mst read luv ff..! hey i m coming back!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi every1 well i just thought of this an......here goes......

well it was someones wedding...all our doctors were there ...den the wedding is finished[phere done]an every1 goes 2 there room 2 sleep...ridds goea 2 her room an sees that her bangel was missing[still fully dressed ]so she decides 2 go look 4 it.......it was rainig outside she ran but still got wet....she reaches da wedding hall.all was quite.it was dark.she goes in an starts lookin around ...wen she hears sound....she looks up.armaan was standing few tables away with her chori in hand.she says:so it was u who took it.........give it back armman

then take it he says.she moves 4ward but he doesnt move she comes as close as possible but he takes the bangel away.......

she goes 4ward again but now they were very close.ridds 4gets about the chori.armaan says i wanted 2 tell u dis sinse ages...I LOVE U...he drops the bangel and puts his hands on her face.he was about to kiss her wen she turns.he grabbs her hand and pulls her......then he kisses her.ridds closes her eyes.

he moves is hand towards her neck....an kisses her there😳😳

then lightnening strikes outside an ridds breaks apart walks backwards slowly facing armu

then breaks into a run...tears in her eyes.she had heard angly talking 2 nani saying she waz in love with armaan.ridds likd armaan but she couldnt take away her sisters love

she runs back and locks the door.....theres a knock...............

if u like it an want me 2 continue plz reply😉tanx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i think its reallly cute n romantic....i would luv to read it further.......plzzzz continue....this is a scene from the film dtph.....but very cute....

luv
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah iwatched da film an likd so.............tanxxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey its a nice one but its from the movie dil to pagal hai..... nice creativity though.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yea...it is very creative but from the movie Dil To Pagal Hai but creative though. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oye hoye!!! reminded me of dil to pagal hai!! 😳 😳

aaj kal to armaan ka dil pagal hua wa hai! 😳

nicely written maya!! 👏

Rimzy x
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow amazing scene
dpo continue
😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow amazingley wriiten maya plz continue 😊.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tht was so kute....do continue!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi yeah it was good thinking but i didnt like the scene when ridzs think about her sister's love pls ignore this we are fed up of those love triangles.If u change it think something more creative than it will be excellent.Sorry dear i didnt said it was bad it was very good but need something new.

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