TUMHARI AMAANAT (AK/MS)#2 epi pg 87,vmp89 - Page 68

Aww, it's over...I loved this fanfic...infact I enjoyed reading all you fanfics, they all are so different and unique, and you have a great writing style

The ending was sweet and sad at the same time...good to know that they passed away together..I really like this saying..it was soo nice

Kripa: Mere liye Taj Mahal nahin banaa sakte?"

Angad: Banaa sakta hoon….lekin nahin banaoonga……kyunki uska matlab hoga ki tumhare jaane ke baad mujhey zinda rehna padhega….aur wo main kar nahin paaoonga."

Keep up the good work, and good luck on your next fanfic

Nida 😊

How dare u... 😡 u made me cry...Kripa has Alzheimer and Angad has stroke... 😭 I was crying continuously for 2-3 min... u wrote an epilogue or tearful farewell... 😡 *sniffing* 😭 c i dont have a friend like angad to give his shirt for wiping my tears... 😭

okay... only relief is the Vishu-Yamraj conversation... 😆 this means Des-Pardes is a sequel of Tumhari Amaanat... interesting... please... dont u dare make me cry in that... 😭 enuf of crying in this itself... none of ur previous ff's made me cry like this... *sniffing* better take care of that... 😛

omg!!!! u made me cry...that was the best part ever!!! i cant believe even after all that..they die together...great ending..cant wait to read the sequel.

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i hate you i hate you...i have never cried in an ff or when it has ended...but tonight you made me cry...you killed both of them...i have never read an ff where that has happened before....the good thing is they lived and died together but the bad thing is that they died.....and that hurt me the most.....looking forward to reading ur new ff... 😭

Both left the world togther? That was an amazing story and loved reading every bit of it! 👏 👏

You are immensely talented... 😃

Loved the last bit where the Gods are fighting! 😆 I dont think they'll be able tp seperate AK.. but you'l just have to start your new FF quickly so we can find out! 😃

it was a really very good part n also touching as dey died n d way dey died 2gether 😭 n d conversation b/w d gods was good n hope in ur next ff also yamraj does not win n A-K b 2gether as always.

loved it really touching beautifully written brouht tears in my eyes everything was so exquistely calm serene and magnificent loved it hey whts wiht this yamraj dude tryin to seperate two sulmates

Hi everyone

A friend of mine, Muniza made this beautiful VM based on that last song in the epilogue

Please watch and comment:

http://www.badongo.com/vid/525219

Originally posted by: jdsean

Mindblowing!!!! 👏 👏 . Oh Bheegi, you really did it again and the Epilogue like made my day, very creative at the end wiht Vishnu, and I can't wait for the next ff. The poem that was at the beginning, it so fit with the whole story, I so love it. The fact that they died together, was great that they died in each others arms, so sweet if only things happended like this in real life. I thought I wouldn't like this story cuz you she would marry Shabd, but it exceeded all my expectations. Their love was so pure and true, that no matter what obstacle they overcame. Oh I loved the parts, where Neha got them to hold hands, and even at the age of 80 with Kripa's alzheimers they have such a connection. Truly, I've read a lot of romance books, but this story really was great and my love for AK grows more with stories like this. Ok Bye Take care.

Thanks for ur wonderful compliments JDsean...readers like u inspire me to keep writing and trying something new every time. I am glad u liked the different kind of story 😊