mst read luv ff..! hey i m coming back!!! - Page 35

Originally posted by: nimmo20

Thanks Maya...kya birthday present tha!! It doesn't matter that it was so short...it was riveting all the same. 👏 Ooh the suspense can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Anu 😃

sorry it was short........and thanx......😉

Carryyyyyy On .. Im Addicted To This FF Now!!

Hey Maya..
I read the entire FF today in one shot.. took me few hours! 😆 ..
I must say you're a fantastic writer, and very creative to bring a new situation in every part! 👏 👏 👏

I can guess that Ridhima's stalker is 'Sam', because when you mentioned him the first time, you said he was goin to be important for the parts to come.. So its easy to guess he's the stalker! 😉

Anyways, its a great story, and the way you write is just so good! ⭐️

Waiting for the next part,
Ange!

p.s. - Happy Belated Birthday! 🥳

AHHHHH!!!! Maya I really hate you! Hamesha ghalat time pe rok deti ho! I think ke DMG ki creative team tumhaari fic se inspire hoke apni harkatein karte hain. You know what I mean? Jab woh sabse achhe scenes adhe dikhate hain on Thursday and then keep us hanging until Monday. Same thing tum bhi karti ho! Best part adha hi post karti ho, phir rok deti ho. Phir do teen din ke baad continue karti ho. Arre jaldi continue karo meri maaa!!! I'm obsessed with this fic!!!!! AWSOME JOB!!!!

Komal

hey maya.......................................damn coooollllllllllllllll.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn........i want a loooooooooonnnnnnngggggg part....waitin for u to reveal the mystery man......and lots of armaan n ridz romanceeeeeeeeeeee......... 👏

luv
gita 😊

Originally posted by: sizzlingangel

Hey Maya..
I read the entire FF today in one shot.. took me few hours! 😆 ..
I must say you're a fantastic writer, and very creative to bring a new situation in every part! 👏 👏 👏

I can guess that Ridhima's stalker is 'Sam', because when you mentioned him the first time, you said he was goin to be important for the parts to come.. So its easy to guess he's the stalker! 😉

Anyways, its a great story, and the way you write is just so good! ⭐️

Waiting for the next part,
Ange!

p.s. - Happy Belated Birthday! 🥳

hey..........thanks an shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dont remind others...........😆 wow u finished in 1 go👏......must hav took ages.......thanks.........will hav nxt part soon................

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

AHHHHH!!!! Maya I really hate you! Hamesha ghalat time pe rok deti ho! I think ke DMG ki creative team tumhaari fic se inspire hoke apni harkatein karte hain. You know what I mean? Jab woh sabse achhe scenes adhe dikhate hain on Thursday and then keep us hanging until Monday. Same thing tum bhi karti ho! Best part adha hi post karti ho, phir rok deti ho. Phir do teen din ke baad continue karti ho. Arre jaldi continue karo meri maaa!!! I'm obsessed with this fic!!!!! AWSOME JOB!!!!

Komal

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...........u hate me😭😆😆

sorry i kno i hate wen that happens......but believe me....its so much fun 2 make u wait😆.....just kidding..........................cheers

guys nxt part is on its way......mite take couple of hours but will hav it done 2day......
an thanks 2 all who likd my last part

okay hers the nxt part........an takes 4 liking my ff 😉 .....u kno i nevvvvvvvva thought it wud come this far 😆 ...serious..........



ridds moves back.........scared.......her breathing shallow.........
the whole wall was covered with blood............an it said
riddhima.....ur mine........blood covered the floor an the whole wall......there was someone standing in the shadows........ridds hands were covered in blood....riddds was shaking badly
the person in the shadow turned his head a little......his hand an arm were bleeding.......
he speaks.............his eyes bloodshot[ridds cant see his face]
rid...hi maa so u r here..........hope u likd that....
he puts his hand against the wall an says....
id warnd....how cud he touch u......mein tum se beintaha pyaar karta hoon...aur tum..[now he speaks in a very thretingly tone]....he loves u thats wat he said...rite he loves u HOW CUD HE LOVE U DAMN IT
he moves forward an turns the lights off.....ridds searches around frantically 4 the door wen he grabbs her by the arm an pulls her close....

back in the corridor
armaan was looking 4 ridds....................she was missing an he became a little worried.he askd all other interns but no one knew....they were all busy...then nurse lovely told hi where she had gone....she also said that ridds said dr keerti had told her 2 go 2 the room
armaan became worried.......dr keerti was with armaan in icu.......it was immpossible..he tells lovely 2 inform dr shsank an the rest..... an he runs over 2 the room lovely told him

back in the room
u kno wat ridd hi ma....hes going 2 die now....he wont b able 2 touch u now....i will kill him...u hear...
ridds breaks free an screams....
no u wont......u wont...plzzzzzzzzzz let me go [now she was crying]
they hear footsteps an the guy runs over 2 the window an says......he will hav 2 die....soon
the door is opened an armaan enters turning the light on.
he sees ridds standing in the middle of the room....shivering an then he sees the wall.............
ridds sees armaan ,runs over an hugs him....crying
armaan felt really angry....
he will kill u.....woh tumhein maar de ga armaan....woh
listen 2 me...riddhima[armaan was holding her face in his hands....ridds kept saying 1 thing]
woh....woh tumko maar de ga....woh woh
RIDDHIMA!!!!!.....look up listen...nothing will happen ok says armaan an hugs her
dr shsank an the rest of interns enter.....
this is getting 2 far.......mein abhi police ko phone karta hoon says shsank evrey1 plz get back 2 work.......ridds go with sis padma............


things had gone back 2 normal slowly......3 days had passed away without any trouble........
dr keerti was given each intern a job..........dr anjali was given a serious case.....the patient was very hurt....she just had an accident and her husband had died.......she refused 2 give her familys number.....an refused 2 hav her operation done....dr shsank,dr keerti an ridds were outside the door of the room wen they hear shouting
just go.....get out....nahi bataoon gi....gooooo the pateint[kripa] was crying
aap jaise log na apne aap ko pata nahi kya samajhte ho...expect karte ho ke sab aap ke samne girgirayen[beg 😆 ]........liste
di itna harsh mat ho.........dekhye aap ko apne family members ko batana ho ga.......this is serious aap ka operation hona hai ....plz
mein kya bataoon...........ke mere pati mar gaye.....she bursts crying....ridds strokes her
riddima.....yeh mera case hai.....just go ok says anjie
excuse me dr angli..........ab se dr ridds iss case ko handle kare gi says dr shsank.......
dr anjali was very angry.......she thinks.. if thats how it is.....i pray that yeh operation unsuccesful ho

ridds did excellent in the operation.....it was succesful...every1 congolatulatd her......she goes over 2 anjie....but anjie backs off
stay away........pehle tum mere papa ko mujh se door karti ho...aur ab yahan bhi...i hate u for this[all interns watching]
angie leaves.....ridds eyes full of tears.........

a little precap: ridds is calld 2 say that armaan is going 2 b attackd an ridds goes 2 the place which the caller had said armaan was going 2 b killed...........

hope its gud....
do comment
lots of love maya

it's awesum .. am i d first to comment ??