Love just Happens-PM- pg11 - UPDATED - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww i luved da last bit it was soooooooo sweet 😳 i could totally picture it 😉 atleast PM hav becum really gud friends hopefully they'll start developin feelins 4 1nother pretty soon 😛 update soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
that was a really nice part, cant wait for more!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
her!!!!!!! great! update!!!!!plzzzz continue soon!! loved the dsong and the dance!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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RECAP: Sneha's wedding and its one to remember

Now it was time for the bidaai and it was really sad. Almost everyone had cried. Mukti and Prena were holding each other and crying terribly. Anurag and Bajaj were crying as well and the others were weeping when Sneha hugged them, but most of all, Prem had cried the most! He knew that he hadn't known her for most of his life but the past few weeks that he had known her in, made a whole lot of a difference. She was his sister and he her bro. Nothing else mattered apart 4rm the fact that she was going away for ever now. Yeah, he could go and see her every now and then, but it wouldn't be the same as her NOT living in the same house. He was very upset right now. He pushed the car along with Tushar, Rajeev, Anurag and Bajaj. The car went out of sight and the guest left. Basu family left too. Meanwhile, the Bajaj family went back in the house and off to bed, each remembering their memories with Sneha.

NEXT MORNING
Prem went off jogging (he was wearing that white jogging bottoms - u knw, the one he wears where he tries to say sorry to Mukti after that incident with Karan) and saw Mukti and Rajeev down at the beach. She was in a crop top trackie with bottoms (blue colour) while he was in a black vest top with black bottoms. Both had water bottles with them and they both had caps on (Mukti had her hair in a ponytail)

Mukti's top


Mukti's bottoms


Mukti's cap


Rajeev's tracksuit & bottoms


Rajeev's cap


Prem walked up2 them and said hi
M: hi prem
R: hi dude. What's up?
P: nothing much, just came here for a jog
M: same here. We do it every morning,
P: same here, but I neva see ya 2
R: oh coz we haven't been here 4 the past few days that's why.
P: oh okay.
M: well Prem, we goin now. We'll see ya at home ok.
P: yh okay bye mukti bye jeev
M&R: bye Prem!

They ran of leaving Prem by himself on the beach shore, where he stood and watched them go. He walked along the shore and then remembered that his mom had told him to be back by 9am coz Sneha was coming home (as it was tradition for the bride to come to her parents home the next day after her wedding). Prem walked it back, thinking about Mukti all the time he went. He didn't know why, but he had felt something special as to whenever she was always around him. He remembered the time when they had first met, the time when she had told his mom about Aparna, the time when he stayed with her in hospital after she was beaten to death by Aparna's goon and the time he danced with her in Sneha's wedding last night. He wondered what he was feeling but all that could wait, right now he had get back home or his mom will becum MOTHER INDIA and would get the danda and would start hitting him with it. He headed home with a smile thinking about him mom and Mukti. How the 2 had changed his life, completely!

Prem reached home to find Mukti coming out of the outhouse and heading 2wards the house. She was dressed in plain white blue shalwar kameez which was simple yet really beautiful. It had sequences on it which made it sparkle in the sunlight.



Mukti walked into the house with Prem walking behind her (she didn't know that he was there). Prem went in after Mukti and found that most of his family members were there. It looked as if Sneha hadn't reached here yet along with Sharad. After greeting every1, he made his way upstairs to his room, where he came across Mukti. He analysed her again and smiled at her to which she smiled back. Walking pass him, she made her way downstairs, while he made his way to his room. He had no idea why he was sooooo happy on seeing Mukti but he felt at peace when ever he saw her. He quickly showered and put on fresh clothes. He took of all the rings and blings and even combed his hair so that he could look presentable downstairs. Making his way downstairs, he looked around for any sign of Mukti. He didn't know why he was looking for her but his eyes were in search for her. He found her talking to Prena and Sam, she was smiling at him – when she caught of him looking at her.
Jeev came up to him asking him: who u looking 4 Prem? Prem? Prem? helllllllo????????
Prem came out of his wonders and looked at Rajeev: huh, what did u say?
R: I said, who u looking 4?
P: oh no1, just wondering where my sister is. She is taking so long!
R: well, she ain't here. I don't know why girls take so long in getting change.
P: yh man, me too, always wondering.
Person: yh same here.

It was Sharad. It looked like he and Sneha had come. Prem and Rajeev hugged him in turns and then went over to Sneha who was talking to Mukti. Rajeev hugged her first and then Prem who said: ello sister, how r u?
S: I'm fine Prem, thanks 4 asking
M: yh sab batte chor do, yeh batao Sneha, tumhare suhaag raat kaisa ta?
R: yh batao na Sneha, kaisa ta?
S: tum dono beena, hamesha mera mazaak oora rahe hoon! Stop it please
M: pehle batao ki suhaag raat kaisa ta phir hum tumhe mazaak karke chordenge tekhe?
S: fine mukti!
M: so spill it out! How was it?
S: it was………….
Sh: G-R-E-A-T, E-X-C-E-L-L-E-N-T! Sali saap that's how it was
Mukti and Rajeev laughed while Prem just smiled.
Sneha (going red with embarrassment) said: sharad wht are u saying?
Sh: what am I saying biwi? Sali saap just asked a simple question and I answered it ok.
S: fine, you 3 (referring to Sharad, Mukti ans Rajeev) can never stop can u?
Sh,M&R: no we can't

Sneha shook her head while the others laughed continuously.
Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
🤣 🤣 omg da last bit was hilarious couldn't stop laughin 🤣 🤣 awwwwwwwww poor sneha jeev/mukti r jus soooooooooo sweet luved da way they were askin her ?s n gettin her embarrassed 2 top it off her hubby joins in 😳 😆 finally prem has started 2 feel sumthin 4 "basanti" can't wait 2 c sum romantic scenes with em 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
hey that wasa great update!! plzzz continue soon!!!! can't wait til Prem falls in love with Mukti!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
owwww prems starting to get feelings! this is great, continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
please continue soon i really want Prem and Mukti together!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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RECAP: Prem starts developing feelings 4 Mukti? Sneha and Sharad come over to Bajaj house and Mukti and Jeev ask Sneha how her wedding night was when Sharad answered to which she gets embarrassed.

It was lunch time. Sneha and Sharad had reluctantly agreed after some threatening from Prena and a few pleadings from Mukti & Rajeev as they wanted to spend some time with Sneha be4 Jeev goes back home.

Prena had set out the table in the garden since it was quite a big lot of people who was sitting with them. Soon everyone was sitting around the table enjoying lunch and started to talk about things. Anurag and Mr.Bajaj was talking about how their business was going, Prena & Sam were talking about their houses and the kids were just talking about things. Prem and Sharad were talking about having a party, Sneha, Mukti & Jeev were talking non-stop (meaning catching up) and Tushar, Kuki and Vishaka were just having food & at the same time chatting.

Sharad then announced that in honour of his wedding, he was gonna throw a party for everyone and Bajaj and Basu pariwaar HAD to come whether they liked it or not. Everyone thought it was a great idea and agreed but on 1 condition – that they have a separate party - meaning one for adults and one for youngsters. Sharad agreed to the condition and he and Sneha left after a forceful bowl of desert which was made by Prena & was given 4rm her to them.

Basu pariwaar also left after thanking Prena. Now everyone went back to their daily jobs. Prena was in the kitchen making dinner with the help of Rajeev & Mukti while Mr. Bajaj and Tushar were discussing business. Prem just sat there on the sofa watching Mukti talk to his mom and Rajeev while the 2 kept on laughing as she talked. Prem thought of how lucky he was to have such a caring family. He remembered that Mr. Mithul who had given his heart to Mukti and how he had said that he didn't have anyone in this world, how he was all alone and no-one to care 4 him. He really thanked god for giving him such a wonderful and caring family. Even though he didn't have a good upbringing, he still felt secured and all.

Prena came up2 him and sat down next 2 him smiling. He smiled back at his mom. He then went back to watch Mukti, who was still in the kitchen. Prem smiled at the sight of her. She was in the kitchen along with Jeev, who was cutting the peppers as he was making a salad. According to Mukti and Prena, it was one of his finest makes eva! Both were dressed up as professional chefs, as if they were in some professional kitchen preparing a meal for someone. Mukti was chopping the onions really fast, that Prem could see and Jeev was frying the chicken really fast too. It seemed as though they did really know how to cook and that too fast, really fast.

Prena saw where he was looking and smiled 2 her-self. It seemed as though Prem was feeling something 4 her daughter, but she didn't know whether it was love or just something else. She had to find out ASAP!

Prem went upstairs after a last look at Mukti who was now laughing at a joke that Rajeev had told her. How he loved that laugh that she had. He smiled at himself & then headed upstairs back to his room where he stopped in the passage/hall way and remembered all his times with Mukti. He didn't know whether he was in LOVE or not but he wanted to find out real soon! He was smiling a lot nowadays. Heading back to his room, he didn't notice Prena standing there watching him
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
wow! prem is in luv with mukti..........gr8 update!
continue sooooooooooooooon!!!

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