The Other Side OF The Mirror- note pg 18 - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
lovely part 👏 👏 saba... the stry line is going good..can't wait 4 sujal's mystery to reveal..cont soon when u get time 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Arshie

lovely part yaar saba, great to have u back again

Teachers are born to irritate us, but i still hope that u will remain punctual and post regularly. 😉

Great part and continue soon.



thank you, glad u like the story

Originally posted by: armaghan0

interestingly cute and awsome part



thanx

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

heylovely part kaash yeh teachers hum par zyada reham kare.

lovely part cont soon


thanx Jyothi and i dont think keh teachers hum par kabhie reham khayein gee 😆😆

Originally posted by: sidiiii

Hey dear u made my day...as i said earlier me just love ur story...its awomse schii u were rite ek dum speed agaiii ...cant w8 to read next part dear ..cont sooon plz



thank you so much, will continue ASAP
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: fravashi

lovelyyyy part dear 👏 . yaar yeh part sabse best tha 😉 . actually every part you write is best but this was totally exceptional 🤗 . see na in this part sujal aur kashish kareeb toh aaye 😳 . hey you know what mujhe na tumhare story badane ki speed bohot achi lagti hai 👏 . i mean ki bohot time nahi leti tum aik acha scene dalne mein . that's what i love wbout your writing 🤗 . you are straight to the point . wowwwwwwwwww.......uss farm house mein dono akele, bahar barish, uppar se they are out of city, jungle ke side mein jaha koi nahi reheta and all 😳 . how romanticcc......haaaaaaaaa......main toh puri fida hi hogayi thi part padte waqt 😳 . goshh....i love shiv 😆 . yaar he is hilarious 😆 . because of him na itni hassi aati hai 😉 . specially when sujal say ki "kya kashish geele kapdo mein raat gujare" and he says ki "kapde i kya jarurta hai, it's night time 🤣 . haaa haaaa haaa......it was really funny 😆 . good going shiv 😉 ....but yaar sujal and kashish rock in this story ⭐️ . sujal ki intensity aur kashish ki masumiyat, sujal is passionate and she is love 👍🏼 . they match each other perfectly 😉 . the part was great 👍🏼!!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.............can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊



thanx a ton Nikki, glad that u r liking the story 😊😊😊 will continue ASAP

Originally posted by: nazz14

hey saba ur parts r too good yaar,lik ur ff a lot plz cont soon . 😊



thank you Nazz, will continue soon 😊😊

Originally posted by: togepe30

👏 AWESOME PART...........CONTINUE SOON YAAR,ITNA LATE MAT KARNA NEXT PART 😆 ! 😛



jaise he i'll complete writing waise hee post kar doon gee provided keh mera net kaam kare

Originally posted by: Paru_M

lovely part 👏 👏 saba... the stry line is going good..can't wait 4 sujal's mystery to reveal..cont soon when u get time 😛


thanx a ton dear, and Sujal's mystery will be revealed soon😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
awesome part yaar 😛 😛
sujal is all bady bady boy 😉 😉
continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😊awesome part yaar 👏 😉 😛 😉 👏!!!!!...kitne dino baad tumne yea story update kie hai 😊, but i'm really happy that u r continueing it 👏!......so u skipped kashish family part 😆! they are going back to the hotel but the weather condition is not good 😭!...par ishe bahae hie sahie sujal aur kashish ek shaath to hoe😉!!!.....the rain n ice-cream scene was my fav. coz in a way sujal was begin attracte to kashish 😉!......sujal did gave those boys 😡, a good lesson😊 for misbehaving wt women 😡 !!!!!......shiv n his jokes 😆!!! even i wondering where did the clothes come from 😲! kashish is happing thinking about the few close moments that she shared wt sujal 😳!!!.......you left at a really interesting part saba 😉!!!...what's going to happen next ??? will they kiss??? what sujal mystery??? when r u going to reveal it 😕, can't wait to know 😊?.........have many more questions 😊, but if i write them...my parents going to leave me here 😆 😭! plzzzzzzzzzzz.....can't wait for the next part 😭 😭 😭!!! continue soon ...........it's going really interesting 😉!!!!!!..........take care, byeeeeeeeeeee😊!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
Hey can't wait anymore yaar... do continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97

Part 4

The sound of a click brought Kashish back to reality, Sujal had clicked his fingers in front of her eyes b/c she had been dreaming with her eyes closed.

Sujal- kya hua

Kashish thought abt her dream and shyly said- kuch nahin

Sujal- andar chalo

Kashish- thodi dair rehne dein plz, aap jaa kar kapre to badal lein

Sujal- theeq hai but jaise hee I come out after changing my clothes u will have to come inside, ok

Kashish- ok

Sujal went inside, to himself- God main yeh kya sochne laga that usko dekh kar, control your imagination Sujal, but she looks so sexy, God phir se wahi thoughts its all b/c of Shiv wohi aisay ghatia baatein mere dimaag mein daalta hai, uff.

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Kashish entered the room and saw Sujal drying his hair, he wasn't wearing his shirt, as wo usi waqt naha kar nikla tha to there were drops of water on his bare chest which made him look extremely hot. Kashish was just staring at him, Sujal turned and saw Kashish and was a surprised to see her staring at him like that.

Sujal- um…tum wahan kyun khadi ho

Kashish was embarrassed and looked down- main bas yunhi

Sujal- ok

Sujal was about to go out of the room

Kashish- Sujal

Sujal- hmm

Kashish- aapne…..aapne shirt kyun nahin pehni

Sujal- kyun keh meri shirt geeli hai aur yahan koi doosri shirt nahin hai

Kashish- lekin cupboard mein to eik shirt rakhi hui hai

Sujal- Kashish rehne do

Kashish- lekin jab shirt hai to aapko aisay rehne ki kya zaroorat hai

Sujal- koi shirt nahin hai

Kashish- hai maine khud dekhi hai cupboard mein

Kashish goes to the cupboard and takes out the shirt

Kashish- dekhein hai to shirt

Sujal smiles- zara ghaur se dekho

Kashish-kyun kya masla hai {then she notices keh it was torn} yeh to phati hui hai

Sujal- yahi main batane ki koshish kar raha tha

Kashish- to ab

Sujal ab kya kar sakte hain, main jaa raha hoon TV dekhne

Sujal goes out of the room, Kashish follows him, he was going through the DVDs

Kashish sat on the sofa, 10 minutes passed Sujal was still going through the DVDs

Kashish- kya hua

Sujal- yahan par saari Indian movies hain, English to koi hai hee nahin

Kashish- to un mein se hee koi dekh lete hain

Sujal- mujhe Indian movies keh baare mein kuch nahin pata, tum decide karo

Kashish chooses Jab We Met

Kashish- yeh waali

Sujal- sure…….main laga deta hoon

Sujal laga deta hai and comes and sit beside Kashish

Movie dekhte dekhte Kashish so jaati hai, keeping her head on Sujal's bare shoulder but Sujal bohat ghaur se movie dekhta hai.

Sujal thinks that this movie was similar to his life but he never found some Geet who would change his life {he glances at kashish} or had he found her.

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Sujal Kashish ko waise hee sonay deta hai and khud bhi so jaata hai

Kashish wakes up next morning, was a little confused on finding herself leaning on Sujal, she got up and changed into her own sari, when she came out in the living room, Sujal was already up, he went in and changed into his own clothes.

Sujal- main gadi leke aata hoon tum yahin rehna

Kashish just nods her head.


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I know its short, i updated b/c my net was working {for a change}
Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago
Daebak thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
👏 nice part.....continue soon ! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
nice part.....i am glad that finally u updated ........it is good to see sk coming closer......ple ple continue soon.........thanks

love

kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part yaar, continue soon and make it a really long one next time.

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