The Other Side OF The Mirror- note pg 18 - Page 9

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hey ple continue with the story..........cant wait any long..........thanks

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The Other Side Of The Mirror

Part-3

Skipping the Kashish keh ghar waala part……he he he…..now Sk are on their way back to the hotel, the weather is not good, its really cloudy and due to this there are almost no cars on the road, there was absolute silence in the car which was irritating Kashish as she was a chatterbox.

Kashish alas asked Sujal a question which she wanted to ask really badly

Kashish softly- Sujal

Sujal- hmmm

Kashish- main aap se eik baat pooch sakti hoon

Sujal- haan poocho jo poochna hai

Kashish- aap shaadi se itna chidte yun hain

Sujal- shaadi {smiles sarcastically} shaadi barbaadi hai

Kashish- to iska matlab aap ab barbaad ho gaye

Sujal looks at her and then in front- nahin

Kashish- lekin abhi abhi to aapne kaha keh shaadi barbaadi hai aur aapki to shaadi ho gayi mujhse

Sujal- lekin main is shaadi mein believe nahin karta

Kashish- believe karne ya na karne se kya fark padta hai aapki shaadi to ho gayi

Sujal smiles- tumhein debates mein shauq tha na in school n college

Kashish- haan aapko kaise pata

Sujal- tumhein ladne ka jo itna shauq hai

Kashish chup ho jaati hai

After like 10 minutes

Kashish- Sujal gadi rukein

Sujal immediately stopped the car at this sudden outburst, Kashish gadi se utarti hai

Sujal- hey Kashish kahan jaa rahi ho

Utar kar wo uske peeche jaata hai to dekhta hai keh wo eik ice-cream waale keh paas khadi hai, wo uske paas jata hai

Sujal- um... tumhein ice-cream khaani hai is waqt

Kashish- ice-cream nahin kulfi

Sujal- and whats the difference between an ice-cream and a kulfi

Kashish- um… Kulfi is a traditional ice cream

Sujal- wow what a big difference

Kashish takes the kulfi n Sujal pays for it

Hawa achanak se bohat tez udne lagti hai n it starts to drizzle, Sk go n stand under a tree for shade, Kashish was eating her kulfi and the kulfi waala went away b/c of the rain

Sujal- I think humein jaldi nikalna chahiye

Kashish- pehle mujhe yeh khatam to karne dein

Sujal- fine jaldi khatam karo

Kashish- aap khayein ge

Sujal- nahin tum khao

Kashish- plz taste to karein

Sujal- nahin Kashish

Kashish- Sujal plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz just one bite

Sujal- fine

Kashish grins and kulfi ko aage karti hai and Sujal takes a bite

Kashish- kaisi lagi

Sujal smiles- acchi hai

Kashish eagerly- aur khayein ge

Sujal- nahin tum khao

Kashish starts to eat, it starts t pour heavily, Kashish apni kulfi Sujal ko pakda deti hai

Sujal- main iska kya karoon

Kashish- khalein

Saying this she goes out in the middle of the road enjoying the rain, Sujal smiling eats the remaining kulfi and then goes to her

Sujal- Kashish beemaar padh jao gee chalo

But Kashish par koi asar nahin hota wo apne haath phelae, ghute huay baarish ka maza le rahi thi

Kashish- I love rain!!!

Sujal- yehi rain tumhein beemaar karde gee

Kashish stands straight and looks at Sujal

Kashish smiles mischievously- baarish mein to filhaal aap bhi bheeg rahe hain

Sujal usko bulaane keh chakar mein khud bahar open mein aa gaya tha

Kashish phir se jhumne lagi, Sujal ko thodi hassi aayi lekin usne wo daba lee

Sujal- Kashish

No response

Sujal- Kashish

Still no response

Usne jaa kar Kashish ka haath pakda aur apni taraf kheench liye jis tarhan se wo sort of uski baahon mein thee, his hands around her tiny n bare waist {was wearing a sari}and her hands on his shoulder, they both were looking into each others eyes, Sujal's hands were touching her skin directly which was making him high and wanting to kiss her but he controlled his feelings and let go of her.

Sujal turned not wanting to look at hers- chalein

Kashish looking down- jee

They walked when Kashish noticed that one of her payal was missing and looked back and found it on the ground where he was jumping and dancing

Kashish- Sujal

Sujal turned and looked at her- hmmm

Kashish- meri payal udhar gir gayi hai main le kar aati hoon

Sujal- theeq hai

Kashish went to pick her payal when Sujal noticed a truck coming in full speed he quickly ran towards her and pushed her and uske saath saath wo bi gir jaata hai, road keh end pe eik jungle sort of hota hai a little below the road and the sides were a little steep and SK 1 doosre keh upar roll hote hote {filmy tareeqe se 😆} neeche jungle mien pohanch gaye.

Sujal was completely on Kashish, uska pura weight Kashish keh upar tha, he managed to shift a little and Kashish keh side mein ho jaata hai and looks at her, her eyes were closed.

Sujal worriedly- Kashish

Kashish opens her eyes n looks at him

Sujal- r u okay?

Kashish- ya I m fine

Sujal's cell starts 2 ring

Sujal- hello

Shiv- where r u guys

Sujal- near the ……. {some place quite far from the hotel}

Shiv- listen u ppl are quite far from the hotel….. eik kaam kar wahin kareeb mein kisi hotel mein ruk ja kyun keh abhi the weather is so bad and aagay aur kharab hone ki predictions hain

Sujal- Shiv yahan par koi dhanka hotel nahin mile ga aur jis tarhan ka mile ga u know na, Kashish hai mere saath

Shiv- abbay yaar I m such an idiot

Sujal- wo to tu hai

Shiv- Abbay chup……sun tu jaha par hai waha se mera eik farmhouse hai kareeb wahan chale ja,, if u go through the woods …. He told him the way

Sujal cuts the phone and looks at Kashish- we r going to Shiv's farmhouse

Kashish- kyun…..I m mean hum hotel kyun nahin jaa rahe

Sujal- b/c we'll just get stuck and the weather forecasters have predicted that the weather conditions are gonna become worse so Shiv advised us to stay at his farmhouse which is nearer to the present location than the hotel.

Kashish- ok

Sujal gets up and apna haath aage badhata hai for Kashish, Kashish takes it and uske sahare se gets up.

Kashish fixes up her sari jo keh thodi see kharab ho gayi thi, Sujal got embarrassed and looked the other way. Kashish smiled a little because she had seen him when he got embarrassed.

SK were walking in the woods, it was just drizzling, Kashish was feeling very cold but kept her mouth shut, Sujal was quite ahead of her as she was walking very slow b/c she was wearing high, pencil heels and also b/c of the cold weather. Sujal looked back at her.

Sujal- Kashish agar tum ishi speed se chali na to humein raat yahin guzaarni pade gee

Kashish tired- aur kitna door hai

Sujal- zyada nahin

Kashish- can we stop for sometime….. I m very tired

Sujal- Kashish eik baar wahan par pohanch kar rest kar le na..Ok

Kashish sighs – theeq hai

Sk reach the slope which would lead them above to the road, Sujal goes up and then forwards his hand to Kashish as he knew that it would be difficult for her to climb, Kashish uska haath pakadti hai aur wo usay achanak se kheench leta hai, to maintain the balance he holds her by her waist as a result they both were very close to each other when Sujal let go of her.

Sujal- wo ghar ishi road par hai…. Zyada dur nahin

It was completely dark now and road was empty as it was near the beach

Sujal ka cell baja and wo baat karte karte aagay chala gaya, Kashish was following him quietly, Sujal did not even notice a group of spilt brats { iske ilaawa I cant think of any word to describe them}, Sujal kaafi aagay ja chuka tha, Kashish saw the guys and felt scared b/c Sujal was quite ahead of her, her sari was clinging onto her body as it was wet, the guys made cheap comments and whistle, despite the pain in her leg Kashish started to walk as fast as she could, the boys started to follow her, Kashish foran se bhaag kar Sujal ko hug kar leti hai, Sujal gets surprised

Sujal on the phone- I'll call u later Mr. Thomas {to Kashish}kya hua tumhein {then he sees the guys, he becomes very angry}

The guys r now standing in front of them

Sujal- kya chahiye

Guy- wo jo teri baahon mein hai

Sujal keh gusse ka koi thikaana nahin , he leaves Kashish and jaa keh gives the guy a punch on his eye

Sujal he holds Kashish's hand- ainda aisi harkat kisi eh bhi saath karne ki sochna bhi mat warna wo haal ho ga keh apna naam bhi bhool jao ge

All the way Sujal ne Kashish ka haath pakda hua tha….at last they reach the house, Shiv had called the guard n informed him of their arrival, the guard then left for his own home. It was a farmhouse so it was generally small, mainly the area was occupied by a lush and scenic garden, it had only one bedroom.

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Kashish was sitting in the bedroom recalling everything that happened r the moments she shared with her husband, it brought a smile on her face…….Sujal entered the room

Sujal- Kashish

Kashish comes out of her thoughts- jee

Sujal- kya tum waqai mein doctor ho

Kashish confused- jee

Sujal- agar doctor hoti to itna zaroor pata hota keh geele kapre aur geele baal itni thand mein insaan ko beemaar kar dete hain

Kashish was still in those wet clothes- mere paas doosre kapre hain hee nahin

Sujal- ya kapre to hain hee nahin….[sighs] main Shiv ko phone kar keh inform kar deta hoon that we've reached safely

Kashish- hmmm

Sujal goes out of the room and calls Shiv

Shiv- thank god u ppl reached safely, dadi was so worried

Sujal- ab eik aur problem hai

Shiv- kya

Sujal- Kashish is all drenched and she doesn't have any clothes

Shiv- to kya hua subah tak to dry ho jayein ge

Sujal- to saari raat wo kya un geele kapron mein guzaare

Shiv- nahin

Sujal- to phir saari raat kya pehne

Shiv mischievously- pehenay ki koi zaroorat hai after all its night time

Sujal- Sick!!! U dirty mind keep your disgusting ideologies to yourself

Shiv- Sick ho ga tu, sun bedroom mein jaa cupboard khol usmien kapre hain

Sujal- aur yeh kapre kahan se aaye

Shiv- tujhe use kya…… tujhe kapre chahiye they na wo mil gaye na bas s

Sujal- go to hell

He cuts the phone

Sujal comes in the room to find Kashish taking off her jewellery, her sari's blouse had strings on the back and usne baal aage kiye huay thay to take off her necklace so her bare back was visible to Sujal.

Sujal coughed a little to make her aware of his presence, Kashish looked into the mirror and saw him standing at the entrance of the bedroom, Kashish phir se apna necklace nikalna lagti hai but was not able to

Sujal- Maine Shiv se baat ki he told me keh cupboard mein kuch kapre hain so u can change

Sujal turned to go out of the room so that she could change

Kashish- Sujal

Sujal turned back n looked at her- kya hua

Kashish aake Sujal keh saamne khadi ho jaati hai- can u plz help me with my necklace, mujhse khul nahin raha

Sujal- to bandha kaise tha

Kashish- wo to dadi ne bandha tha

Sujal smiles and tries to undo the necklace, while doing so his hands lightly touch Kashish's neck, Kashish closed her eyes to feel the moment

Sujal- hogaya {Kashish opened her eyes} ab jaa kar kapre badal lo

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Sujal after some time saw a shadow outside the house, he went out and saw Kashish standing with her hand stretched to feel the rain {Kashish was not playing in the rain only her hand was out}

Kashish heard footsteps and looked at her side and saw Sujal, Sujal came to her, close, close and very close, Kashish looked into his eyes and closed her eyes when she saw him move his face closer.

Their lips were just an inch apart.

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Sorry for not updating on the time I had promised to, my net wasn't working yaar know what aaj I was going to call a person to mend the problem lein yeh khud hee chalne laga.

Next part tab jab meri teachers ko aur mere net ko mujh par reham aaye ga.

Comments awaited,

Saba.

Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
interestingly cute and awsome part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
heylovely part kaash yeh teachers hum par zyada reham kare.

lovely part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
lovely part yaar saba, great to have u back again

Teachers are born to irritate us, but i still hope that u will remain punctual and post regularly. 😉

Great part and continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey dear u made my day...as i said earlier me just love ur story...its awomse schii u were rite ek dum speed agaiii ...cant w8 to read next part dear ..cont sooon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovelyyyy part dear 👏 . yaar yeh part sabse best tha 😉 . actually every part you write is best but this was totally exceptional 🤗 . see na in this part sujal aur kashish kareeb toh aaye 😳 . hey you know what mujhe na tumhare story badane ki speed bohot achi lagti hai 👏 . i mean ki bohot time nahi leti tum aik acha scene dalne mein . that's what i love wbout your writing 🤗 . you are straight to the point . wowwwwwwwwww.......uss farm house mein dono akele, bahar barish, uppar se they are out of city, jungle ke side mein jaha koi nahi reheta and all 😳 . how romanticcc......haaaaaaaaa......main toh puri fida hi hogayi thi part padte waqt 😳 . goshh....i love shiv 😆 . yaar he is hilarious 😆 . because of him na itni hassi aati hai 😉 . specially when sujal say ki "kya kashish geele kapdo mein raat gujare" and he says ki "kapde i kya jarurta hai, it's night time 🤣 . haaa haaaa haaa......it was really funny 😆 . good going shiv 😉 ....but yaar sujal and kashish rock in this story ⭐️ . sujal ki intensity aur kashish ki masumiyat, sujal is passionate and she is love 👍🏼 . they match each other perfectly 😉 . the part was great 👍🏼!!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.............can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey saba ur parts r too good yaar,lik ur ff a lot plz cont soon . 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzz......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 AWESOME PART...........CONTINUE SOON YAAR,ITNA LATE MAT KARNA NEXT PART 😆 ! 😛

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