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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dudley

hey 😊
great part 👏 👏
i nearly (i actually did) fall of my seat while reading it, soooo much power and drama, you are like going to writing stories soon, i bet 😆 😆
plzzzzzzzzzz do the next part soon
thankx alot 😉
P.S: there is no problem with your hindi

wow thanks...........😉

u guys...i hav 2 go now.....but i will b back soon with the nxt part.....2day...ok😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow 👏 😆 wonderful mind blowing ff nice job keep it up and plz post the next part soon
gud job 😛 😊 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok nxt part..........................

RIDDHIMA.......cries armaan an pushes her behind the sofa,...........as gunshots hit the wall where they were standing.................it was clearly aimed at armaan tho..................
armaan falls on top of ridds.....then gets up 2 check who was it .....an nearly misses a shot himself......
back at the party........it becomes a chaos....every1 starts running....armaan takes ridds hand and sheilds her an takes her out of the room........................
...........evry1 else is in the sitting room.........the police is calld but no one is found.................................
ridds goes into her room.....thinking......she was only close 2 armaan today wen that attack happened......armaan cud hav been killd...........an she wud neva forgive herself if anything happened 2 armaan.................................

take them away from me.....warna jaan se mar doon ga....says the ridds obbesser.............
he goes around her room ....breaking things with his hands......which were bleeding badly........but he didnt care...........
at end he droppes an says....how cud he touch u.....mein ussey tarpa tarpa ke mar doon ga......riddhima sirf meri ha.......he takes a picture from the shelf..................sirf meri......

it was ridds night duty..............
sam comes over 2 her wen every1 was going home an says ....theres a patient in room no 34.....dr keerti said check on him......
ridds makes her way towards the room......it was dark inside.....she turns the handle an goes in........it was very dark....she cudnt see anything.....she tries 2 search the light button.....her hand come acros something on wall.......wet........she clicks the button and.......................

backs off quickly......so scared .....panting loudly
sorry its sort hav 2 go
do reply

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Posted: 17 years ago
gud job dear...
do conti. soon...
w8innnnnn 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
i am guessing he is ridhima's obsesser
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww........ .........................
MAYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TOOO gooooooooooddddd!!!!!!

always leaving us in suspense....why????lol ur always gooood!!!nooo...GREAT!!!!

lol just continue 😆 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg maya please continue soon!!!! its driving me crazy!!! 😆 😳

love,
Avanti
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome work maya....

ur ff's make my day honestly....

hope riddzi is safe...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks Maya...kya birthday present tha!! It doesn't matter that it was so short...it was riveting all the same. 👏 Ooh the suspense can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Anu 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bookadict303

i am guessing he is ridhima's obsesser

keep guessing......u MAY b rite............😆

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