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Posted: 16 years ago

"kitne dukh ki baat hai!....
apne doston par se bhi vishwaas uth gaya
hai tera....fikar mat kar...
in mein se koi bhi nahin hai....!

kyonki...woh..traitor..
aur koi..nahi....tera..pati..
major rajveer singh shekhaawat hai!!"


a shot was fired!


"AAAAAAAAAAAH!!!...."
salim screamed.....rolling in pain...
and before anyone blinked..he lay dead!

there was a big hole on his forehead..

..the bullet had gone right through his head!


"shit!! naina!...
why d hell did u do that??
ab hum kya karenge?"

huda jilted her sharply...
shaking her shoulders....

naina was fuming in anger...
a maddening fury in her eyes...

how dare he!...

bhaai ko maar diya..
aur ab raj ke baare mein bakwaas...

then..all of a sudden...

she began trembling ...
shocked at what she'd just done...

although she knew that this is wat she'd
always wanted...but today..wen she....

the gun dropped off her hand...
and she slumped down on the floor....

closing her eyes tightly....

raj's words echoed in her mind...
& her reply did too...

we'll do it together....
yahi kaha tha maine....


but i killed him....alone...

i killed my brother's murderer...!
there was nothing wrong with it...
nothing....

"naina...tu theek to hai?"
abhi sat down next to her..
while huda was thinking of ways
to remove the body out of sight.....

she came out of her trance...

"hmm..maine...maar..diya ..
i..murdered..him.."

abhi realised wat she was goin through...

"haven't you done this before??
i mean interpol mein...
tumne kya pehle kabhi kisi ki
shoot nahi kiya kya?"

she shook her head.....
"i...shot...him...."

she pointed at salim...
"maine..khoon.."

"naina!!..calm down!...
he deserved it!...DON tha woh..

na jaane kitne logon ko usne tabaah kiya tha..
navin ki maut bhi iski wajaah se hui thi...

iski maut sirf tere haathon likhi thi yaar!..."

naina sighed...controlling herself a bit....
& finally nodded...

"shaayad tum..theek keh rahe ho...
bas..main thoda..darr..."

"meri biwi ..aur kisi se darr jaaye?..
how's dat possible jaan?"
raj stood there..smiling....

"raj!!.."
she got up..
and threw her arms around him....
tears flowing down her eyes....

"shhhhh...tum nahi karti..
to yeh main karta jaan....

and we're one aren't me?"


he whispered in her ears...
removing the tendrils off her face...

his fists were clenched tightly..
as she thrust herself on to him...

naina was unaware...of the fact..
that she was actually
crushing herself against his wound..

but her dear husband..didn't utter a sound..
inspite of the pain he experienced...

he was lost in the times they'd spent together..
drowned in love...

Dard main bhi yeh labb
muskura jaate hai..
beete lamhe hume jab bhi
yaad aate hai...

Channd lamhaat ke waaste hi sahi..
muskura ker mili thi mujhe zindagi...

teri agossh main din the mere kaate...
teri bahoon main thi meri raatein kaati...

aaj bhi jab woh pal mujhko yaad aate hai...
dil se saare gumon ko bhula jaate hai...



then..it struck her!

"shit!...tum..tum theek to ho?"

he nodded...

"tumse bada duffer nahi dekha maine..
i'm hurting you..aur tumne uff tak nahi kari...!
paagal ho kya raj?"
she was genuinely tensed...
and he grinned in turn...

"chilaana to band karo!...

aur jahaan tak paagalpan ki baat hai...
woh tumhe mujhse shaadi karne se
pehle sochna chaahiye tha...
it's too late to make amends!"
he winked...

"phir nautanki!..."
she smiled...and he quickly wiped
off her tears....

abhi & huda had been watching everything...

oscillating their expressions from grim ones...to
warm ..loving ones..

ooooh...aah...sooooo sweeeet....

"ab tum dono bandar humme
ghoorna band karoge??

and will u guys tell me..
wat made naina shoot salim?"

"ek remark!"
abhi raised his eyebrow...

"kya?"
he didn't get it....

"bechaare DON ji ne ek galti kardi...

aapki overly trusting ...
loyal loving biwi ke saamne..
usne tujhe gaddar bol diya!..."

huda shook his head..

"aur automatically..madam ke reflexive actions
jaag gaye...and she shot him dead...."
he finally smiled...

raj looked at her lovingly....
glad that her priorities were right this time....

"kyon..woh sahi nahi ho sakta tha kya?"

naina stared at him hard..
as if she'd knock him down any second..

"i don't find dat funny!"

grinning again..
he enveloped her in her arms....

"tum itni jaldi kaise waapis aa gaye raj?"
abhi asked...

"goli bas chookar chali gayi..
all i needed was a dressing..."

"ab ek baat sach-sach bataana..

tum dono miya-biwi kya khichdi
pakka rahe ho?...

salim ko delhi se faraar karwaane ki wajaah kya
hai?..
aur ..aur..aalekh ko aatank ki
raah par le gaya...
kya matlab hai is baat ka?"
huda eyed them strangely....

naina gazed into raj's eyes...
and raj gave a silent nod...

it was going to be a long night..

"ready for a lethal story guys??"

it took the couple 4 hours
to completely define wat a roller-coaster
ride their life had been...

"MY GOD!!..
itna kuch ho gaya aur tum dono...
and all the while..

naina!..u didn't trust me?"
huda was shocked...hurt...

"huda..samajhne ki koshish..."
naina tried explaining...

"hang on!...
do you trust us enough now??!!"
abhi asked...

"kyon bataate tum yeh sab...
if we didn't!"

raj sighed...
"kya tum kabhi maante aalekh gaddar hai?
nahi na...
hum kisi par vishwaas nahi kar sakte guys...
we were helpless!"

raj yawned...

"bahut gup-shup ho gayi...
raat ke 3 baj rahe hai...
raj..u better rest...tumhaari haalat
ab bhi theek nahi hai.."



she pulled him down to her lap...

as abhi & huda retired to
another small room in the godown..
taking kabir with them...

resting her back on the wall....
she stroked his hair...

till he was fast asleep in her lap...
gently clutching her waist...

and slowly..she too drifted off to sleep...

...........

"aaaaah!!"

raj's scream woke naina up....

"wat d hell??!!...kabir!..stop it!"
she screamed..

kabir was kicking raj...
and his wound hurt again...
bleeding....

furious..naina stood up...
placing raj's head carefully
on the floor..while he pressed his wound...
trying to stop the blood....

"himmat kaise hui raj ko ..."
she was holding kabir's collar...

WHACK!

he slapped her hard across her face...
and continued doing so till her lip bled..
and her cheeks grew red...

as hard as she tried..he thrust himself on her..
and continued beating her around...

raj meanwhile...
feeling ridiculously helpless...

managed standing on his feet..
taking the help of the wall to balance...

"maar diya baba ko..
tum dono ko main zinda nahi chodoonga!!"

he yelled at them...and shoved naina
against the wall...grasping her neck...

"aah..ch..chodo...leave..me.."
his grasp was too tight for her to do anything...
and she felt herself choking to death...

"ladki se kya lad raha hai kabir...
himmat hai to mujhse bhid na!..
yaan phir haath mein choodiyaan
pehen rakhi hain tune?"

raj knew..perfectly well..
ki kabir ko uksaana usse
haraane ka sabse bada tareeka tha,...

the man was too short-tempered
to handle insults...

"saale..teri..."
he banged naina's head hard on the wall..
and she almost felt it crack...

a pain shot through her skull..
and she was down on the floor..

"nia!"

he would've rushed next to her...
but kabir loomed in front of him...

"jail mein jo maar khaayi thi..
lagta hai woh bhool gaya tu.."
he boxed him on his face....

raj grinned...staring directly at him...
wiping away the blood from his lip...

"tujhe lagta hai tu aasaani se ek indian soldier ko
do ghoose maarega..
aur woh haar maanlega...

abbey saale...
meri training itni bekaar nahi hai..
ki tujh jaise keede mujh kuch kar sake....
try touching me once...."

raj winked...

"overconfidence major...!..."

but it wasn't...
..for raj was perfectly aware of his capabilities..
his strengths...and most importantly..
his spirit...

navin ki maut ...
tazz ki maut..
aalekh ki tabaahi...

ek junoon sawaar tha uske sar par...
which no one..no one could stop....

and so it happened...

wen kabir hit left..raj moved right..

wen kabir punched right..raj moved left...

and throughout..kabir found himself..
banging his head ...or breaking his
knuckles due to the wall in which his fist
often collided...

after 15 minutes of futile exercise...
kabir felt exhaustion claiming him...

"thak gaya kya ?"
raj smiled....
"nikal gaya saara dum!"

"saale...!"
kabir pushed him strongly against the wall..
managing a contact with raj's body for the first time....

rushing to the floor..where naina's gun lay
he picked it up..
and forced it at raj's temple...

"ab kya karega??,..
isi gun se baba ko tune khatam kiya
tha na..."

"maine nahi..naina ne..."

he was buying time....
trying his level best to divert kabir's attention...

"isne?!..to phir..pehle yeh maregi..!"

wat kabir didn't know..was d fact..that naina was
completely in her senses...

and the moment he approached her..
she shoved her foot in front..and he tripped down..
falling on his head...

"wen will you learn to play fair kabir?"
she smiled sarcastically..

the gun..now in her hand...
"naina..are u alright?"

she nodded...thrusting the gun in his
rock solid hands...
wen she found herself going off-balance...

"raj..kill him...!"
her eyes had a fire in them again..
and her words lit it in his eyes too....

but this time..
kabir had absolutely no remorse ...

in his heart..he came across as a cold-blooded animal...
who was waiting to attack..

he moved forward like a snake..
clutching naina's leg...
and jilting her down....

"u kill me..and i kill her.."
he held her neck ..ready to twist it any second..
"tere dono dost to waise bhi nikamme...
behosh pade hain..."

"yeh galat-faimi mein tum
na hi raho to accha hai.."
huda was pointing his gun directly at him...
and finally shot his leg...

kabir let go off naina..who quickly got away..
while the goon held his leg...

"that one..was for ruining our lives..
and for being a constant pain in the ass.."

huda passed the gun to abhi..
who shot his other leg..

"this one's for blackmailing..
and shoving aalekh in the wrong direction.."

the gun was passed to naina...
"yeh..nanoo ke liye.."
she shot him on his chest..
although in severe pain..he was still alive..

raj took the gun from her....

"yeh...mere doston ki zindagi tabaah karne ke liye..
meri biwi ko tang karne ke liye...
usse maarne ke liye...
humme alag karne ke liye.."
he shot the man thrice on his arms...

kis kadar tez raftaar thi zindagi...
kehkahe harr taraf thi khushi hi khushi...

aaj bhi jab woh din mujhko yaad aate hai...
guzre lamhe zehan main ubhar aate hai...


"aur yeh.."
naina and raj held the gun together...
"sabse important...
humaare desh ke youth ko..
future ko..tabaah karne ki naakaam koshish ke liye!"

they shot him on his head...

and that was his end..........

..

sometimes everyone does little mistakes...
and they did too this time...

no one remembered asking....

just who the hell that bloody traitor was..
who still remained amongst them??!!!

exhausted...in pain..
all four of them finally landed themselves
on the couch in
raj's cottage...

the moment she sat down...
she recieved a phone call....

"hmmmm....abhi...par..
theek hai..aati hoon..."

"kaun tha?.kahaan jaana hai tumhe?..
haalat dekh rahi ho apni jaan..
you're not leaving!"

"raj!..saans to lo!...

yudi tha...i have to go to delhi
right now...
tickets woh pehle hi buk kara chuka hai..
some final formalities...it's imp."
she kissed his cheek and stood up.....

"naina!!...tum...."

"please jaan.."
she winked at him...
..................................

he dropped her off to the airport with a
growing feeling of uncertainity...

something wasn't right........

Ae jaate hue lamhon zara thehro, zara thehro ...
Main bhi to chalta hoon, zara unse milta hoon...
Jo ek baat dil mein hai, unse kahoon...

Unke chehre ki yeh narmiyaan..
Unki zulfon ki yeh badliyaan..
Unki aankhon ke roshan diye...
Unke honton ki yeh surkhiyaan...

"don't go naina...kuch gadbad hai..."

"kuch nahi hai raj...
just remember..i love you.."

Sab unke hain jalwe, main chalne se pehle..
Saanson mein, aankhon mein,
khwaabon mein, yaadon mein
Aur is dil mein unko chhupaake rakhoon...

Main kahin bhi rahoon ae sanam..
Mujhko hai zindagi ki kasam..
Faaslein aate jaate rahe..
Pyaar lekin nahin hoga kam....


"i love you too...."

Jinhe chaahoon, jinhe poojoon,
unhe dekhoon, unhe chhoo loon...
Zara baatein to kar loon,
zara baahon mein bhar loon...
Main is chaand se maathe ko choom loon....


but this little wish remained unfulfilled..........
did it signify a deeper meaning..????


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Posted: 16 years ago
whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loooooooooooooooong update ....

isse mera thanx samajh lena for this time..
all of u replied!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ab zyaada nahi..4-5 updates shud finish the fic!!!

hopin the same no. of looooooooong replies dis time round!!

aur haan..agar zyaada bereham ho gayi kabir ke saath..
den sorry..but i feel he desrved it!!!

luuuuuuuuuuuuuv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

cyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Superb part. I lived the way Raj comforted Naina. And Kabir's death was worthy. He definitely deserved it. But They dont knw the traitor n Raj's feeling sumthing's not ryt. I guess sumthing really big n shocking is w8ing 4 us.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really gud plz conmtd soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow, these 2 are too much....they never leave any oppurtunity 4 romance, do they?!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Superb part. I lived the way Raj comforted Naina. And Kabir's death was worthy. He definitely deserved it. But They dont knw the traitor n Raj's feeling sumthing's not ryt. I guess sumthing really big n shocking is w8ing 4 us.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

ya ur guess is right
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Posted: 16 years ago

Naina landed at the delhi airport exactly
at midnight...and decided to call yudi immediately...

"i'm here...file mil gayi kya?"

"abhi nahi...mujhe headquarters jaa kar
laani padegi...they can't deliver it to me...
security reasons..."

"to phir kal milegi?"

"haan...and it has what you want.."

"par...iterpol ko traitors ka pata kaise chala?"

"that's their job naina!...
bas..
ab to main wait kar raha hoon naam saamne aane ki...
and den..."
his voice was crisp...

"...main interpol mein nahi hoon..
phir bhi u'r sharing all the
classified information with me..
i can't tell you how much this means to me...th..."

"stop!..thanks mat bolna ab please!..
aur by the way..ek goodnews hai...
i'm getting married......"

.......................................

raj tossed around in his bed...
unable to sleep...

it felt so funny....
sleeping without her in his arms....

i'm so accustomed to having her around..
ki ab mujhe.....

why didn't you take me along naina...?
kyon nahi chaahti thi tum ki main saath aaoon?

something is not right...
aaj mujhe ek baar phir ehsaas ho raha hai..
ki meri biwi mujhse kuch chupa rahi hai...
and i hate it.....

i can't tell you how much i love you..
aur agar tumhe kuch ho gaya...
main marr jaaoonga...

humein tum se pyaar kitanaa,..
ye hum naheen jaanate..

magar jee naheen sakate, ..
tumhaare beenaa

sunaa gam judaee kaa,
uthhaate hain log...
jaane jindagee kaise,
bitaate hain log...

din bhee yahaa to lage,
baras ke samaan...

humei intajaar kitanaa,
ye hum naheen jaanate..
magar jee naheen sakate, tumhaare beenaa..
..........................................

the following morning wen he got up..
after sleeping for probably 2 hours..

and resisting the urge to call her
about a hundred times at night....

he didn't know..
that the day was about to turn his life...

picking up the newspaper...
he called out...
"kaka!..abhi aur huda uth gaye kya?"

"nahi beta..abhi so rahein hai..
yeh lo.."

"yeh kya hai?..letter?"

"haan beta..koi darwaaze ke baahar rakh gaya
shaayad subaah-subaah..."

"ek cup chai de dena please kaka..
main yeh dekh leta hoon..."

he kept his feet on the table..
stretching a bit...
looking absolutely delightful in his kurta-pyjama..
and opened the letter...

it was short...but...

major...

zindagi main bahut baar waqt aisa aata hai,
jab aapka chaahne waala hi aapko rulaata hai,
magar vishwaas rakhna us pal...akele mein...
wo aapse kayi zyaada aansoo bahaata hai...

tumhaari biwi ki jaan khatre mein hai...
bacha sakte ho usse..to bacha lo...

aur yakeen nahi aata...
to yeh tumhaari bewakoofi hogi...

tumhaara shubchintak...



raj stood up...
shocked to the core...

was this a prank??...
aur in lines ka kya matlab hai...

kabir aur salim to marr chuke hain...

oh...ab samajh aaya...
is huda aur abhi ko to main..
chodoonga nahin...
itna bhadda mazaak!!!

he rushed to their room...
"utho..!...
i'll kill the two of you..."
he was kicking them..well..almost..

"abbey ruk!..bata to kya hua??"

"wat d hell is this?.
pata hai meri jaan nikal gayi thi.."
he was staring angrily at them...

rubbing their eyes..
the two of them read the letter..

"raj..jaan nikalni bhi chaahiye.."
abhi bit his lip...

"dost..kasam khaata hoon..yeh letter
humne nahi likha..."
huda looked tensed....

"wat?..u mean....naina...
shit!!"

his fingers quickly dialled
her no.....
"pick up the phone....
naina...dammit!.."

then he dialled yudi's no...
"yudi...naina kahaan hai?"

"ghar par hogi..."

"she's not pickin the phone!...
why did you call her to delhi?..
kya kaam tha aisa?"

"woh...main...nahi bata.."

"she's my wife !..
no more games saahni!..
bata mujhe!.."

"dude..i'm dead after this!...

usne mana kiya tha...tumhe bataane ke liye...
but..interpol ko traitor ke
baare mein pata chal gaya hai..
& i'll have the name today...

tumhaari tabiyat theek nahi thi..
so she told me to keep you out of this..
for your safety..."

"MY SAFETY!!...
to hell..."

"raj..relax...chinta mat karo..
i'll take care of her....promise.."

furious..raj slammed the phone down...

the bell rang...

"raj beta...tumse koi milne aaya hai.."
kaka called out...

freaked out..tensed....
he went to the living room....

and got the biggest shock of his life.....

standing in front of him..
was kabir's friend...the sheikh...
with a gun pointing at raj..
and a smile on his face...

"time's up!"

"no way!!!!!!!!!"

.....................
about 6 hours later...

naina calls yudi....

"file mili kya?"

"ek kaam karo..
meet me at cafe coffee day..

main file pick karke seedha wahi pahunchta hoon...
aur haan...woh..raj ka phone aaya tha subaah...
about 6 hours back..
i had to tell him everything..."

"wat?!..shit!..
main uski calls bhi nahi le paayi subaah..
and now..he isn't picking up the phone...
anyway..main aati hoon..."

"alright...aur naina..
just take care...tumhaari jaan khatre mein
ho sakti hai..."

"jaanti hoon..don't worry...

kaash mujhe pata hota...
ki...aaj subaah kisne mujhe
maarne ki koshish kari thi...to"

she'd decided to hide it..
but the fact slipped out..
"oops!"

"wat d hell!!!...
iska matlab raj sahi tha!...
naina...you're such a big idiot...
are u alright???"

"a..almost....main kitchen mein cooking kar rahi thi..
someone fired 3-4 bullets inside..
window toot gayi..
thoda kaanch chubha hai..nothin serious..
i'll see you in an hour..bye"

she disconnected the phone
before he screamed at her......
.............................

half an hour later...

she was about to leave..wen yudi called again...

the doorbell rang at the same time....
& she decided to open the door first..

simultaneously pickin up the phone...

"bas pahunch gayi yudi...
hey!!....."
she hugged shalini who
stood smiling at the door......

"naina..baat suno meri..."
yudi aws tensed..

"guess wat yudi......"

"naina...meri jaan khatre mein hai...
they'll kill me any second..
aur..tum ...
step back..close all doors...
kisi ko door mat kholna...
gaddar kaun hai..i know...
woh...."

"hello...hello...yudi...??
phone cut gaya...

pata nahi kya bol raha tha..
disturbance thi line mein bahut

anyway..ussi se milne jaa rahi thi..
come along...waise bhi..
uski hone waali biwi jo hain aap.."
naina winked...

"baad mein naina...ek problem hai..."
shalini smiled..

"par...car mein bata dena yaar..
aaj mujhe....kuch ..please..chal na..."
she held her hand..and pulled her along....

"naina...baat suno...
i need to talk to you..."

"chal na shaalu..baatein raastein mein..."

naina opened the door...

"darling!..stop or i'll shoot!"

shalini had her gun pointed on naina's head....

"jisse dhoondne jaa rahi ho..
woh main hi hoon...

yudi found out about me...and he lies dead now...

raj..i know you love him...is also probably dead...

aur ab..it's your turn baby!..."

shalini winked..still chewing her gum...



"tum...tum gaddar..par...
army..you're not in the army ..aur aalekh ne..."


"who said there was just one traitor????"






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Posted: 16 years ago
traitor stands revealed....

2 more updates to go....
i hope maine sab kuch sahi pace par kiya...
i'll cut back furthur in the next ones...

btw..howz d surprise???????????
jhatka laga???
.par abhi bahut kuch 2 updates mein pack hoga...
and there are 2 more shocks in store!!!

btw...
i hope this did come as a surprise...
agar foolish laga..to just wait
till d next update..clarify ho jaayega!!

hopin to see more replies!!!
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Oh gosh such a big conspiracy??? Shalini??? Now dats really hard to digest. And I really hope Raj is safe n sumhow he saves Naina also.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really gud plz contd soon

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Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

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7 months ago

HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR

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