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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part. Its gud dat Raj is a major now. Even I was thinking dat he shud be promoted coz he saved the defence minister. Well luved the way he executed the plan.

Raj n Naina's scenes wer very beautiful, specially where Raj cried in front of Naina 4 the 1st tym.
Well this near future is really confusing. but as u said its very near, we'll w8 4 dat part 2 cum.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.

thanks for comment
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

hell,.......i am again so late........i am really very very sorry.........well, meri pehli request toh reject ho gayi.....bechare Naveen aur tehzeeb had to give their lives.......i have literally cried in those scenes when raj and naina found out the truth abt naveen's death.......par tumne kaha their bodies were not found due to the fire......sach bataoooo i would not even mind ekta kapoor waale idea to bring back a dead guy by plastic surgery if deepika has those ideas for bringing back nanoo and tazz....hehehe......really......pata hai after reading the last few updates it is so difficult for me to come out of its daze......its amazing.......

even the way raj brought her back from her depression while bottling his own pain......it touched me.......
And now the last update......it is getting interesting by the moment........Raj-naina's romantic tit bits are really beautiful.....good to see they have recovered enough to give each other the time both deserve..........par ab yeh italics kya hai???....dekho meri last request toh kharij kar di gayi ab yeh waali mat karna.........plz plz take care of them and let them win without losing each other......plz.....
And thank you so much for the wonderful updates.....sorry for not being able to reply on time..........

its ok
aur nanoo aur taz ko wapis lana plastic sergery karwa kay
its not dipika,s type
aur hosakta hai request reject na hui ho
kyon ke fic abhi baki hai my friend
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Posted: 16 years ago
he tried to raise his head a bit...
but eventually gave up....

"tum kabhi sach mat bolna!!
your neck hurts doesn't it?"

naina glared at him as he lay
on the bed..glass in his hand....

shaking her head in sheer disapproval,
she bent down next to him...

supporting his head lightly by her hands..
she raised it a bit ...
"aaraam se...piyo..."

he drank the milk from the glass....

"yeh lo..happy?...
mujhe bacche ki taraah treat
karna band karo jaan...
i'm an army officer..."

"major saab...
officer honge aap warzone mein..
par yahaan mere ghar mein...
aap sirf mere ghaayal pati hai...
get it?"

she smiled.....

"yes ma'am!!"

"chalo...ab so...
main aati hoon..."

he held her arm...

"aye hello?...mujhe chod kar kahaan
jaa rahi ho?..
chup-chaap let jaao tum bhi..."

she grinned....
"accha baba...aa gayi..."

she lay next to him....

"now this is much better!!"
he hug her tightly...

"Dil Mein Jo Baat Hai Kah Doon,
Do You Really Feel The Way I Do ???
Love You O Sanam, Beet Jaaye Na Ye Pal...
Chahtein Kahein, Is Pal Ko Jee Le Chal...
Chal Chal Chal, Chal Chal,
Chal Chal Chal, Chal...."


"you're wounded!...
phir bhi tumhe romance soojh raha hai...
absolutely impossible!"

"haven't you heard..."

"what?"

"wounded lions are most dangerous...!"

"aah..really??..
to ab mera ghaayal sher kya karne waala hai?"

"well...i plan to devour my sexy wife!"
and began implementing his plan of action
by planting a string of kisses everywhere....

"Tumse Hua Jo Mera Samna, Manzil Mil Gayee..
Aisa Laga Meri Tanhai Ko, Mahfil Mil Gayee...

Har Dhadkan Hai Sajee, Tere Khayalon Se..
Hai Roshan Rom Rom, Tere Ujaalon Se...."

he was caressing her...


"Tera Lage Andaaz-E-Bayaan ..Aashiqana Bada....
Baithi Rahoon Pahloo Mein Tere Armaan Hai Mera...

Har Lamha Pyar Ki Karti Rahoon Baatein...
Shaam Savere Ho Sanam Yun Hi Mulaqatein,
..Yun Hi Mulaqa...."


she added softly...complementing him....

"exactly jaan!!...yun hi!...."
he bit her neck....

"ouch!..."

rubbing his nose with hers...

he lay next to her....
exhaustion claiming the better
of him....

she didn't question ..
for she understood...

and they went off to sleep........
.....................................

early next morning ...

"raj....raj wake up..."
she kissed him....

"gud morning...."
he stretched...

"gud afternoon!"
she chuckled at his stunned expression...

"afternoon!!...
tumne mujhe uthaaya kyon nahi!....
laptop...laptop laao!!"

he sat up a little too quickly...
& a pain rushed through his body...

"isiliye sone diya..
you were exhausted...
laptop kab se tumhaare side par hain...
i was waitin for you to get up...

par jab 1 baja..aur tum nahi uthe...
i couldn't resist not shaking you up..."

he smiled....& patted a position
next to him on the bed....
switching on the laptop...

"headphones kahaan hai Nia?"

she handed it to him...
as he put them on....

he could hear a converstion going on..
and by the time it ended...
raj was smiling big-time...

"kya suna?"

"it's amazing jaan!...

naa hi humaare paas kabir ki position hai
because of the tracking system..
i also heard him sending a consignment
of drugs to delhi...

koi truck hai..jo aaj jaane waala hai.."


"par delhi pahunch nahi paayega!"
she grinned...

"exactly!"

"you're brilliant raj!..

jab tum kabir se jail mein maar kha
rahe the...i can't tell you mujhe kaisa lag raha
tha...khoon khaul raha tha mera...
i felt like shooting him there & then..."


"but now you understand....

itni aasaani se woh marr jaata...
to is kabir ki jagaah koi aur kabir le leta...

but this way..we'll finish the entire ring...
poori chain destroy ho jaayegi naina...

that is why it was so important ki main us ke
pairon mein girta aur woh
BUG uski leg mein plant karta...
without him even realising what had gone wrong!"

she nodded..delighted......

the next few days..
would see the downfall of this terrorist group!
...............................................

"raj...huda here...
salim ko kahaan rakhna hai?"

"filhaal...kahin safely...
anywhere..but you guys stick to him..."

"alright...."

"by the way....
B.C ka phone aaya tha...

he thought some professionals were behind all
this...well done guys!..i'm impressed!"

huda laughed...

"kya yaar...

delhi police dhakan hai
kasam se!....
it was really easy..."

........................................

"bhaai...buri khabar hai.."

"kya hua?"

"jis truck mein humaara drugs ka consignment
dilli jaa raha tha...
woh..sadak se de-rail ho kar...khaai mein gir gaya...
abdul maara gaya..."

"goli maaro abdul ko!...
mera 50 crore ka nuksaan ho gaya....

ab dilli supplies nahi milengi...
to wahaan ka humaara dhandha
thanda par jaayega...

ja...paalan waale godown se agla consignment
pehle discharge karwaa...jitni jaldi ho sake...
2-3 din mein hi...go!"

"jee bhaai.."

kabir was furious...!

"saala zaroor pee-kar chala raha hoga...!"

................................................

"bhaai...woh...."

"kya hua ...band kyon baja hua hai tera?"
kabir was enjoying a drink...
a girl in his arms...

"bhaai...woh...plane...
jo hum hijack karne waale the..."

"shehnaaz ko air-hostess
bana kar bhejna tha jis mein?"

"jee...woh plane ki service band ho gayi....
aur airport par security 4 guna badaa dee gayi hai..."

"kya!!?...lekin achaanak?..."
he pushed the girl away...signalling her to leave....

"do din mein..yeh doosri baar humaara major plan
fail hua hai...ab...alert rehna...jaao!"

ho kya raha hai yeh sab.....

baba se baat...par baba toh abhi bhi...

"hello?...kabir bol raha hoon captain..."

"major...it's major kabir...
bol..." raj felt hatred piercing him...

"baba kahaan hai?"

"mere paas....."



"woh to main jaanta hoon....
dekh saale major...unhe kharonch
bhi aayi..to main...."

"hul mat dena!!...

i'm not taking your
shit anymore ..you understand...!

sabar kar...mil jaayega tera baap tujhe...
jaise hi main, naina is desh ko chodenge....
tera baap..tujh tak pahunch jaayega.."

.............................................
next day:

"bhaai...shehnaaz ki laash mili hai..."

"kya?..kahaan?...
woh to suicide bombing.....
school mein mili kya laash"

"nahi...someone killed her..
plan fail ho gaya..."

"saale jab bhi aata hai..
ek buri khabar laata hai..."

in sheer frustration...
kabir shot the man down....

............................................

following day:

"bh..bhaai.."
dey were all scared to bring bad news to him....

"koi nayi museebat hai na?"
his eyes had widened....

every plan was falling down....

"delhi ke sab bars par raid ho gayi hai....
thaapar...baaki sab...arrest ho gaye hain..."

..............................................

and the next...:

"border paar jaane waali
saari armaments ki shipment
border security force ne pakad li..."

and.....

"bhaai..100 crore ki jo fake currency
hum market mein spread karne lage the..
woh...."

nahi!..yeh sab....main barbaad ho raha hoon...
saara business....sab khatam...

"bhaai...
slave shipments seize ho gayi...
ab dubai naya maal kaise bheje?"

................

"bas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
band karo!!!...
kaun kar raha hai yeh sab...kaun???

ek-ek kar ke mujhe choor karne
ki saazish ho rahi hai...
itne saalon ka...."

"bhaai...barbaad ho gaye hum bhaai...
humaare paanchon godowns mein aag
lag gayi...sab jal kar raakh ho gaya..."

SHOT!!!!...
THE MAN WAS DEAD...

kabir locked himself in a room...

ek hafta...jail se nikle mujhe ek hafta nahi hua..
aur mujhe meri barbaadi nazar aa rahi hai...

iska sirf ek matlab hai...


kabir was talking to himself...
& raj's heartbeats fastened...

kahin isse mere plan ke baare mein...

kabir paced rapidly in his room...
iska ek hi matlab ho sakta hai...

mera plan leak kiya jaa raha hai...
mere is group mein...
koi police informer hai..
par kaun????

nahi...ab main kisi par vishwaas nahi kar sakta...

agla contract...100 million dollars ka hai...
bas..yeh mere haath lag jaaye...
to main phir se is organisation ko chala
sakoonga...

aaj raat...aaj raat ko hi sheikh se milna hoga...

"sheikh ko phone do?"

.........................................

"kya hua raj...?"

"he feels uske gang mein usse koi dhoka de raha hai...
and today...he's planning a resurrection of sorts.."

"resurrection?"

"haan...kisi sheikh ke saath
dreambar mein koi contract sign karne jaa raha hai...
100 million dollars ka..."

"100 million dollars!!!..."

"yup!....he feels ki yeh plan
sab theek kar dega..
but i intend to foil all his bloody plans!!"
raj winked at her....

the phone rang...

"naina..yudi bol raha hoon...
bad news..."

"malik faraar to..."

"nahin-nahin...
it's not dat...
woh...you've been suspended from interpol
operations naina...DEA ki part tum rahogi though..."

"suspended??...kyon?"
somehow...she didn't really feel anything....

"your decision to deport malik..to india
has caused lots of problems...."

she began laughing...

"yeah right!"

she added sarcastic...
"sabse badi to yeh..ki
woh log salim ko securely central
jail bhi nahi pahuncha sake....
LOSERS!"

"tum..tum udaas nahi ho?"

"why the hell should i be?...

main indian citizen hoon...
apni aur apne desh ki rakshaa kar sakti hoon...

i know how to distinguish between what is right..
and wat's wrong...

i have a loving husband...

and most importantly...
a mission on my hands..."
"whoa!!..calm down...
u sure got ur priorities right!..
got the point lady!...
main phone rakhta hoon...cya.."

"bye..."
she placed the phone down...

"something tells me..
dat you've just been fired..."

"thanx for putting it so directly.."

she chuckled at his disbelief....

"sach bataao..zara bhi bura nahi lag raha..?"
he asked...

"ummm..not right now...
ho sakta hai..thodi der baad ehsaas ho..."

"wat mission did you have in your hands by the way?"
he raised his eyebrow...

"arrey abhi to tumne kaha ki
hum kabir ka plan foil karenge..."

"hum nahi..main kahaan tha jaan..."

"don't start that with me!!!"

"par naina.."

"don't!!
interpol's kicked me out..par main
nanoo, tanu ke saath..."

"samajh gaya!!...got the point biwi!"
he raised his hands in defeat...

"love you for this!!...
ab main tayyar ho jaaoon...
2 ghante mein nikalna hoga..."

he nodded...
"par tayyar ho jaaoon matlab?"

she winked at him...
"you'll see jaan...
thoda sabar karo..."

her excitement waved at him...
and he grinned......
..........................

an hour later...
wen she came to the room..
raj almost collapsed out of shock!...

"tum..tum naina hi ho na?"

"very funny!"

"not for me!!!...
you know what??
you look like a character straight out of
Arabian Nights!!"

he began laughing...
"specially with that veil and stuff...
indeed very ...sexy..."

"tum bas...don't ever think straight!!"
she feigned anger...and walked away...

"arrey ...oh ho!...naina..
ruko...baat to suno..."
he held her shoulder...

"it's perfect!..
bas..i'm a little ..
kya boloon?..ajeeb lag raha hai mujhe..
tum phir se..bar dancer.."

"hang-on!!..."
her colour paled...
"tum..tum wahi hoge na..."

"of course...!
tumhe chod kar to ab waise
bhi nahi jaa sakta kahin!"

"thank god!..
tum aas-paas hoge to himmat rahegi..
warna...i might goof up.."

"no you won't..
maine kuch aur preparations bhi kar di hai..
now..here's the plan..."

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Posted: 16 years ago
that's all for today guys...

kabir bechaara to ab gaya....!!

hope it was ok...

thanx for reading....

byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part. I luved Raj n Naina's palns. They spoilt each n every plan of Kabir. It was so gud. And their convos wer also very loving. I luv Raj calling BIWI. CHO CHWEET!!!!!!!
I hope everything goes according to the plan only. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really gud plz contd soon srry 4 late comment want 2 no wat rn do now dey will destroy kabir
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesommmmmmmmmmmmmmme...dear.
fic k first epi se ab tak k sare uds read karne me thoda sa tym laga...par maine abhi abhi ise khatam kiya...aur mai bata nahin sakti ki yeh mujhe kitna achha laga. ..!!! i m speechless dear...!!! sab kuch hai...is me. action...emotion...romance...& of course...superb dials.
very nice...!!! is mai khaasiyat yeh hai k ek naye look k sath tumne ise likha hai.
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana25

it was really gud plz contd soon srry 4 late comment want 2 no wat rn do now dey will destroy kabir

its ok
i will
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: srojaleen

awesommmmmmmmmmmmmmme...dear.

fic k first epi se ab tak k sare uds read karne me thoda sa tym laga...par maine abhi abhi ise khatam kiya...aur mai bata nahin sakti ki yeh mujhe kitna achha laga. ..!!! i m speechless dear...!!! sab kuch hai...is me. action...emotion...romance...& of course...superb dials.
very nice...!!! is mai khaasiyat yeh hai k ek naye look k sath tumne ise likha hai.
plz cont soon.

thanks for comment
i m glad to know that u like it
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Posted: 16 years ago
"i'll be in dat corner , naina...
waise it's so smokey in here..
ki tumhe koi pehchaan nahi paata..."
raj whispered...

he was dressed in a long overcoat..
had glasses and a cap on...

"hmmm...
kabir kahi nazar aa raha hai tumhe?"

"filhaal to nahi...
but he should be here any second...
woh left corner par jo table hain..
dat sheikh there..i think ussi ke saath
meeting hogi.."

"theek hai..main chalti hoon
phir...on the dance floor.."
she sighed..trembling just a little bit..

"fikar mat karo jaan...
i'll be right here..
with my eyes only on you.."
she smiled wen she saw him grinning....

winking..they quickly separated....

sighing...naina initially mixed with the other dancers...
and after awhile...
tired....frustrated glanced at her husband...

true to his words..
he was eyeing her...after every 2 seconds...
and she felt her heart skip a beat...

for this time..she saw a thumbs-up sign...

kabir had arrived....

it took her a second to realize that
while others were dancing..
she stood still....

once again..she gelled along with them....

laila..laila..laila...

mast-mast toofaano mein..
mast-mast ek kashti hai..
mast-mast us kashti mein
mastaani laila....


the song played loudly...

toofan..
a storm was rising in her heart too...

as the time for the final blow was striking..
naina's nervousness increased too...

she turned a little too frequently...
to catch a glimpse of raj..
and he shook his head...
glaring ...warning her...

their eyes did all the talking.....
and raj understood...dat she was unable
to control her emotions any longer....

he needed to be there with her...
but..without drawing any attention
to himself...

par yeh main kaise karoonga??

kabir...
he's too busy to be bothered...

chal raj...aaj apni biwi ke liye...
yeh risk bhi utha hi le....

bas...

he took out a false moustache...
& stuck it on ...

dropped his overcoat on his seat..
and was next to her!!
he took her in his arms....

for a second she felt stupefied...
unable to recognise him...

yet sensing the familiar touch...

upon a closer look...her eyes widened..
"yahan kya kar rahe ho tum?"

she looked around instantly..
afraid of being caught...

"don't panic...
bahut se dancers ke dance partners hai..
i'm just one of them..."

"this is too risky...!!!"
she whispered....

"jaanta hoon...
pat tumhaari aankhon ka darr..
zyaada khatarnak tha..."
he smiled.....
"aur waise bhi...i forgot to hand these to you..."

he slipped a packet in her hand...

she clutched it tightly...
as a song started..

Ek hasina thi...Ek deewana tha....
Kya umar, kya samaa, kya zamana tha

Ek din woh mile...Roz milne lage...
Phir mohabbat huyi...Bas qayamat huyi


"naina..time to act love!"

holding her head high....
she departed from his arms....
and approached kabir's table...
still dancing..

something that was done frequently...

dancers would appoach customers...
trying to win them over...
and nia knew dat her action wouldn't seem strange...

besides..the veil covered her face....

circling around kabir's table...
she made an eye-contact with him...

Kho gaye tum kahan..Sunke yeh dastaan
Log hairaan hain...Kyunki anjaan hain

Ishq ki woh gali..Baat jiski chali
Us gali mein...Mera aana, jaana tha
Ek hasina thi..Ek deewana tha...

kabir felt strange....

he sensed a fire in those eyes...
which seemed familiar...

she was a fantastic distraction....
but this meeting was more important to him..
than any passing affair....

Oos hasin ne kaha....Suno jaanewafa
Yeh falak, yeh zameen...Tere bin kuch nahin...
Tujhpe marti hoon main..Pyaar karti hoon main

Baat kuch aur thi...Woh nazar-chor thi...
Uske dil mein chupi...Chaah daulat ki thi
Pyaar ka woh fakat ...Ek bahana tha


she was too hot for him..
a magnetic pull drew him to her
& he ordered her to come closer

raj sensed a fear for the first time
after years...as naina obliged....

stepping just a bit closer..
teasing kabir....

raj's wrists were clenched....

that's my wife out there, dammit!!

but this was just a part of the plan..
and raj was well aware of this solemn fact...

his hands were right on his gun...
he could need it any second...

not that her life was in trouble..
kabir could never touch her as long as
raj had salim...but....
one never knew wat psychos like him were
capable of doing!!!

meanwhile...naina slipped out of kabir's arms..
wen he tried to envelop her...and the sheikh smiled...
rubbing his beard...

naina picked up kabir's wine glass...
danced around him a bit...

gently took his face in her hands..
and made him gulp his drink....

kabir was overwhelmed...

he knew something was wrong...
but everything next to this woman felt
absolutely right....

he just had to drink watever she handed him...
even if it was poison...!!

and poison...it was!!!!

Bewafa yaar ne...Apne mehboob se
Aisa dhoka kiya ....Zaher usko diya...
zahar usko diya...


z..zeher....
suddenly it was all too clear..

the fire in her eyes...
the tease...

the magnetic attraction...

he had been administered poison...

par...par kyon...

"why???"
his mouth was beginning to feel bitter...

"pehchaano kabir...
i'm your death...!"
she whispered....

"n..naina..."
he clutched his throat...
unable to breathe...

"haan kabir...
& i just gave you the drugs..
you've been giving to me so frequently....

ecstacy...ocytoxin....

bas..the drug intake...
will be lethal in your case!"

kabir's mouth was beginning to foam...
as the sheikh tried to comprehend
wat was goin on....

she smiled at his agony....

Mar gaya woh jawan....Ab suno dastaan
Saamna jab hua....Phir wahi sab hua
Uspe yeh karz tha...Uska yeh farz tha.....
Farz ko karz apna chukana tha...




"t..tumne...mujhe dhokha...."
he was dizzy....

"dhokha!!...
i haven't even started the torture dear.."
she added sarcastically.....

"maaf..maaf kar do mujhe....
main..marna nahi chahta...."
he coughed.....

"maaf!!...
teri aukaad se...teri har nas se main waakif
hoon kabir....
you're a parasite...
maine..maine aur raj ne tujhe barbaad
kar diya...financially..emotionally....
and now...it'll be physically!

fikar mat kar...abhi tera waqt nahi aaya hai.."

he felt a relief....
although his strength failed every passing second....

"tujhe main itni aasaani se maar doon...
to kya faayda kabir...
main apne bhaai ki maut ke badle..
tujhe itne dard doongi...
ki maut bhi kaamp jaayegi...."

their conversation had been going on in whispers
till now...& the loud music probably
proved a boon for naina..

for it seemed that the sheikh hadn't heard a
word....

but now...wen she spoke the last few words...
forgetting that the music had stopped...

forgetting that she was trembling with anger...

forgetting tha her words had echoed in the bar...
which had abruptly grown silent....

the sheikh rose...anger..evident on his face...

the sheikh reached for his gun...
and pointed it right at her...

kabir's face hit the table...
as he became unconscious....

the trigger was about to be pressed
wen the sheikh felt a mighty object hit him in
his back....

"aaaaaaaah!!"
he clutched his head...

raj had hit him with a stool....

"naina...time to get out of here!!"
he pressed an alarm...
and in 2 seconds the place was swarming with
soldiers....

naina nodded..
raj picked kabir up...on one of his
shoulders...and began carrying him...

"sir..yeh aap kabir ko kahaan.."

one of his men asked...

"you don't have to worry about him officer...
quick...andar jaao.."

"sir!!"

"raj..tumne sheikh ko shoot kyon nahi kiya?"

"i want him alive..
hum ab bhi nahi jaante ki kabir aur uska
kya contract hone waala tha..."

"raaaaaaaaj!!"


"raaaaaaaaaj!..."
he was on the floor..wreathing in pain...

naina hadn't noticed wat had gone on...
inspite of standing next to him....

she'd been concentrating on holding kabir
straight..and hadn't realized that the path
raj led to was blocked...

apparently..the sheikh had tried to escape...
a bit too fast...and raj had seen him try....

he'd stuck his leg out on one of his sides..
and the sheikh had fallen flat on his face...

naina had then felt the entire weight of kabir's body
placed on her..as raj had pulled the sheikh up...
and a fist-fight had ensewed....

but the sheikh was desperate..
and quicker than raj....

kicking him hard...
and finally shooting him....

he'd escaped....

"raj..raj get up.."
she'd let kabir's body drop pn the floor
with a thud...

"main..shit!..."
he was in severe pain...
and simply couldn't hide it....

"naina...listen to me....
main..yahaan se aage nahi jaa
paaoonga..."

"r..raj..yeh tum...."
her breath was stuck in her throat..

"please listen to me darling...
mujhe...kuch nahi hoga...
but i can't budge....kabir ko le kar
jaao..yahaan se...."

"no!..i'm not leavin you!"
she felt a lump rising in her throat..
as the fact that she held her wounded husband
in her arms...wo was bleeding to death..
began to dawn on her...
scaring her...

"naina!!!...
leave!...jaan jaao....
agar in soldiers ko hum par
shak hua...to kabir ko hum..
yahaan se nahi...aaahh...le
jaa paayenge.....
i want...to..see...him...dead...
i..want..to..kill...him nia...
main aaoonga....."

his pain grew to an unbearable extent...

his abdomnal area bled profusely...
and he clutched it tighter....

"bhaai ko kho chuki hoon raj...
ab tumhe..."

"kuch nahi hoga!!..
trust me..tumna jitni der karogi...
medication mujhe...utni..hi..der se..
milegi...."

he pressed her hand tighter...
wiping away her tears....

"don't do this to me raj...oh.
alright...par....officer!!!"
she screamed....
"he's shot...help!!!!"


"yaad rakhna raj..
agar tumhe kuch hua...
i'll first shoot kabir & salim...
aur phir main khud marr jaaoongi..
i promise..!"

and he knew she would....

he smiled even in pain...

"i..have to go..before those
officers...main godown mein hongi raj...
i'll wait for you...before i finish
with these two...."

he nodded....
"tum nahi..main maaroonga inhe..
promise me...."

"both of us then..."
she managed a smile behind her
tears......

"bhaago naina..bhaago!!"


she turned around one last time..
to see him...
but he'd disappeared.....

i hope that means you're getting treated raj....

heaving & panting..
she moved ahead...
supporting kabir on one of her shoulders..

shoving him into her car...
she drove to a godown....

"huda....baahar aana please...
i've got him here..."
she called him out...

........................

huda came out....
& carried kabir inside...

the place was dark...
with a lot of hay around...
& some dilapidated machines....

"abhi,yudi kahaan hai?"

"abhi ne salim par nazar rakhi hui hai..
aur yudi...he ..he's off to delhi.."

"kya??...suddenly?..mujhe bataye..."
she knew something wasn't right....

"main bata raha hoon na...
2 ghante pehle..he got a phone call..
and all he said was that it
was damn urgent.."

naina nodded..wondering wat
could be moe important....

"itna andhera kyon kar rakha hai?"

"bas...kisi ko baahar se yeh na
lage ki hum andar hain...
just a little walk ahead...phir lighted hi hoga...."

true to his word...as
naina walked deeper into that godown...
illumination greeted her.....

"oh goodness!!...
naina tumhaare kapdon par yeh khoon ?...
ek minute...!!..r..raj kahaan hai?"
it was the first time dat huda had actually
seen her properly...and now...
stood horrified....

"raj ko goli lagi hai.."
she told him all that had happened....

"that was stupid naina!!
tumne usse chod kaise diya akela?
dimaag thikaane to hai tumhaara?"
he was unable to control his anger....

"h..huda...i..i'm sorry..."
she was gazing at him intently...

"huh?"

"main nahi jaanti...if..i'm right.
or wrong....par...ek time aisa tha..
jab maine tumhe...ek....
u really do care about raj..don't you?"

"are..you..alright??!!
of course i care!...
dost hai woh mera naina..
why're you asking all this?"

where the hell was her conversation going...

"chodo....malik kahaan hai..."

"come on..."
he moved north -west from dat point..
and took her to a room...


abhimanyu stood at a side...
while salim malik was tied to a chair...
and was evidently fast asleep...

this was the first time dat naina had actually seen the man...
and stood stunned..

"y..yeh malik hai?..DON?!"

abhi smiled...
"too old isn't he?..."

she nodded..
"isse dekh kar lagta nahi yeh...
itne logon ki maut ka zimmedaar..."

"hai naina!!..he is a bloody murderer...
physical strength ki isko kabhi shaayad zaroorat
hi nahi padi...he had money..power...
and most importantly..the sharpest mind
in the world..!..
daudta hai iska dimaag...
he's craving for everything...still...
army hai iski khud ki...
around the world.......saala...."
abhi felt silent....unable to express himself clearly....

"shabd kum pad gaye na abhi..."
huda pulled the man's hair...
and her jerked up....

naina felt her hatred for the man...
pounce once again in her heart..
as she saw a ruthless hunger in his eyes....

yeh insaan nahi hai.....

"kabir ?"
his voice echoed...

huda had still been supporting him....

naina walked upto him...
pulled kabir apart..and threw him at salim's feet..
"zinda hai.."

"tu wahi hai na..jisne mere bete ko dhoka diya tha?
u'll regret it, my dear..."

hie eyes glinted...and despite herself..
naina felt a fear rise in her...

iski aawaaz...it's...eerie...

"huda..gun"
she put her hand forward...

and he placed it in her hand....

"bahut naatak ho gaya tum baap-bete ka...
time's up!"
she loaded the' revolver....

but salim...instead of feeling grim..or terrified..
began laughing....

a hollow..loud..scary laughter...
that made her blood rise ....

"mujhe maar dogi..maaro...
aur zindagi bhar..."
salim winked ...
"yeh soch kar buddhe hona..
ki saala woh kaun sa traitor tha..
jisne na hi tumhaare bhaai ko marne diya...
balki aalekh..tere jigri dost ko....aatank ki raah par laaya..."

naina's eyes widened...

"t..tum jaante..ho usse?..
kaun hai woh?!!..bol!"
she began slapping him hard...


"bata mujhe!!"
she was screaming at him.....

"stop it naina!! ruk ja...."
huda pulled her away...

"tere bete ko main tere saamne maar doongi
salim..who is it..tell me!"

"uh..agar main kahoon...
huda toh?"

"wat?!...main?..saale bakwaas.."
huda thrashed him hard...

"yaan phir abhi?..woh bhi ho sakta hai!"

"yeah right!!...look you ass..i've got
better things to do!"
abhi looked super bored..
as naina stared at him..

"what?!..you don't think it's me..
do you?"
he was astounded....

salim laughed.....

"kitne dukh ki baat hai!....
apne doston par se bhi vishwaas uth gaya
hai tera....fikar mat kar...
in mein se koi bhi nahin hai....!

kyonki...woh..traitor..


aur koi..nahi....tera..pati..
major rajveer singh shekhaawat hai!!"

a shot was fired!

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