WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 39

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Posted: 17 years ago
LMAO.. hahahahahah.. 🤣 that was soo mean of angad.. he threw kripa on the floor.. poor girl.. o man.. anywayz great part yaar.. continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
dont mind but this part was not interesting,,,,,,,,,😭
because i aspect a lot from u,,,,,,,,,,, 😳
anyways i hope that next part will be total fun and masti,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: phool527

LMAO.. hahahahahah.. 🤣 that was soo mean of angad.. he threw kripa on the floor.. poor girl.. o man.. anywayz great part yaar.. continue sooon



hey thanx

yeh he was a right meany doing that but he was just so annoyed that he just threw her away.

well thanx for appreciating and i hope u continue reading.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

dont mind but this part was not interesting,,,,,,,,,😭
because i aspect a lot from u,,,,,,,,,,, 😳
anyways i hope that next part will be total fun and masti,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, 😊



thats so mean 😭

hahaha so u expect a lot from me huh. well then ready the other ff coz i told u that ive started to loose interest in this one.

hmmmm lagta hai ke ab kuch karna hee parega.

if u want masti and dhamaal then do catch the next few parts.

ab Angad Akshat ko maa chakhaehga or Kripa ko ora lejaehga. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
interesting and exciting loved it wow they changed the steps the pari and saumyas part was really cute
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Posted: 17 years ago
nopes,plz dont loose interest in this because if this happens than u wont write,,,,,,,,
ek part agar acha nahi toh kya baki sab part toh superhit hai na,,,,
and i told you that i m always waiting for u to update so i m going to read the further parts,dont wory bout that,,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

interesting and exciting loved it wow they changed the steps the pari and saumyas part was really cute



thanx for appreciating

at least one person came who appreciated those parts

nah just kidding thanx again and i hope u continue reading and appreciating.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

nopes,plz dont loose interest in this because if this happens than u wont write,,,,,,,,
ek part agar acha nahi toh kya baki sab part toh superhit hai na,,,,
and i told you that i m always waiting for u to update so i m going to read the further parts,dont wory bout that,,,,,,,,,,



now ur pleading

ab to kuch karna hee parega

dont worry me yeh ff adhe me nahi chore ne waali

superhit? wat happened to being not wat u expected? anyways ill try and keep up to ur expectations then.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part eighty four

Instructor:
😡 what the hell were you guys doing out there? Saare kiya karam pe paani daal diya. I had told you before 😳 to keep your personal differences aside. Ab to competition me aage to kya, rehne ko bhi miljaye to ganeemat hai tum logo ke liye. I've just given up.

He stormed off. Angad got frustrated 😡 and left, kicking away a table, whilst Kripa also left. The competition held no importance for them anymore.

outside the show had finished and now the announcer was going to announce the winners of that day.

Announcer:
aaj ka competition bohat hee khoob tha 😊 where the performances were considered from good to very good to excellant. I would like to applaud 😃 all those who participated. Lekin yeh competition hai or isme haar, jeet to hotee hee rehtee hai. I would like to announce those groups who have succeeded today.

He continued saying all the names. Angad and Kripa's name had still not been announced. Mishti waited impatiently back stage until the list finsished and was disheartened 😔 when it did because Angad and Kripa's performance had not been acknowledged. she was leaving when she heard the announcer again.

Announcer:
Wait a minute guys. There's been a last minute recalculation which has brought out our top jodi - Angad and Kripa.

The whole stadium roared with claps 👏 and cheers and whistles 🥳. Mishti leaped with joy and ran inside the dressing room. There she saw Kripa staring in the mirror at one side and Angad with his eyes closed on the other side.

Mishti:
😃 Kripa, Kripa, Kripa! You wont believe it. Are judges ne tum dono ko top jodi banadiya hai. Onko tumhara performance itna pasand aagaya 😊 ke they just couldn't decide what to do.

Kripa: Thank God (hugged 🤗 Mishti) warna kuch log to ose barbaad karne pe tule huwe the 😡 (glanced over at Angad, who also just stared at her)

Mishti:
Oh I'm so happy 😃😃 your first step is completed.

Angad decided to come over to her when Simmone came running and hugged 🤗 him.

Simmone:
You were mindblowing! 😊 Ab to hum yeh competition jeet ke rahenge. This calls for celebration. 👏 I think we should all have a party.

Angad: Of course we should (then looked over at Kripa) per isme hai na zyada boring logo ko mat bulaana 😛 jo parties, clubs, or discos se dhoore rehte hai. I mean khamakha masti kharaab kardete hai. And you know I love action 😉 (pulled Simmone towards him)

Simmone:
Only the cool people will be invited 😆

Kripa hated the way Simmone talked and everytime she saw her opening her mouth she felt like gagging her. She was thinking of answering back when Akshat came.

Akshat:
😃 that was a brilliant show Kripa!

Kripa: 😊 thankyou Akshat

Akshat: Tumne to kamaal kardiya warna kuch log to 😒 tule huwe the barbaad karne per (referring to Angad)

Kripa:
ab kya kare, kuch log hote hee hai aise. Dusro ko neecha deekhana onkee fitrat me hota hai.

Akshat: anyways forget that. I think we should have a party 😊

Angad almost laughed 😆 at that because he knew that Kripa would decline him as she hated parties.

Kripa: (notices him smirking)
Of course. 😊 me to kehtee hu ke hame sab ko bulaana chaheeye, taake wo hamaree khushi me shaamil ho. Ab chaahe wo khush ho ke na ho 😛

Angad thought: Okay Kripa you want to play hard ball, then I'm game.

Angad:
Hey Simmone tumhe nahi lagta ke yahape bohat garmee hai 😛

Simmone: 😆 Oooh! I'm always hot! 😉

Angad pretended to laugh 😆. Kripa made a face 🤪 and imitated her. Oh Simmone was so stupid.

Angad: Lets go (he got her off him and slapped her ass)

Kripa: (in her mind)Gosh he's such a...😡 uggh! (out loud)
Akshat, Oh God [:xx] i think me girrahee hu. Please hold me.

she pretends to be woozy and Akshat quickly catches her and then holds her tight. With the corner of her eye she can see Angad getting angry 😡 so she continues.

Kripa:
Mujhe lagta hai ke kuch hawa kee zaroorat hai 😔 Please Akshat carry me outside.

Now Angad got up immediately. There was no way he was going to let Akshat do that but he was too late because Akshat already had her carried in his arms and was walking off. He saw how comfortably she had rested her head on his chest.

Angad:
😡 God damn it! (he kicked the metal stool and stormed out of the dressing room leaving a confused 😕 Simmone)

Evening...

Kripa was getting ready in her room. She was hoping to find Angad there too but he wasn't. In fact since New year's eve he hadn't returned back to the room. She was surprised 😲 as well as curious as to where exactly did he go. She stood in front of the mirror looking at her blue bandeau strapless dress, making adjustments so it doesn't appear too short. She felt uncomfortable 😔 wearing it but Mishti had forced her. there was a knock on the door.

Kripa:
😊 zaroor Angad hoga. I'm sure wo mujhse maafi maangega or aise mujhe dekh ke behosh hojaehga.

She goes to open the door with excitement 😃 but it soon dies 😔 down.

Kripa:
Akshat? 😔

Akshat: Wow! kya maardaldene ka irada hai?

Kripa: Oh Akshat darling 😉 you're looking so hot (kissed his cheek)

Akshat:
wow! 😲 lagta hai aaj kuch alag hee baat hai.

Kripa: yeh to shuruwaat hai. Aage, aage dekho hota hai kya 😊

Akshat: 😊 chale?

She linked hands with him and both went downstairs to the night club where the party was held.

Night club...

Loud music, dancing people, smoke and drunken smell welcomed Kripa which instantly gave her a headache [:xx]. at first she had thought that she would be able to handle it but now she wanted to change her mind.

Kripa thought: Yeh Angad aaya kyu nahi 😔 abhi tak? kahi wo...

Just then she saw him come in. Oh he looked great as ever in black jeans and a black shirt.

Kripa thought: Great, 😃 yeh akela aaya hai. ab me...

Her excitement died 😔 when she saw him pulling Simmone towards him. That crazy slapper 😡 looked even more a tart in a malt gold sequin halter dress. As she saw them coming closer to them she took Akshat's hand.

Kripa:
Chalo na, dance karte hai

Both of them went on the floor and joined with the others.

Angad's eyes immediately fell on them and he was displeased 😒 with the view. He hated how Akshat had held Kripa so close to him and that too in a place which was inappropriate.

Angad thought: Kya zaroorat thee ose 😡 aise kapre pehen ne kee? ose to me...

Simmone:
Angad chalo na dance karte hai

Angad: um...tum joa me thoree dair me aata hu.

Simmone: Okay 😊 Jaldi aana 😉 (kisses him on the cheek and then walks off mingling with her friends)

He sat on the bar stool with his eyes fixed 😍 on Kripa and Akshat. He felt as if he was her bodyguard and only he had the right on her body. He ordered a drink and each time Akshat pulled her closer he ordered another drink. 😡 before he knew it he had drank 5 - 6 glasses already but still the fire in him 😡 hadn't died. Then he noticed something and that was that Akshat had started getting too close to her and she was feeling uncomfortable 😔 There were times when Kripa tried moving his hands away but he didn't seem to budge. Angad was ready to kill [:xx] Akshat when...

Kripa: Akshat mujhe pyaas lagee hai

Akshat: Okays tum joa or betho 😊 me kuch drinks lekar aata hu.

Kripa goes to the table relieved to get out of Akshat's grip whilst he went to the bar. Tears 😭 had welled up in her eyes but she held them back, promising herself that she will be strong. Why didn't Angad come to save her?😔

Akshat:
Two glasses of beer

Angad: Kaafi maza aaraha hoga tumhe kyu?

Akshat: 😃 ab jiske paas itnee hot item ho 😉 to osko maza aaehga hee na

Angad: (rage 😡 filled his eyes) leave Kripa alone

Akshat: 😒 kyu kya wo tumhaaree private property hai?

Angad: 😡 ha hai, so you better keep your distance. 😳

Akshat: Thats funny 😃 because i never saw your name on her. Oh come on Angad, 😈 tum bhi to wohi chahte ho jo me chahta hu to phir mil baat 😉 ke khaate hai na.

Angad grabbed Akshat's collar in anger 😡 and Akshat was about to punch Angad.

Kripa:
Akshat 😲 tumhe drinks laane ko kaha tha or tum...

Akshat: ab kya kare removing Angad's hand from his collar) kuch logo ko to aadat see hai dusro ke maamlo me parne kee. Khair anyways here's your drink (hands her the glass of beer)

Angad: (taking the glass away from her)
😒 Kripa yeh drink tumhaare liye theek nahi hai

Kripa: kyu? 😕

Angad: This is beer and I don't think you can handle hard drinks.

Akshat: Angad, why don't you let her make her own decision (grabs the glass from him and gives it to Kripa)

Angad:
😳 mene kaha na Kripa tum yeh nahi pee saktee

Kripa: 😡 phirse order karahe ho mujhe? Excuse me, me chaahe jo bhi karoo, wo meree marzee hai 😛 (attempts to drink, but Angad manages to grab it away again)

Angad:
I'm warning you 😡 tum yeh handle nahi karsakhogee.

Akshat: Angad 😡 why don't you leave her alone

Angad: Yehi baat me tumse kehraha hu 😡 leave her alone!

Kripa was annoyed 😔 with both the men deciding for her so she pushed both of them out of her way and grabbed hold of a shot of tequilla on the counter. In anger 😡 she took it and without thinking drank all three shots. Then she turned wild 🥳 and went dancing around back on the floor.

Both Angad and Akshat were left aghast 😲

After five to ten minutes Angad noticed that Kripa had disappeared so he went around looking for her. She was drunk and God knows what state she would be in.

When he got near the dance floor he noticed a crowd had gathered around. He pushed his way through and was surprised to see Kripa in the middle with her head bowed as if she was in a dance position. Then the music began and she moved with it.


Pyaar kee yeh kahani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi kya hai jawaani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi ek daur tha, waqt hee or tha jab wo the ajnabee
dono tanhase the per wo kehte kise baat jo dil me thee


Angad had to do something before she made a fool of herself, so he made his way towards her and then grabbed her by the waist and pulled her closer to him. both of them stared 😍 in each other's eyes and then automatically matched their steps with the music.

Pyaar kee yeh kahani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi kya hai jawaani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi ek daur tha, waqt hee or tha jab wo the ajnabee
dono tanhase the per wo kehte kise baat jo dil me thee

Pyaar kee yeh kahani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi kya hai jawaani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee


Everyone cheered for them whilst they set the dance floor on fire with their salsa moves.

Ghumsum,ghumsum rehte the dono Angad brought Kripa closer to him

phir bhi dil me kehte the dono
koi sapna, hambhi to paaye

ek din, toote ghum ke wo ghere
he twirled her around and scooped her

jhilmil, jhilmil aaye saavere
mausam badla, jaagee fizayeh

Wo milgaye, wo khilgaye
He pushed her out and in as as they went around aur pyaar hohee gaya

jo chaha tha, wo paaya to hosh hee khohee gaya.

Pyaar kee yeh kahani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi kya hai jawaani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee


Now the heat had risen between them and the moves began becoming quite sensuous.

hole, hole, ab wo deewaane
gun gun gaaye, dil ke tarane
sun sun jhoome, saaree hawaein

dharkhan, dharkhan, hai behkee behkee
tan man, tanman chaahat hai mehkee
sapne, apne, jadoo jagaye

Inhe dekhoge, to jaanoge kya hai nasha pyaar ka
yehi sochoge, yehi chaahoge, sung rahe yeh sada

Pyaar kee yeh kahani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi kya hai jawaani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi ek daur tha, waqt hee or tha jab wo the ajnabee
dono tanhase the per wo kehte kise baat jo dil me thee


Now the steps became a bit quick and he kept twirling her around. Gradually he slowed down with him holding her tight from the back and with her breathing hard and having her eyes closed.

end of part.

I hope u guys enjoyed this part especially those who ahd found the previous parts quite disappointing.


Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
really good part,,,,,,,,,,,,,,kripa ko aisa nahi karna chahiye,,,,,,,angad kripa se gussa nahi,,thank god,,,aaj toh kripa ka paplu ban jata agar thik waqt pe nahi aata,,,,,

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