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Posted: 17 years ago
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RECAP: @ the Garewals house and Mukti invites Sujal-Kashish 4 dinner be4 Rajeev leaves.


The 2 couples went back to Bajaj house entering laughing merrily and chatting non-stop. Everyone was sitting down on the sofa's talking about something. Anurag & Sam were there too. They saw the 4 coming in and noticed how happy they were. Prem came 4rm upstairs to find Mukti laughing away. He smiled but was wondering what she was laughing about.

They all stood by the sofa and greeted them with pleasure. Everyone greeted them back. Just then Prerna asked:

Pr: bacho, tum log itne haste kyu karahe houn?

Sn: nothing mom, just remembered today's incident. It was just such a good plan that we had come with. She told them all about it & @ the end they were too in fits of laughter. Sharad and Rajeev felt embarrassed. They had red ears and blushed. Rajeev changed the topic.

R: choti ma, Mukti has invited Sujal bhaiya and Kashish di over for dinner ok. So I'll be making dinner. Choti ma, I swear, u should taste Kashish di's dishes. She is the best cook u knw. Prerna gave him a stern look – 'after u of corse choti ma.'

Everyone laughed. Prerna had always made the kids scared and react like that. Rajeev sighed: 'Phew, that was close!'

Prerna pulled his ears really tight which made him shriek with pain. Everyone else continued on laughing.

R: choti ma, chorye na mere kaano ko. Please, it hurts a lot.

Pr: acha, dard hora hain, to tumhe pehle iske baare mein soochna chahiye tha yeh sab kehne se pehle he.

R: ok ok chotima, agli baar nahin karonga tekhe. Abh aap please mere kaano ko choriye na.

Pr: tekhe par agli baar aisa maath karna.

She let go of him and turned back towards the kitchen. Then she heard a giggle. She looked back & everyone was silent. She went back towards the kitchen and heard it again.

Pr: koun hasraha hain?

Rajeev burst out laughing and ran for it. Prerna found out what he was laughing about and chased him all around the house. All were amused @ the sight and followed Prerna chasing Rajeev around the house with their eyes.

Rajeev came to a halt and hid behind Mr. Bajaj who stop Prerna 4rm coming after Rajeev.

MB: Prerna kya karahi hain tum? To usse kyu pecha karahi hain? Bechara kitna takh gaya hain, usse aram karne to do.

Pr: are Mr. Bajaj aap usse nahin jaante jaisa mein usse jaanti hoon. Yeh to shaitan waala hain aur saath saath uske madad karne keliye Mukti aur Sneha hain!

Sneha and Mukti became shocked when they heard Prerna saying their name.

S & M: KYA? HUM!

Pr: haan aur koun hoga? Tum theeno ek ban karke kitne saare shararte karte hain. Bachpan main to bhi aisa he the. School ke baad shararte, h/w ke baad shararte. Mujhe bhi tang karahe the tum theeno.

S: par mom woh to tab tha jab hum bache the. Abhi to hum bara hogaya hain.

M: haan choti ma, Sneha sahi kehrahi hain. Magar ek baat kaho, woh dinno to kitna acha tha hain Sneha. Maazak, shararte , masti. Oh those were the days – she said dreamily.

Prem looked @ her face. It was sweet and so cute. He could stay here forever and look @ that sight.

S: haan Mukti tum bilkul sahi kehrahi hoon

Sharad shook Prem out his thoughts when he said:

Sh: Prem kya howa tujhe haan? Main kabse dekhraha hoon ke tumhe to kuch khoye hoye dekh raha hain.

P: nothing dude he lied. I'm just thinking bout this new project I have going on.

Sh: ok then. He turned towards Prerna and said: mamma, abh humhe to jaana hain, shaam keliye tayair hona hain.

Pr: tekhe Sharad.

Sneha and Sharad bid bye to everyone and left. Meanwhile Rajeev asked forgiveness 4rm Prerna to which she forgave him reluctantly and then she headed back to the kitchen and he followed her as he was making dinner. Mr Bajaj went to go and drop Anurag & Sam to their car and had invited them 4 dinner tonight and to bring the whole family 2 which Anurag accepted. Then they too left.

Back in the living room, Mukti was standing there looking around as if trying to find something to do. She then noticed Prem who was still dreamily looking @ her. She went forward to him and snapped her fingers in4rnt of his face. She called out to him:

M: Prem Prem Prem!

P: huh (coming out of his dream land)

M: main tumhe kab se bolarahi hoon.

P: oh sorry Mukti.

M: its ok, well main to jarahi hoon Choti ma or Jeev ko madad karne main. Don't forget to dress up smartly 2nite. We have guest.

P: will do Mukti.

M: bye

She went forwards towards the kitchen.

Prem thinking: Mukti, agar tum mere liye kuch mehsoos karti hoon, to tum mere taraf zaroor dekhi gi. Turn, turn, turn.

He looked @ her waiting for a response. Almost loosing hope, he looked @ her to find her staring back @ him. She smiled @ him 2 which he smiled back. She went off towards the kitchen whereas he just stood there looking @ her go.

DINNER TIME:

Bajaj house was filled with the delicious smell of: Butter Chicken, Chicken tikka, Fish Curry, Fried Fish. Then there was a salad that was hand made. Basu pariwaar came and Bajaj pariwaar welcome them in. Sharad & Sneha came in @ the same time as Sujal and Kashish and then everyone started to talk. Prem came down and greeted every1 but he had eyes only for Mukti. Almost everyone was waiting for her & Rajeev to come down and they finally did. Prem gaped @ her as she came down the stairs along with Rajeev. She looked quite a sight he thought. Mukti was dressed in a white based saree with a simple diamond necklace. She wore white bangles and had payal on her feet whereas Rajeev was in a white based suit looking dashing. Prem dreamed that he came down the stairs with her instead of Rajeev. She was looking amazing.

Mukti and Rajeev met everyone and hugged Sujal and Kashish. They thanked them for accepting their invite to come over.

Prem watched Mukti throughout the whole evening. He began to vision himself and Mukti standing some-where alone; away 4rm everyone else; somewhere where it was just them 2.

DREAM SEQUENCE:

He was on a speed boat. Wearing a see-through white T-Shirt & a pair of plain blue jeans. He then saw a figure in the water that was wet; with a violin wearing a black swimming outfit that she looked to HOT in!

He got of the boat and went in the water towards the figure. Trying to make her out, he saw that it was MUKTI. He went forward to her while her back was still towards him. He touched her back and she gasped. He heard and smiled. He kissed her back and then made her turn towards him. He smiled @ her to which she smiled back. He leaned forward and kissed her on the cheek. He then made his way down to her neck. She hugged him as he kissed her down.

He faced her again but she was gone. He looked around for her but didn't find her. He then heard a violin again but this time it was coming 4rm the rocks. This time Mukti was dressed in a:

He went up to her and sat behind her. He started to kiss her 4rm the neck and made his way down 4rm the back while she continued on playing the instrument. He smiled @ the sound of the music that she was playing.

In the background the song 'Dil Deewana – 4rm Janasheen' is being played.

Just then he saw something coming forward. He didn't now what it was. He turned to look @ Mukti but she was gone. He hoped to hear the music again and to see her again. He looked back @ the figure and saw who it was. What was he doing there?

Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwww Rajeevz jus 2 cute 😳 luved da dream sequence 😛 i'm thinkin it mite b Rajeev dat Prem saw 😉 update soon lukin 4ward 2 da next part 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
hey patel awsome update 😛 ..hmmm .... luved da dream squence 😳 please update sooon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
very cute fanfic! 👏 when are you next updating?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this ff will be updated 2morrow. a special post for my readers.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update can't wait 4 the next part

Luv,

Saniya

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