WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 37

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: phool527

awwwnn man.. now its gonna be fun... heeheh.. hey arwa r u taking off for muharram.. anywayz great part.. plzz continue soon..

thanx

yes i did take the days off coz of muharrum but now im back and will continue soon.

thanx for reading and appreciating.

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guys thanx to all of u for appreciating this ff

well im back and now ill continue soon.

i hope u guys catch it and i hope u guys enjoy it too.

thanx again and yes do read the replies i wrote. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part eighty two

Kripa:
it was so nice of you to come Akshat 😊 You know me yaha bilkul bore horahee thee

Akshat: acha? 😕 (in his mind)yeh kya naya natak hai. Jab Angad yaha hai to phir yeh...khair mujhe kya. Yeh to acha hai ke yeh meree taraf kheechee chali aarahee hai 😈. Ab os Angad ko bhi dekha doonga.

As he sat there thinking, Kripa made a face 😔 and looked at Mishti who stood behind Akshat's sofa. She gestured Kripa to say something.

Kripa:
Aksssshat!😲 kaha kho gaye? I mean itnee khoobsurat larki tumhaare saamne baithee hai, or tum ho ke...

Akshat: Oh I'm sorry. Actually I wanted to talk to you, (looking at Mishti) kahi or chale?

She again looked at Msihti to show her what to do. Mishti told her to say yes.

Kripa:
Sure 😃 wherever you say sweety 😉 (she thought) kya pakao lines bolrahee hai tu Kripa 😡. Not even he will buy it.

Akshat:
okays to neeche pool cafe pe chale?

Before Kripa could answer, she noticed Mishti gesturing her to say she will come in five minutes.

Kripa:
ha, ha 😛 tum joa and I'll be right there.

Akshat got up and left. Then Kripa felt sick 🤢. she felt awful.

Kripa: 😔
Mishti nahi hoga mujhse

Mishti: 😡 just shut up Kripa

Kripa: 😔 daant kyu rahee hai?

Mishti: or nahi to kya karoo. ek to khud bacho jese rotee hai 😛 or jab oska solution nikaal te hai to phirse bacho jese nakhre kartee hai. I mean grow up Kripa 😡

Kripa: theek hai 😳 me jaarahee hu

Mishti: kaha?

Kripa: neeche, pool cafe me

Mishti: (examines her) 😲 yeh pehan kar?

Kripa: (checks her red salwaar kameez) kya burai hai is me? 😕

Mishti:
tu mandir jaarahee hai ke swimming pool pe? 😛 ek minute, thair. (she goes inside the bedroom and takes something out from Kripa's drawer) Yeh le

Kripa: (surprisingly 😲 looks at the two piece swim suit Mishti came with) yeh kya hai?

Mishti: yeh mene tere liye rakha tha ke shayad tujhe iskee zaroorat pare. ab lagta hai ke waqt aagaya hai.

Kripa: 😳 me yeh kese...nahi...

Mishti: ab laayee hu to pehen bhi le

Kripa: na baba. I mean no way 😒 am I going out like that

Mishti: Tu zidd mat kar 😳 ise pehen, phir jaa.

Kripa: 😡 mene kaha na ke me nahi pehnoongee

Mishti: theek hai 😡 teree marzi. ab iska kya karoo me?

Kripa: kachre me daal de 😛

Mishti left in annoyance 😡 Kripa made her way to the window to check if Akshat had reached the cafe but since they were so high up she couldn't see clearly. Then she remembered she had brought binoculars so she got them and then when she looked around and to her surprise 😲 she saw a bare chested Angad doing press ups near the pool. God the hot sun gleamed on his skin. It just made him so damn hot 😎 that she felt like licking his body. Ugggh! 😳 she shook her head to get all the dirty ideas out. Then she looked again and anger began to flare on her face 😡 when she saw Simmone swimming up to him in her striped terry bikini. She slowly stepped out and stood in front of him as if she was modelling. Ugggh! 😡😡 she really wanted to go down and strangle her.

She quickly rushed to Mishti and saw her throwing the bikini in the waste bin.

Kripa: (snatching it) 😲
yeh kya karahee hai tu?

Mishti: tu ne hee to kaha ke phek de 😛

Kripa: I've changed my mind. Ab me ise pehen ke hee jaoongee 😳

Mishti: are you sure? 😕

Kripa: ha 👍🏼 Isme hairaan hone kee kya baat hai, kya me nahi pehen saktee?

Mishti: are tu sab kuch karsakti hai meree ma,😛 ab bus tu jaa. 👍🏼

By the pool...

Angad was busily enjoying the view Simmone was providing whilst he continued his workout. Just then he paused and his eyes became glued 😍 on the new arrival. She had worn a short white robe and it was open from the front which revealed her blue printed myra halter bikini with a tie neck. Her slim frame was too sexy and and and...

Angad thought: My God! 😲 It's Kripa. Wow 😃 She's gotta stop teasing me like this 😛

He kept on following her forgetting about Simmone. Actually she didn't exist for him anymore. He saw Kripa walking towards the cafe, tying her robe and and and...

Angad thought: Yeh yaha kya karaha hai? 😕 Or Kripa oske paas...God damn it! 😡

He saw Akshat greeting her and Angad didn't like it at all. Akshat was the wrong guy and he had to preserve his possession from getting into someone else's hands. He shot up on his feet and walked off towards the cafe ignoring Simmone. He reached and saw them busily talking.

Angad:
Hey Akshat, what a pleasant surprise

Akshat: Oh come on Angad 😛 You don't have to show that you're pleased to see me.

Angad: Tum yaha kya karahe ho? 😕

Kripa: Excuse me...😎 mene Akshat ko yaha bulaaaya hai. Kyu koi aitraaz 😛

Angad: Huh aitraaz? 😊 not at all. Bus hairaan hu ke when did this club start alowing dogs to come in.

Akshat wanted to charge on Angad but Kripa intervened.

Kripa: 😛
oho Akshat. Tumhe nahi lagta ke yaha pe bohat garmee hai. Come na lets go for a swim 😉

She gave her hand out to Akshat who took it and both of them climbed in the pool, whilst an angry Angad 😡 overlooked. He couldn't tolerate Akshat touching her and laughing with her. They were splashing water at each other. His nostrils flared with anger 😡 and he felt like beating the lights out of Akshat. Soon they were climbing out again.

Akshat:
hey, tum jaake change karlo. I'll catch you later on okay.

Kripa nodded and waited till he left. Then she began climbing out when she saw a hand being extended out for her. She looked up and saw Angad. she ignored it and held onto the railings instead. She walked off and Angad followed.

Angad:
😒 Tum Akshat ke saat kyu ghoom rahee ho?

Kripa: 😡 tumse matlab?

Angad: (obstructing her) matlab hai. Wo acha larka nahi hai

Kripa: Oh really...to phir acha larka koun hai? Tum? 😛

Angad: God damn it Kripa! 😡 tum ose nahi milogee

Kripa: 😲 how dare you order me? look me jo bhi karoo wo meree marzi. Tumhe kya? 😒 Tum joa or apni Simmone ka khayaal rakho 😡

As she turned around Angad held onto her hand to prevent her from going.

Kripa:
let me go Angad 😳

Angad: pehle meree baat suno

Kripa: 😡 I said leave me (she jerks her hand away from him)

Angad:
meree baat suno Kripa

Kripa: 😒 kyu sunoo me? Just go away!

She pushes him quite hard which makes him loose balance and fall in the pool

end of part.

so how did u guys like the first ignition of jealousy in Angad?

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey !!!!!wow,,,,,,,,,,,,bahut accha part tha 👏 ,,,,,,,,,atlast you made angad jealous,,,,,,,, 😆 😆
thanx for the update,,,,,,
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

hey !!!!!wow,,,,,,,,,,,,bahut accha part tha 👏 ,,,,,,,,,atlast you made angad jealous,,,,,,,, 😆 😆
thanx for the update,,,,,,

hey so u finally came back too

yeh thanx for that

finally i got to the part i wanted to for a long time and now there wont be any more delays hopefully

anyways carry on reading and dont stop commenting 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

ahh very good part 😳
heheh angad is jealous😆😆
kripa pushed him into the pool haha😆😆😆
continue soon 😳
😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: x hollister x

ahh very good part 😳
heheh angad is jealous😆😆
kripa pushed him into the pool haha😆😆😆
continue soon 😳
😊

hey thanx dear

yeh he certainly is and now theres going to be fun

hope u catch the next part too.

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Posted: 17 years ago
luved to see JEALOUS angad and kripa pushed him in the pool 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: deeya123

luved to see JEALOUS angad and kripa pushed him in the pool 😆

thanx deeya

im glad u luved this part.

do catch the next one as well

continue reading and appreciating 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
finally angad will feel how kripa was feeling when he was with simone god i wonder what will happen next totally loved the part 😳

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