The Other Side OF The Mirror- note pg 18 - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

👏 nice part.....continue soon ! 😃


thanx Vandu

Originally posted by: goodkashish

nice part.....i am glad that finally u updated ........it is good to see sk coming closer......ple ple continue soon.........thanks

love

kashish



ya SK zyada dair dur thodi na reh sakte hain 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: 100%indiangirl

really cute part😛
plzz continue soon! 😉



thanx

Originally posted by: Arshie

great part yaar, continue soon and make it a really long one next time.



thanx but yaar kya karoon yeh stupid net pange karta hai
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Posted: 17 years ago
small but nice part. I think slowly sujal will fall in love with kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice saba dear..too goodd.....i like the way the story is progressing..keep up the good work going....just superb... sujal,kashish ke beech ka rishtha is developing for the better & i completely love it.....bilkul dhassu.....👏 saba yaar next part jaldi post karna..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

small but nice part. I think slowly sujal will fall in love with kashish



thanx, lets see whether your prediction becomes true or not

Originally posted by: sidiiii

Awomse....plz cont sooon dear!!!



will continue soon

Originally posted by: sun_423

very nice saba dear..too goodd.....i like the way the story is progressing..keep up the good work going....just superb... sujal,kashish ke beech ka rishtha is developing for the better & i completely love it.....bilkul dhassu.....👏 saba yaar next part jaldi post karna..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃



thanx Suri, will continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
a very cute part!! loved it totaly.. do continue soon!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwww.............what a part and a wonderful night 👏 . seruiously yeh raat yaad rahegi sujal kashish ko bhi aur mujhe bhi 😳 . that was awesome part 😉 . hey they watch jab we met 😆 .it's my favourite movie 😳 . i simply loved it 😉 . it's very nice aur haan kuch haad taak unka rishta bhi waise hi hai.....and yeah geet is kashish 😆 . itna hi farak hai ki geet is too free and bindas 😆 . paar kashish is a doctor, uppar se married and all toh how can she totally be like geet 😉 . haan magar yeh sach hai ki kashish ke aane se sujal ki zindagi sudhar gayi hai and uppar se he also find kashish sexy that's like a total change 😉 .the part was great!!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz...............can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part yaar 👏 😊 👏!!!!!!!!..........love it😉 😛 😉!!!...........so kashish was dreaming abt it 😛, sujal did admit that kashish was looking sexy 😳! .......shiv ki waja sai hie sai😆, par sujal ke dimag me yeah baat aey to sahie 😉!!! ............kashish can't stop looking at sujal while he was busy drying his hair😛, no one can denien the fact that he looks sooooooooo hot like that 😉 😳 😛!!!!!!!......kashish ko kisie ki baat purie sune ki adaat nahie kya? sujal ushe batana wala tha ke shirt phatie hue hai, par kashish is kashish yaar 😊.......but that was a really funny n cute scene btw them 😆 😛 😆!!!..........ahhh sujal doesn't wacth hindi movies 😭, but no worry kashish will make him 😆!!! she chose "Jab We Met" (i loveeeeeee that movieeeeeeee😉 😛 😉!!!!!!!!!) .........kashish fell asleep while wachting the movie, while sujal was thinking how similiar it was to his life 😕!!!.......n maybe kashish has come to his life as "Geet" 😉!!! (true 😊, n u better realize that soon 😡!!!)...............continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz..................great part yaaaarrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.................... ..............can't wait fro the next part!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya7736

a very cute part!! loved it totaly.. do continue soon!!!! 👏



thanx

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

coole part ................................


thank you

Originally posted by: fravashi

wowwwwwwwwwwwww.............what a part and a wonderful night 👏 . seruiously yeh raat yaad rahegi sujal kashish ko bhi aur mujhe bhi 😳 . that was awesome part 😉 . hey they watch jab we met 😆 .it's my favourite movie 😳 . i simply loved it 😉 . it's very nice aur haan kuch haad taak unka rishta bhi waise hi hai.....and yeah geet is kashish 😆 . itna hi farak hai ki geet is too free and bindas 😆 . paar kashish is a doctor, uppar se married and all toh how can she totally be like geet 😉 . haan magar yeh sach hai ki kashish ke aane se sujal ki zindagi sudhar gayi hai and uppar se he also find kashish sexy that's like a total change 😉 .the part was great!!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz...............can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊



i know yaar JWM rox, and Kashish surely Sujal ki zindagi sudhaar degi

Originally posted by: le_me_star

awesome part yaar 👏 😊 👏!!!!!!!!..........love it😉 😛 😉!!!...........so kashish was dreaming abt it 😛, sujal did admit that kashish was looking sexy 😳! .......shiv ki waja sai hie sai😆, par sujal ke dimag me yeah baat aey to sahie 😉!!! ............kashish can't stop looking at sujal while he was busy drying his hair😛, no one can denien the fact that he looks sooooooooo hot like that 😉 😳 😛!!!!!!!......kashish ko kisie ki baat purie sune ki adaat nahie kya? sujal ushe batana wala tha ke shirt phatie hue hai, par kashish is kashish yaar 😊.......but that was a really funny n cute scene btw them 😆 😛 😆!!!..........ahhh sujal doesn't wacth hindi movies 😭, but no worry kashish will make him 😆!!! she chose "Jab We Met" (i loveeeeeee that movieeeeeeee😉 😛 😉!!!!!!!!!) .........kashish fell asleep while wachting the movie, while sujal was thinking how similiar it was to his life 😕!!!.......n maybe kashish has come to his life as "Geet" 😉!!! (true 😊, n u better realize that soon 😡!!!)...............continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz..................great part yaaaarrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.............. ...... ..............can't wait fro the next part!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏



I love JWM too yaar thanx and am continuing in a minute
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 5

Sujal Kashish ko waise hee sonay deta hai and khud bhi so jaata hai

Kashish wakes up next morning, was a little confused on finding herself leaning on Sujal, she got up and changed into her own sari, when she came out in the living room, Sujal was already up, he went in and changed into his own clothes.

Sujal- main gadi leke aata hoon tum yahin rehna

Kashish just nods her head.

******** *********

The drive to the hotel was silent, none of them spoke anything, and their dadi was relieved to see them safe.

Sujal changed and when he came out he found Kashish talking on the phone to her friend.

Kashish- Pallavi batao na kaun hai wo…………..baad mein nahin abhi batao na plzzz…………Pallavi I am not gonna talk to u Goodbye.

She keeps the phone.

Sujal smiled seeing this behaviour of hers.

Kashish- humaari flight kitne baje ki hai

Sujal- subah 9 baje ki

Kashish- aaj kya karna hai

Sujal- mujhe nahin pata, tumhein kya karna hai

Kashish- dadi keh paas chalte hain

Sujal- u go, I'll come in a few minutes

Kashish- sure

When Sujal entered his dadi's room, his dadi was smiling and Kashish was flushing

Sujal- kya ho raha hai

Dadi- har baat tujhe batana zaroori nahin hota

Sujal makes a face

Dadi- ab aisi shakal na bana, Kashish tumhein bata degi baad mein

Sujal- whatever….wo gadha Shiv kahan hai

Dadi- pata nahin subah se gayab hai {Sujal again makes a face} Shiv ko chodo eik kaam karo tum Kashish ko mandir ko le jao, uska dil chah raha hai

Sujal- dadi plz u know I don't go to any mandir wandir

Kashish- dadi rehne dein, Sujal nahin chahte to

Dadi- array kaise nahin chahta, accha tum andar mat jaana bas Kashish ko wahan tak le jao

Sujal- theeq hai

************ ************

Saare raaste donon mein se kisi ne kuch nahin bola, they kept mum, Kashish went in and prayed for her future with Sujal while Sujal sat in the car. Kashish then came back and sat in the car.

Sujal- ab kahan jaana hai

Kashish- Waapis

Sujal- abhi 2 baj rahe hain agar tumhein aisay hee le gaya to meri khair nahin

Kashish- matlab

Sujal- khaana kha lete hain phir chalte hain

Kashish- okay lekin kahan

Sujal- anything u want

Kashish- something Indian after all phir New York mein to aisa Indian nahin milay ga

Sujal- Kashish actually I don't like Indian food so can we eat something else

Kashish- oh….okay phir jahan aapki marzi

Sujal- Thai

Kashish- sure

Sujal and Kashish have their lunch and then go to their hotel, Kashish's family comes to visit them at night as they would be leaving the next day for their honeymoon.

******** **********

Kashish set the alarm, she had finished packing and had bid her family good-bye her family was so happy {she looked at Sujal, who was sleeping} if only they knew……..she turned off the lights and went to sleep thinking what new surprises or rather shocks would her honeymoon bring her.

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I' ve decided that i'll post small and quick parts
Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part
cant wait 2 see what happens when they go on their honey moon
👏

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