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388456

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Posted: 16 years ago

#391

NOOOOOOOOOOO...........don't kill them.......i start each time on the very same note.........hehe....kya karun its all so mysterious....lagta hai bas kissi tarah dono sahi salamat nikal aaye.......by the way...wow...shalini!!!!!!!!.............just forgot abt her.........par seriously all characters are so well placed in here.........awesome......hey, don't kill yudi too......plzzzzzzzzzzz......he's so nice and cute.......plzzz.........

aur last update was also too good....it felt such a relief when each bullet was shot on to kabir......mindblowing..........

waiting eagerly for the next update.........bye

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#392

"who said there was just one traitor????
aalekh ko sab pata ho..that's not necessary!"
shalini grinned..

"you mean...you have a ....
i don't believe this!!"
she was so stunned..
that words didn't come out of her.....
"r..raj....ke saath...kya?"

she was almost trembling...

"look sweetie..main usse maarna nahi chaahti thi..
he was basically a good guy...

abhi zinda hai...shaayad..
par zyaada time nahi hai uske paas....

aur jahaan tak yudi ka sawaal hai...
interpol mein hone ke baawajood...
mujhe nahi pehchaan paaya..

well..dat goes for you too.."
she winked...

"mujhe..kyon maarna..why're you killing me?
hum to dost"

"don't be such an idiot now!
dosti..friendship...emotions...
love....it's all shit!...
wat matters is money..power....!

you have to die honey....

tum bahut kuch jaanti ho...

yudi had that file...usse udaa diya...
file bhi le li...so no proofs will be left
against us.."

"ziya...tum..you're a doctor dammit!..
you took a pledge to save lives..not ruin them..!!

aur tum hi...drugs mein indulge...
i don't understand...it's so hard to believe.."
her heart beat faster now....

i have to keep her talking...
shaayad kuch time mile...to
i'll be able to pull a trick on her...

she didn't know how wrong she was here!!!

"lecture band karengi aap apna...
gun mere haath mein hain...

aur jahaan tak life save karne ki baat hai..
i'm doing exactly dat...
i'm saving my life by killing you..."

"tumhaari company...
is that involved...?"

"i head Pfizer dear...
jahaan tum aur raj aaye the...

remember the glass room..
wahaan yahi lethal drugs manufacture ho rahe the...

the security there was to keep the police out...
the moment i got a signal ki koi
narcotics bureau se aa raha hai..
woh poora room ground mein
submerge ho jaata tha..."

"what??..dat level of technology....!!"
naina was dumbstruck....

"research ..development..new drugs invent karna...
lethal drugs ko government se clearance dilwaana...
everything requires cash....

i'm a maniac naina...i love my job....

aur jahaan tak paise ka sawaal hai..
in drugs ko smuggle karke...
terrorists se haath milaakar...
woh bhi ho jaata hai...

afterall..
my life isn't being affected at all...
main aish kar rahi hoon...

par tumne aur tumhaare pati ne..
mere plans par paani daalne ke
saare plans bana rakhe the...

jisse pehle main expose hoon...
tum dispose hogi..."

at the same time...the door-bell rang.....
& naina's heart lifted....

"wait!!..main door ke peeche hoon..
open it....any smartness...and you're dead..
jo bhi hai..usse andar aane dena..
one more murder won't make a difference to me...!"

she took out her gun...
lay flat against the wall...
and naina slowly opened the door....

"badi der lagadi darwaaza
kholne mein beta...
kahaan thi?"

"uncle...aap?...
woh..please..aap..jaaiye...
mujhe kahin jaana hai..."
she nervously blabbered....

"arrey ruko..
aaraam se baat karte hain...
shaadi ke baad ab jaa kar mili ho..."

he strolled in calmly....
closing the door behind him....

and naina knew..it was too late....
but she had to alert him....

so she screamed...

"UNCLE!!"

he instantly turned...
and saw shalini holding a gun....

"yeh...yeh to tumhaari friend hai na....
wat's she doin with a revolver?"
his eyes widened....

"uncle..yeh...she's a terrorist...
almost..drugs scandal ke peeche...
navin ki maut ke peeche..iska haath hai..."
naina felt shattered...

"no way!..dekho..humme chod do...
tumhe kuch nahi hoga..."
he stepped closer to shalini...

"peeche raho..paas mat aao...
i'll shoot..."

but she didn't know she was dealing with
an armyman....

with a quick swirl B.C struck her arm..
& pulled her gun in his hands..

naina heaved a sigh of relief...
"oh god! uncle..aap theek hain na?!!..
ab jisse pehle yeh kuch kare....."

"call the police immediately naina...
time waste mat karo.."

naina rushed towards the phone...

"shit!!...phone line cut kar di hai...
my...where's my cell...?...
uncle aapka cell...?"

she turned to face him...
and what she saw left her pale......

she felt the floor slipping beneath her...

the world reeling.....

B.C...AND SHALINI WERE LOCKED IN A KISS!

"meet my wife beta!"

B.C grinned....

winking...
he fired a shot at his niece....

"aaaaaaaaaaah!!!"

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#393

alright!!!!

ab asli jhatka laga hoga hopefully!!!!

now i'm hopin to see loads of replies....
all of you who're readin....
ab to reply kar do!!!!!!

this is the highest moment in the fic
where everything stands revealed!

anyway..

abhi bhi 2 more updates hongi!

cyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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springsign29

@springsign29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#394

sorry fr nt replying since long....will comment fr sure reserved....

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sanjana25

@sanjana25

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#395

it was really gud plz contd soon n plz dont kill naina

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#396

so sorry Gazal...thoda busy thi...isiliye OL me nahin aa pa rahi thi regularlly...isiliye tumhare...last 2 uds par comment bhi nahin kar payi...!!!

bt finally i m here...

now abt d ud...

yaar...tum suspence me suspence add kar rahi ho...!!! achhe khaase logon ko traitor dikha rahi ho...well yeh shikayat nahin hai...bas mai to tarif kar rahi hun...kyun ki suspence to yahi hota hai na...ki jis par bilkul bhi doubt na ho...vo hi main villian nikle...!!!

to akhir naina aur raj ne mil kar kabir ko tapka hi diya...!!!

sach kahun to maine jab shalini ko is get-up me read kiya...mai hairan ho gayi...aur tumahe dimag ki tarif karne lagi...kyoun ki maine pahle se yeh guess kiya tha ki B.C hi main villian hoga...!!! well...mai jyada galat nahin thi...par ab B.C naina ko shoot kar rahe hain...!!! hey...gazal...tum jaldi se next ud post karo...!!!

aur haan...is fic ki happy ending honi chahiye...!!!

cont soon.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#397

I'm really shocked. BC??????? Main to behosh hi ho jaungi. I hope Raj is safe n will save Naina.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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388456

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#398

B.C??????????...........aaaaaahhhhhh.............god by the time this fic ends, i am sure i am gonna have atleast one heart attack...........phew.....well thats a compliment.........u make my heart run as if it is a participant of an olympics race.............hehehe........plzzz plzz naina ko bachaa lena.....sab tumhare hatho mein hain..........

BC and Shalini kissing!!!!!.........hehehe.....that was a cherry on the cake...........hehehehe...........awesome......plz ennumerate those jin par bharosa kiya jaa sakta hai.............goodness.......the most unexpected people turn out to be the most wanted ones............!!!!!!

GREAT UPDATE!!!!!!!!

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz
B.C??????????...........aaaaaahhhhhh.............god by the time this fic ends, i am sure i am gonna have atleast one heart attack...........phew.....well thats a compliment.........u make my heart run as if it is a participant of an olympics race.............hehehe........plzzz plzz naina ko bachaa lena.....sab tumhare hatho mein hain..........

BC and Shalini kissing!!!!!.........hehehe.....that was a cherry on the cake...........hehehehe...........awesome......plz ennumerate those jin par bharosa kiya jaa sakta hai.............goodness.......the most unexpected people turn out to be the most wanted ones............!!!!!!

GREAT UPDATE!!!!!!!!

yes the most unexpected one

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: srojaleen
so sorry Gazal...thoda busy thi...isiliye OL me nahin aa pa rahi thi regularlly...isiliye tumhare...last 2 uds par comment bhi nahin kar payi...!!!

bt finally i m here...

now abt d ud...

yaar...tum suspence me suspence add kar rahi ho...!!! achhe khaase logon ko traitor dikha rahi ho...well yeh shikayat nahin hai...bas mai to tarif kar rahi hun...kyun ki suspence to yahi hota hai na...ki jis par bilkul bhi doubt na ho...vo hi main villian nikle...!!!

to akhir naina aur raj ne mil kar kabir ko tapka hi diya...!!!

sach kahun to maine jab shalini ko is get-up me read kiya...mai hairan ho gayi...aur tumahe dimag ki tarif karne lagi...kyoun ki maine pahle se yeh guess kiya tha ki B.C hi main villian hoga...!!! well...mai jyada galat nahin thi...par ab B.C naina ko shoot kar rahe hain...!!! hey...gazal...tum jaldi se next ud post karo...!!!

aur haan...is fic ki happy ending honi chahiye...!!!

cont soon.