghar le jaaye ga New York mein.

Kashish smiles- Dadi aap nahin aayein gee

Dadi- nahin beta main Masuri mein rehti hoon, mujhe New York nahin pasand aur Sujal use chodna nahin chahta ab tu aaram karo Sujal bhi aata hee hoga

Kashish smiled shyly and dadi left.

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Kashish was sitting in the middle of the bed, the room and the bed everything was decorated beautifully the floor was full of rose petals and the room was lighted with scented candles which added a great effect of the whole 'Suhaag Raat' setup. The creaking of the door brought Kashish back on earth and she became aware of another person's presence in the room and then there was a 'click', the door had been locked.

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tell me if u find it interesting or not, then only i'll write further

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Posted: 17 years ago
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interesting prologue saba 👏 😉 😊 👏!!!!!!!....the story line seem really interesting yaar 😉......n the story start from the wedding of sujal and kashish 😉 😊 👏, but why sujal seem's so lost 😕....isn't he happy with his marrige with kashish 😭....on the other hand kashish seem the happiest person alive 😉 😊 😉 !!! askshat n mehek are kashish siblings 😊 !!!.......bechara sujal pareshan hoga ke uski chaar aur salie's kaha se nikal gae 😆 😆 😆 !!!......who is priyanka sania friend i know, but what she has to do with sujal ??????????....whom was sujal talking with??.......so sujal live's in new york n his dadi in masuri 😊 😉 😛......he just came to get married ???........kashish sitting in the room watting for sujal 😉, when suddenly someone entry n close the door 😉 (of course sujal yaar 😉 !!!.....aur kon ho sakta hai 😆 ).......can't wait for the next part saba !!!!!! 👏 😭 👏 😭 👏.......the story is so interestting !!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 hey nice part......whats with sujal....who is priyanka??? plzz not priyanka bassi yaar..wats with all my favorite writers having priyanka in their fc......plzz.......shveta salve ko rakh lo yaar.....not priyanka..........plzzzzz 😃 ......plzz sanaa!! no priyanka bassi 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kool saba...its sounding v interesting 👏 so...cont with it..and will be eagerly waitng 2 read why sania was shocked seeing sujal..n whts da whole mystery...gud job... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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interesting promo.
looking forward to it Saba
so continue soon please
can't wait to find out who the
person was
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: le_me_star

interesting prologue saba 👏 😉 😊 👏!!!!!!!....the story line seem really interesting yaar 😉......n the story start from the wedding of sujal and kashish 😉 😊 👏, but why sujal seem's so lost 😕....isn't he happy with his marrige with kashish 😭....on the other hand kashish seem the happiest person alive 😉 😊 😉 !!! askshat n mehek are kashish siblings 😊 !!!.......bechara sujal pareshan hoga ke uski chaar aur salie's kaha se nikal gae 😆 😆 😆 !!!......who is priyanka sania friend i know, but what she has to do with sujal ??????????....whom was sujal talking with??.......so sujal live's in new york n his dadi in masuri 😊 😉 😛......he just came to get married ???........kashish sitting in the room watting for sujal 😉, when suddenly someone entry n close the door 😉 (of course sujal yaar 😉 !!!.....aur kon ho sakta hai 😆 ).......can't wait for the next part saba !!!!!! 👏 😭 👏 😭 👏.......the story is so interestting !!!!!



Thank you, and obviously wedding night par kamre mein dulha nahin to aur kaun enter hoga 😆😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

👏 hey nice part......whats with sujal....who is priyanka??? plzz not priyanka bassi yaar..wats with all my favorite writers having priyanka in their fc......plzz.......shveta salve ko rakh lo yaar.....not priyanka..........plzzzzz 😃 ......plzz sanaa!! no priyanka bassi 😭 😭



Come on Vandu Priyanka bassi isn't that bad, i just dont like the way she arches her eyebrow 😆😆😆 and sanna nahin Saba
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Patel 1993

interesting promo.
looking forward to it Saba
so continue soon please
can't wait to find out who the
person was



Thank you and will cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

kool saba...its sounding v interesting 👏 so...cont with it..and will be eagerly waitng 2 read why sania was shocked seeing sujal..n whts da whole mystery...gud job... 😊



The mystery will be solved ahista ahista 😉😉😉 till then keep reading 😊😊

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