WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 35

great part but nw make angad jealous.

Originally posted by: monikaseth

thx dear awesome great part so now kripa jelous great👏

thanx dear 😊

yes she is hell jealous and really really upset. she almost wnats to kill simmone.

Originally posted by: deeya123

great part but nw make angad jealous.

thanx

dont worry, kripa is not going to let him get away with it.

well catch the next part to find out what she will do. 😃

ha ha i loved it too good yaar jealous kripa and now she will make him jealous one on one :)

heyy really nice fic...its nice and different...i luved the last few parts of angad and kripa...buh i think the poor grl had enuff...now its angad's turn to be jealous...so make him jealous now....and make things better with saumya and sujal...well actually saumya and kashish...lol..really nice continue soon!!

Originally posted by: newkidontheblok

ha ha i loved it too good yaar jealous kripa and now she will make him jealous one on one :)

thanx

ur bang on there. now Angad will have to taste his own medicine 😆

continue reading and enjoying. 👏

Originally posted by: Smileyface

heyy really nice fic...its nice and different...i luved the last few parts of angad and kripa...buh i think the poor grl had enuff...now its angad's turn to be jealous...so make him jealous now....and make things better with saumya and sujal...well actually saumya and kashish...lol..really nice continue soon!!

hey glad to know uve read it all and have enjoyed it

yeh the poor girl has had enough but don't worry she's going to fight back.

well eventually things will shape up with Saumya and Kashish but for the time being i guess they'll just have to suffer for a bit.

anyways thanx for reading and i hope u keep on reading and appreciating.

Originally posted by: deeya123

great part but nw make angad jealous.

i totally agree.. now kripas turn to make him jealous.. 😆.. wow.. plzz continue soon.. great FF

hey cool yaar👏 ,,,,,,
tumne jo kaha woh kiya(i think tum samajh gayi),,,,
tumhari thinking ke liye toh mujhe mere daat nikal ke dene padenge😆 ,,,,,,,,,tumne likha aur kisi ko pata bhi na chala,,,,,
btw i m waiting for akshat to join them in goa,,,,,,,,,,plz usse jaldi goa bhejo,mujhse kripa ki yeh halat dekhi nahi jati😕 ,,,,,,,
aur agar mere saath aisa hota toh mein aise ladke ke khayal hi chod deti 😆

thankyou all of you for ur lovely comments 😃

Part eighty one

Next morning…

Mishti: Kripa 😒 stop wailing like a child

Kripa: (sniffed and blew her nose really loudly. She was crying like a kid) 😔 wo mujhse pyaar nahi karta

Mishti: 😲 yeh kya kehrahee hai tu?

Kripa: tu jaantee nahi kese wo os super b****h Simmone ke saat, raat ko gul chare uraraha tha.

Mishti: Tujhe kese pata?

Kripa: Mene khud apnee aakho se dekha hai. (began crying again 😭) me yaha behosh paree thee per ose meree fikar nahi thee. Per os bhootnee 😡 ke haath me kya ek cut hogaya, oskee haalat kharaab hogayee.

Mishti: calm down Kripa. Pehle tu aise paagalon kee tarha rona band kar 😳 or mujhe bata ke kya huwa kal raat ko

Kripa narrated the whole epi to her.

Mishti: aisa nahi hosakta 😒

Kripa: aisa hee huwa hai

Mishti: no! I mean literally aisa nahi hosakta kyu ke kal puree raat Angad neeche party me tha or oske baad wo lobby me tha.

Kripa: tu nahi jaantee 😔 Mishti. Mene khud Angad or Simmone ko ek saat oske kamre me jaate huwe dekha hai.

Mishti: tu ne onhe kamre me jaate huwe dekha?

Kripa: ummm…😛 well

Mishti: nahi na? dekh me puree raat party me thee or mene khud Angad ko waha akele aate huwe dekha hai. Wo puree raat wahee tha or bikul akele. Party khatam hone ke baad jab hum waapis upar aarahe the to mene Angad ko lobby me dekha. Tune kitne baje phone kiya?

Kripa: 12:15 ko

Mishti: wo to dus baje se neeche hee tha

Kripa: 😲 kya? Oske aas paas hee to wo Simmone ko yahase legaya. To phir wo phone pe…😕


Mishti: chore ose 😳 important baat to yeh hai ke Angad ne aisa kuch nahi kiya, to iska matlab yeh hai ke wo tujhe sirf jala raha tha 😊

Kripa: nahi Mishti 😔 osko meree koi parwa nahi

Mishti: uffo Kripa! 😡 tu hamesha itnee ziddee kyu bantee hai. Mujhe yeh bata ke pehli baar jab tu ose millee to oskee aakhe kispe thee? Tujhpe 😊. Osne dosti ka haath kiskee taraf bharaya? Tujhpe 😃 osne madad kiskee kee? Teree. Osne pyaara sa gaana kiske liye gaaya? Tere liye. Pati patni ka natak kiske saat khela? Tere saath 😃 ek kamre me rehne kee koshish kis ke saath kee? Tere saath. Itnee saaree cheeze kee osne tere liye or tu kehrahee hai ke ose teree parwa nahi 😒 are tu samajh tee kyu nahi ke wo yeh sab jaan bujh ke kar raha hai. Agar aisa nahi hota na to wo puree raat Simmone ke saat bistar pe hota 😡 naake lobby ke sofa pe.

Kripa thought over everything Mishti just said. It was making sense and she realised she made a mistake.

Kripa: 😕 ab kya karoo me Mishti?

Mishti: kissee or larke ko dhoond

Kripa: what? 😲

Mishti: jese Angad ne dusri larki ko dhoondliya hai to tu bhi kisee larke ko dhoondle

Kripa: 😡 kya bakwaas karahee hai

Mishti: 😔 tu samjhi nahi? Angad Simmone ke saat kyu ghoom raha hai?

Kripa: mujhe jalane ke liye

Mishti: exactly 😃 to ab tu bhi kisee larke ke saath ghoomegee to…

Kripa: to phir Angad bhi jal ne lagega (leaps with joy) wow Mishti you're a genious!

Mishti: wo to me hu hee 😆

Kripa: (calmed down and frowned 😔) lekin larka kahase laoongee?

Just then someone knocked on her door. She went to open it and became surprised to find Akshat standing there with a bouquet of flowers.

Kripa: Akshat tum? 😲

Akshat: hi Kripa! 😃 wo me yaha se guzar raha tha to mene socha ke tumse milta huwa chalu

Kripa: 😕 how'd you know me yaha hu?

Akshat: oh come on Kripa. Ab dosto kee itnee khabar to hotee hee hai

Kripa stood there confused when Mishti came over and when she saw Akshat she saw two devil horns on his head 😈 she pulled Kripa inside quickly with excitement.

Mishti: Milgaya Kripa, milgaya

Kripa: kya milgaya?

Mishti: Are devil milgaya

Kripa: kya? 😲

Mishti: I mean larka

Kripa: koun?

Mishti pointed with her eyes

Kripa: Akshat?

Mishti: yes! Or khushi kee baat yeh hai 😊 ke tu ose jaantee bhi hai to phir yeh or asaan hojaehga

Kripa: no Mishti 😒 Akshat ke saat? Never. You don't know him, bara hee akru hai

Mishti:Tujhe kaha oske saat zindagee beetaanee hai. Bus thore din ka natak karna hai. Ek baar Angad tere paas aagaya to yeh khud bakhud chala jaehga.

Kripa: I don't know Mishti

Mishti: Ab kuch mat soch. Bus wahi kar. Look he's the devil 😃 that has been sent to you.

Kripa returned back to the door after Mishti's pleading. She built a lot of courage to start playing her game.

Kripa: 😊 I'm sorry Akshat darling, mene to tumse ander aane ko kaha hee nahi (looked at the bouquet) wow! These for me 😃 (took them) you're such a sweetheart.

As Akshat walked inside he became curious about her sudden change in behaviour.

End of part.

okay guys the next part will be up after 18th jan coz the following days are quite religious for me so i wont be sitting online.

it is a disappointment but im sorry, so i hope u guys will catch the next part after 18th jan

for the time being i hope u guys liked this part.

think of it as an intermission since ive reached fifty pages. yeah!!!!!!! 👏